Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6SRYTCBB3SEDG4VR8HFZM

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Duration:
24.1s
Cost:
$0.013737
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave under her thumb and the door moved an inch before the chain caught. Rory left the chain on. The hallway on Brick Lane smelled of cumin and damp and cheap disinfectant, and through the gap she saw charcoal wool and a hand in a black glove resting on an ivory handle. Her throat closed. She undid the chain. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway of Eva's flat like he owned the lease. Tailored charcoal suit, not a crease out of place despite the rain that glossed the pavement three floors down. Platinum hair combed back from his forehead. The left eye black from lid to lid, the right amber and catching the hallway light. His cane tipped against the doorframe. The books stacked in Eva's entrance cast his shadow in uneven blocks. "You moved." His French edged the vowel. He looked past her into the flat, at the towers of paperbacks, the scrolls that unrolled over the kitchen counter, the open boxes that still smelled of Eva's sandalwood. "You found me anyway." "I find everyone." He did not step inside. He waited. That was new. Rory stepped back and the door opened wider on its own. Ptolemy shot between her ankles, a streak of tabby, and wound around Lucien's cane. Lucien bent - not much, just enough to let the cat sniff his glove. His suit pulled across his shoulders. "You left Silas' place." "You left London, last I heard." The words came out sharper than she meant. Rory folded her arms. The sleeve of her jumper rode up and the small crescent on her left wrist showed white against the skin. Lucien's amber eye dropped to it. "Three months. Not dead. That is a record for Marseille in August." "You were supposed to call." Lucien straightened. The cat lost interest. "I called." "You called once. From a payphone. You told me not to come after you." Rory left the door open. She walked into the kitchenette because standing close to him in that narrow entry made her skin hum and her jaw ache. Eva's flat never had space for two people who knew how to fight. Every surface held a book spine up, a stack of notes held down with a chipped mug, a map of ley lines drawn over a Tube map. She cleared a space on the counter with the back of her hand and papers slipped to the floor. Lucien followed her in. He set his cane against the table without a sound and shrugged out of his wet overcoat. The shoulders underneath stayed dry. "Close the door. The curry fumes climb." "You remember." "I remember you hate coriander." He draped the coat over the back of Eva's armchair and the cat claimed it. He turned and for a second his face did everything wrong - mouth tight, that black eye wider than the other. "Rory." "No. You don't get to do that." "What?" "That voice. Say my name like you have rights to it." She grabbed the kettle. The metal clanged against the sink. Lucien moved. He did not touch her. He braced both hands on the counter either side of the sink and caged her in. The suit smelled of rain and cedar and something metallic underneath, like old coins. "I have no rights. I never claimed any." His sleeve brushed her wrist. She flinched. Not from him. From the heat that shot up her arm. "You left. Mid-job. Mid-sentence. You left a blood sigil half-open in the back of Silas' bar and I had to close it. With Eva." "I know." "You know?" Eva's handwriting stared up at her from a yellow legal pad - *Avaros gate, requires half-demon blood, do NOT let Lucien- * The rest smudged. "I tracked the spill. No casualties. You work well under pressure." Rory laughed, short and ugly. "God. You still talk like a debrief." "You still pour tea when you want to throw something." He reached past her and switched the kettle off before it boiled. His knuckles almost touched her cheek. She stared at the heterochromatic eyes, one warm, one void, and her chest did the stupid traitor thing it always did around him. He stepped back. The space he left felt colder. "Why are you here, Luc?" "Eva asked me to come." "Bullshit. Eva is in Edinburgh with her aunt." "Eva sent a letter. Said you took her flat and her cat and stopped answering your phone. She worries." He pulled a folded envelope from his inside pocket. Cream paper. Eva's looping script. He placed it on top of *Demonology for the Modern Idiot*. Rory did not touch it. "You came because Eva asked?" "No." The word hung between the towers of books. Lucien picked up his cane. The ivory handle caught the kitchen light. In Marseille his father tried to claim him back into Avaros. He walked with a limp for two weeks after and never spoke about it. He never let her see the cane without the glove. "I came because I dream in English again." Ptolemy jumped onto the counter and knocked a stack of research notes over. Neither of them moved to catch the paper. Rory's fingers found the edge of the sink. Her knuckles went white. "You get to leave and I get to wait and then you get to walk in and say poetry at me?" "Not poetry. Fact." "Same thing, with you." She pushed past him. Her shoulder hit his chest, solid, and he let her pass. She crossed to the window that looked out onto Brick Lane. A delivery bike rattled underneath. The sign for the curry house flickered orange. Lucien watched her reflection in the glass. "You cut your hair." "I didn't." "You wear it different." "You notice too much." "I notice everything about you. That was the problem." His voice lost the polished edge. The accent thickened. Rory turned. He stood in the middle of the mess of books, one hand white around the cane, the other open at his side. The amber eye burned. The black one swallowed light. "In Marseille my father's people asked why I kept returning to this cold island. I had no answer that satisfied them. I still have no answer that satisfies me, except your name." "You had an answer. You had a whole speech about liability and exposure and not mixing blood business with-" "I lied." He took a step forward. The floorboard under the rug creaked. "You told me to choose. Work or you. And I am not good at being chosen. My mother-" "I never told you to choose." "You did. On the roof. After the river job. You said you could not be another thing I filed away." Rory remembered the roof. Rain. Her hands shaking from the sigil burn. His mouth on her temple and then gone. "I said I could not be a secret you keep." "Same thing." "No. Not same thing." She crossed the two feet between them. She smelled the rain on him again, and underneath the faint sulfur that marked him as half-demon, half-something else. She reached up and her palm hovered beside his cheek, not touching. "Do you know what three months without you sounds like? In this flat? Books falling. Ptolemy meowing at the door at two am because he thinks you live here now too." Lucien closed his eyes. The black one first. "I heard you. Every night. Across the channel. You leave doors open in your head when you sleep." "That is not fair. You can block that." "I did not want to." Rory's hand dropped to his lapel. She fisted the fabric. Charcoal wool, expensive, damp at the edge. "Say you stay." "I stay." "Longer than a night." Lucien's glove came up and covered her fist. His grip was warm through the leather. He lifted her hand to his mouth. His lips brushed the crescent scar on her wrist. "I brought a bag. It is downstairs. The driver waits. If you want him to leave, he leaves." The kettle clicked, cooling. Ptolemy settled on Lucien's coat and kneaded. Rory stared at the place where his mouth touched her skin. Her pulse thudded hard enough that she felt it in her teeth. "Three deadbolts. You stood out there a long time." "I counted." "Next time, knock." Lucien smiled then, real, crooked at one side, and the amber eye lit. "I knocked." She tugged him forward by the lapel.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1412
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1412
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences104
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords1416
ratio0.004
matches
0"Demonology for the Modern Idiot"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount946
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Moreau1
Eva7
French1
Lucien14
Tube1
Lucien-1
Modern1
Marseille1
Avaros2
Rory11
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"French"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Avaros"
globalScore0.76
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1416
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs100
mean14.16
std14.91
cv1.053
sampleLengths
017
15
233
33
44
573
62
734
84
93
1010
1145
124
136
1438
1512
165
176
182
1914
2086
2126
227
232
245
2536
261
277
281
2911
3010
3137
328
3318
3424
352
362
3725
3811
395
407
4110
4241
439
445
455
468
4719
4825
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs158
matches(empty)
90.27% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences163
ratio0.018
matches
0"Lucien bent - not much, just enough to let the cat sniff his glove."
1"He turned and for a second his face did everything wrong - mouth tight, that black eye wider than the other."
2"Eva's handwriting stared up at her from a yellow legal pad - *Avaros gate, requires half-demon blood, do NOT let Lucien- * The rest smudged."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount945
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.015873015873015872
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010582010582010583
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean8.69
std6.81
cv0.784
sampleLengths
017
15
233
33
44
513
619
77
816
96
1012
112
125
1329
144
153
165
172
183
1911
2014
2114
226
234
246
258
264
2720
286
2912
305
312
324
332
3414
355
3622
3713
3827
3919
404
4117
425
437
442
455
4615
4721
481
497
44.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2147239263803681
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.80% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences97
matches
0"Her throat closed."
1"She undid the chain."
2"His cane tipped against the"
3"His French edged the vowel."
4"He looked past her into"
5"He did not step inside."
6"His suit pulled across his"
7"She walked into the kitchenette"
8"She cleared a space on"
9"He set his cane against"
10"He draped the coat over"
11"He turned and for a"
12"She grabbed the kettle."
13"He did not touch her."
14"He braced both hands on"
15"His sleeve brushed her wrist."
16"He reached past her and"
17"His knuckles almost touched her"
18"She stared at the heterochromatic"
19"He stepped back."
ratio0.433
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences97
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave under"
1"Rory left the chain on."
2"The hallway on Brick Lane"
3"Her throat closed."
4"She undid the chain."
5"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway"
6"Platinum hair combed back from"
7"The left eye black from"
8"His cane tipped against the"
9"The books stacked in Eva's"
10"His French edged the vowel."
11"He looked past her into"
12"He did not step inside."
13"That was new."
14"Rory stepped back and the"
15"Ptolemy shot between her ankles,"
16"Lucien bent - not much,"
17"His suit pulled across his"
18"The words came out sharper"
19"Rory folded her arms."
ratio0.959
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He looked past her into the flat, at the towers of paperbacks, the scrolls that unrolled over the kitchen counter, the open boxes that still smelled of Eva's sa…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.0159%