Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD734TT63XNM0QTBVMXAVE8

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Duration:
12.8s
Cost:
$0.000293
Provider:
Poolside

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door swung inward with a soft creak, its three deadbolts having yielded to a skill Rory had never seen in anyone but the most practiced locksmiths—or so she told herself, as she stared at the figure silhouetted in the doorway. The amber glint of his heterochromatic eyes caught the dim lamplight pooling in the hallway, and her breath hitched. Lucien Moreau. He hadn’t been seen in over a year, not since the night the rain had turned bloody in the alley behind the Golden Empress, not since the words between them had curdled into silence and accusations. She had fled London then, or rather, he had fled her, leaving behind a trail of unanswered questions and a heart she hadn’t known how to mend. “Lucien,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. “What the hell are you doing here?” He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his polished shoes silent against the worn wooden floorboards. The scent of sandalwood and something darker—something wilder—clung to him, mingling with the lingering aroma of cardamom and turmeric drifting up from below. Ptolemy, the tabby, arched his back in a languid stretch and padded away from the entrance, tail twitching toward the intruder. “I could ask you the same,” he said, his voice a low baritone laced with something like amusement. Or maybe it was pity. Hard to tell with his mask of composure. “But I suppose I already told you that in Marseille. Three months ago. When I found you.” Rory’s fingers drifted to the crescent scar on her left wrist, a habitual gesture when her mind raced. “You said you’d never come near me again.” “I said a lot of things in Marseille,” he said, unbuttoning his charcoal jacket with deliberate slowness. The fabric fell away to reveal a crisp white shirt, sleeves rolled to the elbows. “Most of them were lies. Or half-truths. Including, I imagine, the one about never wanting to see you again.” She should have been angry. Should have slammed the door in his face, called the police, demanded answers for the months of silence, for the way he’d vanished without a word after everything. But the truth was, her pulse thrummed in her throat, warm and insistent, like a compass needle pointing west. “You have twenty seconds to explain why you’re in Eva’s flat,” she said, though her eyes betrayed her. They lingered on his face, tracing the familiar planes of his cheekbones, the way his black eye seemed to drink in the light while the amber one held a flicker of something tender. Lucien’s lips curved, just slightly. “I’m here because you’re not.” The words hung in the air, heavy with implication. Rory cleared her throat, suddenly self-conscious about the towering pile of cookbooks and crumpled delivery receipts that formed her dinner table. “This is a mess.” “Aren’t we all?” He glanced around the cramped space, his gaze lingering on the shelves packed with yellowed papers and leather-bound tomes. “Still the same place. Still buried under research.” Eva would have loved that. Eva, with her wild curls and ink-stained fingers, who had insisted Rory leave Evan and come to London, who had believed in second chances when Rory could no longer believe in herself. Eva, who was out for the night, probably nursing a glass of wine and cursing the universe for not sending her a damsel in distress to rescue. Instead, Rory had Ptolemy, who now sat on the windowsill, tail flicking with the precision of a metronome. “You shouldn’t have come here,” she said. “And yet, here I am.” Lucien moved to the small kitchenette, his movements fluid, economical. “You should have seen the look on the gaffer’s face when I walked through that door with a warrant and a name.” Rory arched a brow. “You got a warrant?” “I needed access to the files.” He turned, holding a manila folder in one hand. “The ones Eva’s been digging into for months. The ones she said might explain why certain people in the city die under ‘accidental’ circumstances.” Her stomach clenched. Eva had been working on something big, something dangerous, and Lucien—Lucien, who had once helped her track down a demon in the sewers beneath Covent Garden—had been digging into the same mystery. “What happened to her?” she asked, the words barely a whisper. Lucien’s expression softened, just a fraction. “She’s safe. For now.” He held up the folder. “But she’s being hunted, Rory. And if you’re involved in whatever she was, you’re going to need more than your wits and a scar on your wrist.” She took a step back, the old fear tightening its grip. Fear of the supernatural underworld, yes, but also the fear of him—the way his presence made her feel like she was standing at the edge of a cliff, wind whipping around her, ready to tumble into the unknown. “Why?” she asked. “Why now? Why me?” His amber eye met hers, steady and unflinching. “Because you’re clever, Rory. And because you care. Even when you pretend you don’t.” The admission was a needle to the ribcage. She had built walls around her heart since Evan, since the night she’d thought she understood love only as possession and control. But with Lucien, it had always been different. Or maybe she had just been lucky enough to meet someone who could dismantle her defenses without even trying. “You always did know how to make an entrance,” she said, turning away to hide the way her throat worked when she swallowed. He followed her movement, closing the distance between them. Even with the folder clutched in his hand, he looked like a predator who had finally cornered his prey. Except she wasn’t afraid of him. Not really. “Do you remember the night before you left?” His voice dropped to a whisper. “The rooftop? The city lights?” She did. The memory was sharp, etched into her bones. The way his fingers had brushed hers, tentative, before pulling away. The way he’d looked at her like she was the only person in the world. “I remember,” she said, and meant it. “Then you know why I came back.” The door above the stairs creaked open, and Eva’s muffled voice called out, “Lucien? Rory? Who’s here?” They exchanged a glance—long, searching, filled with everything they hadn’t said. Lucien tucked the folder into his jacket. Rory smoothed her hair, squared her shoulders, and tried to remember how to be the person who could walk away from this. But the moment stretched, taut as a bowstring. And in that space between heartbeats, Lucien reached out, his gloved hand hovering just above her wrist, near the scar that had once been a symbol of survival. “You don’t have to do this alone anymore,” he said. And for a heartbeat, she wanted to believe him.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He glanced around [around]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.516
