Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD70BH00Y4Q6JSP69V2SAEB

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23.7s
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$0.013055
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The locks were all wrong. Rory knew Eva's hands the way you know your own front door — quick, impatient, keys jangled against the middle deadbolt last because it stuck. Whoever was on the other side of the door tried the top deadbolt first, then the middle, then the bottom, smooth and methodical, and knocked once when all three gave. She had been asleep on Eva's couch twenty minutes ago with a stack of photocopied grimoires sliding off her chest. Now Ptolemy was standing on the armrest with his tail bottled out to twice its size, staring at the door like it might bite him. "Who is it?" she said, and hated how raw her voice came out. "It's Lucien." The floor of Eva's flat was always cold, even in summer, because the curry house below never turned the heat up properly and the old sash windows never quite shut. Rory's bare feet went numb against it as she stood. She was wearing the oversized Cardiff Law sweatshirt she slept in and shorts that barely qualified, her straight black hair still creased from the couch cushion. She hadn't brushed it. She hadn't done anything. The tabby made a low, unhappy trill in his throat. Rory flipped the top deadbolt. Then the middle. Then the bottom. Three deadbolts. Eva insisted on three, even though half of Brick Lane knew you could get into the building through the fire escape if you really wanted to. She opened the door. He hadn't changed. That was the first, stupid thought. Lucien Moreau standing in the narrow trench of Eva's landing with the light from the single bare bulb catching the slicked-back platinum of his hair, his tailored charcoal suit pressed so sharp it made Eva's cluttered hallway look even more like a burglary had happened in a library. He leaned lightly on the ivory-handled cane that wasn't really a cane. One amber eye, one black. He looked at her and for a second his perfect, fixer composure slipped. "Aurore." "Don't," she said. He swallowed it. "Rory." Behind her, every surface of Eva's cramped one-bedroom was covered the way it always was — books open spine-up, scrolls half-unrolled, sticky notes in Eva's frantic handwriting marching up the walls. The scent of cumin and old paper drifted up from below. Rory didn't move out of the doorway. If she moved, she'd have to decide whether to let him in or push him back out onto the landing, and she didn't trust her hands to do either. "You bleached it again," she said, because she needed to say something that wasn't *why are you here*. A flicker at the corner of his mouth. "It grows out dark." "I know." They had parted seven months ago on the pavement outside Silas' bar, which was also underneath the flat where she actually lived. He'd told her she was being reckless. She'd told him that was rich coming from a half-demon who ran errands for things that didn't have names in English. He'd said, in that careful, four-languages-fluent French accent that smoothed over even when he was angry, that he couldn't keep pulling her out of fires she lit on purpose. She'd said then maybe he should stop watching her burn. He hadn't called. She hadn't texted. Eva had said they were both being martyrs about it. "Are you going to let me in, or are we going to have this conversation where Mrs. Patel can hear us?" Lucien asked quietly. Ptolemy chose that moment to dart between Rory's ankles and streak out onto the landing, where he butted his head once, hard, against Lucien's polished shoe. Lucien looked down, surprised, then — slowly, as if he was afraid Rory would laugh at him — bent to run two fingers over the tabby's head. "He remembers you," Rory said before she could stop herself. "He has good taste." He straightened, wincing just enough that she noticed. The cane. He only leaned on it when his father's blood was giving him trouble, when London's iron got too heavy. "You're hurt," she said. "It's nothing." "Right. You're just accessorizing." She stepped back. It was a surrender that felt like peeling something open. "Come in. Five minutes." He had to turn sideways to get past the teetering stack of books Eva left by the door as a trap for intruders. The flat was too small for him — too small for anyone over 5'6", really. At 5'11" he made it feel like a dollhouse. Rory shut the three deadbolts with a clatter and stayed with her back to the door, arms crossed over her chest, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist pale against the freckled skin. The one she'd gotten when she was nine trying to catch a falling iron. Lucien's gaze snagged on it. Of course it did. He'd always looked at her hands. "You left Cardiff's library copy of Malleus Maleficarum under my kitchen sink," he said, setting his cane against Eva's tiny kitchen counter. "It was warping." "I told Eva to get it back to you." "Eva told me you'd fled to the Hebrides with a new boyfriend who sells artisanal cheese." Rory let out a laugh that hurt her throat. "That does sound like her." "Eva is a terrible liar when she likes both parties." He reached into the inner pocket of his suit, and for a second Rory's stomach dropped — old reflex, the Golden Empress delivery girl who'd seen what happened when fixers reached into inner pockets — but it was just a folded piece of thick paper. He smoothed it open on top of a pile of Eva's research notes. A photograph, printed cheap on matte paper, surveillance-quality. It was her. Outside Yu-Fei Cheung's restaurant, carrying a stack of delivery boxes. The timestamp was yesterday. Rory's bright blue eyes snapped up to his. Cool-headed, Eva always called her, the girl who could think out of the box with a gun to her head. Her hands were shaking. "Who took this?" "The man your ex hired," Lucien said, and the word *ex* was its own blade. "Evan brought someone in from Dublin. Not a demon. Worse. A solicitor with connections. He found Brendan. He found the flat above Silas'. He didn't find you because you've been sleeping on Eva's couch for a week and Eva told everyone you'd gone to Scotland." The curry house smell suddenly made her nauseous. She had left Cardiff, left Pre-Law, left her Irish barrister father's lectures and her Welsh mother's worry because Evan had a way of turning up where she was and making everywhere feel too small. And now — "How do you —" Her voice cracked. "How do you even know this?" "Because for seven months I have been telling myself it was more honorable not to watch you," he said, and the carefully ironed vowels finally frayed. "And I lasted until yesterday afternoon. Putain, Rory —" He took a step. She didn't move away. He was close enough now that she could see the faint lines at the corners of his mismatched eyes. Thirty-two, impeccable, and tired. The amber eye was lit from within, the demon's eye, restless. "I told Eva not to tell you I was here," she whispered. "She didn't. Ptolemy did. In a manner of speaking. He has been sitting on my windowsill every night this week. Cats are excellent gossips." "You hate cats." "I hate that you left." The words fell into the cramped flat and landed heavy. Outside, a bus hissed to a stop on Brick Lane and someone shouted about an order. Ptolemy, who'd followed them back inside, jumped up onto the only clear space on the counter and began to wash his paw as if this were not dramatic at all. Rory's head thunked back against the door. Three deadbolts at her spine. "You said you couldn't keep putting out my fires." "You were right. That was a cruel way of saying I was frightened." His hand hovered, not touching. He had always asked before touching, even after. "When you took the job running sigils for the Empress. When you started going to the night market alone. I thought if I — if I made it cost something, you would stop." "You thought if you left, I'd be safer," she said, and it wasn't a question. "I thought if I left, I would not have to watch you die." She breathed out, hard. "I work part-time delivering noodles, Luc. I'm not courting the apocalypse." "You have never done anything part-time in your life." That was unfair and true and so precisely him that she wanted to throw something. Instead she reached, without thinking, and put her hand on the handle of his cane. The ivory was warm from his palm. Underneath, the thin blade he never used unless he had to. "You're leaning," she said softly. "I am alright if you are here." It was such a smooth line that for a second she almost missed how his fingers trembled when he finally, finally touched her — not her face, not her waist, but her left wrist, thumbing over the small crescent scar there like a prayer bead. "Rory," he said, lower now, in French, and then corrected himself. "Rory, let me stay. Let me deal with this man. Let me —" "Stay?" She couldn't help the slight, wet laugh. "In Eva's one-bedroom? With all these books? There's literally nowhere to—" "There is the couch. Which is where you have been sleeping, which is terrible for your back." His thumb kept moving over her scar. His charcoal suit smelled like cold air and old cologne. "Five minutes became six. That is promising." "You are impossible." "I am in love with you. That is different. But related." The cat knocked a stack of post-its off the counter. Neither of them looked. Seven months of things left unsaid had made her cool-headed to the point of freezing. Now heat came rushing back all at once, furious and mortified and relieved. She pushed off the door and it was enough to tip her forward, into his space, where his cane clattered and he had to catch her with both hands. He was solid. He was here. "You show up unannounced," she muttered into the lapel of that perfect suit, her black hair falling forward to hide her face. "You bring photos of me looking sweaty holding chow mein. This is not romantic." "C'est vrai. Next time I will bring flowers and a less handsome photograph." "You better." His hand slid up to cup the back of her head, careful, like she might break. She didn't. She tilted her bright blue eyes up to his mismatched ones and saw herself reflected there, twice over. "Three deadbolts," he murmured. "You were safe. Even when you thought you weren't." "Shut up," she said, and kissed him. It was clumsy for a second — noses bumping against Eva's research notes, Ptolemy offended — and then it wasn't. It was the landing outside Silas' and it was the first time he'd taken off his suit jacket and it was every night she hadn't called. He made a low sound against her mouth and pressed her back against the door again, gently this time, his palm flat over all three locks as if he could hold them shut for her. When they broke apart she was breathing hard. "Five more minutes?" he asked against her forehead. She grabbed his tie and pulled him back down. "Try an hour," she said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien asked quietly [quietly]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.39
leniency0.78
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.068
73.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1919
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"really"
count3
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
5
adverb"precisely"
count1
6
adverb"softly"
count1
7
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"lightly"
2"slowly"
3"suddenly"
4"carefully"
5"precisely"
6"softly"
7"gently"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1919
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"methodical"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count2
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"methodical"
1"perfect"
2"flicker"
3"stomach"
4"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences118
matches
0"was angry"
1"was afraid"
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences118
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
2"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences155
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1931
ratio0.003
matches
0"why are you here"
1"ex"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1426
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva14
Ptolemy4
Cardiff2
Law2
Brick2
Lane2
Moreau1
English1
French2
Rory12
Lucien6
London1
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Pre-Law1
Irish1
Welsh1
Evan1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Law"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
5"Lucien"
6"Cheung"
7"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"English"
4"French"
5"London"
6"Yu-Fei"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
85.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like peeling something open"
1"smelled like cold air and old cologne"
96.43% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.036
wordCount1931
matches
0"not her face, not her waist, but her left wrist, thumbing over the small crescent scar there"
1"not her waist, but her left wrist, thumbing over the small crescent scar there"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences155
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean24.44
std24
cv0.982
sampleLengths
05
155
245
313
42
574
610
739
84
987
101
113
124
1378
1418
1512
162
1789
1816
1924
2053
2110
224
2329
244
252
264
2717
2895
2915
3025
319
3216
3314
3410
3566
3617
3732
383
3960
4045
4113
4235
438
4434
4512
4624
473
485
4956
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences118
matches
0"was covered"
1"was lit"
46.15% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs260
matches
0"was standing"
1"was wearing"
2"was being"
3"was giving"
4"were shaking"
5"was breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences155
ratio0.052
matches
0"Rory knew Eva's hands the way you know your own front door — quick, impatient, keys jangled against the middle deadbolt last because it stuck."
1"Behind her, every surface of Eva's cramped one-bedroom was covered the way it always was — books open spine-up, scrolls half-unrolled, sticky notes in Eva's frantic handwriting marching up the walls."
2"Lucien looked down, surprised, then — slowly, as if he was afraid Rory would laugh at him — bent to run two fingers over the tabby's head."
3"The flat was too small for him — too small for anyone over 5'6\", really. At 5'11\" he made it feel like a dollhouse."
4"He reached into the inner pocket of his suit, and for a second Rory's stomach dropped — old reflex, the Golden Empress delivery girl who'd seen what happened when fixers reached into inner pockets — but it was just a folded piece of thick paper."
5"And now —"
6"It was such a smooth line that for a second she almost missed how his fingers trembled when he finally, finally touched her — not her face, not her waist, but her left wrist, thumbing over the small crescent scar there like a prayer bead."
7"It was clumsy for a second — noses bumping against Eva's research notes, Ptolemy offended — and then it wasn't."
96.47% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount931
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.04403866809881848
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013963480128893663
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences155
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences155
mean12.46
std10.2
cv0.819
sampleLengths
05
125
230
320
425
513
62
730
810
926
104
114
1210
135
143
153
162
1726
184
193
206
2148
2212
235
2413
251
263
273
281
2931
3011
317
3229
3318
348
354
362
3722
387
3921
4029
4110
423
433
4410
4524
4626
4727
4810
494
43.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3096774193548387
totalSentences155
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences110
matches
0"Then the middle."
1"Then the bottom."
2"Of course it did."
3"Instead she reached, without thinking,"
ratio0.036
16.36% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences110
matches
0"She had been asleep on"
1"she said, and hated how"
2"She was wearing the oversized"
3"She hadn't brushed it."
4"She hadn't done anything."
5"She opened the door."
6"He hadn't changed."
7"He leaned lightly on the"
8"He looked at her and"
9"He swallowed it."
10"she said, because she needed"
11"They had parted seven months"
12"He'd told her she was"
13"She'd told him that was"
14"He'd said, in that careful,"
15"She'd said then maybe he"
16"He hadn't called."
17"She hadn't texted."
18"He straightened, wincing just enough"
19"He only leaned on it"
ratio0.509
46.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences110
matches
0"The locks were all wrong."
1"Rory knew Eva's hands the"
2"She had been asleep on"
3"she said, and hated how"
4"The floor of Eva's flat"
5"Rory's bare feet went numb"
6"She was wearing the oversized"
7"She hadn't brushed it."
8"She hadn't done anything."
9"The tabby made a low,"
10"Rory flipped the top deadbolt."
11"Eva insisted on three, even"
12"She opened the door."
13"He hadn't changed."
14"That was the first, stupid"
15"Lucien Moreau standing in the"
16"He leaned lightly on the"
17"He looked at her and"
18"He swallowed it."
19"The scent of cumin and"
ratio0.827
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences110
matches
0"Whoever was on the other"
1"Now Ptolemy was standing on"
2"If she moved, she'd have"
3"Now heat came rushing back"
ratio0.036
11.66% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Now Ptolemy was standing on the armrest with his tail bottled out to twice its size, staring at the door like it might bite him."
1"He leaned lightly on the ivory-handled cane that wasn't really a cane."
2"She'd told him that was rich coming from a half-demon who ran errands for things that didn't have names in English."
3"He'd said, in that careful, four-languages-fluent French accent that smoothed over even when he was angry, that he couldn't keep pulling her out of fires she li…"
4"Lucien looked down, surprised, then — slowly, as if he was afraid Rory would laugh at him — bent to run two fingers over the tabby's head."
5"It was a surrender that felt like peeling something open."
6"He reached into the inner pocket of his suit, and for a second Rory's stomach dropped — old reflex, the Golden Empress delivery girl who'd seen what happened wh…"
7"Ptolemy, who'd followed them back inside, jumped up onto the only clear space on the counter and began to wash his paw as if this were not dramatic at all."
8"He made a low sound against her mouth and pressed her back against the door again, gently this time, his palm flat over all three locks as if he could hold them…"
81.52% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"His hand hovered, not touching"
1"she muttered, her black hair falling forward to hide her face"
99.15% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.305
leniency0.61
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.102
81.2598%