| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 91.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1222 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1222 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "comfortable" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1228 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.29% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 836 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.79 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | Dymas | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Shade | 3 | | One | 4 | | Fae | 2 | | Isolde | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "One" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.603 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 91.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like bone, and the fruit hanging f" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1228 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 28.56 | | std | 30.29 | | cv | 1.061 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 106 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 86 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 124 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 100 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 39 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 82 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 58 | | 40 | 44 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "No — not vineyards, not as she knew them." | | 1 | "Everything here invited touch — the fruit gleamed, the flowers in the hedgerows opened as they passed, turning faces like open mouths toward them, and once, she swore, one of them sighed." | | 2 | "Beside him, a woman stirred a cauldron she could have bathed in, and her face — Aurora squinted — her face was grey, and her eyes held no reflection." | | 3 | "A stream ran beside the path, and the liquid in it was gold — actual gold, molten-looking, until Aurora crouched and saw it was some kind of nectar, thick and slow, with pale fish swimming against the current." | | 4 | "Beyond them lay a courtyard where a table stood — a single table, impossibly long, set for one." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 833 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.030012004801920768 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004801920768307323 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 14.62 | | std | 11.36 | | cv | 0.777 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 87.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.5595238095238095 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 65.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "She stumbled, boots sinking into" | | 1 | "She stepped out of the" | | 2 | "They moved along a path" | | 3 | "Her stomach growled despite itself," | | 4 | "They crested a low ridge" | | 5 | "They pressed on, and the" | | 6 | "They had drifted ahead, running" | | 7 | "Their voice flattened" | | 8 | "She stood at the table's" | | 9 | "She drew the Fae blade." | | 10 | "Its cold light steadied her" | | 11 | "she said, and followed the" |
| | ratio | 0.235 | |
| 77.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "The portal tasted of burnt" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped through the tear" | | 2 | "She stumbled, boots sinking into" | | 3 | "Nyx said behind her, their" | | 4 | "Aurora straightened and looked out" | | 5 | "The vineyards stretched for miles." | | 6 | "Vines thick as her thigh" | | 7 | "Figs the size of melons." | | 8 | "The air hummed with a" | | 9 | "She stepped out of the" | | 10 | "Aurora glanced at Nyx." | | 11 | "The Shade had gone more" | | 12 | "The amber light seemed to" | | 13 | "Nyx tilted their head, listening" | | 14 | "They moved along a path" | | 15 | "Aurora kept her hands tucked" | | 16 | "Everything here invited touch —" | | 17 | "The path descended into a" | | 18 | "Her stomach growled despite itself," | | 19 | "A faint hiss that might" |
| | ratio | 0.765 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade had gone more solid than she had ever seen them, their silhouette sharpening into something almost human-shaped, violet eyes burning in a face made of…" | | 1 | "She stood at the table's edge, lavender eyes travelling along its length, and for the first time since Aurora had met her, something moved across that ageless f…" |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, their voice drifting like smoke through still air" | | 1 | "Isolde reached out, not touching" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.237 | | leniency | 0.474 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |