Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6N35G286NM8WBE6TKFHCY

Run Details

Duration:
1m 27s
Cost:
$0.031729
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The cordon tape fluttered in the wind off Camden High Street, pinned to a rusted gate that should have been locked since 1924. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath it and found PC Yarrow waiting at the top of the stairs, his torch aimed at his own boots. "You won't want to go down there, ma'am," he said. "Not without a mask." "Why not?" "Smell. Like a butcher's bin in August." Quinn took the stairs anyway. Eighteen years of service had taught her that the first officer on scene always exaggerated and always missed something. Her worn leather watch read 06:14. Dawn light died behind her after the third step, and she clicked on her own torch. The station had no business existing. She'd checked the transit archives on the drive over — a spur platform bricked up during the First World War, officially. Unofficially, someone had unbricked it, laid carpets the colour of old blood, and strung lantern wire along the tunnel ceiling. Stall fronts lined the platform edge, built from salvaged doors and graveyard iron. A market. An illegal one, operating God knew how long beneath one of the busiest streets in London. And at the far end, half-slumped against a tobacconist's cabinet, sat the dead man. "Kenneth Doyle," Yarrow called down from the stairs. He'd refused to descend past the fifth step. "Forty-two. Runs a pawnshop on Kentish Town Road. Two uniforms found him on a follow-up about fenced goods — one of them tripped the gate lock and came looking." Quinn crouched beside the body. Doyle's eyes were open, fixed on the tunnel ceiling. No blood. No visible wound. His right hand clutched his chest, fingers locked into the fabric of his coat with a rigor that seemed too advanced for the timeline Yarrow had quoted. "Who called time of death?" "Paramedic estimates eight to ten hours. Heart attack, most like. Look at him — fifty cigarettes a day written all over that complexion. Fences his stolen goods down here, has a scare with the wrong customer, ticker gives out. Happens every week, just not usually somewhere this odd." "Mm." Quinn swept her torch across the platform. The stalls sat quiet, their wares covered in oilcloth. She lifted one corner with her pen. Jars. Bundles of dried things. A row of knives with blades that drank the torchlight rather than reflected it. "Fencing operation, then," Yarrow pressed. "High-end. Antiquities, maybe. Doyle was into that." "Doyle sold knock-off watches and stolen laptops," Quinn said. "I pulled his sheet last year." She stood and walked the platform's length, counting her paces out of habit. Thirty-four. Her boots left prints in a fine grey dust that coated everything — everything except a clean arc around the body, as though someone had drawn a circle and swept inside it. She returned to the corpse. "Yarrow. Come down here and look at this." "I'm all right up here, ma'am." "That's an order dressed as an invitation." His boots scraped down the steps. He kept the torch high, jaw tight, and she noted how he angled his body away from the stalls — not from the body, from the stalls. Interesting. "The hand," she said, and pointed. Doyle's left hand lay palm-up beside his hip. Yarrow leaned in. "Nothing there." "Exactly." "Ma'am?" "A man has a heart attack, he clutches his chest, he falls. Gravity does the rest. His left hand should be trapped under him or flung out. It's placed." She traced the air above the fingers without touching. "And look at the palm. Cleaner than the rest of him. He was holding something. Something small. Someone took it after he died." Yarrow straightened. "So we're saying robbery. Wrong customer, as I said. Doyle flashes cash, someone panics—" "Someone kills him without leaving a mark, arranges his body, sweeps a circle around him, and takes one item from his hand while leaving—" Quinn lifted the oilcloth on the nearest stall again — "a tray of jewellery worth more than my house deposit sitting untouched three feet away?" Yarrow's torch dipped. He didn't answer. Quinn photographed everything with her phone, flash snapping in the dark. Around the body's left side, the dust held partial prints — not boots. Bare feet. Long, narrow, the toes splayed wrong, too much space between the big toe and the rest. She'd seen thousands of footprints. She'd never seen feet shaped like that on anything that walked upright. "Get forensics down here," she said. "Full team. And I want a list of everyone who knew this market existed." "Ma'am, with respect, SOCO won't—" Yarrow stopped. Swallowed. "There isn't going to be a list. Nobody knew this place existed." She looked at him then, properly. Twenty-three years old, sweating in a cold tunnel, refusing to look at the stalls. "But you did," she said. "Didn't you, Constable?" His knuckles whitened around the torch. "My nan used to tell me stories. About markets that move with the moon. Places you get into with a token made of—" He laughed, a cracked sound with no humour in it. "It's rubbish. Kids' stories. I just remembered them, seeing all this." "A token made of what?" "Nothing. It's nothing." Quinn let it go, for now. She'd learned that frightened men lied better under silence than under pressure. She returned to the body and worked her gloved fingers into Doyle's coat pockets, one by one. Left: keys, a betting slip, forty pence. Right: nothing. Inside breast pocket: nothing. Then her fingers found the seam. A slit, professionally cut, the kind a pickpocket made — or the kind a man sewed into his own coat to hide something flat against his ribs. She widened it with the pen and drew out a small brass disc. A compass. Old, its casing gone green with verdigris, its face etched with marks that weren't cardinal points. Symbols. The needle spun once as it came free, then steadied — pointing not at the stairs, not at north, but down the dark throat of the tunnel, where the lantern wire ended and the black began. "What've you got there?" Yarrow's voice had climbed an octave. Quinn closed her fist around the compass. The needle pulled against her palm, insistent, like a dog straining at a lead. "Evidence. Tag everything on this platform. Nobody touches the stalls until I've had each one catalogued." "Ma'am, the brass—" He caught himself. "The higher-ups. A squatter market under Camden, heart attack victim, they'll want this wrapped by Friday." "They can want." She rose, knees cracking, and walked to the tunnel's mouth. The compass dragged her hand toward the darkness. Beyond the last lantern, the tiles changed — she could just make it out — the soot-blackened white giving way to something carved, lines and whorls cut deep into the brick, the same symbols that ringed the compass face. The same symbols, she now realised, that had been swept into the dust circle around Doyle's body. Not swept away. Swept *in*. Someone had drawn a diagram around a dying man, taken what he carried, and left everything else untouched. That wasn't robbery. That was ritual. Or procedure — and procedure she understood. "Yarrow." "Ma'am." "Your nan's stories. You're going to tell me every single one." She didn't turn around. She kept her eyes on the tunnel, on the needle's direction, on the dark that seemed to breathe a slow draft of cold air against her face. "Starting with why the entrance to a sealed station had a fresh padlock on the gate. A padlock someone unlocked *before* the uniforms arrived. Which means someone knew Doyle was down here dead before we did." Behind her, Yarrow said nothing at all. Quinn checked her watch. 06:41. Somewhere above, Camden was waking up — coffee carts, market traders, the ordinary machinery of the city. Down here, a dead pawnbroker sat inside a drawn circle, and a broken compass pointed the way his killer had gone. She photographed the compass, logged it, and slipped it into an evidence bag. Through the plastic, the needle still strained toward the tunnel. She noted the direction on her pad, underlined it twice, and wrote beneath it the only thing she knew for certain: *Somebody wanted him dead here, specifically. The place is the message.* "Forensics," she said into her radio, climbing toward the light, "and a locksmith's report on that gate. And someone get me everything we have on Kenneth Doyle's last forty-eight hours — every call, every customer, every debt." The tunnel exhaled behind her. She did not look back. But she kept her hand wrapped around the evidence bag in her coat pocket all the way up the stairs, and she felt the needle turn, patient as a clock, following her.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:55:01.944Z" 7/25/2026, 5:55:01 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.341
leniency0.682
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1447
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1447
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"swept away"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"traced"
2"silence"
3"etched"
4"swept away"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords13
totalWords1461
ratio0.009
matches
0"in"
1"before"
2"Somebody wanted him dead here, specifically. The place is the message."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Behind her, Yarrow said nothing at all."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount997
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Yarrow"
discoveredNames
Camden2
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn10
Yarrow10
First1
World1
War1
God1
London1
Doyle4
Swallowed1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Yarrow"
3"First"
4"God"
5"Doyle"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"London"
globalScore0.998
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"dark that seemed to breathe a slow draft of cold air against her face"
63.11% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.369
wordCount1461
matches
0"not at the stairs, not at north, but down the dark throat of the tunnel"
1"not at north, but down the dark throat of the tunnel"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean27.06
std22.78
cv0.842
sampleLengths
047
114
22
37
446
578
614
745
846
95
1048
111
1242
1312
1415
1546
165
178
186
197
2034
216
2213
231
241
2561
2616
2749
286
2959
3020
3120
3220
338
3450
355
363
3748
3846
3955
4010
4137
4222
433
4479
4531
461
471
4878
497
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"been locked"
1"been swept"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was waking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences129
ratio0.07
matches
0"She'd checked the transit archives on the drive over — a spur platform bricked up during the First World War, officially."
