| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "something she’d only [only]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |
| 95.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1102 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 13.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1102 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "fractured" | | 8 | "wavered" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.18% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1096 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1094 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 9 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Aurora | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 38.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if staring into too-bright sunlight" | | 1 | "vibration that seemed to emanate from the earth itself" | | 2 | "looked like rain but hadn’t fallen" |
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| 17.52% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.825 | | wordCount | 1096 | | matches | | 0 | "no longer a steady drum but" | | 1 | "not crimson, but a deep, unsettling blue" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 43.84 | | std | 35.09 | | cv | 0.8 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 106 | | 1 | 94 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 82 | | 5 | 84 | | 6 | 77 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 72 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 84 | | 11 | 71 | | 12 | 84 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 63 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 59 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 6 |
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| 93.16% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "were supposed" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | | 0 | "were fleeing" | | 1 | "were coming" | | 2 | "were trying" | | 3 | "was watching" | | 4 | "were drifting" | | 5 | "weren’t standing" | | 6 | "wasn’t glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.069 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it wound downward, lined with flowers that bloomed in impossible colors—violet, silver, a shade that made her squint as if staring into too-bright sunlight." | | 1 | "Yet the steps came again—soft, deliberate, circling around her." | | 2 | "Their petals scattered like snow, but when she looked down, they weren’t on the ground—they were drifting upward, spiraling around her like living things." | | 3 | "In their reflections, she saw herself—but older, eyes hollowed, hair matted." | | 4 | "It shimmered faintly, and when she looked into its surface, she saw the pendant’s glow—not crimson, but a deep, unsettling blue." | | 5 | "And her wrist—it had stopped bleeding." |
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| 98.73% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 193 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 8 | | adverbRatio | 0.04145077720207254 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015544041450777202 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 12.6 | | std | 7.52 | | cv | 0.597 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 40.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.28735632183908044 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she took another step." | | 1 | "Then it grew louder, a" | | 2 | "Just the twisted trees and" | | 3 | "Then the images wavered, and" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 98.48% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d walked past this spot" | | 1 | "Her boots crunched over a" | | 2 | "She should have turned back." | | 3 | "Their petals moved once, just" | | 4 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 5 | "She looked down and saw" | | 6 | "It hadn’t been wet when" | | 7 | "She backed away until her" | | 8 | "She spun around, but the" | | 9 | "She couldn’t tell if they" | | 10 | "She didn’t dare turn." | | 11 | "She pressed her back harder" | | 12 | "Their petals scattered like snow," | | 13 | "She stumbled backward, her vision" | | 14 | "They hummed with the same" | | 15 | "She dared a glance over" | | 16 | "They’d shifted, rearranging themselves into" | | 17 | "It shimmered faintly, and when" | | 18 | "Her scar tingled." | | 19 | "She took a step toward" |
| | ratio | 0.304 | |
| 67.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Grove" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled the collar of" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed at" | | 3 | "She’d walked past this spot" | | 4 | "Her boots crunched over a" | | 5 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 6 | "The gemstone glowed softly, its" | | 7 | "Hel portals were supposed to" | | 8 | "She should have turned back." | | 9 | "The path ahead wasn’t there" | | 10 | "Their petals moved once, just" | | 11 | "The wind carried no sound," | | 12 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 13 | "A low hum began, so" | | 14 | "The stones at the tree" | | 15 | "Aurora stumbled back, her heel" | | 16 | "She looked down and saw" | | 17 | "It hadn’t been wet when" | | 18 | "The hum sharpened into a" | | 19 | "She backed away until her" |
| | ratio | 0.785 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the trees seemed to" | | 1 | "Now it wound downward, lined" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 51.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed at the tree line like sentinels, their ancient bark slick with moss that shouldn’t have been there in the dry summer heat." | | 1 | "Now it wound downward, lined with flowers that bloomed in impossible colors—violet, silver, a shade that made her squint as if staring into too-bright sunlight." | | 2 | "The air thickened, and she realized her heartbeat was no longer a steady drum but a frantic flutter, as if her heart were trying to escape its ribs." | | 3 | "They’d shifted, rearranging themselves into a crescent, facing inward, as if they’d been waiting for her to step into their circle." | | 4 | "Something else, seamless and reflective, like a mirror stretched across the trunk of a tree that hadn’t existed before." | | 5 | "The wrongness in the Grove had coalesced into something solid, something that had been there all along, hidden in plain sight." | | 6 | "They were bone-white, slick with something that looked like rain but hadn’t fallen." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "something she’d only (would)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |