| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.458 | | leniency | 0.917 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 76.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1042 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1042 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "calculated" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "beacon" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "glistening" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "hulking" | | 11 | "framework" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "pristine" | | 15 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1032 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "RAVEN’S NEST" | | 1 | "The Travels of Marco Polo" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 831 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.08 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 9 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Morris | 3 | | Travels | 1 | | Marco | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Herrera | 1 | | Medallion | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Tomás | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Marco" | | 4 | "Market" | | 5 | "Herrera" | | 6 | "Saint" | | 7 | "Christopher" | | 8 | "Tomás" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.958 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 59.09% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a phantom limb, aching with q" | | 1 | "looked like liquid fire" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1032 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 28.67 | | std | 19.26 | | cv | 0.672 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 76 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 47 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "The silhouette of a man—broad shoulders, the distinctive cut of a leather jacket—had melted into the shadows near the entrance to The Raven’s Nest." | | 1 | "She veered toward it, her hand drifting to the worn leather watch on her wrist—Morris’s gift, still ticking despite the years." | | 2 | "The air smelled of whiskey and something else—ozone, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of old blood." | | 3 | "One volume—a weathered copy of *The Travels of Marco Polo*—sat slightly askew." | | 4 | "The air grew colder, thicker with the scent of damp earth and something else—something sweet and cloying, like jasmine mixed with rot." | | 5 | "A single bone—weathered, bleached white—lay at its base." | | 6 | "The guard—a hulking figure shrouded in a trench coat, face obscured by a gas mask—would see her hesitation as weakness." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 292 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 3 | | adverbRatio | 0.010273972602739725 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003424657534246575 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 11.34 | | std | 7.22 | | cv | 0.637 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 49.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.32967032967032966 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 97.78% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Her brown eyes cut through" | | 1 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 2 | "Her jaw tightened." | | 3 | "She veered toward it, her" | | 4 | "She moved past the bar," | | 5 | "She knew he was." | | 6 | "Her boots echoed, a steady" | | 7 | "She emerged into a cavernous" | | 8 | "He wore a blood-red scarf" | | 9 | "he said, his voice low" | | 10 | "She didn’t answer." | | 11 | "Her flashlight swept over the" | | 12 | "He gestured to his stall," | | 13 | "he said, his smile thin" | | 14 | "She studied him, noting the" | | 15 | "She stepped toward the gate," | | 16 | "She considered this." | | 17 | "His laugh was humorless." | | 18 | "He didn’t answer immediately." | | 19 | "He shook his head" |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 8.61% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain fell in sheets," | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots slapped" | | 2 | "Her brown eyes cut through" | | 3 | "The silhouette of a man—broad" | | 4 | "She pulled her coat tighter," | | 5 | "Her jaw tightened." | | 6 | "The case files had been" | | 7 | "DS Morris’s death still felt" | | 8 | "A flicker of movement caught" | | 9 | "The green neon sign of" | | 10 | "She veered toward it, her" | | 11 | "The door swung open with" | | 12 | "Maps of forgotten continents hung" | | 13 | "The air smelled of whiskey" | | 14 | "Quinn’s flashlight slice through the" | | 15 | "She moved past the bar," | | 16 | "The suspect had to be" | | 17 | "She knew he was." | | 18 | "A bookshelf lined the far" | | 19 | "Quinn pressed her palm against" |
| | ratio | 0.903 | |
| 69.44% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 61.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She veered toward it, her hand drifting to the worn leather watch on her wrist—Morris’s gift, still ticking despite the years." | | 1 | "She moved past the bar, past the patrons who looked up with burgundy eyes and low-slung posture, all of them watching without truly seeing." | | 2 | "Stalls and makeshift shops occupied the platform, their canopies strung with lanterns that cast shifting shadows." | | 3 | "Beyond it, the market stretched into darkness, its stalls now visible in greater detail: a witch brewing a potion of forgetfulness, a man selling vials of liqui…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his voice low" | | 1 | "he said, his smile thin" | | 2 | "Quinn said, more to herself than to him" | | 3 | "Tomás said, his voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Tomás interrupted (interrupt)" | | 1 | "Tomás continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |