Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6X2ND6WMCEWSSD6E2APTK

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Duration:
1m 3s
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$0.024926
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Moonshot AI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past one, three deadbolts and a chain between me and whoever fancied dying tonight. I put down the delivery receipts and took the knife from under the counter of paperwork anyway. Habit. Evan had taught me that much, at least. "Who is it?" "You know full well who it is, *chérie*. Open the door before your neighbours start taking notes." Lucien. My stomach did something I had no intention of examining. I worked the bolts one at a time, buying seconds, and pulled the door open to find him exactly as he'd been the last time I'd sworn never to see him again. Charcoal suit. Slicked-back platinum hair. That ivory cane resting against his shoulder like a prop in a play only he could see. One eye amber, one black, and both of them amused. "You look well," he said. "You look uninvited." "And yet." He stepped past me before I could decide whether to close the door on his expensive shoes. "Interesting flat. Smells of curry and unresolved questions." "That's Eva's. She's in Edinburgh until Sunday." "So we're alone. How fortuitous." "It's the opposite of that." I left the door open. That said everything I couldn't, apparently, because his mouth curved as he glanced back at it, then at me. "You can leave the way you came, Lucien." "I will. Once you've heard what I've come to say." "Funny, you said that in Antwerp." The smile thinned. Good. I wanted to see it die. "Antwerp was different." "Antwerp was you vanishing for three months after telling me that demons don't get to have feelings." I crossed my arms. "What is it this time? Another job? Another body you need me to identify?" "Someone's been asking about you." The humour drained out of the room. Out of me, too. "Who." "A broker in Southwark. Calling himself the Accountant." Lucien set his cane against the wall, slow, deliberate, the way he did everything when the ground was shifting under him. "He bought three names off a fence last week. Yours was the only one he paid in advance for." "I deliver dumplings, Lucien." "You delivered a ledger once. To me. A ledger that belonged to people with long memories." His mismatched eyes fixed on mine. "I've spent six days buying back every copy of that name. There was one I couldn't reach." My mouth had gone dry. "Why tell me? You could've handled it. Quietly. Like you handle everything." "Because it isn't just the name." He reached into his jacket and produced a photograph, face down, held between two fingers. He didn't offer it yet. "Before I show you this, I need you to understand something." "I don't need anything from you." "You asked me once why I left." His voice dropped, French bleeding through the polish the way it only did when the mask slipped. "You stood in the rain outside the bar and you asked me, and I gave you a coward's answer." "You gave me silence. That's not an answer." "It was the only safe one I had." "Safe for who?" His jaw worked. He turned the photograph over and held it out, and I took it because my hands moved before my sense did. A flat above a bar. My flat. Photographed from across the street, at night, my own silhouette in the window. On the back, in a cramped, careful hand: *Aurora Carter. Knows what the ledger names. Bring her breathing.* The knife was still in my other hand. I hadn't realised I'd kept hold of it. "When was this taken?" "Tuesday." "Tuesday I was at the Golden Empress until close. Yu-Fei walked me home." "Then whoever watched you was patient enough to wait, and sloppy enough to let my people catch the photographer." Lucien's cane blade slid two inches out of its casing and back, a nervous tic I'd only ever seen once, in Antwerp, in the seconds before four men stopped breathing. "He gave up the Accountant before he died. He also gave up something else." "There's more?" "The contract didn't come from the ledger's owners, Rory. They're all dead or fled. I checked personally." He stepped closer, and the flat shrank around us, paper towers and deadbolts and all the distance I'd built in three months collapsing to the width of a breath. "The contract was commissioned using information only five people alive possess. Details about the ledger's contents. Details only you and I ever discussed." The room tilted. "You're saying one of your people sold me." "I'm saying someone I trust with my life has priced yours at forty thousand pounds." His voice stayed soft, which was worse. "So you will pack a bag. Tonight. And you will stay somewhere I can see you." "Oh, will I." "Rory." "No, let's be clear about what this is." I held up the photograph. "You vanished. You didn't ring, didn't write, and now you walk through my friend's door with a death threat and an order, and I'm meant to fall in line because you decided to care again?" "I never stopped." "You had a bloody funny way of showing it." "Because the last time I stood this close to you, I counted every exit in the room instead of listening to a word you said." The amber eye caught the lamplight. The black one swallowed it. "Because my father owns half of Avaros and has spent thirty-two years collecting everything I love, and the moment I let anyone see that you mattered, you became a debt he could call in." Silence. The curry house's extractor fan hummed below us, and Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, emerged from the bedroom, took one look at Lucien, and hissed. "The cat has excellent instincts," Lucien murmured. "You're telling me you left to protect me." "I'm telling you I left because I'm a fool who believed distance was armour. It isn't. It's an invitation." He held out his hand, not for the photograph, but palm up, open, empty. "The Accountant's collector arrives in London tomorrow night. I can't fight him across a city. I can fight him across a room." I looked at his hand. The crescent scar on my wrist ached the way it did before rain. "One room," I said. "Eva's. You take the sofa. And after tomorrow, you tell me everything. The names. The five people. All of it." "Everything," he agreed, too quickly, and I saw it land in his eyes a heartbeat later. The mistake. The thing he hadn't said. "Lucien. Who are the five?" His hand lowered. His cane blade whispered out of its casing, and this time it stayed out, because downstairs, beneath the smell of turmeric and old paper, the front door to the building had just opened, and nobody on Brick Lane used a key that heavy. "You and me," he said, moving towards the window. "And the three people I told about you. One of whom is standing in your stairwell right now."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.283
leniency0.567
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1168
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1168
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"stomach"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords11
totalWords1168
ratio0.009
matches
0"chérie"
1"Aurora Carter. Knows what the ledger names. Bring her breathing."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount554
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
French1
Carter1
Antwerp1
Ptolemy1
Eva1
Lucien5
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"French"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Antwerp"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"ng I couldn't, apparently, because his mouth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.856
wordCount1168
matches
0"not for the photograph, but palm up, open, empty"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean19.47
std18.92
cv0.972
sampleLengths
019
126
23
317
411
564
65
73
827
97
105
115
1224
138
1410
156
1610
173
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2011
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234
2439
2517
2637
276
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298
308
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3338
3416
354
361
3713
3863
392
4069
413
428
4338
443
451
4648
473
489
4970
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs102
matches
0"was shifting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences100
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount555
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.03783783783783784
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.010810810810810811
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean11.68
std10.43
cv0.893
sampleLengths
019
117
21
38
43
517
61
710
832
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103
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1210
135
143
1519
168
177
185
195
205
2119
228
2310
246
253
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276
283
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315
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3619
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435
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4624
4719
488
498
61.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.43
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences47
matches
0"I put down the delivery"
1"My stomach did something I"
2"I worked the bolts one"
3"He stepped past me before"
4"I left the door open."
5"I wanted to see it"
6"I crossed my arms"
7"His mismatched eyes fixed on"
8"My mouth had gone dry."
9"He reached into his jacket"
10"He didn't offer it yet."
11"His voice dropped, French bleeding"
12"His jaw worked."
13"He turned the photograph over"
14"I hadn't realised I'd kept"
15"He stepped closer, and the"
16"His voice stayed soft, which"
17"I held up the photograph"
18"He held out his hand,"
19"I looked at his hand."
ratio0.511
34.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences47
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"I put down the delivery"
2"Evan had taught me that"
3"My stomach did something I"
4"I worked the bolts one"
5"That ivory cane resting against"
6"He stepped past me before"
7"I left the door open."
8"That said everything I couldn't,"
9"The smile thinned."
10"I wanted to see it"
11"I crossed my arms"
12"The humour drained out of"
13"Lucien set his cane against"
14"His mismatched eyes fixed on"
15"My mouth had gone dry."
16"He reached into his jacket"
17"He didn't offer it yet."
18"His voice dropped, French bleeding"
19"His jaw worked."
ratio0.851
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.067
85.3808%