Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6JXCTH9W20N5BJ3CBK3KC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 58s
Cost:
$0.045598
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door had burned out twice that week, and Silas had refused to fix it, claiming a bar in Soho earned no right to shine too brightly. Aurora pushed through the door with a crate of Tsingtao balanced on her hip, the bottle necks rattling against each other as the cold evening air followed her inside. The Raven's Nest smelled the way it always did at opening: spilled stout soaked into floorboards, the lemon oil Silas used on the bar top, and beneath it all the faint ghost of tobacco from decades before she was born. "Back door was jammed again," she called toward the cellar stairs. "Front door works fine for paying customers," Silas answered from somewhere below. "The back door's jammed because I jammed it. Keeps the honest thieves confused." She set the crate on the bar and reached for the box cutter she kept in her apron pocket. Old maps lined the walls, Yugoslavia before the breakup, Berlin with its wall drawn in red ink, and between them black-and-white photographs of people Silas never named. She knew better than to ask. She'd asked once, in her first month upstairs, and he'd polished a glass for eleven full minutes before changing the subject to her rent. The door opened again, letting in a gust of rain and a woman shaking water from a camel coat. "Jesus, it's properly coming down out there. I walked from Tottenham Court Road like an idiot because the Uber surge was—" The woman stopped. Her hand stayed on the door handle, rain sliding down the glass behind her. Aurora knew the face before she knew the name. That was how it worked with people from before: the recognition arrived in the body first, a jolt behind the ribs, and the brain caught up after, scrambling through archives. "Rory?" "Eva." Neither of them moved. Silas came up from the cellar with a crate of his own, took in the scene with one slow look, and carried the crate to the far end of the bar without a word. "You cut your hair," Eva said. "You grew yours." It had been dyed purple at sixteen, shaved on one side at nineteen, and now it fell past her shoulders in expensive dark waves, the kind that cost two hundred pounds in a salon with a French name. She wore a wool coat over a cream blouse and a thin gold chain that caught the low light. She looked like the successful lawyers Aurora had fetched coffee for during her one catastrophic internship, the ones who spoke in calm complete sentences and never ate lunch. Eva crossed the room the way she used to cross everything, fast and without checking. "Can I—" She didn't finish. She pulled Aurora into a hug that smelled of rain and some perfume Aurora couldn't name, and Aurora stood in it with the box cutter still in her hand, her arms coming up late, landing awkwardly between Eva's shoulder blades. "You're so thin," Eva said into her shoulder. "You're so dry-cleaned." Eva laughed and pulled back, and for a second the years folded flat, and they were in the kitchen on Penylan Road again, seventeen and sharing a pair of earphones. Then the second passed. "What are you doing here?" Aurora asked. "In London. In this bar. It's a Thursday." "I know what day it is." Eva slid onto a stool, peeling off her wet coat. "I'm here for work. I moved here three years ago. I messaged you, you know. On Instagram. Twice." "I don't really check that account." "Clearly." Silas appeared at their end of the bar with the timing of a man who'd spent thirty years knowing when to enter a room. "Evening. What'll it be?" "Glass of the Malbec, please." Eva glanced at Aurora. "Do you drink red? We could get a bottle." "She drinks whatever she's delivered," Silas said. "Which lately is the off-brand lager nobody orders. Rory, the Malbec's the good one. I'll open a bottle." "You don't have to—" "I opened it yesterday for myself," he said, which was a lie so smooth that Aurora almost admired it, and he limped off toward the racks. Eva turned the signet of her attention back on Aurora, and Aurora watched her do it, watched the assessment travel over her delivery jacket, her cropped hair, the apron with the Golden Empress logo stitched in gold thread. "You work here?" "Above, actually. I work for the restaurant round the corner. Deliveries, mostly." Aurora set the box cutter down and started unpacking bottles into the low fridge, because her hands wanted a job. "How's Cardiff? How's your mum?" "Mum's fine. She asks about you." Eva wrapped both hands around the glass Silas set down, though she didn't drink. "Rory. I thought you were finishing your degree. Last I heard you'd got onto the Bar course. Your dad was telling the whole street." "That was the plan." "And?" "Plans are just stories you tell at parties." Eva winced, small but visible. "That's not you. You were the one with the plans. You had that notebook, remember? The five-year one, colour-coded. You mapped out which electives you'd take in third year before we'd sat our GCSEs." "I was sixteen. I also planned to marry that drummer from the band we liked." "You did not." "I kept the option open." The joke landed the way jokes land between people who've gone strange on each other: it stirred the air and settled nowhere. Eva drank her wine. Silas poured Aurora a glass and set it on the bar with the careful neutrality of a man laying evidence. "So what are you doing now?" Aurora asked. "You said work. What work?" "Solicitor. Corporate side, mostly contracts, some IP." Eva said it quickly, like ripping off a plaster. "Chambers in Holborn. It's dull, honestly, it sounds glamorous and it's mostly reading four-hundred-page agreements and telling people they can't have what they want." "You became a lawyer." "I became a lawyer." Eva turned the glass by its stem. "Which was your thing. It was always your thing. I keep waiting for someone to notice I'm wearing your clothes, metaphorically." "Nobody owns law, Eva." "Your dad does. Or thinks he does." The words came out before she could shape them, and Aurora watched her decide not to take them back. "He cornered me outside Tesco's about two years back. Asked if I knew where you were. I lied and said no. He knew I was lying. He stood there with his carrier bags and said, 'When you do speak to her, tell her the door isn't locked.' And then he bought a scratch card at the till like nothing had happened." The fridge hummed. Somewhere down the bar a phone buzzed and Silas ignored it with professional completeness. "You didn't have to lie for me," Aurora said. "I didn't know if I was lying for you or at you." Eva's voice had dropped, stripped of the boardroom polish. "You vanished, Rory. You left Cardiff in the middle of the night, and I found out from a two-line text. 'Gone to London, I'm fine, don't worry.' That was the whole message. After everything. After I begged you for months to leave him, and you kept saying it was fine, it wasn't like that, I was being dramatic—" "You were being dramatic, at the start." "And at the end?" Aurora drank. The Malbec was good, dark and steady, nothing like the off-brand lager. She could feel Silas not-listening at the far end of the bar, polishing glasses with the dedication of a man giving privacy its physical form. "At the end you were right," Aurora said. "Does that help? You were right about Evan, right about everything, and I couldn't stand it. That's the bit nobody tells you about being wrong. The person who warned you becomes unbearable. Every text from you felt like a mark scheme for an exam I'd failed." Eva stared at her. "I wasn't marking you. I was terrified. I drove to your flat that night in March, the night he—" She stopped. Rewound. "You never told me what happened that night. You just stopped answering." The rain worked at the windows. Aurora turned her left wrist on the bar top, palm up, where the crescent scar caught the light, and looked at it as though it belonged to a character in a book she'd once read. "That one's from falling off my bike when I was nine," she said. "You were there. You cried harder than I did." "I remember. You told everyone you fought a cat." "It was a big cat." Aurora closed her hand. "The other ones you can't see, and I worked quite hard at that, so let's not dig them up on a Thursday over a nice Malbec. He's gone. I left. I came here. Silas took pity on a girl delivering dumplings in the rain and gave her a room with damp in one corner and the best lock in Soho." "I fitted that lock myself," Silas said from down the bar, without looking up, conceding the point that he'd been listening all along. Eva dragged a hand down her face, and when it came away her eyes were wet and furious. "Three years. You were twenty minutes away on the Central line and I didn't know it. Do you understand what that does to a person? I gave a talk at your old faculty last year, alumni thing, and I stood in that awful lecture hall and thought, she should be here. Not me. Her. The one with the colour-coded notebook. I was the backup plan, Rory. I went into law because you made it sound like the only job where being stubborn counted as a virtue, and I looked around one day and I had your whole life and you'd—what, thrown yours off a bridge?" "You don't have my life." "I have the life you were supposed to have. And I can't even enjoy it properly, because there's a Rory-shaped hole in it and everyone claps and tells me well done." Silas set two plates of bread and olive oil in front of them with the silent authority of a barman who'd mediated worse fights in darker rooms. "Eat something," he said. "Both of you. Arguing's thirsty work." They ate. Or they broke bread, at least, and the small ordinary act of it turned the temperature down. Aurora told her about Yu-Fei, who paid cash and corrected her Cantonese pronunciation with total mercilessness, and about the regular at table six who ordered mapo tofu every Friday and wept quietly into it for reasons nobody asked about. Eva told her about a contracts case involving a celebrity's dog and a prenup, and for four minutes they laughed the way they used to, heads down, shoulders shaking, the sound scraping off three years of rust. Then the laughing finished, and the rust was still there. "I'm reading law again," Aurora said. "Quietly. Silas has books. I sit in the back room and I read them, and I don't tell anyone, because if I say it out loud it becomes a plan, and plans are stories, and I've told enough stories." Silas, at the till, said nothing, but the hand with the silver signet ring paused on the keys for a moment longer than the transaction required. "You could go back," Eva said. "Finish the degree. You'd walk it." "I couldn't walk it. I'd have to crawl it, and explain the gap, and write the personal statement, and someone would google me, and there'd be his name near mine in some court record, and I'd spend the whole course being the girl who left instead of the one who stayed." Aurora rubbed the scar with her thumb, an old motion, automatic. "Anyway. Maybe I don't want it back. Maybe the person who wanted it doesn't exist anymore, and I'm someone else who hasn't decided what she wants yet, and that's allowed. It has to be allowed." Eva looked at her for a long time. Somewhere behind her polished surface, Aurora could see the arithmetic running: the old Rory measured against this one, the short hair and the delivery jacket and the flat above a spy's bar, the losses tallied against whatever this was that had replaced them. "You know what I remember?" Eva said at last. "Not the notebook. The night we sat on the wall outside the corner shop, and you said the law was just stories that everyone agrees to act like are true. You were seventeen. I said that was the most pretentious thing I'd ever heard, and you said, 'No, Evans, it's the most useful thing I'll ever teach you.'" "I said that?" "You did. And I've thought about it at least once a month for eight years, usually while drafting." Eva picked up her wine. "You didn't throw your life off a bridge. You just stopped agreeing to the story. Nobody told me that was an option, so I kept going. I bill two thousand hours a year to a story I half believe in, and you deliver dumplings and read contract law in a spy's back room, and I honestly can't tell which of us is the successful one, and I find that extremely annoying." "Drink your Malbec, Evans." "Don't call me that, I'm a senior associate." "You'll always be Evans." The door opened and the rain came in with a pair of students arguing about a film, and the bar absorbed them, and the evening resumed its ordinary shape around the two women at the counter. Silas topped up their glasses without being asked. Outside, the dead half of the green neon sign flickered once and caught, buzzing, and the whole word RAVEN glowed above the door for the first time all week, unsteady and bright and half by accident, and nobody inside saw it happen.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:53:50.499Z" 7/25/2026, 5:53:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2338
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"quickly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2338
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"coded"
count2
1
word"could feel"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"coded"
1"could feel"
2"measured"
3"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen108
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2337
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions35
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions77
wordCount1187
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity2.02
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Silas15
Soho1
Tsingtao1
Raven1
Nest1
Yugoslavia1
Berlin1
French1
Aurora24
Eva21
Penylan1
Road1
Golden1
Empress1
Malbec1
Rewound1
Yu-Fei1
Cantonese1
Friday1
Rory1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Tsingtao"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Aurora"
5"Eva"
6"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Berlin"
2"Penylan"
3"Road"
globalScore0.489
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like the successful lawyers Aurora"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2337
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean31.16
std29.69
cv0.953
sampleLengths
0101
111
225
376
419
538
639
71
81
938
106
113
1285
1360
148
153
1634
1715
1834
196
201
2128
2218
2325
244
2526
2638
273
2837
2944
304
311
328
3339
3415
353
365
3746
3813
3940
404
4132
424
4387
4417
459
4679
477
484
4939
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"been dyed"
1"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs193
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences128
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1192
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02181208053691275
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003355704697986577
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean18.26
std17.12
cv0.937
sampleLengths
032
129
240
311
412
513
619
727
86
924
1019
1124
1214
139
1430
151
161
174
1834
196
203
2138
2219
2328
2415
255
2640
278
283
2930
304
317
328
3316
3418
356
361
3724
384
399
409
417
4218
434
4426
4538
463
4732
485
4920
61.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.40625
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences64
matches
0"Then the second passed."
1"Somewhere down the bar a"
2"Then the laughing finished, and"
3"Somewhere behind her polished surface,"
ratio0.063
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences64
matches
0"she called toward the cellar"
1"She set the crate on"
2"She knew better than to"
3"She'd asked once, in her"
4"Her hand stayed on the"
5"It had been dyed purple"
6"She wore a wool coat"
7"She looked like the successful"
8"She didn't finish"
9"She pulled Aurora into a"
10"he said, which was a"
11"She could feel Silas not-listening"
ratio0.188
14.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences64
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Aurora pushed through the door"
2"The Raven's Nest smelled the"
3"she called toward the cellar"
4"Silas answered from somewhere below"
5"She set the crate on"
6"She knew better than to"
7"She'd asked once, in her"
8"The door opened again, letting"
9"The woman stopped"
10"Her hand stayed on the"
11"Aurora knew the face before"
12"That was how it worked"
13"Neither of them moved."
14"Silas came up from the"
15"It had been dyed purple"
16"She wore a wool coat"
17"She looked like the successful"
18"Eva crossed the room the"
19"She didn't finish"
ratio0.891
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She wore a wool coat over a cream blouse and a thin gold chain that caught the low light."
1"She looked like the successful lawyers Aurora had fetched coffee for during her one catastrophic internship, the ones who spoke in calm complete sentences and n…"
2"She pulled Aurora into a hug that smelled of rain and some perfume Aurora couldn't name, and Aurora stood in it with the box cutter still in her hand, her arms …"
3"Silas set two plates of bread and olive oil in front of them with the silent authority of a barman who'd mediated worse fights in darker rooms."
4"Aurora told her about Yu-Fei, who paid cash and corrected her Cantonese pronunciation with total mercilessness, and about the regular at table six who ordered m…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora rubbed, an old motion, automatic"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.213
leniency0.425
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.3975%