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
86.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1147
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1147
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"raced"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"implication"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"predator"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"silence"
2"raced"
3"pulse"
4"tracing"
5"familiar"
6"flicker"
7"implication"
8"stomach"
9"whisper"
10"predator"
11"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
75.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1140
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount880
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Moreau1
Golden1
Empress1
London2
Eva5
Evan2
Ptolemy2
Lucien9
Covent1
Garden1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Covent"
2"Garden"
globalScore0.989
windowScore0.833
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like amusement"
1"looked like a predator who had finally co"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1140
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean30.81
std18.84
cv0.611
sampleLengths
060
12
263
316
461
548
626
751
852
951
1010
1134
1230
1364
1418
157
1637
178
1839
1935
2011
2142
2249
237
2422
2557
2623
2736
2819
2936
307
317
3217
3340
3436
3510
369
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"been seen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs149
matches
0"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences79
ratio0.063
matches
0"The door swung inward with a soft creak, its three deadbolts having yielded to a skill Rory had never seen in anyone but the most practiced locksmiths—or so she told herself, as she stared at the figure silhouetted in the doorway."
1"The scent of sandalwood and something darker—something wilder—clung to him, mingling with the lingering aroma of cardamom and turmeric drifting up from below."
2"Eva had been working on something big, something dangerous, and Lucien—Lucien, who had once helped her track down a demon in the sewers beneath Covent Garden—had been digging into the same mystery."
3"Fear of the supernatural underworld, yes, but also the fear of him—the way his presence made her feel like she was standing at the edge of a cliff, wind whipping around her, ready to tumble into the unknown."
4"They exchanged a glance—long, searching, filled with everything they hadn’t said."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount890
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.035955056179775284
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008988764044943821
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean14.43
std9.36
cv0.649
sampleLengths
041
119
22
336
427
59
67
717
823
921
1018
115
128
1317
1418
158
1617
1715
1819
195
2028
2119
2218
2333
245
255
269
2721
284
2922
308
315
3232
3327
3418
357
3615
3722
384
394
4015
4124
423
4332
4411
456
469
4727
4811
4938
57.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3924050632911392
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners31
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Instead, Rory had Ptolemy, who"
ratio0.017
68.28% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences58
matches
0"He hadn’t been seen in"
1"She had fled London then,"
2"she said, her voice steadier"
3"He stepped inside without waiting"
4"he said, his voice a"
5"he said, unbuttoning his charcoal"
6"She should have been angry."
7"she said, though her eyes"
8"They lingered on his face,"
9"He glanced around the cramped"
10"He turned, holding a manila"
11"Her stomach clenched."
12"she asked, the words barely"
13"He held up the folder"
14"She took a step back,"
15"His amber eye met hers,"
16"She had built walls around"
17"she said, turning away to"
18"He followed her movement, closing"
19"His voice dropped to a"
ratio0.379
63.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences58
matches
0"The door swung inward with"
1"The amber glint of his"
2"He hadn’t been seen in"
3"She had fled London then,"
4"she said, her voice steadier"
5"He stepped inside without waiting"
6"The scent of sandalwood and"
7"Ptolemy, the tabby, arched his"
8"he said, his voice a"
9"Rory’s fingers drifted to the"
10"he said, unbuttoning his charcoal"
11"The fabric fell away to"
12"She should have been angry."
13"she said, though her eyes"
14"They lingered on his face,"
15"Lucien’s lips curved, just slightly."
16"The words hung in the"
17"Rory cleared her throat, suddenly"
18"He glanced around the cramped"
19"Eva would have loved that."
ratio0.793
86.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Even with the folder clutched"
ratio0.017
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory cleared her throat, suddenly self-conscious about the towering pile of cookbooks and crumpled delivery receipts that formed her dinner table."
1"Eva, with her wild curls and ink-stained fingers, who had insisted Rory leave Evan and come to London, who had believed in second chances when Rory could no lon…"
2"Eva had been working on something big, something dangerous, and Lucien—Lucien, who had once helped her track down a demon in the sewers beneath Covent Garden—ha…"
3"And in that space between heartbeats, Lucien reached out, his gloved hand hovering just above her wrist, near the scar that had once been a symbol of survival."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"he said, his voice a low baritone laced with something like amusement"
2"she said, though her eyes betrayed her"
3"Lucien moved, his movements fluid, economical"
4"she asked, the words barely a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.323
leniency0.645
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.1715%