Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD703VR09W8S6NSXKYPJTH2

Run Details

Duration:
25.5s
Cost:
$0.000420
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt clicked twice, then a third time, each sound echoing like a countdown in the cramped, book-lined hallway of Eva’s flat. Lucien Moreau pressed his palm against the door, his breath fogging the frosted glass of the peephole. He’d spent ten minutes convincing Ptolemy, the tabby, to stop yowling at the sound of his knuckles rapping. The cat had always been a menace, but today it felt like a guardian. A key slid into the lock with a metallic groan. The door swung inward, revealing Eva’s cluttered parlor in a single, dim sweep. Books teetered in precarious stacks against the walls, scrolls fanned out like wounded birds on the coffee table, and the air carried the musty tang of aged paper and turmeric. Lucien’s amber eye adjusted instantly to the gloom, scanning for threats, while his black eye—dull as obsidian—fixed on the figure standing by the window. Aurora. She hadn’t changed, not really. Still wore her hair in its usual shoulder-length straightness, still pulled her left wrist behind her left knee when she thought no one was watching, as if the crescent-shaped scar there were a secret she couldn’t quite hide. Her bright blue eyes were half-lit by the wan glow of a desk lamp, the same one that had illuminated her through too many late-night research sessions when they’d first met over coffee and conspiracy theories. “Lucien.” Her voice was softer than he remembered, but edged with something sharp. “You could’ve called.” He crossed the threshold without waiting for an invitation, his charcoal suit whispering against the carpet. The floorboards creaked under his weight, a sound that made Aurora’s shoulders tense. She hadn’t slept in hours. She knew that look—he’d worn it countless times when he was waiting for her to make the first move, when the space between them crackled with unspoken words. “Wouldn’t want you to miss our little reunion,” he said, holding up his cane. The ivory grip gleamed faintly in the lamplight. “Though I suppose you’ve already missed enough.” She stepped back, her boots scuffing against the worn wooden floor. “What do you want?” “Tea?” He nodded toward the chipped mug on the table. “Or whiskey, if you’re feeling nostalgic.” The words hung between them, brittle and familiar. Three deadbolts on the door. A flat that smelled like old secrets. And two people who’d built their lives on running from things they couldn’t untangle. “You know I don’t drink.” “I know.” He set his cane against the table, the hidden blade inside it catching a glint of light. “But I do.” Aurora’s gaze flicked to the weapon, then back to his face. The scar on his cheek, the way his jaw tightened when he lied. “Eva said you were here for the package.” “Ah.” He pushed off the table, leaning against it. The wood creaked under his weight. “Yes. The package.” She exhaled, a sound caught between frustration and something else—longing, maybe, or the ghost of it. “It’s not here.” Lucien’s lips curved, almost imperceptibly. “Is that so?” She turned away, crossing to the bookshelf, fingers brushing spines as if searching for answers in titles. *The Codex of Avaros*, *Blood and Ink*, *Letters to a Demon*. He’d read her favorites. She’d left notes in the margins of his copy of *The Art of War*, inked in a script that looked like it had been carved. “You could’ve come to me,” she said, not looking at him. “Instead of barging into Eva’s.” “Would you have let me in?” The question was a blade, honed to a point. She didn’t answer, but her fingers stilled on *The Lovers’ Guide to Subterfuge*, its pages yellowed and fragile. He remembered the first time she’d found it in his apartment, spine cracked from being opened too many times. She’d laughed when he’d offered to lend it to her. “I thought you’d know better than to—” She stopped, then shook her head. “Never mind.” He took a step closer. The room seemed to shrink around them, the books leaning in like witnesses. “You still smoke, don’t you?” She flinched. A wisp of smoke curled from her mouth before she could stop it. “Stupid habit.” “You never did have good timing.” He reached into his coat pocket, withdrawing a small velvet pouch. “For what it’s worth, I brought you something.” She stared at him, the amber and black of his eyes merging into a single, unsettling shade. “What is it?” “A key.” He held it out. “To your flat. Above Silas’s. I thought you might want to—” “You don’t get to do that.” “I’m not asking.” Her hand shot out, snatching the key before he could react. The metal was warm in her palm, familiar. They’d carved their initials into it once, when they were younger, before the world had turned its back on them both. Before he’d left without a word. Before she’d learned to trust her own hands again. “Why?” Her voice cracked. Because some debts don’t expire. Because the package wasn’t what he’d brought it for. Because she was the only one who could help him stop what was coming. Because she still made his skin burn when she smiled. He watched her grip the key until her knuckles went white, the cat Ptolemy abandoning his perch to sit between them, tail twitching. The silence stretched, taut as a bowstring. “You left me hanging,” she whispered. “I left myself hanging.” His voice was rough, like gravel under boots. “And you were the only thread I had left to hold onto.” The words spilled out like a confession, raw and unguarded. Aurora’s breath hitched. She should’ve hated him for this—should’ve slammed the door in his face, told him to rot in the underworld he’d chosen. But her hand found his, fingers threading into his. “The package,” she said. Lucien’s smile was sad, tender, devastating. “The package is a lie. What I need is for you to trust me again.” Outside, rain began to patter against the window, soft as fingernails tracing glass. The bookshelves loomed behind them, their spines whispering of stories unfinished. And in the space between their joined hands, the key grew hot, pulsing like a heartbeat. “You don’t get to do that,” she said again, but her voice wavered. “I already did.” Ptolemy meowed, leaping onto the table to bat at the key, its silver surface catching the lamplight. Aurora watched her fingers trace the intricate symbols etched into its head—symbols she’d taught him were ward against betrayal. Now they felt like a dare. “Why now?” Because some ghosts don’t stay buried. Because the demons from his world were clawing their way into hers. Because she was the only person who’d ever made him want to burn the truth away. Because he’d waited six years to say these words, and every second without her had been a mistake too long. Her eyes flickered to his, searching for the man she’d once called home. “What are you afraid of?” The question cracked the stillness. She pulled her hand away, the key clattering to the floor. “I’m afraid you’ll leave again.” Lucien knelt, retrieving it. His thumb brushed the symbols, then her cheek, the touch feather-light. “I’m afraid you’ll never forgive me.” “I don’t need to.” She stepped back, but her gaze never left his. “I just need you to stay.” The rain intensified, drumming a frantic rhythm against the glass. Somewhere below, the curry house hummed with late-night customers, the scent of cumin and cardamom bleeding through the floorboards. But here, in Eva’s flat, time had narrowed to the space between their breaths. “You don’t get to do that,” she said, but her voice lacked its earlier edge. “You never get to do that.” He waited. She closed the distance, her hand finding his jaw, thumb tracing the scar there. The touch sent shockwaves through him, sharper than any blade. “I forgive you,” she whispered. “But I’m not asking you to stay.” “Then don’t.” “Would you?” “I already am.” The key was at his lips now, pressed to her forehead, the symbols glowing faintly against her skin. She shivered, leaning into the gesture, and for a moment, the world narrowed to the press of his mouth, the weight of his hand in hers, the promise of a future neither of them had planned. Ptolemy yowled, breaking the spell. Lucien pulled back, the key cooling in his palm. “You still smoke,” he said. She laughed, the sound trembling with something like hope. “Stupid habit.” He inclined his head, rising to his feet. “Tea?” She nodded, retrieving the mug from the table. The steam rose between them, carrying the ghosts of apologies and the promise of more. And somewhere, the door remained open.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
86.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She stopped then [then]"
1"she said again [again]"
2"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.679
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.113
96.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1460
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1460
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count2
11
word"loomed"
count1
12
word"wavered"
count1
13
word"intricate"
count1
14
word"etched"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"gloom"
2"scanning"
3"weight"
4"unspoken"
5"familiar"
6"glint"
7"flicked"
8"velvet"
9"silence"
10"tracing"
11"loomed"
12"wavered"
13"intricate"
14"etched"
15"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences104
matches
0"was sad"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords20
totalWords1454
ratio0.014
matches
0"The Codex of Avaros"
1"Blood and Ink"
2"Letters to a Demon"
3"The Art of War"
4"The Lovers’ Guide to Subterfuge"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1206
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Moreau1
Ptolemy4
Aurora5
Codex1
Art1
Lucien6
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Aurora"
4"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"felt like a guardian"
1"quite hide"
2"smelled like old secrets"
3"as if searching for answers in titles"
4"looked like it had been carved"
5"felt like a dare"
6"something like hope"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1454
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences139
matches
0"knew that look"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean22.37
std19.82
cv0.886
sampleLengths
071
177
21
379
416
562
629
715
816
934
105
1122
1232
1318
1419
158
1657
1716
186
1956
2015
2123
2215
232
2425
2520
2617
276
283
2955
304
3138
3230
336
3424
3543
364
3721
3840
3913
403
4142
422
4354
4413
455
4616
475
4821
4919
98.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"been carved"
1"being opened"
75.97% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs215
matches
0"was watching"
1"was waiting"
2"was coming"
3"were clawing"
40.08% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences139
ratio0.036
matches
0"Lucien’s amber eye adjusted instantly to the gloom, scanning for threats, while his black eye—dull as obsidian—fixed on the figure standing by the window."
1"She knew that look—he’d worn it countless times when he was waiting for her to make the first move, when the space between them crackled with unspoken words."
2"She exhaled, a sound caught between frustration and something else—longing, maybe, or the ghost of it."
3"She should’ve hated him for this—should’ve slammed the door in his face, told him to rot in the underworld he’d chosen."
4"Aurora watched her fingers trace the intricate symbols etched into its head—symbols she’d taught him were ward against betrayal."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount633
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cramped, book-lined hallway"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.037914691943127965
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007898894154818325
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean10.46
std7.16
cv0.684
sampleLengths
022
117
218
314
410
513
630
724
81
95
1038
1136
1213
133
1416
1513
165
1728
1814
198
207
2111
224
2310
246
258
265
277
2814
295
3019
313
3211
3313
348
359
366
373
3816
393
405
413
4217
4311
444
4525
4611
475
486
499
42.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.28776978417266186
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners40
68.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"Still wore her hair in"
1"Somewhere below, the curry house"
ratio0.021
46.80% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences97
matches
0"He’d spent ten minutes convincing"
1"She hadn’t changed, not really."
2"Her bright blue eyes were"
3"Her voice was softer than"
4"He crossed the threshold without"
5"She hadn’t slept in hours."
6"She knew that look—he’d worn"
7"he said, holding up his"
8"She stepped back, her boots"
9"He nodded toward the chipped"
10"He set his cane against"
11"He pushed off the table,"
12"She exhaled, a sound caught"
13"She turned away, crossing to"
14"He’d read her favorites."
15"She’d left notes in the"
16"she said, not looking at"
17"She didn’t answer, but her"
18"He remembered the first time"
19"She’d laughed when he’d offered"
ratio0.433
63.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences97
matches
0"The deadbolt clicked twice, then"
1"Lucien Moreau pressed his palm"
2"He’d spent ten minutes convincing"
3"The cat had always been"
4"A key slid into the"
5"The door swung inward, revealing"
6"Books teetered in precarious stacks"
7"Lucien’s amber eye adjusted instantly"
8"She hadn’t changed, not really."
9"Her bright blue eyes were"
10"Her voice was softer than"
11"He crossed the threshold without"
12"The floorboards creaked under his"
13"She hadn’t slept in hours."
14"She knew that look—he’d worn"
15"he said, holding up his"
16"The ivory grip gleamed faintly"
17"She stepped back, her boots"
18"He nodded toward the chipped"
19"The words hung between them,"
ratio0.794
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount11
totalSentences97
matches
0"Before he’d left without a"
1"Before she’d learned to trust"
2"Because some debts don’t expire."
3"Because the package wasn’t what"
4"Because she was the only"
5"Because she still made his"
6"Now they felt like a"
7"Because some ghosts don’t stay"
8"Because the demons from his"
9"Because she was the only"
10"Because he’d waited six years"
ratio0.113
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Still wore her hair in its usual shoulder-length straightness, still pulled her left wrist behind her left knee when she thought no one was watching, as if the …"
1"The floorboards creaked under his weight, a sound that made Aurora’s shoulders tense."
2"And two people who’d built their lives on running from things they couldn’t untangle."
3"She turned away, crossing to the bookshelf, fingers brushing spines as if searching for answers in titles."
4"She’d left notes in the margins of his copy of *The Art of War*, inked in a script that looked like it had been carved."
5"She closed the distance, her hand finding his jaw, thumb tracing the scar there."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He set, the hidden blade inside it catching a glint of light"
1"she said, not looking at him"
2"She didn’t, but her fingers stilled on *The Lovers’ Guide to Subterfuge*, its pages yellowed and fragile"
3"she said again, but her voice wavered"
4"she said, but her voice lacked its earlier edge"
93.40% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She didn’t (do)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.17
leniency0.34
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.113
79.9330%