Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6JP7Y04HB48FX58RHXYW8

Run Details

Duration:
11.1s
Cost:
$0.000290
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the Grove tasted wrong, thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter, almost cloying, like overripe fruit left to rot. Aurora pulled the collar of her jacket tighter, the fabric rough against her neck. The standing stones loomed at the tree line like sentinels, their ancient bark slick with moss that shouldn’t have been there in the dry summer heat. She’d walked past this spot a hundred times during her shifts to Golden Empress, never once noticing the path that led deeper into Richmond Park. Now, the trees seemed to lean inward, their branches twisting into archways that swallowed the moonlight. Her boots crunched over a carpet of leaves that didn’t rustle. They just... lay there, undisturbed, as if the ground itself refused to acknowledge her presence. The Heartstone pendant at her throat pulsed once, a faint warmth spreading through her chest, and she pressed a hand against it, half-expecting it to burn. The gemstone glowed softly, its crimson light barely visible in the dimness. Hel portals were supposed to be something she’d only heard whispered about in the back rooms of the restaurant, dismissed as old wives’ tales. But the pendant’s reaction was real. She should have turned back. Instead, she took another step. The path ahead wasn’t there when she’d last looked. Now it wound downward, lined with flowers that bloomed in impossible colors—violet, silver, a shade that made her squint as if staring into too-bright sunlight. Their petals moved once, just once, like something had brushed past them, and she froze. The wind carried no sound, yet the blossoms shivered without a breeze. Her breath fogged in the chill that had crept into the air, though the daytime heat still clung to her skin. A low hum began, so distant she almost mistook it for her own pulse. Then it grew louder, a vibration that seemed to emanate from the earth itself. The stones at the tree line began to resonate, their surfaces rippling like water disturbed by an unseen hand. Aurora stumbled back, her heel catching on something soft beneath the leaves. She looked down and saw her wrist, the scar there darkening with a sheen of moisture. It hadn’t been wet when she’d left her flat. The hum sharpened into a whine, and the flowers bent away from her like they were fleeing. She backed away until her back pressed against one of the standing stones, its surface cold despite the warmth of her palm against it. The pendant flared brighter, and she gasped as the ground beneath her shifted. The path curved, then curved again, then seemed to stretch and compress as if reality were a rubber band snapping back into place. Footsteps. She spun around, but the Grove behind her was empty. Just the twisted trees and the silent flowers. Yet the steps came again—soft, deliberate, circling around her. Not running. Not fleeing. Just... moving. She couldn’t tell if they were coming closer or farther away. The air thickened, and she realized her heartbeat was no longer a steady drum but a frantic flutter, as if her heart were trying to escape its ribs. The pendant’s glow pulsed in time with those phantom footsteps. A branch snapped somewhere to her left. She didn’t dare turn. The sound had no source. The Grove’s edges were too dense, the trees too close together for anyone to walk between them. Yet the footsteps resumed, now directly behind her. She pressed her back harder against the stone, fingers digging into its rough surface until she felt splinters under her nails. The pendant burned cold against her sternum, and in that moment, she understood: this place was watching her. Or something here was. The humming rose to a shriek, and the flowers erupted in a chorus of rustling, though no wind stirred the air. Their petals scattered like snow, but when she looked down, they weren’t on the ground—they were drifting upward, spiraling around her like living things. The crimson light from the pendant cast her shadow on the stone, but the shadow moved on its own, turning its head to look behind her. She stumbled backward, her vision blurring as the Grove’s geometry fractured. The trees leaned so far they nearly touched, their branches weaving a canopy that blocked out the stars. The path had vanished, replaced by a circle of standing stones that weren’t there before. They hummed with the same low frequency now, vibrating so hard their surfaces rippled like mirrors. In their reflections, she saw herself—but older, eyes hollowed, hair matted. Then the images wavered, and she was just herself again, or maybe not. The footsteps stopped. Silence fell, broken only by the frantic hammering of her own pulse. Aurora’s breath came in ragged bursts, her lungs burning from panic she couldn’t name. The pendant’s glow dimmed, the warmth fading to nothing. She dared a glance over her shoulder. The Grove was empty. But the stones weren’t standing in the same place they had a moment ago. They’d shifted, rearranging themselves into a crescent, facing inward, as if they’d been waiting for her to step into their circle. And in the center, where the path should have led, stood a door. Not wood. Not stone. Something else, seamless and reflective, like a mirror stretched across the trunk of a tree that hadn’t existed before. It shimmered faintly, and when she looked into its surface, she saw the pendant’s glow—not crimson, but a deep, unsettling blue. Her scar tingled. She took a step toward it, then another, her boots sinking into the earth as if it had become spongy, alive. The door didn’t open. It didn’t need to. She could feel it watching, breathing, *waiting* for her to cross the threshold. The wrongness in the Grove had coalesced into something solid, something that had been there all along, hidden in plain sight. The pendant flared once, blindingly bright, and then went dark. When she blinked, the door was gone. The Grove was just a Grove again, save for the path that now led straight back to Richmond Park’s edge, to the streetlights and the distant sound of traffic. But the stones at the boundary were no longer oak. They were bone-white, slick with something that looked like rain but hadn’t fallen. And her wrist—it had stopped bleeding. The scar was gone. Aurora stumbled forward, her legs buckling as she realized the truth. The pendant was around her neck, cool as stone, but it wasn’t glowing. It wasn’t supposed to be. The Grove had always been empty.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"something she’d only [only]"
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
95.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1102
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1102
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"footsteps"
count4
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"shimmered"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"chill"
5"pulse"
6"footsteps"
7"fractured"
8"wavered"
9"silence"
10"shimmered"
11"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
77.18% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1096
ratio0.001
matches
0"waiting"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1094
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Grove9
Golden1
Empress1
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone1
Aurora4
persons
0"Grove"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Golden"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
38.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if staring into too-bright sunlight"
1"vibration that seemed to emanate from the earth itself"
2"looked like rain but hadn’t fallen"
17.52% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.825
wordCount1096
matches
0"no longer a steady drum but"
1"not crimson, but a deep, unsettling blue"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean43.84
std35.09
cv0.8
sampleLengths
0106
194
25
35
482
584
677
71
872
910
1084
1171
1284
133
1442
154
1648
1744
183
1963
2010
2159
2210
2329
246
93.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences87
matches
0"were supposed"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs197
matches
0"were fleeing"
1"were coming"
2"were trying"
3"was watching"
4"were drifting"
5"weren’t standing"
6"wasn’t glowing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences87
ratio0.069
matches
0"Now it wound downward, lined with flowers that bloomed in impossible colors—violet, silver, a shade that made her squint as if staring into too-bright sunlight."
1"Yet the steps came again—soft, deliberate, circling around her."
2"Their petals scattered like snow, but when she looked down, they weren’t on the ground—they were drifting upward, spiraling around her like living things."
3"In their reflections, she saw herself—but older, eyes hollowed, hair matted."
4"It shimmered faintly, and when she looked into its surface, she saw the pendant’s glow—not crimson, but a deep, unsettling blue."
5"And her wrist—it had stopped bleeding."
98.73% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount193
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.04145077720207254
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.015544041450777202
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean12.6
std7.52
cv0.597
sampleLengths
025
114
226
325
416
511
62
713
826
912
1024
116
125
135
149
1525
1615
1712
1821
1914
2014
2119
2212
2316
249
2517
2624
2713
2823
291
3010
318
329
332
342
351
361
3711
3828
3910
407
414
425
4317
448
4521
4618
474
4821
4924
40.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.28735632183908044
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners25
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences79
matches
0"Instead, she took another step."
1"Then it grew louder, a"
2"Just the twisted trees and"
3"Then the images wavered, and"
ratio0.051
98.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences79
matches
0"She’d walked past this spot"
1"Her boots crunched over a"
2"She should have turned back."
3"Their petals moved once, just"
4"Her breath fogged in the"
5"She looked down and saw"
6"It hadn’t been wet when"
7"She backed away until her"
8"She spun around, but the"
9"She couldn’t tell if they"
10"She didn’t dare turn."
11"She pressed her back harder"
12"Their petals scattered like snow,"
13"She stumbled backward, her vision"
14"They hummed with the same"
15"She dared a glance over"
16"They’d shifted, rearranging themselves into"
17"It shimmered faintly, and when"
18"Her scar tingled."
19"She took a step toward"
ratio0.304
67.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences79
matches
0"The air in the Grove"
1"Aurora pulled the collar of"
2"The standing stones loomed at"
3"She’d walked past this spot"
4"Her boots crunched over a"
5"The Heartstone pendant at her"
6"The gemstone glowed softly, its"
7"Hel portals were supposed to"
8"She should have turned back."
9"The path ahead wasn’t there"
10"Their petals moved once, just"
11"The wind carried no sound,"
12"Her breath fogged in the"
13"A low hum began, so"
14"The stones at the tree"
15"Aurora stumbled back, her heel"
16"She looked down and saw"
17"It hadn’t been wet when"
18"The hum sharpened into a"
19"She backed away until her"
ratio0.785
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Now, the trees seemed to"
1"Now it wound downward, lined"
ratio0.025
51.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The standing stones loomed at the tree line like sentinels, their ancient bark slick with moss that shouldn’t have been there in the dry summer heat."
1"Now it wound downward, lined with flowers that bloomed in impossible colors—violet, silver, a shade that made her squint as if staring into too-bright sunlight."
2"The air thickened, and she realized her heartbeat was no longer a steady drum but a frantic flutter, as if her heart were trying to escape its ribs."
3"They’d shifted, rearranging themselves into a crescent, facing inward, as if they’d been waiting for her to step into their circle."
4"Something else, seamless and reflective, like a mirror stretched across the trunk of a tree that hadn’t existed before."
5"The wrongness in the Grove had coalesced into something solid, something that had been there all along, hidden in plain sight."
6"They were bone-white, slick with something that looked like rain but hadn’t fallen."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"something she’d only (would)"
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
73.0911%