| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 824 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 824 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 815 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 811 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 5 | | Folklore | 1 | | Society | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "One" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 8.49% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like an hour, but her phone—still" | | 1 | "flowers that seemed to lean away from her approach" | | 2 | "as if recoiling" |
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| 77.30% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.227 | | wordCount | 815 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the peaceful quiet of the countryside, but the kind of stillness" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 32.6 | | std | 25.4 | | cv | 0.779 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 83 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 5.35% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "was stepping" | | 1 | "was blooming" | | 2 | "were tuning" | | 3 | "were wilting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been walking for what felt like an hour, but her phone—still clutched in her coat pocket—showed only fifteen minutes had passed since she’d left the pub." | | 1 | "A trick of the light—or something else." | | 2 | "She shifted her weight, boots crunching on something that wasn’t grass—gravel, maybe, or crushed petals." | | 3 | "The path—if it could be called that—wound between clusters of flowers that seemed to lean away from her approach." | | 4 | "She could feel it in her teeth, in the scar on her wrist—still healing, still tender from that childhood accident with the bicycle chain." | | 5 | "The silver daisies had gone dark, and the roses—those impossible midnight-blue ones—were wilting, their stems blackening at the base." | | 6 | "The path had narrowed, the air thickening with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter, more cloying—like overripe fruit left to rot." | | 7 | "It was something softer, spongy, like moss or—" |
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| 89.66% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 823 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "impossible midnight-blue ones—" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.04495747266099635 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006075334143377886 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 11.64 | | std | 7.51 | | cv | 0.645 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 41.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the pendant, heavy as" | | 1 | "Then the second stone did" | | 2 | "Instead, she took a breath" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 76.72% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been walking for what" | | 1 | "She’d read about them in" | | 2 | "She stopped short, hand drifting" | | 3 | "She’d found it three nights" | | 4 | "She shifted her weight, boots" | | 5 | "They swayed in a breeze" | | 6 | "She froze, pendant flaring hotter" | | 7 | "Her voice cracked, too loud," | | 8 | "She took a step forward," | | 9 | "She blinked, rubbed her eyes," | | 10 | "She reached out, hesitated, then" | | 11 | "They were warm." | | 12 | "She stumbled back, heart hammering." | | 13 | "She could feel it in" | | 14 | "She spun around." | | 15 | "Their colors had dulled, petals" | | 16 | "She took another step, then" | | 17 | "Her phone buzzed." | | 18 | "She fished it out, squinting" | | 19 | "She looked down." |
| | ratio | 0.358 | |
| 49.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove swallowed her whole." | | 1 | "The air here carried a" | | 2 | "She’d been walking for what" | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 4 | "She’d read about them in" | | 5 | "She stopped short, hand drifting" | | 6 | "The Heartstone had been warm" | | 7 | "A trick of the light—or" | | 8 | "She’d found it three nights" | | 9 | "The delivery app had been" | | 10 | "The Grove’s silence pressed against" | | 11 | "She shifted her weight, boots" | | 12 | "The wildflowers here were impossible." | | 13 | "Roses with midnight-blue petals." | | 14 | "Daisies that glowed faintly silver." | | 15 | "They swayed in a breeze" | | 16 | "A sound cut through the" | | 17 | "A *hum*, low and rhythmic," | | 18 | "She froze, pendant flaring hotter" | | 19 | "The gemstone’s inner light flickered," |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 74.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the pamphlet was a" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment she was stepping through the iron gate, the next her boots sank into grass that felt suspiciously springy beneath her weight." | | 1 | "The air here carried a sweetness that made her throat tight, like breathing in a greenhouse where every plant was blooming out of season." | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their oak surfaces darkened by moss that shimmered faintly green in the moonlight." | | 3 | "Not the peaceful quiet of the countryside, but the kind of stillness that made her skin crawl." | | 4 | "She shifted her weight, boots crunching on something that wasn’t grass—gravel, maybe, or crushed petals." | | 5 | "The gemstone’s inner light flickered, casting shadows that didn’t match the stone’s shape." | | 6 | "The first stone was taller than a man, its surface carved with spirals that looked fresh, as if someone had scratched them in the past week." | | 7 | "Their colors had dulled, petals curling inward as if recoiling." | | 8 | "The silver daisies had gone dark, and the roses—those impossible midnight-blue ones—were wilting, their stems blackening at the base." | | 9 | "It was still wet, the edges dripping something that gleamed silver in the moonlight." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |