Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6WFBSSB02HX557KXM4S2C

Run Details

Duration:
11.1s
Cost:
$0.000280
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Grove swallowed her whole. One moment she was stepping through the iron gate, the next her boots sank into grass that felt suspiciously springy beneath her weight. The air here carried a sweetness that made her throat tight, like breathing in a greenhouse where every plant was blooming out of season. She’d been walking for what felt like an hour, but her phone—still clutched in her coat pocket—showed only fifteen minutes had passed since she’d left the pub. The standing stones loomed ahead, their oak surfaces darkened by moss that shimmered faintly green in the moonlight. She’d read about them in that dusty Folklore Society pamphlet Eva had left on her desk last year, the one mentioning ancient druids and portals to somewhere “beyond the veil.” Rory had laughed then, too drunk to care whether the stories were true. Now, the pamphlet was a crumpled square in her pocket, and the stones felt less like tourist attractions and more like sentinels. She stopped short, hand drifting to the pendant at her chest. The Heartstone had been warm since she’d crossed the threshold, its crimson gem pulsing in time with her heartbeat. A trick of the light—or something else. She’d found it three nights ago, wrapped in oiled cloth on her doorstep, no note, no explanation. The delivery app had been offline, her flatmate Silas unreachable. Just the pendant, heavy as a stone, and a certainty that it belonged around her neck. The Grove’s silence pressed against her eardrums. Not the peaceful quiet of the countryside, but the kind of stillness that made her skin crawl. She shifted her weight, boots crunching on something that wasn’t grass—gravel, maybe, or crushed petals. The wildflowers here were impossible. Roses with midnight-blue petals. Daisies that glowed faintly silver. They swayed in a breeze that didn’t exist, their heads tilting toward her like curious children. A sound cut through the quiet. Not a footstep. Not wind. A *hum*, low and rhythmic, as if the earth itself were tuning a violin string. She froze, pendant flaring hotter against her skin. The gemstone’s inner light flickered, casting shadows that didn’t match the stone’s shape. “Hello?” Her voice cracked, too loud, too desperate. The Grove swallowed the sound. She took a step forward, then another, toward the stones. The path—if it could be called that—wound between clusters of flowers that seemed to lean away from her approach. One petal detached and floated upward, spiraling instead of falling. She blinked, rubbed her eyes, and it happened again. The first stone was taller than a man, its surface carved with spirals that looked fresh, as if someone had scratched them in the past week. She reached out, hesitated, then brushed her fingers across the markings. They were warm. Warm like skin. Then the second stone did the same thing. She stumbled back, heart hammering. The pendant blazed crimson now, its chain clinking against her shirt. The hum deepened, vibrating through the soles of her feet. She could feel it in her teeth, in the scar on her wrist—still healing, still tender from that childhood accident with the bicycle chain. A shadow flickered at the edge of her vision. She spun around. Nothing. But the wildflowers were different now. Their colors had dulled, petals curling inward as if recoiling. The silver daisies had gone dark, and the roses—those impossible midnight-blue ones—were wilting, their stems blackening at the base. The stones pulsed in response to her movement, their carvings glowing faintly, like embers beneath ash. She took another step, then another, drawn closer despite her better judgment. The path had narrowed, the air thickening with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter, more cloying—like overripe fruit left to rot. Her phone buzzed. She fished it out, squinting at the screen. 2:17 AM. The time stamp had jumped three hours since she’d arrived. The hum was louder now, a drumbeat beneath her feet. She looked down. The grass beneath her shoes was no longer grass. It was something softer, spongy, like moss or— A handprint, pale and too large to be any animal she knew, pressed into the ground a few paces ahead. It was still wet, the edges dripping something that gleamed silver in the moonlight. She wanted to run. Wanted to turn and flee back through the gate, but her legs wouldn’t obey. The pendant had gone dead weight, its chain cold against her skin. The stones loomed closer, their surfaces rippling like water disturbed by an unseen current. The path ahead split. One direction led toward the gate, its iron bars just visible through the curtain of night-blooming jasmine. The other curved deeper into the Grove, where the flowers grew thicker, darker. She should have chosen the gate. Instead, she took a breath and walked toward the deeper path. The last thing she heard before the Grove claimed her was the stones singing.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:59:03.815Z" 7/25/2026, 5:59:03 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount824
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount824
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"loomed"
count2
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"sentinels"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"loomed"
2"shimmered"
3"sentinels"
4"silence"
5"rhythmic"
6"flickered"
7"could feel"
8"pulsed"
9"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords815
ratio0.001
matches
0"hum"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount811
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Grove5
Folklore1
Society1
Eva1
Rory1
Heartstone1
Silas1
One3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
3"Silas"
4"One"
places
0"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
8.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like an hour, but her phone—still"
1"flowers that seemed to lean away from her approach"
2"as if recoiling"
77.30% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.227
wordCount815
matches
0"Not the peaceful quiet of the countryside, but the kind of stillness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"called that—wound"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean32.6
std25.4
cv0.779
sampleLengths
079
183
280
369
46
541
68
75
848
943
108
1150
1212
131
1435
1551
163
1720
1830
1934
2044
2134
226
2311
2414
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
5.35% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs137
matches
0"was stepping"
1"was blooming"
2"were tuning"
3"were wilting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences70
ratio0.114
matches
0"She’d been walking for what felt like an hour, but her phone—still clutched in her coat pocket—showed only fifteen minutes had passed since she’d left the pub."
