Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6S9YR6MZ2WS406SYWBM3F

Run Details

Duration:
1m 22s
Cost:
$0.030916
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven — three short raps, a pause, then two more. A pattern. Rory froze over the takeaway container in her hands, chopsticks suspended. Ptolemy lifted his head from the stack of scrolls he'd claimed as a bed and stared at the door. "You're not expecting anyone?" she asked the cat. He offered no opinion. She crossed the flat on bare feet, avoiding the atlas open on the floorboards, and put her eye to the peephole. The corridor bulb had burnt out weeks ago, but the figure on the landing needed no light. Platinum hair caught what little spilled from the window at the end of the hall. Charcoal suit. Ivory cane. Her stomach dropped through the floor and kept going. She undid the first deadbolt. Stopped. Took a breath. Undid the other two and pulled the door open before she could think better of it. Lucien Moreau stood with one gloved hand braced on the doorframe, and he looked — wrong. That was the thing that registered first. Lucien never looked wrong. His collar sat crooked. A bruise darkened the line of his jaw, and his heterochromatic eyes, amber and black, tracked her face with a focus that made her feel x-rayed. "Rory." "You have a lot of nerve." "I know." No apology in it. Just fact. "Four months. Not a word. And you turn up at—" She caught herself. Lowered her voice. "How did you even know I'd be here?" "I know where everyone is. It's the whole of my profession." He glanced past her shoulder, cataloguing the books, the scrolls, the chaos of Eva's research buried under three weeks of Rory's occupation. "May I come in? I wouldn't ask if it weren't important." "That's exactly what you said in Antwerp." Something flickered across his face — the ghost of the smile that had started all of it. "In Antwerp, I was lying." "And now?" "Now I have nowhere else to go." She should have shut the door. She'd rehearsed shutting the door. She'd rehearsed entire speeches for this moment, standing in the shower, standing over the wok at the Golden Empress between deliveries — speeches with excellent structure, barrister's-daughter speeches, the kind that left no opening. All of them evaporated under the sight of blood seeping through his left sleeve. "You're bleeding on Eva's doorstep." "So I am." She stepped aside. "If you drip on the scrolls, I'll finish whatever started that." He moved past her with the careful economy of a man concealing how much each step cost. The cane bore more weight than it should have. Ptolemy took one look at him, flattened his ears, and vanished into the bedroom. "Your cat remembers me." "Eva's cat. And he has excellent judgement." Rory locked all three deadbolts behind him and turned to find Lucien surveying the flat the way he surveyed everything — exits first, then occupants, then opportunities. His gaze snagged on the photograph tucked into the mirror frame: Rory and Eva at sixteen, grinning outside a Cardiff chippy. "Sit down before you fall down," she said. "Kitchen chair. Now." "You're enjoying this." "Furiously." She fetched the first aid kit from under the sink — Eva kept one stocked with things no chemist sold, rowan oil and salt sachets alongside the plasters. When she came back, Lucien had shrugged out of his jacket and unbuttoned his shirt cuff with one hand. The cut ran from elbow to wrist, clean-edged, deliberate. A blade wound. She sat across from him and took his arm. His skin ran hot. Half-demon hot — she'd forgotten that, or tried to. "Who?" "A client who decided the information should come cheaper." His eyes stayed on her hands. "You changed your hair." "I cut it." "It suits you." "Don't." "Don't what?" She pressed gauze to the wound harder than necessary. He didn't flinch, which irritated her more. "Don't walk back in here after four months of silence and compliment my hair like we're — " She stopped. Breathed. Wound the bandage. "You left, Lucien. You left the morning after — " "I remember the morning." "Do you? Because from where I was standing, it looked a lot like you climbing out a window before sunrise, leaving a note with a poem in it. A poem, Lucien. In French. As if that made it better." "As I recall, you were asleep, and there were three men from the Court of Thorns waiting outside the hotel with an interest in my whereabouts. Staying would have made you interesting to them." His free hand turned over on the table, palm up, an old gesture of his — I have nothing hidden. It had never once been true. "I did what I did so you could go back to your life. Deliveries. Cardiff. Law school, if you wanted it. Ordinary things. Safe things." "I didn't want safe things." The words came out flat and fast and hung between them like smoke. She finished tying off the bandage and didn't let go of his wrist. His pulse hammered against her fingers — faster than his composed face admitted. "Then what did you want?" His voice dropped, roughened around the edges, the Marseille in it bleeding through. "Honestly? A bloody phone call. A letter. One of your ridiculous courier pigeons or whatever it is you people use." She looked up at him. "You decided for me. You decided I'd be better off, and you disappeared, and the worst part — the absolute worst part — is that you were probably right. That's what I couldn't forgive." "Rory." "No, let me finish, because I've been rehearsing this for four months and you're going to sit there and bleed quietly while I say it." She jabbed a finger at his chest. "I spent six years letting other people make my choices. My parents picked my degree. Evan picked my friends, my clothes, what I was allowed to think. And then you — you, who knew all of that, who I told all of that — walked out of that hotel and made the biggest choice of all without asking me. You weren't protecting me. You were being exactly like them." Silence. The curry house downstairs thumped music through the floorboards. Ptolemy crept back in, decided the danger had passed, and leapt onto the table between them. Lucien looked down at the cat. "You're right." She blinked. "Sorry?" "You're right. I told myself it was protection because protection sounds noble, and I have a professional weakness for sounding noble." He turned his hand in hers — slow, giving her every chance to pull away — and threaded his fingers through her fingers. His thumb found the crescent scar on her left wrist and rested there, feather-light. "The truth is simpler and uglier. No one had ever looked at me the way you did that night. Like I wasn't a transaction. And I ran, because a man in my trade cannot afford to want anything that much. Want is leverage. Want is a door someone else can kick in." "And now you're here anyway." "Now I'm here anyway. Bleeding on a borrowed chair, having apparently ruined your rehearsed speech." "You haven't ruined it. There were three more sections." "By all means." She laughed despite herself — a short, cracked sound — and hated how good it felt, how the flat suddenly seemed warmer with him in it, how four months of anger turned out to be four months of waiting dressed up in a costume. "I missed you," she said. "That's section two. I'm furious about it." "Noted." The amber eye gleamed; the black one held her steady. "And section three?" She leaned in and kissed him, because she'd never in her life followed a structure anyway. He made a low sound of surprise against her mouth — Lucien Moreau, surprised, a genuine first — then his good hand came up to cup her jaw and he kissed her back like a man who'd spent four months drowning. The bruise on his jaw made him wince. She didn't stop. Neither did he. When they broke apart, his forehead rested against hers and his breath came uneven. "For the record," he said, "the poem rhymed in the original." "I know. I translated it. It was terrible." "It was heartfelt." "It rhymed 'Carter' with 'depart, her.'" "French is a difficult language." She pulled back far enough to look at him properly — the bruise, the bandage, the crooked collar, the man underneath all the tailoring, sitting in a cramped flat on Brick Lane with nowhere else to go. Her. He'd meant her. "You're staying tonight," she said. "Sofa. And in the morning you're going to tell me who cut you, and then you're going to make coffee, and then — " she pointed a finger in warning, " — we're going to have the conversation you should have had before climbing out that window. All of it. No poems." He lifted her hand and pressed his lips to the crescent scar on her wrist, and his smile was the real one, the one she suspected the whole of London's underworld had never seen. "No poems," he agreed.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:57:19.968Z" 7/25/2026, 5:57:19 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.295
leniency0.59
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"structure"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"flickered"
2"structure"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1538
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount904
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Lowered1
Eva3
Rory4
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien6
Cardiff1
Breathed1
Marseille1
Silence1
Brick1
Lane1
London1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Golden"
1"Cardiff"
2"Marseille"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed warmer with him in it, how four months of anger turned out to be four months of waiting dressed up in a costume"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1538
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean22.62
std24.46
cv1.081
sampleLengths
029
119
212
357
49
525
657
71
86
98
1024
1144
127
1322
142
157
1659
175
183
1914
2040
214
227
2348
2411
253
2660
2722
281
2919
303
313
321
332
3450
354
3639
3785
385
3913
4026
4118
4259
431
44101
4526
468
473
48110
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences125
ratio0.112
matches
0"The knock came at half past eleven — three short raps, a pause, then two more."
1"Lucien Moreau stood with one gloved hand braced on the doorframe, and he looked — wrong."
2"Something flickered across his face — the ghost of the smile that had started all of it."
3"She'd rehearsed entire speeches for this moment, standing in the shower, standing over the wok at the Golden Empress between deliveries — speeches with excellent structure, barrister's-daughter speeches, the kind that left no opening."
4"Rory locked all three deadbolts behind him and turned to find Lucien surveying the flat the way he surveyed everything — exits first, then occupants, then opportunities."
5"\"Furiously.\" She fetched the first aid kit from under the sink — Eva kept one stocked with things no chemist sold, rowan oil and salt sachets alongside the plasters."
6"Half-demon hot — she'd forgotten that, or tried to."
7"\"As I recall, you were asleep, and there were three men from the Court of Thorns waiting outside the hotel with an interest in my whereabouts. Staying would have made you interesting to them.\" His free hand turned over on the table, palm up, an old gesture of his — I have nothing hidden."
8"His pulse hammered against her fingers — faster than his composed face admitted."
9"\"You're right. I told myself it was protection because protection sounds noble, and I have a professional weakness for sounding noble.\" He turned his hand in hers — slow, giving her every chance to pull away — and threaded his fingers through her fingers."
10"She laughed despite herself — a short, cracked sound — and hated how good it felt, how the flat suddenly seemed warmer with him in it, how four months of anger turned out to be four months of waiting dressed up in a costume."
11"\"Noted.\" The amber eye gleamed; the black one held her steady."
12"He made a low sound of surprise against her mouth — Lucien Moreau, surprised, a genuine first — then his good hand came up to cup her jaw and he kissed her back like a man who'd spent four months drowning."
13"She pulled back far enough to look at him properly — the bruise, the bandage, the crooked collar, the man underneath all the tailoring, sitting in a cramped flat on Brick Lane with nowhere else to go."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount892
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02242152466367713
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002242152466367713
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean12.3
std12.97
cv1.054
sampleLengths
016
12
211
319
48
54
621
717
815
92
102
119
125
131
143
1516
1616
177
184
194
2026
211
226
236
242
2513
263
278
2833
2911
307
3117
325
332
347
356
365
3734
3814
395
403
413
4211
4317
449
4514
464
477
4827
4921
69.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.44
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners55
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
2.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences68
matches
0"she asked the cat"
1"He offered no opinion."
2"She crossed the flat on"
3"Her stomach dropped through the"
4"She undid the first deadbolt."
5"His collar sat crooked."
6"She caught herself"
7"He glanced past her shoulder,"
8"She should have shut the"
9"She'd rehearsed shutting the door."
10"She'd rehearsed entire speeches for"
11"She stepped aside."
12"He moved past her with"
13"His gaze snagged on the"
14"She fetched the first aid"
15"She sat across from him"
16"His skin ran hot."
17"His eyes stayed on her"
18"She pressed gauze to the"
19"He didn't flinch, which irritated"
ratio0.544
26.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences68
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory froze over the takeaway"
2"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
3"she asked the cat"
4"He offered no opinion."
5"She crossed the flat on"
6"The corridor bulb had burnt"
7"Platinum hair caught what little"
8"Her stomach dropped through the"
9"She undid the first deadbolt."
10"Lucien Moreau stood with one"
11"That was the thing that"
12"Lucien never looked wrong."
13"His collar sat crooked."
14"A bruise darkened the line"
15"She caught herself"
16"He glanced past her shoulder,"
17"Something flickered across his face"
18"She should have shut the"
19"She'd rehearsed shutting the door."
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A bruise darkened the line of his jaw, and his heterochromatic eyes, amber and black, tracked her face with a focus that made her feel x-rayed."
1"He made a low sound of surprise against her mouth — Lucien Moreau, surprised, a genuine first — then his good hand came up to cup her jaw and he kissed her back…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.098
leniency0.197
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.033
82.0212%