Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6MX91ZRD84M7940NJKX6P

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Duration:
27.7s
Cost:
$0.014048
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck. Rory braced her shoulder against the door of Eva's flat and wrenched the bolt free. Brass scraped. The curry from downstairs had soaked into the hall carpet, into her clothes, into the pages of Eva's books. Ptolemy shot between her ankles the second she cracked the door open. She didn't see Lucien at first. She saw the cane. Ivory handle, polished to a dull gleam. Charcoal wool trousers. A perfect crease. Then his face. Slicked-back platinum cut sharper than she remembered. One amber eye and one black eye fixed on her. Rain beaded on his shoulders. His suit held the weather off like armour. He looked at her wrist. At the small crescent scar there. Then up. "You changed the locks." Rory kept her hand on the edge of the door. Her knuckles went white. "I didn't. Eva did." "She never liked me." "No. She clocked you from the start." Ptolemy wove around Lucien's cane, tail high. Lucien didn't move. Rain tracked down the back of his neck and disappeared under his collar. The hall light flickered and caught the wet in his hair. "You going to let me in, Rory? Or you want the whole building to hear how you pay rent now?" She stepped back. The door knocked against a stack of books. Lucien entered in one smooth motion, cane silent on the rug. He brought the smell of rain and expensive smoke with him. Eva's flat swallowed him. Books towered on every surface, scrolls half-unrolled over the kitchen counters, post-its like a second wallpaper. He navigated it without looking down. "You left London." "You noticed." "I notice everything about you. That was the problem, if you recall." Rory closed the door. Three deadbolts. She turned each with a hard click. The sound boxed them in. Lucien stood by the window. Beyond the glass, Brick Lane blurred with traffic and neon. His reflection showed both eyes at once, mismatched, unblinking. "You're still running deliveries for the Golden Empress." "Yu-Fei pays on time. More than you ever did." "I paid in information. You spent it badly." He turned. The cane rested against his thigh. He leaned his weight on it though she knew he didn't need to. Theatre. Everything with him was theatre. She folded her arms. The hem of her oversized jumper slipped off one shoulder. Black hair, still damp from her own walk home, stuck to her neck. "What do you want, Luc?" "A job ended poorly last night. A client lost a package. Your employer misplaced it." "Yu-Fei doesn't misplace anything." "She did this time. A small wooden box. Lacquered red. No bigger than my palm." Rory shook her head. The flat felt smaller. The distance between them measured in inches and in all the months since she last saw him in the back room at Silas' bar, his hand on her jaw, her mouth saying go. "I don't have it. I haven't touched anything but noodles and extra chilli sauce." "You touched me. That led to complications." She laughed. A short, sharp sound. "Right. You fucked up, so now I have to fix it? Same script." "I fucked up once. You left before I could correct it." "I left because you sold the name of my flat. My actual flat. To a man with teeth like razors. Remember that?" His jaw tightened. The amber eye caught the lamp light. "I needed leverage. I paid for that mistake." "You paid? I slept with a chair wedged under Silas' fire exit for a week." Ptolemy jumped onto the table. He sent a stack of Eva's notes sliding. Lucien caught a page before it hit the floor. He set it back down with care, fingers lingering on the edge. "I came myself this time. No middlemen. No teeth." "How noble." He reached into his inner pocket. Rory went rigid. Her back hit the door. Lucien paused, palm open. "Easy, Aurora." She hated when he used her full name. Aurora. Like he owned a different version of her. He drew out nothing but a folded paper. He placed it on the nearest book stack. A delivery docket. Yu-Fei's stamp, red ink, her own handwriting: *Brick Lane - 47B - after 10pm.* "Tonight. You signed for it." "I didn't." "You did. Three hours ago." Rory pushed off the door. She snatched the docket. The paper had the grease spot from the restaurant. Her initials in the corner. R C, rushed. She frowned at it. "This isn't my route tonight. I did Bethnal Green." "You swapped with Jian. He asked. You said yes because you're soft that way." The flat's radiator clanked. Rain hit the window harder. Rory stared at the docket, at her own looped letters, and the back of her neck prickled. She remembered Jian at the pass, his kid sick, her saying fine, take Mile End, I'll cover Brick Lane if you cover my Tuesday. The memory slotted into place with a click. "I left it with Silas. At the bar. I didn't know what it was." Lucien's shoulders dropped a fraction. Not relief. Something closer to pain. "Silas burned. An hour ago." Rory's mouth opened. No sound came out. Then - "What?" "Fire. Not accident. They looked for the box. Silas wasn't there. He was with Maeve." Silas' bar. Her flat above it. Her few clothes. Her mother's old photograph she kept taped to the mirror. "Is he -" "Alive. Furious. The box was not in the rubble." Silence fell thick between them. Ptolemy mewed and butted his head against Lucien's shin. Lucien looked down, surprised, then crouched. The charcoal suit pulled across his shoulders. He ran a knuckle over the tabby's ear. "You have it still. Wherever you put it." "I told you. At the bar. Behind the till. Silas has that loose brick - had." Rory pressed her palms to her temples. Her thoughts raced ahead, cool and fast despite the panic clawing up her throat. That was what she did. Puzzle pieces, out-of-the-box, while her hands shook. "If they took Silas' place apart and found nothing, then someone moved it before them." "Correct." "So who knew?" "You. Me. Jian. Yu-Fei. And Silas." "Yu-Fei wouldn't torch Silas. He feeds her cat when she goes to Manchester." "Agreed." Lucien stood. Proximity hit her like heat. He was close enough that she saw the faint scar at his temple, silver against pale skin, and the rain still caught in his lashes. "You came here to ask if I stole from you." "I came here because I knew they would come here next." Rory swallowed. Her eyes, bright blue, reflected the lamplight. She looked at his mouth, then away. "You still think everyone lies." "Everyone does. Except you. You telegraph every feeling you have." "I'm not -" "You are. Now. Look." She did. She stared straight at him. The black eye swallowed light. The amber one held it. "You left because I treated your safety as a bargaining chip." Her breath caught. She hadn't expected plain speech from him. "Yes." "I was wrong." The words hung there, stark in the book-crowded room. "Don't do that." "Do what?" "Speak like a human. You are terrible at it." A flicker of a smile touched his lips. Real, not polished. "My mother said the same. In French, so it hurt more." Rory felt the floor tilt. The old anger still lived there, but underneath it something else pulled taut, familiar and unwelcome and warm. "You can't stay." "I have nowhere else to tell you that men with fire come for my clients. And for the girls who deliver for them." "I'm not your girl." "No. You never were. That was the other problem." He lifted his hand. Slow, giving her time to step back. She didn't. His knuckles brushed the edge of her jaw. Skin on skin. Her pulse jumped against his fingers. The touch lasted a second. He dropped his hand. His fist tightened around the cane handle. "The box contains a binding. Not for a demon like me. For something older. The man who wants it will ask polite once, then burn the street." Rory looked at the docket still crumpled in her fingers. She smoothed it against her thigh. "Then we get it first." "We?" "I know Silas. If he moved it, he left me a sign. He knows I check Eva's wards. You don't know his tells." Lucien inclined his head. Deference. A new thing for him. "Show me." Rory moved to the window. She pushed aside a pile of Eva's research journals. Beneath, chalk symbols marked the sill, fresh. She pointed. "That one. Silas drew that when we were kids. Means 'under the cat's arse.' No, really." Lucien came to stand behind her. Not touching. Close enough that his chest nearly brushed her back. She felt his breath stir her hair. "Ptolemy?" "Not Eva's cat. The stone cat at the market. The lion." The rain drummed against the glass. In the alley below, a motorbike revved and faded. "You still think fast, Laila." He used the name only he had ever called her. Laila. Night. His language, his mother's language, made into a private thing. Rory turned. Her shoulder-length black hair swung. She looked up at him, chin high. "Then stop standing there dripping on Eva's rug and help me find my landlord's priceless demon box before someone else burns this flat down too." Lucien's smile sharpened. He tapped his cane once against the floor. The ivory handle clicked. "As the lady commands."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.014
leniency0.028
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1587
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1587
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"navigated"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"flickered"
2"navigated"
3"weight"
4"measured"
5"silence"
6"raced"
7"stark"
8"flicker"
9"familiar"
10"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences148
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences221
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords7
totalWords1591
ratio0.004
matches
0"Brick Lane - 47B - after 10pm."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount968
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Lucien14
Brick3
Lane3
Rory14
Jian1
Mile1
End1
Tuesday1
Ptolemy4
Rain3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Jian"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Rain"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.777
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1591
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences221
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs120
mean13.26
std10.48
cv0.791
sampleLengths
04
148
210
313
43
530
613
74
814
94
104
117
1234
1320
1433
1526
163
172
1812
1918
2024
218
229
238
2427
2527
265
2715
284
2915
3041
3114
327
336
3413
3511
3622
3710
388
3915
4034
419
422
4318
442
4517
4633
475
482
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs165
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences221
ratio0.005
matches
0"Yu-Fei's stamp, red ink, her own handwriting: *Brick Lane - 47B - after 10pm.*"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount963
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.023883696780893044
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0020768431983385254
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences221
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences221
mean7.2
std5.35
cv0.744
sampleLengths
04
115
22
319
412
56
64
77
83
93
103
117
1210
135
148
155
166
172
184
1910
204
214
224
237
247
253
2613
2711
2820
293
308
3111
3211
334
3416
356
363
372
3812
394
402
417
425
435
4410
459
468
479
488
492
47.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.31221719457013575
totalSentences221
uniqueOpeners69
25.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"Then his face."
ratio0.008
71.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences129
matches
0"She didn't see Lucien at"
1"She saw the cane."
2"His suit held the weather"
3"He looked at her wrist."
4"Her knuckles went white."
5"She stepped back."
6"He brought the smell of"
7"He navigated it without looking"
8"She turned each with a"
9"His reflection showed both eyes"
10"He leaned his weight on"
11"She folded her arms."
12"His jaw tightened."
13"He sent a stack of"
14"He set it back down"
15"He reached into his inner"
16"Her back hit the door."
17"She hated when he used"
18"He drew out nothing but"
19"He placed it on the"
ratio0.372
14.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount115
totalSentences129
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck."
1"Rory braced her shoulder against"
2"The curry from downstairs had"
3"Ptolemy shot between her ankles"
4"She didn't see Lucien at"
5"She saw the cane."
6"Ivory handle, polished to a"
7"Charcoal wool trousers."
8"A perfect crease."
9"Rain beaded on his shoulders."
10"His suit held the weather"
11"He looked at her wrist."
12"Rory kept her hand on"
13"Her knuckles went white."
14"Ptolemy wove around Lucien's cane,"
15"Lucien didn't move."
16"Rain tracked down the back"
17"The hall light flickered and"
18"She stepped back."
19"The door knocked against a"
ratio0.891
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.6219%