1"Her boots left prints in a fine grey dust that coated everything — everything except a clean arc around the body, as though someone had drawn a circle and swept inside it."
2"He kept the torch high, jaw tight, and she noted how he angled his body away from the stalls — not from the body, from the stalls."
3"Around the body's left side, the dust held partial prints — not boots."
4"A slit, professionally cut, the kind a pickpocket made — or the kind a man sewed into his own coat to hide something flat against his ribs."
5"The needle spun once as it came free, then steadied — pointing not at the stairs, not at north, but down the dark throat of the tunnel, where the lantern wire ended and the black began."
6"Beyond the last lantern, the tiles changed — she could just make it out — the soot-blackened white giving way to something carved, lines and whorls cut deep into the brick, the same symbols that ringed the compass face."
7"Or procedure — and procedure she understood."
8"Somewhere above, Camden was waking up — coffee carts, market traders, the ordinary machinery of the city."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount992
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02721774193548387
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006048387096774193
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean11.33
std10.41
cv0.92
sampleLengths
023
124
210
34
42
57
65
719
86
916
106
1121
1220
1313
142
1516
1614
178
188
1929
205
219
222
233
2427
255
2648
271
287
299
307
311
324
3314
345
357
369
376
3813
391
4032
415
428
436
447
456
4627
471
486
498
88.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.546875
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners70
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences81
matches
0"Unofficially, someone had unbricked it,"
1"Then her fingers found the"
2"Somewhere above, Camden was waking"
ratio0.037
76.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences81
matches
0"Her worn leather watch read"
1"She'd checked the transit archives"
2"He'd refused to descend past"
3"His right hand clutched his"
4"She lifted one corner with"
5"She stood and walked the"
6"Her boots left prints in"
7"She returned to the corpse."
8"His boots scraped down the"
9"He kept the torch high,"
10"she said, and pointed"
11"She traced the air above"
12"He didn't answer."
13"She'd seen thousands of footprints."
14"She'd never seen feet shaped"
15"She looked at him then,"
16"His knuckles whitened around the"
17"He laughed, a cracked sound"
18"She'd learned that frightened men"
19"She returned to the body"
ratio0.358
83.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences81
matches
0"The cordon tape fluttered in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath"
2"Quinn took the stairs anyway."
3"Her worn leather watch read"
4"Dawn light died behind her"
5"The station had no business"
6"She'd checked the transit archives"
7"Stall fronts lined the platform"
8"An illegal one, operating God"
9"Yarrow called down from the"
10"He'd refused to descend past"
11"Quinn crouched beside the body."
12"Doyle's eyes were open, fixed"
13"His right hand clutched his"
14"Quinn swept her torch across"
15"The stalls sat quiet, their"
16"She lifted one corner with"
17"A row of knives with"
18"She stood and walked the"
19"Her boots left prints in"
ratio0.753
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Her boots left prints in a fine grey dust that coated everything — everything except a clean arc around the body, as though someone had drawn a circle and swept…"
1"Old, its casing gone green with verdigris, its face etched with marks that weren't cardinal points."
2"Beyond the last lantern, the tiles changed — she could just make it out — the soot-blackened white giving way to something carved, lines and whorls cut deep int…"
3"She kept her eyes on the tunnel, on the needle's direction, on the dark that seemed to breathe a slow draft of cold air against her face."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Yarrow pressed (press)"
1"He laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.091
87.5676%