Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6TXS0GR2442HA7V01WBHK

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.026347
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The portal tasted of burnt honey. Aurora stepped through the tear in the Veil and the world folded around her like wet paper, then spat her out beneath an amber sky. She stumbled, boots sinking into soil so rich and dark it clung like tar, and the Heartstone pendant at her throat flared hot against her skin. "Don't touch anything," Nyx said behind her, their voice drifting like smoke through still air. "And don't eat anything." "I wasn't planning to." Aurora straightened and looked out over Dymas, and her breath caught somewhere below her ribs. The vineyards stretched for miles. No — not vineyards, not as she knew them. Vines thick as her thigh coiled up trellises of what looked like bone, and the fruit hanging from them glowed faintly from within, purple-black clusters that pulsed with slow, lazy light. Beyond the vines, orchards rose in terraced rows up the side of a hill, and every tree sagged under the weight of its harvest. Figs the size of melons. Pomegranates split open on their own branches, spilling seeds like rubies into the grass. The air hummed with a sweetness so thick she could feel it coating the back of her throat. "Belphegor's pantry," Isolde murmured. She stepped out of the portal last, and where her feet met the soil, nothing bent, nothing marked. "It has been four hundred years since I walked beneath this sky. It was smaller then." "Smaller how?" "Hunger grows, little flame. It is the only thing that always does." Aurora glanced at Nyx. The Shade had gone more solid than she had ever seen them, their silhouette sharpening into something almost human-shaped, violet eyes burning in a face made of darkness. The amber light seemed to slide off them, refusing to touch. "You alright?" "No." Nyx tilted their head, listening. "This place wants. I can feel it pulling at the edges of me. Hel is never comfortable for something caught between realms. It keeps suggesting I belong here." "Do you?" "No more than you do. Walk. The longer we stand still, the more the ground notices us." They moved along a path of pale flagstones that wound between the vines. Aurora kept her hands tucked close to her body. Everything here invited touch — the fruit gleamed, the flowers in the hedgerows opened as they passed, turning faces like open mouths toward them, and once, she swore, one of them sighed. "Did that flower just—" "Yes," Isolde said. "Right. Not touching anything." The path descended into a valley where the air grew warmer, scented with roasting meat and spices Aurora had no names for. Her stomach growled despite itself, loud enough that Nyx's head turned. "That is the land working on you," they said. "It feeds hunger so that hunger grows. Think of something bitter." "Easy. My ex's face." A faint hiss that might have been laughter curled out of the Shade. They crested a low ridge and Aurora stopped walking. Below them sprawled a kitchen the size of a cathedral. Open to the sky, built of black stone veined with gold, it held hearths taller than houses, each one tended by figures in stained whites. Aurora watched a man haul a cleaver down across the carcass of something with too many legs, his movements precise, practised, endless. Beside him, a woman stirred a cauldron she could have bathed in, and her face — Aurora squinted — her face was grey, and her eyes held no reflection. "Helbound," Isolde said quietly. "Souls contracted from your world. Chefs, mostly. Bakers. A famous patissier from Lyon, once, though that was before your grandmother's grandmother drew breath." "They chose this?" "They chose an offer. What they chose and what they understood are rarely the same dish." One of the cooks looked up. Looked directly at them, across a hundred yards of open ground, and smiled. Then he bent back to his work. Aurora's hand found the Fae blade at her belt. The moonsilver was cold even through its sheath, a small anchor of winter in all that cloying warmth. "He saw us." "Everyone here has seen us, little flame. We are the only things in this valley that are not hungry. We stand out like bones in broth." They pressed on, and the wonder of the place kept ambushing her even as her unease grew teeth. A stream ran beside the path, and the liquid in it was gold — actual gold, molten-looking, until Aurora crouched and saw it was some kind of nectar, thick and slow, with pale fish swimming against the current. A tree had grown through the skeleton of a cart, its roots threaded between the wheel spokes, and the cart was still laden with jars whose contents whispered when the wind moved them. In the distance, something enormous turned on a spit above a fire pit, basted by a crew of six, and the smell of it made Aurora's mouth flood with saliva even as her stomach turned. "How is any of this real?" "Real is a parochial word," Nyx said. They had drifted ahead, running one shadowed hand along a trellis without touching it. "I was summoned once, you know. Before. In 1643, a man in Prague tried to call down something from a realm like this one. He'd prepared a feast as an offering. Roasted swan, honeyed wine, marchpane shaped like angels." Their voice flattened. "The ritual went wrong. I ended up here, between everything. But I remember the smell of that swan. I have remembered it for four centuries. That is what places like this do. They make you remember wanting." Aurora looked at them for a long moment. "Nyx." "Yes. I know. Something bitter." The Shade's edges flickered. "Lead on, seer." The path ended at a wall of woven vines, and the vines parted as Isolde approached, curling back like fingers opening. Beyond them lay a courtyard where a table stood — a single table, impossibly long, set for one. One chair. One plate. One goblet of wine so dark it drank the light. "Oh, that's not ominous at all," Aurora said. "It is not set for us," Isolde said. She stood at the table's edge, lavender eyes travelling along its length, and for the first time since Aurora had met her, something moved across that ageless face that looked almost like grief. "It is always set, this table. For four hundred years it has been set, and no one has ever sat at it, and the food never spoils and the wine never sours. Do you know what gluttony truly is, Aurora Carter?" "Overeating?" "Loneliness with an appetite." Isolde reached out and let her fingers hover above the empty plate, not touching. "A Prince who devours a realm and remains starving. Come. What we seek lies past the table, in the cellar beneath. And walk softly. The meal may not be for us, but nothing here will object if we become it." Aurora swallowed. The pendant pulsed against her throat, steady as a heartbeat, warm as a warning, and somewhere below her feet, beneath flagstones and roots and rich dark earth, something vast turned over in its sleep and sighed out the smell of fresh bread. She drew the Fae blade. Its cold light steadied her hands. "After you," she said, and followed the seer into the dark.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:58:13.031Z" 7/25/2026, 5:58:13 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.053
91.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"comfortable"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"weight"
2"could feel"
3"comfortable"
4"stomach"
5"warmth"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1228
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount836
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Heartstone1
Aurora15
Dymas1
Nyx5
Shade3
One4
Fae2
Isolde6
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"One"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.603
windowScore0.833
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like bone, and the fruit hanging f"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1228
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"flagstones that wound"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean28.56
std30.29
cv1.061
sampleLengths
06
151
219
319
4106
538
62
712
843
92
1034
112
1217
1354
144
153
164
1733
1820
194
2013
219
2286
2327
243
2516
2626
2730
2826
29124
306
31100
329
3312
3439
3514
368
3782
381
3958
4044
4111
4211
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences84
ratio0.06
matches
0"No — not vineyards, not as she knew them."
1"Everything here invited touch — the fruit gleamed, the flowers in the hedgerows opened as they passed, turning faces like open mouths toward them, and once, she swore, one of them sighed."
2"Beside him, a woman stirred a cauldron she could have bathed in, and her face — Aurora squinted — her face was grey, and her eyes held no reflection."
3"A stream ran beside the path, and the liquid in it was gold — actual gold, molten-looking, until Aurora crouched and saw it was some kind of nectar, thick and slow, with pale fish swimming against the current."
4"Beyond them lay a courtyard where a table stood — a single table, impossibly long, set for one."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount833
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.030012004801920768
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004801920768307323
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean14.62
std11.36
cv0.777
sampleLengths
06
125
226
315
44
519
65
79
831
924
105
1114
1218
134
1418
1516
162
1712
184
1928
2011
212
226
2328
242
2517
2613
279
2832
294
303
314
3222
3311
349
3511
364
3713
389
3910
4025
4122
4229
434
4423
453
4616
476
4813
497
87.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5595238095238095
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners47
65.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"Then he bent back to"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences51
matches
0"She stumbled, boots sinking into"
1"She stepped out of the"
2"They moved along a path"
3"Her stomach growled despite itself,"
4"They crested a low ridge"
5"They pressed on, and the"
6"They had drifted ahead, running"
7"Their voice flattened"
8"She stood at the table's"
9"She drew the Fae blade."
10"Its cold light steadied her"
11"she said, and followed the"
ratio0.235
77.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences51
matches
0"The portal tasted of burnt"
1"Aurora stepped through the tear"
2"She stumbled, boots sinking into"
3"Nyx said behind her, their"
4"Aurora straightened and looked out"
5"The vineyards stretched for miles."
6"Vines thick as her thigh"
7"Figs the size of melons."
8"The air hummed with a"
9"She stepped out of the"
10"Aurora glanced at Nyx."
11"The Shade had gone more"
12"The amber light seemed to"
13"Nyx tilted their head, listening"
14"They moved along a path"
15"Aurora kept her hands tucked"
16"Everything here invited touch —"
17"The path descended into a"
18"Her stomach growled despite itself,"
19"A faint hiss that might"
ratio0.765
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The Shade had gone more solid than she had ever seen them, their silhouette sharpening into something almost human-shaped, violet eyes burning in a face made of…"
1"She stood at the table's edge, lavender eyes travelling along its length, and for the first time since Aurora had met her, something moved across that ageless f…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx said, their voice drifting like smoke through still air"
1"Isolde reached out, not touching"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.237
leniency0.474
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.053
86.2086%