| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He steps fully [fully]" | | 1 | "She steps around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 72 | | tagDensity | 0.264 | | leniency | 0.528 | | rawRatio | 0.105 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 87.15% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1557 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 74.31% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1557 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "ensure" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "echoing" | | 5 | "charm" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "velvet" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 125 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1541 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 23 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 934 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.75 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 7 | | Moreau | 2 | | Lucien | 6 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Camden | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1541 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 75 | | mean | 20.55 | | std | 16.13 | | cv | 0.785 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 65 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 52 | | 36 | 44 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 125 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "She steps back, but not before catching the way his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—narrow." | | 1 | "The hallway reeks of his cologne—something spicy, expensive, the kind of scent that clings to memory." | | 2 | "Not from fear—she's dealt with worse customers at the bar—but from the way his voice drops half an octave when he says her name." | | 3 | "\"I could, but where's the fun in that?\" He shrugs it off, revealing the tailored charcoal suit beneath—dry clean only, probably cost more than her monthly rent." | | 4 | "She'd spent months convincing herself that walking away from Lucien Moreau—the half-demon fixer with connections to things that went bump in the dark and a smile that could disarm demons—was the smartest thing she'd ever done." | | 5 | "The tremor in her fingers—the one that only appears when she thinks no one's looking—betrays her." | | 6 | "Both of them move as one—she grabs a kitchen knife from the block, he produces that damned cane with practiced efficiency—but it's too late." |
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| 98.49% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 743 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.04172274562584118 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008075370121130552 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 125 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 125 | | mean | 12.33 | | std | 10.15 | | cv | 0.824 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 73.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.496 | | totalSentences | 125 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she hands him a" | | 1 | "Somewhere in the flat, a" | | 2 | "Just enough for her to" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 78.82% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "She steps back, but not" | | 1 | "His smile doesn't reach those" | | 2 | "She'd know it anywhere." | | 3 | "She'd pretended not to." | | 4 | "She nods at the delivery" | | 5 | "He steps fully inside, the" | | 6 | "He flicks his wrist, and" | | 7 | "Her pulse quickens." | | 8 | "He shrugs it off, revealing" | | 9 | "She backs up until she" | | 10 | "His gaze flicks to her" | | 11 | "He runs a hand through" | | 12 | "He nods toward the bedside" | | 13 | "She'd spent months convincing herself" | | 14 | "She steps around him, heading" | | 15 | "He follows, moving with the" | | 16 | "She almost smiles." | | 17 | "He blows across the surface," | | 18 | "Her hands still." | | 19 | "He leans forward, elbows on" |
| | ratio | 0.353 | |
| 26.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swings open before" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stands in her" | | 2 | "Ptolemy yowls from somewhere deeper" | | 3 | "She steps back, but not" | | 4 | "His smile doesn't reach those" | | 5 | "Rory's hand drifts unconsciously to" | | 6 | "The hallway reeks of his" | | 7 | "She'd know it anywhere." | | 8 | "She'd pretended not to." | | 9 | "She nods at the delivery" | | 10 | "He steps fully inside, the" | | 11 | "Rory grabs her keys from" | | 12 | "Lucien's laugh is low, dangerous" | | 13 | "He flicks his wrist, and" | | 14 | "Her pulse quickens." | | 15 | "Rory's flat smells like stale" | | 16 | "Ptolemy emerges from the bedroom," | | 17 | "He shrugs it off, revealing" | | 18 | "The memory hits like a" | | 19 | "The blood on the pavement." |
| | ratio | 0.868 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she wants to reach" | | 1 | "Now she wants to pretend" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 89.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The hallway reeks of his cologne—something spicy, expensive, the kind of scent that clings to memory." | | 1 | "She'd spent months convincing herself that walking away from Lucien Moreau—the half-demon fixer with connections to things that went bump in the dark and a smil…" |
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| 72.37% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He steps fully, the door swinging shut behind him with a soft click" | | 1 | "she says, voice barely above a whisper," |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispers (whisper)" | | 1 | "he murmurs (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 72 | | tagDensity | 0.056 | | leniency | 0.111 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |