Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6W7VRBNRJT8XRKC6B85ZZ

Run Details

Duration:
11.1s
Cost:
$0.000289
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low thrum of conversation and the occasional clink of glass. Aurora Carter leaned against the bar, watching the amber light from the green neon sign pool across the scar on her left wrist. She'd been here for an hour, nursing a lukewarm lager and pretending to scroll through her phone, though the screen felt pointless. The flat above had been quiet since dawn, just the ticking of the radiator and the distant wail of sirens. Yu-Fei would be down in Soho by now, delivering another batch of dumplings to some office building or another. The routine was comforting in its predictability. She absently traced the crescent scar, thinking about the childhood accident that had left it—something about a kitchen knife and her brother's too-enthusiastic baseball swing. Time moved differently then. Slower. She'd been twenty then, full of restless energy and bad decisions. Now she was twenty-five, and the world felt heavier, more fragile. A voice on her left made her look up. "Rory?" She nearly choked on her drink. The woman who stood there didn't belong in The Raven's Nest. She wore a tailored charcoal coat that cost more than half the bar's annual profit, her hair pulled back into a sleek chignon that somehow looked both professional and devastatingly familiar. Her eyes—those same bright blue eyes—held a different light now, sharper, more calculating. But it was her voice that anchored Aurora to a memory: soft, melodic, edged with the kind of nerves that came from being too loud in too quiet a world. "Eva?" The name cracked in the dim light like a match struck underwater. Twenty-three years old, maybe, when they'd met in primary school. Eva Ellis, Jennifer Carter's daughter, the girl who'd shared secrets in the back row of the classroom, who'd once smuggled chocolate bars into the library during detention. Who'd disappeared after university, leaving behind only a crumpled note taped to Aurora's locker and a silence that stretched across continents. "Wow," Eva said, stepping closer. "You look... exactly the same." Aurora raised an eyebrow. "That's not possible." "I studied." She smiled, but it didn't reach her eyes. "Cambridge. Law. Then... well, I took a different path." The words hung between them like smoke. Different paths. Eva had always been the one to take risks, to chase something bigger than the narrow streets of Cardiff where they'd grown up. Aurora had stayed, reluctantly, until the ex-husband and the part-time job and the flat above Silas's bar had pushed her west across the Thames. "You're still wearing your wedding ring," Aurora said. Eva's fingers flutter to her finger. The band was thicker now, more ornate. "Three months." "Aww." Aurora's voice came out softer than intended. "Congratulations, I guess?" "Thanks." Eva's smile widened, but it was brittle. "You're still working for Golden Empress?" "Yu-Fei's good to me. You?" "Still in the city." She glanced around the bar, taking in the maps on the walls, the photographs of old London, the way the shadows clung to the corners. "I used to come here sometimes. When I was younger. When I needed... places like this." Silas emerged from behind the bar, his silver signet ring catching the light as he set down a fresh bottle of whiskey. His hazel eyes took in the two women with the easy precision of someone who'd spent decades reading people. The slight limp in his left leg shifted his weight as he approached, and Aurora noted it without thinking—that particular kind of stiffness, the way someone carried an old injury with the quiet resentment of a lifetime's worth of use. "You've got company, love," he said to Aurora, his voice a low rumble. "Or perhaps a ghost from the past." "Silas," Eva said, extending a hand. "Long time no see." He grasped it with surprising strength. "Eva. To what do we owe the pleasure?" "Small world," Eva said, releasing his hand. "Or maybe not so small after all." Silas studied Aurora's face, the way her shoulders relaxed slightly when Eva spoke, the way her fingers had begun to drum against the bar in a rhythm Aurora couldn't quite place. "You found what you were looking for," he said. "That's a funny way of putting it." "Is it?" Silas wiped his hands on his apron. "You look... settled." "I'm not settled. I'm just... here." "Ah." Silas stepped back, letting the space between them stretch. "And you? Still running from something?" Eva's laugh was sharp. "You always did know how to ask the right questions, Si." "Silas. And you always did answer them poorly." The tension between them was thick enough to touch, like static electricity in the air. Aurora could feel it in the way Eva's gaze flickered toward the hidden bookshelf in the back, in the way her coat shifted with the movement of her hands. Both women were protectors, even when they didn't mean to be. Even when they were trying so hard not to be. "How long have you been back in London?" Aurora asked. "Long enough to know what I'm looking for." Eva turned to face her fully. "You left, didn't you? When I called." Aurora's throat went dry. "I thought—" "You thought I was crazy." Eva's voice cracked like a whip. "I thought you'd never come back. But here you are." "And here you are," Aurora countered. "So what changed?" Eva's fingers twisted the hem of her coat. "Everything. Nothing. I spent three years in the middle of nowhere, doing something that probably doesn't matter anymore." She paused. "You?" "You know I never left the city for long." "Of course you didn't." Eva's smile was sad. "You always were too stubborn for your own good." Silas watched them both, his silver ring glinting in the low light. He'd seen this kind of reunion before—old wounds reopening, new ones forming in the space between who someone had been and who they'd become. He reached for the whiskey bottle again, uncorking it with a practiced twist. "To old friends," he said, pouring two small glasses. They accepted the drinks without speaking, their fingers brushing against each other's in the briefest touch. The amber liquid caught the light, and for a moment, Aurora saw herself reflected in Eva's glass—same eyes, same mouth, same scar on her wrist that she'd forgotten she still wore. Only older. Harder. "Your father's still practicing?" Aurora asked. "Still breathing, yes." Eva took a sip. "He asked me to call him the day I got back. Said something about a new client and needing someone with... international experience." "And you said?" "I said I'd think about it." Eva's laugh was bitter. "That was six months ago, and I haven't thought about it since." Aurora set her untouched lager down with a soft clink. "Why did you leave, Eva? When you were nineteen, you said you wanted to change the world. Or at least your corner of it." "I did change something." Eva's voice was fierce. "I just didn't change it by staying." "Where did you go?" "Places where people like us don't get to stay." She looked around the bar again, then at Aurora. "Do you want to know?" Aurora considered her. The scar on her wrist felt suddenly tender. "No," she said. "I don't think I do." "Then why are you here?" "Because Silas asked me to." "That's not a reason." "Isn't it?" Aurora tilted her head. "You remember what this place was when we were kids, don't you? Before Silas bought it. Before he made it into something... safer." Eva's expression shifted, something softening in her eyes. "You remember the fire." "I was eight. My brother was seven. We were supposed to wait inside." "The neighbors called the fire department, but—" "But they got there in time." Aurora's voice was barely a whisper. "Dad said if we'd been five more minutes—" "Don't." Eva reached across the bar, her hand hovering just above Aurora's. "Don't you dare." "I'm sorry." Aurora pulled her hand back. "I didn't mean to—" "You don't ever mean to." Eva straightened her coat. "But you always do it anyway." Silas cleared his throat. "Well. This has been educational." "We'll talk later," Eva said, gathering her coat around her shoulders. "There are things I want to hear, and things you want to avoid." "Like what?" "Like the truth about what happened to Brendan." Aurora's breath caught. Her father's name, spoken in that particular way, meant something had changed. Something significant. She'd been here when the letters came—legal notices, bank statements, a final message that simply read: *I'm sorry. I can't do this anymore.* She'd never known what to believe. "No," she said. "That's not—" "It is." Eva was already moving toward the door. "And when I'm ready to tell you, I'll call. If you're still in this damned city." The door chimed, and the green neon sign flickered overhead like a heartbeat. Aurora watched Eva disappear into the London night, the weight of unsaid words hanging between them like the smoke from a cigarette that had just been snuffed out.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She glanced around [around]"
1"Silas stepped back [back]"
2"Eva's voice cracked like [like]"
3"She looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.329
leniency0.659
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.094
90.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1518
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"reluctantly"
1"slightly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1518
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"comforting"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"calculating"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count2
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"comforting"
1"traced"
2"familiar"
3"calculating"
4"silence"
5"eyebrow"
6"weight"
7"tension"
8"could feel"
9"flickered"
10"glinting"
11"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of unsaid words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences92
matches
0"was sad"
1"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords7
totalWords1511
ratio0.005
matches
0"I'm sorry. I can't do this anymore."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1010
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.57
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter2
Soho1
Aurora26
Ellis1
Jennifer1
Cardiff1
Silas7
Thames1
Eva24
London2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Aurora"
4"Ellis"
5"Jennifer"
6"Silas"
7"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Thames"
3"London"
globalScore0.213
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1511
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean21.59
std21.57
cv0.999
sampleLengths
0107
152
29
31
46
585
61
770
810
97
1019
1156
128
1315
1411
1514
165
1745
1881
1920
2010
2114
2214
2340
247
2512
266
2716
2815
298
3065
3110
3221
336
3421
359
3629
379
3817
3949
409
4150
426
4330
443
4522
4634
4715
484
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"been snuffed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs180
matches
0"were trying"
1"was already moving"
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences144
ratio0.042
matches
0"She absently traced the crescent scar, thinking about the childhood accident that had left it—something about a kitchen knife and her brother's too-enthusiastic baseball swing."
1"Her eyes—those same bright blue eyes—held a different light now, sharper, more calculating."
2"The slight limp in his left leg shifted his weight as he approached, and Aurora noted it without thinking—that particular kind of stiffness, the way someone carried an old injury with the quiet resentment of a lifetime's worth of use."
3"He'd seen this kind of reunion before—old wounds reopening, new ones forming in the space between who someone had been and who they'd become."
4"The amber liquid caught the light, and for a moment, Aurora saw herself reflected in Eva's glass—same eyes, same mouth, same scar on her wrist that she'd forgotten she still wore."
5"She'd been here when the letters came—legal notices, bank statements, a final message that simply read: *I'm sorry."
93.05% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1022
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.04794520547945205
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011741682974559686
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean10.49
std7.83
cv0.746
sampleLengths
016
123
222
320
419
57
625
74
81
911
1011
119
121
136
1411
1531
1613
1730
181
1912
2010
2127
2221
235
245
254
263
2710
289
297
302
3123
3224
338
346
357
362
378
383
398
406
415
4229
4316
4422
4519
4640
4713
487
496
66.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4236111111111111
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners61
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences79
matches
0"She'd been here for an"
1"She absently traced the crescent"
2"She'd been twenty then, full"
3"She nearly choked on her"
4"She wore a tailored charcoal"
5"Her eyes—those same bright blue"
6"She smiled, but it didn't"
7"She glanced around the bar,"
8"His hazel eyes took in"
9"he said to Aurora, his"
10"He grasped it with surprising"
11"He'd seen this kind of"
12"He reached for the whiskey"
13"he said, pouring two small"
14"They accepted the drinks without"
15"She looked around the bar"
16"Her father's name, spoken in"
17"She'd been here when the"
18"I can't do this anymore.*"
ratio0.241
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences79
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"Aurora Carter leaned against the"
2"She'd been here for an"
3"The flat above had been"
4"Yu-Fei would be down in"
5"The routine was comforting in"
6"She absently traced the crescent"
7"Time moved differently then."
8"She'd been twenty then, full"
9"A voice on her left"
10"She nearly choked on her"
11"The woman who stood there"
12"She wore a tailored charcoal"
13"Her eyes—those same bright blue"
14"The name cracked in the"
15"Eva Ellis, Jennifer Carter's daughter,"
16"Eva said, stepping closer"
17"Aurora raised an eyebrow."
18"She smiled, but it didn't"
19"The words hung between them"
ratio0.937
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Now she was twenty-five, and"
1"Even when they were trying"
ratio0.025
7.72% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She absently traced the crescent scar, thinking about the childhood accident that had left it—something about a kitchen knife and her brother's too-enthusiastic…"
1"She wore a tailored charcoal coat that cost more than half the bar's annual profit, her hair pulled back into a sleek chignon that somehow looked both professio…"
2"But it was her voice that anchored Aurora to a memory: soft, melodic, edged with the kind of nerves that came from being too loud in too quiet a world."
3"Eva Ellis, Jennifer Carter's daughter, the girl who'd shared secrets in the back row of the classroom, who'd once smuggled chocolate bars into the library durin…"
4"Who'd disappeared after university, leaving behind only a crumpled note taped to Aurora's locker and a silence that stretched across continents."
5"His hazel eyes took in the two women with the easy precision of someone who'd spent decades reading people."
6"They accepted the drinks without speaking, their fingers brushing against each other's in the briefest touch."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, his voice a low rumble"
1"Eva reached, her hand hovering just above Aurora's"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.141
leniency0.282
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.8102%