Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD702GE80D03TAE76W9QVW2

Run Details

Duration:
9.9s
Cost:
$0.000259
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The beam of Quinn’s flashlight cut through the damp air as she stepped over the threshold, the worn leather watch on her wrist catching the flicker of her own light. The abandoned Tube station reeked of mildew and something else—ozone, sharp and electric, like the moment before lightning strikes. Eva Kowalski stood by a rusted turnstile, her round glasses smudged with fingerprints she’d left while examining the body sprawled at the platform’s center. “It’s not a murder,” Eva said, not looking up from the notebook in her satchel. Her curly red hair was twisted into a nervous bun at the nape of her neck, the freckles across her nose looking almost glowing in the dim light. “Not in the way we usually think.” Quinn crouched beside the corpse, her military bearing unshaken despite the surrealism of the scene. The victim—a man in his thirties, shirt torn and stained—hadn’t been killed by anything mundane. No blood pooled beneath him, no wound gaping. Instead, his chest bore the mark of a shallow, circular burn, the skin charred in a pattern that resembled a sigil from one of Eva’s occult tomes. “Who’s the victim?” Quinn asked, gloved fingers brushing aside a shard of broken glass that glinted like a tooth. Eva flipped a page in her notebook, voice low. “Marcus Bellweather. Former IRA operative, turned arms dealer. He’s been linked to the Veil Market’s current iteration. But here’s the thing—” She tapped the page where she’d sketched the sigil. “This isn’t just any mark. It’s a binding sigil. Used in rituals to anchor souls to the physical world. Or… trap them.” Quinn raised an eyebrow. “You’re saying he was killed in a ritual?” “Possibly. But look at this.” Eva held up a photograph she’d taken with her phone. The image showed the compass—the Veil Compass—lying half-buried in the debris near the body. Its brass casing was tarnished, but the face still bore those protective sigils, and the needle quivered, pointing not north, but downward, toward the cracks in the platform’s concrete. Quinn frowned, stepping closer. The compass wasn’t supposed to be here. It hadn’t been reported in the missing persons files she’d reviewed the night before. And yet, its presence felt deliberate, like a breadcrumb left for someone to find. “The needle’s pointing at the rift,” she said. “Not north. Down.” Eva nodded, as if Quinn had just confirmed her thesis. “The Veil Market moves locations every full moon. If this compass is here, it means the rift—whatever’s opening below—hasn’t shifted yet. Or maybe it’s anchored. That’s why he’s here. Why *anyone* would be.” Quinn knelt again, this time to examine the ground. Her eyes narrowed as she noticed something odd: the body hadn’t been placed here. Someone had moved it. The position was too precise, too… staged. And the compass. It hadn’t fallen from the victim’s pocket—he wasn’t wearing one. It had been placed there. “Someone wanted this found,” she said. Eva shifted uncomfortably, tucking a curl of hair behind her left ear. “Then why no witnesses? Why no one else in the station?” Quinn’s gaze swept the shadows. “Because there were no other witnesses. Look.” She pointed to a section of the wall where the paint had chipped away, revealing not brick, but something darker—like stone veined with silver. “That’s not a wall. It’s a doorway.” Eva stepped closer, her breath hitching. The crack between the stones widened as Quinn pressed her palm against it, the material yielding like flesh. A low hum filled the air, and the compass needle spun wildly before settling on a direction that had nothing to do with magnetic north. “It’s active,” Eva whispered. “A portal. Right here, in the Tube.” Quinn didn’t answer. She was already pulling out her phone, dialing. But before she could speak, the ground trembled. The compass in the debris began to glow, its needle pointing straight down, and the silver veins in the wall pulsed like a heartbeat. Eva grabbed her arm. “What do you think you’re doing?” Quinn didn’t let go of the phone. “Someone’s moving the Market tonight.” Her voice was flat, but her eyes were sharp, already calculating. “And if this compass is here, it means whoever’s doing this knows the rift’s location. Or they’re trying to hide it.” The tremor grew stronger. Dust rained from the ceiling. Through the widening crack, Quinn glimpsed a flicker of movement—something slipping through the darkness below. “Quinn.” Eva’s voice was urgent. “This is a trap. If the Market’s moving, the watchers will come for us.” But Quinn was already pulling the compass from the debris, its surface warm against her palm. The needle spun once, twice, then locked onto something in the direction of the rift. She pressed it against her forehead, and the world tilted. The station dissolved. When she came to, she was standing in the middle of a bustling market square, but not the one she’d left. Stalls lined with glowing orbs and bottled shadows stretched into the distance. People in mismatched Victorian attire haggled over wares that shimmered with impossible colors. And at the center of it all, a man in a leather coat stood holding a compass identical to hers. He looked up. “Detective Quinn,” he said, as if he’d been expecting her. “You should have brought a better watch.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount894
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount894
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flicker"
count2
1
word"electric"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"quivered"
count1
4
word"magnetic"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"calculating"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"electric"
2"eyebrow"
3"quivered"
4"magnetic"
5"trembled"
6"pulsed"
7"calculating"
8"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords885
ratio0.001
matches
0"anyone"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount679
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.91
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn13
Tube1
Kowalski1
Eva11
Veil1
Compass1
Victorian1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Kowalski"
2"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.543
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.26
wordCount885
matches
0"not north, but downward, toward the cracks in the platform’s concrete"
1"not brick, but something darker"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean34.04
std21.32
cv0.626
sampleLengths
073
150
265
319
461
512
658
739
811
943
1052
116
1223
1343
1449
1511
1643
1710
1844
1924
2019
2141
223
2366
243
2517
75.53% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences59
matches
0"was twisted"
1"been killed"
2"been reported"
3"been placed"
4"been placed"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs123
matches
0"wasn’t wearing"
1"was already pulling"
2"was already pulling"
3"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences71
ratio0.085
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked of mildew and something else—ozone, sharp and electric, like the moment before lightning strikes."
1"The victim—a man in his thirties, shirt torn and stained—hadn’t been killed by anything mundane."
2"The image showed the compass—the Veil Compass—lying half-buried in the debris near the body."
3"It hadn’t fallen from the victim’s pocket—he wasn’t wearing one."
4"“Because there were no other witnesses. Look.” She pointed to a section of the wall where the paint had chipped away, revealing not brick, but something darker—like stone veined with silver."
5"Through the widening crack, Quinn glimpsed a flicker of movement—something slipping through the darkness below."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount687
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.027656477438136828
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004366812227074236
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean12.46
std8.17
cv0.656
sampleLengths
030
119
224
315
428
57
615
715
88
927
1019
119
1230
1322
144
158
1615
1714
1829
194
207
2114
2214
238
243
2510
2633
279
2814
294
306
311
323
3310
345
356
3612
3711
385
3931
407
416
4218
4325
444
457
463
478
488
4924
69.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.43661971830985913
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners31
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Instead, his chest bore the"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences55
matches
0"Her curly red hair was"
1"She tapped the page where"
2"Its brass casing was tarnished,"
3"It hadn’t been reported in"
4"Her eyes narrowed as she"
5"It hadn’t fallen from the"
6"It had been placed there."
7"She pointed to a section"
8"She was already pulling out"
9"Her voice was flat, but"
10"She pressed it against her"
11"He looked up."
12"he said, as if he’d"
ratio0.236
41.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences55
matches
0"The beam of Quinn’s flashlight"
1"The abandoned Tube station reeked"
2"Eva Kowalski stood by a"
3"Eva said, not looking up"
4"Her curly red hair was"
5"Quinn crouched beside the corpse,"
6"The victim—a man in his"
7"Quinn asked, gloved fingers brushing"
8"Eva flipped a page in"
9"She tapped the page where"
10"Quinn raised an eyebrow."
11"Eva held up a photograph"
12"The image showed the compass—the"
13"Its brass casing was tarnished,"
14"Quinn frowned, stepping closer."
15"The compass wasn’t supposed to"
16"It hadn’t been reported in"
17"Eva nodded, as if Quinn"
18"Quinn knelt again, this time"
19"Her eyes narrowed as she"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Her curly red hair was twisted into a nervous bun at the nape of her neck, the freckles across her nose looking almost glowing in the dim light."
1"A low hum filled the air, and the compass needle spun wildly before settling on a direction that had nothing to do with magnetic north."
2"People in mismatched Victorian attire haggled over wares that shimmered with impossible colors."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva said, not looking up from the notebook in her satchel"
1"he said, as if he’d been expecting her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.261
leniency0.522
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.087
73.1669%