1"A trick of the light—or something else."
2"She shifted her weight, boots crunching on something that wasn’t grass—gravel, maybe, or crushed petals."
3"The path—if it could be called that—wound between clusters of flowers that seemed to lean away from her approach."
4"She could feel it in her teeth, in the scar on her wrist—still healing, still tender from that childhood accident with the bicycle chain."
5"The silver daisies had gone dark, and the roses—those impossible midnight-blue ones—were wilting, their stems blackening at the base."
6"The path had narrowed, the air thickening with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter, more cloying—like overripe fruit left to rot."
7"It was something softer, spongy, like moss or—"
89.66% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount823
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"impossible midnight-blue ones—"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04495747266099635
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006075334143377886
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean11.64
std7.51
cv0.645
sampleLengths
05
123
224
327
418
543
622
711
819
97
1017
1110
1216
137
1417
1515
165
174
185
1916
206
213
222
2315
248
2513
268
275
2810
2919
3010
319
3226
3311
343
353
368
375
3811
3910
4024
419
423
431
446
4510
4619
4716
4812
4923
41.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners21
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences67
matches
0"Just the pendant, heavy as"
1"Then the second stone did"
2"Instead, she took a breath"
ratio0.045
76.72% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences67
matches
0"She’d been walking for what"
1"She’d read about them in"
2"She stopped short, hand drifting"
3"She’d found it three nights"
4"She shifted her weight, boots"
5"They swayed in a breeze"
6"She froze, pendant flaring hotter"
7"Her voice cracked, too loud,"
8"She took a step forward,"
9"She blinked, rubbed her eyes,"
10"She reached out, hesitated, then"
11"They were warm."
12"She stumbled back, heart hammering."
13"She could feel it in"
14"She spun around."
15"Their colors had dulled, petals"
16"She took another step, then"
17"Her phone buzzed."
18"She fished it out, squinting"
19"She looked down."
ratio0.358
49.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences67
matches
0"The Grove swallowed her whole."
1"The air here carried a"
2"She’d been walking for what"
3"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
4"She’d read about them in"
5"She stopped short, hand drifting"
6"The Heartstone had been warm"
7"A trick of the light—or"
8"She’d found it three nights"
9"The delivery app had been"
10"The Grove’s silence pressed against"
11"She shifted her weight, boots"
12"The wildflowers here were impossible."
13"Roses with midnight-blue petals."
14"Daisies that glowed faintly silver."
15"They swayed in a breeze"
16"A sound cut through the"
17"A *hum*, low and rhythmic,"
18"She froze, pendant flaring hotter"
19"The gemstone’s inner light flickered,"
ratio0.821
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Now, the pamphlet was a"
ratio0.015
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"One moment she was stepping through the iron gate, the next her boots sank into grass that felt suspiciously springy beneath her weight."
1"The air here carried a sweetness that made her throat tight, like breathing in a greenhouse where every plant was blooming out of season."
2"The standing stones loomed ahead, their oak surfaces darkened by moss that shimmered faintly green in the moonlight."
3"Not the peaceful quiet of the countryside, but the kind of stillness that made her skin crawl."
4"She shifted her weight, boots crunching on something that wasn’t grass—gravel, maybe, or crushed petals."
5"The gemstone’s inner light flickered, casting shadows that didn’t match the stone’s shape."
6"The first stone was taller than a man, its surface carved with spirals that looked fresh, as if someone had scratched them in the past week."
7"Their colors had dulled, petals curling inward as if recoiling."
8"The silver daisies had gone dark, and the roses—those impossible midnight-blue ones—were wilting, their stems blackening at the base."
9"It was still wet, the edges dripping something that gleamed silver in the moonlight."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.9393%