Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6ZTQEDX0TNX2GF9AN2Q2B

Run Details

Duration:
9.6s
Cost:
$0.000342
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The path into Richmond Park had always been well-trodden during daylight hours, but now, beneath a sliver of waning moon, the gravel crunched under Aurora’s boots like broken glass. She pulled her coat tighter, though the autumn air carried no bite—only a strange stillness that made her skin prickle. She’d come here on purpose. The note left on her pillow that morning—unsigned, slipped between the pages of her copy of *The Hound of the Baskervilles*—had simply read: *“The Grove remembers what the world forgets.”* No explanation. No signature. Just those words, written in ink that smelled faintly of ozone when she touched it. And yet she’d come. Because something in the back of her mind—the part that still remembered the nightmares from her childhood, the ones involving shadows that moved when no one was looking—told her this place held answers. Or at the very least, it would explain why the Heartstone Pendant around her neck had been burning hot since she crossed the park boundary. The standing stones appeared suddenly, their ancient oak trunks twisted into shapes that hurt to look at directly. They stood in a rough circle, moss creeping up their bases like veins. Aurora stepped through the gap between two of them, and the world shifted. Not dramatically. Not with fanfare. But the air thickened, becoming syrupy, and the sounds of the city—the distant hum of traffic, the occasional bark of a dog—faded until there was nothing but her own breathing. She walked forward, her footsteps muffled as if the ground itself were absorbing sound. The wildflowers bloomed in profusion around her, their petals glowing faintly in hues that didn’t exist in nature—deep purples and silvers that seemed to pulse in time with the pendant at her chest. Something rustled behind her. Aurora froze. The sound had been small—just leaves, probably. But it had come from *behind* the stones, where the path she’d walked didn’t lead. She turned slowly, scanning the darkness beyond the circle. Nothing moved. But the silence felt wrong. Too complete. Even in the dead of night, there were always sounds—wind in the branches, insects, the distant call of an owl. Here, there was only the soft thrum of the pendant and the ragged rhythm of her own heartbeat. She took another step forward. The clearing opened up ahead, bathed in an ethereal light that had no source she could identify. The trees leaned inward, their branches weaving together overhead like a cathedral ceiling. And in the center of it all stood a figure. Tall, impossibly thin, draped in robes that seemed to shift between colors when she wasn’t looking directly at them. Aurora blinked, and when she opened her eyes again, the figure was closer. “Hello?” Her voice sounded foreign to her own ears, too loud in the suffocating quiet. The figure didn’t respond. It simply stood there, motionless, its head tilted at an angle that made Aurora’s stomach clench. When it finally spoke, its voice was like dry leaves scraping against stone. “You’ve come back.” Aurora’s hand moved instinctively to the pendant beneath her coat. “I didn’t know this place existed until today.” “No,” the figure agreed. Its head tilted further, and Aurora caught a glimpse of something wrong in the way its neck bent—too many joints, too fluid. “But you remember it. Don’t you, little echo?” She backed up a step. “What are you talking about?” The figure’s form flickered, and for a moment Aurora thought she saw something behind it—countless other shapes, watching from the trees. But when she looked again, they were gone. “You were here before,” the figure said. “Long ago. Before the stones remembered your name.” Aurora’s breath came faster now. She could feel the pendant burning against her skin, its crimson gem throbbing in time with her pulse. “I’ve never been here.” “Liar.” The word echoed, and the sound seemed to come from everywhere at once. Aurora spun around, looking for the source, but there was nothing behind her. Just the trees, the flowers, the oppressive silence. But then she heard it again—a whisper, barely audible, like someone breathing through rotten teeth. *“Little echo…”* She turned back to the figure, but it was gone. Her heart hammered against her ribs. “This isn’t real,” she whispered to herself. “This isn’t real.” But the pendant disagreed. It pulsed once, twice, and then went still. Aurora walked toward where the figure had stood. The ground beneath her feet felt spongy, like walking on moss-covered earth that hid something deeper. The flowers leaned away from her as she passed, their petals curling inward as if recoiling from her touch. She stopped at the center of the clearing and looked around. No footprints marked the ground—not hers, not anyone else’s. The only evidence of her passage was the faint trail of disturbed earth leading back toward the stones. And then she saw it. A shadow, standing just beyond the ring of flowers. Tall, impossibly thin, draped in robes that shifted between colors. Aurora’s hand flew to her mouth to stifle a scream. The figure was exactly as she remembered it. Exactly as it had been the first time she’d seen it. The first time she’d seen it in her dreams, night after night, since she was a child. “You remember,” it said, its voice like dry leaves scraping against stone. “I—I don’t know what you want,” Aurora stammered. The figure took a step forward. Its feet didn’t touch the ground. “You left something here,” it said. “Something that belonged to us.” “What?” “The child you were. The name you forgot.” Aurora’s knees buckled, and she caught herself on one of the standing stones. The wood was warm beneath her palm, almost alive. “I don’t understand—” “You ran,” the figure said. “But the Grove remembers. It always remembers.” The wind picked up, though there were no trees close enough to generate it. The flowers whipped around Aurora’s ankles, their petals sticking to her skin like spider silk. And beneath it all, the whispering grew louder. *“Little echo… little echo… little echo…”* She tried to step back, but her feet felt rooted to the spot. The pendant at her chest burned with a heat that had nothing to do with the autumn air. It pulsed once, twice, and then went still. The figure raised its hand. Aurora saw her reflection in the crimson gem of the pendant—a flash of herself as a child, standing in this same clearing, reaching out toward something just beyond her grasp. And behind her, in the reflection, dozens of other figures watched from the trees. They had been waiting. The figure’s voice dropped to a whisper. “Come home, little echo.” And then everything went black. When Aurora woke up, she was lying on the path outside the standing stones. Her coat was torn, her hair matted with dirt, and the pendant around her neck was cold. The moon was higher in the sky now, and the city sounds had returned—the distant hum of traffic, the occasional bark of a dog. But as she sat up and looked back toward the grove, she could have sworn she heard a whisper on the wind. *“Little echo…”*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"echo"
count7
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"oppressive"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count3
11
word"pulsed"
count2
12
word"almost alive"
count1
13
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"pulse"
2"scanning"
3"silence"
4"stomach"
5"echo"
6"flickered"
7"could feel"
8"echoed"
9"oppressive"
10"whisper"
11"pulsed"
12"almost alive"
13"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords23
totalWords1196
ratio0.019
matches
0"The Hound of the Baskervilles"
1"“The Grove remembers what the world forgets.”"
2"behind"
3"“Little echo…”"
4"“Little echo… little echo… little echo…”"
5"“Little echo…”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1088
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora17
Hound1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Pendant"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.719
windowScore0.5
38.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"silvers that seemed to pulse in time with the pendant at her chest"
1"robes that seemed to shift between colors when she wasn’t looking directly at them"
2"as if recoiling from her touch"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1196
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean21.75
std16.15
cv0.743
sampleLengths
049
154
262
344
435
547
64
733
82
945
105
1140
1232
1315
1433
153
1618
1734
1810
1929
2015
2127
221
2334
2415
252
2610
2716
2812
2943
3038
315
3219
3310
3436
3512
368
3712
3811
391
408
4125
4212
4337
446
4539
465
4744
484
4911
93.82% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences92
matches
0"were gone"
1"was gone"
2"was torn"
88.89% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was looking"
1"wasn’t looking"
2"was lying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences109
ratio0.119
matches
0"She pulled her coat tighter, though the autumn air carried no bite—only a strange stillness that made her skin prickle."
1"The note left on her pillow that morning—unsigned, slipped between the pages of her copy of *The Hound of the Baskervilles*—had simply read: *“The Grove remembers what the world forgets.”* No explanation."
2"Because something in the back of her mind—the part that still remembered the nightmares from her childhood, the ones involving shadows that moved when no one was looking—told her this place held answers."
3"But the air thickened, becoming syrupy, and the sounds of the city—the distant hum of traffic, the occasional bark of a dog—faded until there was nothing but her own breathing."
4"The wildflowers bloomed in profusion around her, their petals glowing faintly in hues that didn’t exist in nature—deep purples and silvers that seemed to pulse in time with the pendant at her chest."
5"The sound had been small—just leaves, probably."
6"Even in the dead of night, there were always sounds—wind in the branches, insects, the distant call of an owl."
7"Its head tilted further, and Aurora caught a glimpse of something wrong in the way its neck bent—too many joints, too fluid."
8"The figure’s form flickered, and for a moment Aurora thought she saw something behind it—countless other shapes, watching from the trees."
9"But then she heard it again—a whisper, barely audible, like someone breathing through rotten teeth."
10"No footprints marked the ground—not hers, not anyone else’s."
11"Aurora saw her reflection in the crimson gem of the pendant—a flash of herself as a child, standing in this same clearing, reaching out toward something just beyond her grasp."
12"The moon was higher in the sky now, and the city sounds had returned—the distant hum of traffic, the occasional bark of a dog."
86.70% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1105
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount61
adverbRatio0.05520361990950226
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.01809954751131222
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean10.97
std7.51
cv0.685
sampleLengths
029
120
25
332
42
515
64
733
825
918
1013
1113
122
133
1430
1514
1633
174
182
197
2015
219
222
235
242
2520
2618
275
2817
2913
3010
3119
3213
3315
344
3516
3613
373
3810
398
404
4122
428
435
445
4521
468
477
488
495
44.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.29357798165137616
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences85
matches
0"Just those words, written in"
1"Just the trees, the flowers,"
2"Exactly as it had been"
ratio0.035
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences85
matches
0"She pulled her coat tighter,"
1"She’d come here on purpose."
2"They stood in a rough"
3"She walked forward, her footsteps"
4"She turned slowly, scanning the"
5"She took another step forward."
6"Her voice sounded foreign to"
7"It simply stood there, motionless,"
8"Its head tilted further, and"
9"She backed up a step."
10"She could feel the pendant"
11"She turned back to the"
12"Her heart hammered against her"
13"she whispered to herself"
14"It pulsed once, twice, and"
15"She stopped at the center"
16"it said, its voice like"
17"Its feet didn’t touch the"
18"She tried to step back,"
19"It pulsed once, twice, and"
ratio0.259
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences85
matches
0"The path into Richmond Park"
1"She pulled her coat tighter,"
2"She’d come here on purpose."
3"The note left on her"
4"The standing stones appeared suddenly,"
5"They stood in a rough"
6"Aurora stepped through the gap"
7"She walked forward, her footsteps"
8"The wildflowers bloomed in profusion"
9"Something rustled behind her."
10"The sound had been small—just"
11"She turned slowly, scanning the"
12"Here, there was only the"
13"She took another step forward."
14"The clearing opened up ahead,"
15"The trees leaned inward, their"
16"Aurora blinked, and when she"
17"Her voice sounded foreign to"
18"The figure didn’t respond."
19"It simply stood there, motionless,"
ratio0.706
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Because something in the back"
1"Even in the dead of"
ratio0.024
26.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She pulled her coat tighter, though the autumn air carried no bite—only a strange stillness that made her skin prickle."
1"Because something in the back of her mind—the part that still remembered the nightmares from her childhood, the ones involving shadows that moved when no one wa…"
2"She walked forward, her footsteps muffled as if the ground itself were absorbing sound."
3"The wildflowers bloomed in profusion around her, their petals glowing faintly in hues that didn’t exist in nature—deep purples and silvers that seemed to pulse …"
4"Tall, impossibly thin, draped in robes that seemed to shift between colors when she wasn’t looking directly at them."
5"It simply stood there, motionless, its head tilted at an angle that made Aurora’s stomach clench."
6"The ground beneath her feet felt spongy, like walking on moss-covered earth that hid something deeper."
7"The flowers leaned away from her as she passed, their petals curling inward as if recoiling from her touch."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
34.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"the figure agreed (agree)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Aurora stammered (stammer)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.269
leniency0.538
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.231
81.0392%