| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her fingers closed around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.316 | | leniency | 0.632 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 96.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1314 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1314 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "long shadow" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "lurched" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "stark" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 153 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 179 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1314 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 1086 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 21 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | August | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Nyx | 10 | | Veil | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Shadow | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Veil" | | 6 | "Shadow" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Pendant" |
| | globalScore | 0.533 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like veins, and the lichen on it g" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.283 | | wordCount | 1314 | | matches | | 0 | "not light, but heat" | | 1 | "not down but sideways, suspended, golden" | | 2 | "not back to the standing stones but forward, toward the tear, toward the smell of feasts" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 179 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 69 | | mean | 19.04 | | std | 15.55 | | cv | 0.817 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 57 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 44 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 57 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 59 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 39 | | 44 | 36 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 179 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1094 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.024680073126142597 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003656307129798903 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 179 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 179 | | mean | 7.34 | | std | 5.92 | | cv | 0.806 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 61.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.4134078212290503 | | totalSentences | 179 | | uniqueOpeners | 74 | |
| 84.03% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "Only it pulled." | | 1 | "Then there was." | | 2 | "Somewhere beyond the Veil tear," |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "It was not bark." | | 1 | "It was bark and it" | | 2 | "She had not crossed." | | 3 | "Her silver hair caught no" | | 4 | "Their form stretched thin, a" | | 5 | "Her fingers closed around the" | | 6 | "Her boots made no mark" | | 7 | "It tasted of wet earth" | | 8 | "They reformed on the other" | | 9 | "It was not." | | 10 | "It was warm amber, low" | | 11 | "They opened as she looked" | | 12 | "She did not part the" | | 13 | "She followed the mushroom line." | | 14 | "They tilted their head." | | 15 | "She hissed and pulled it" | | 16 | "It was a curtain of" | | 17 | "Her grip tightened on the" | | 18 | "Her fingertip left a line" | | 19 | "She held the blade between" |
| | ratio | 0.185 | |
| 69.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones sweated cold." | | 1 | "Rory pressed her palm against" | | 2 | "It was not bark." | | 3 | "It was bark and it" | | 4 | "The surface rippled under her" | | 5 | "Isolde stood already on the" | | 6 | "She had not crossed." | | 7 | "Her silver hair caught no" | | 8 | "Nyx pooled at Rory's feet." | | 9 | "Their form stretched thin, a" | | 10 | "Rory felt it before she" | | 11 | "A shimmer in the air" | | 12 | "The silver chain around her" | | 13 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed." | | 14 | "A dull thud against her" | | 15 | "Her fingers closed around the" | | 16 | "The crimson inside woke, a" | | 17 | "Her boots made no mark" | | 18 | "Rory stepped through." | | 19 | "Sound cut out." |
| | ratio | 0.782 | |
| 42.02% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "For a heartbeat their humanoid shape collapsed, scattered into a dozen shadow ribbons that slipped through the shimmer." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.37% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.053 | | leniency | 0.105 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |