| 50.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx drifted more [more]" | | 1 | "Nyx said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "Aurora said carefully [carefully]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.15 | | effectiveRatio | 0.15 | |
| 77.43% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1551 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "really" | | 5 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1551 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "desire" | | 7 | "lurch" | | 8 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 69 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 24 | | totalWords | 1575 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "was" | | 1 | "what is given freely in a garden of taking cuts deeper than any debt." | | 2 | "her" | | 3 | "moved" | | 4 | "slightly" | | 5 | "A garden of taking." | | 6 | "pointing" | | 7 | "drank" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1219 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 0.98 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 12 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Bermondsey | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | South | 1 | | Asian | 1 | | Birmingham | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Earth" |
| | places | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Bermondsey" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Fae-forged" | | 5 | "Birmingham" | | 6 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite but the deep crimson stone had gone from its usual faint warmth to something alive, something that pulsed against her palm in a rhythm that was almost, almost a heartbeat" |
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| 73.02% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.27 | | wordCount | 1575 | | matches | | 0 | "not by weather, she realized, but by hands" | | 1 | "not of her, but of the question itself" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 37.5 | | std | 33.21 | | cv | 0.886 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 81 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 111 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 79 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 70 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 77 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 110 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 96 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 109 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 68 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 82 | | 37 | 56 | | 38 | 45 | | 39 | 48 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 18 |
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| 82.18% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "is given" | | 1 | "was lined" | | 2 | "been worn" | | 3 | "was laid" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "was shaped" |
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| 67.99% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 202 | | matches | | 0 | "was burning" | | 1 | "were — barely troubling" | | 2 | "was plating" | | 3 | "was pointing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.16 | | matches | | 0 | "Not painfully — not quite — but the deep crimson stone had gone from its usual faint warmth to something alive, something that pulsed against her palm in a rhythm that was almost, almost a heartbeat." | | 1 | "That was the first thing — the sky was a warm amber, glowing from within like light through honey, and there was no sun to account for it." | | 2 | "Below them, the land rolled away in every direction, and it was green — but not any green she'd seen in Richmond Park or the Welsh valleys of her childhood." | | 3 | "Their humanoid silhouette — six feet and change of living shadow, edges constantly fraying and reknitting — stood beside her with their head tilted, violet eyes glowing faintly in the amber light." | | 4 | "The path — if it was a path — was lined with stones that had been worn smooth not by weather, she realized, but by hands." | | 5 | "\"Since before your kind had names for the dead.\" Nyx drifted more than walked, their feet — such as they were — barely troubling the grass." | | 6 | "It hit her like a wall — roasting meat and baking bread and caramelized sugar and spices she had no names for, all of it layered and intertwined and so impossibly rich that her knees actually softened." | | 7 | "That was the only way to describe it — the tables ran in sweeping arcs and spirals, white-clothed and groaning, vanishing into a golden haze at the limit of sight." | | 8 | "Mountains of fruit rose in jeweled pyramids — fruit that *moved*, she saw with a lurch, some of it slowly ripening and unripening and ripening again, cycling through colors like breathing." | | 9 | "The guests at the tables ate with a focus that was almost liturgical, eyes half-closed, and as Aurora passed she saw the truth of them — the way a woman's hand passed *slightly* through a goblet before her fingers remembered to be solid, the translucence at the edges of an old man in a chef's whites who was plating a dish with trembling, reverent care." | | 10 | "He looked at Aurora — really looked, the way you look at something impossible — and then at Nyx, and then back." | | 11 | "The man's eyes came back to her, and for a moment he looked almost frightened — not of her, but of the question itself." | | 12 | "As if in answer, the Heartstone flared hot against Aurora's chest, and the deep crimson gem kindled with its faint inner glow, pulsing faster now, eager, *pointing* — she realized with a chill that it was pointing, that the warmth was strongest on one side, tugging her attention the way the bell had tugged the chef." | | 13 | "It was shaped like nothing so much as a set table — columns like candlesticks, a roof like a great cloche of hammered bronze, windows glowing amber from within." | | 14 | "The moonsilver sang faintly as it left the sheath, leaf-shaped and cold, and in this sunless light it didn't glow — it *drank* the amber, dark along its edges, as if even the light here was food and the blade refused to eat." |
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| 98.66% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1228 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.041530944625407164 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016286644951140065 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 16.76 | | std | 14.41 | | cv | 0.86 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 69 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 96.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5957446808510638 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 48.31% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Then a bell rang somewhere" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 69.28% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "It was burning." | | 1 | "She'd felt it grow hotter" | | 2 | "Their humanoid silhouette — six" | | 3 | "They started down the hill." | | 4 | "She touched one and felt" | | 5 | "She pulled her hand back." | | 6 | "It hit her like a" | | 7 | "She caught herself on a" | | 8 | "Her mouth flooded." | | 9 | "Her stomach clenched with a" | | 10 | "They paused, their shadowy head" | | 11 | "She breathed through her mouth." | | 12 | "It helped, a little." | | 13 | "They crested the next rise" | | 14 | "They descended into the feast," | | 15 | "They were all dead, or" | | 16 | "He looked at Aurora —" | | 17 | "His accent was Birmingham." | | 18 | "He laughed, and there was" | | 19 | "His gaze drifted past her" |
| | ratio | 0.377 | |
| 32.46% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The portal closed behind them" | | 1 | "It was burning." | | 2 | "She'd felt it grow hotter" | | 3 | "Nyx said, their voice a" | | 4 | "Aurora let go of the" | | 5 | "The sky was wrong." | | 6 | "That was the first thing" | | 7 | "The light simply *was*, sourceless" | | 8 | "This green was too saturated," | | 9 | "Vines heavy with dark fruit" | | 10 | "Trees bowed under the weight" | | 11 | "Their humanoid silhouette — six" | | 12 | "Aurora's fingers drifted to the" | | 13 | "The moonsilver was cold even" | | 14 | "They started down the hill." | | 15 | "The path — if it" | | 16 | "She touched one and felt" | | 17 | "She pulled her hand back." | | 18 | "Nyx drifted more than walked," | | 19 | "The smell reached her before" |
| | ratio | 0.855 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing on the other" | | 1 | "As if in answer, the" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 3.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Not painfully — not quite — but the deep crimson stone had gone from its usual faint warmth to something alive, something that pulsed against her palm in a rhyt…" | | 1 | "The hunger didn't leave, but it became something she could observe rather than something that was *her*, and she straightened up off the stone and made herself …" | | 2 | "Mountains of fruit rose in jeweled pyramids — fruit that *moved*, she saw with a lurch, some of it slowly ripening and unripening and ripening again, cycling th…" | | 3 | "The guests at the tables ate with a focus that was almost liturgical, eyes half-closed, and as Aurora passed she saw the truth of them — the way a woman's hand …" | | 4 | "*A garden of taking.* Isolde's words, spending themselves at last." | | 5 | "As if in answer, the Heartstone flared hot against Aurora's chest, and the deep crimson gem kindled with its faint inner glow, pulsing faster now, eager, *point…" | | 6 | "The moonsilver sang faintly as it left the sheath, leaf-shaped and cold, and in this sunless light it didn't glow — it *drank* the amber, dark along its edges, …" |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "They paused, their shadowy head turning toward her" | | 1 | "he said, as if the word were in a foreign language" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "He laughed (laugh)" | | 1 | "he repeated (repeat)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.389 | | leniency | 0.778 | | rawRatio | 0.214 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |