Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD75N95SYV9M98KTFTV17VN

Run Details

Duration:
8.9s
Cost:
$0.000362
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Aurora could second-guess herself, and Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway of her flat above Silas’s bar, rainwater pooling beneath his polished shoes. His coat was dark with moisture, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with that same unreadable intensity she hadn’t seen in nearly two years. “You have ten seconds to explain why you’re standing on my doorstep,” Aurora said, arms crossed, voice steady despite the way her pulse kicked up in her throat. Lucien’s lips quirked, that half-smile that had undone her more times than she cared to admit. “Charming as always, Rory.” He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, and the door clicked shut behind him. Water dripped from his hair, darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit. “I was hoping you’d still live above a bar.” “I do,” she said. “Still delivering noodles for the Golden Empress?” “Still asking questions you don’t want answers to?” His gaze swept the room—books stacked to the ceiling, scrolls tucked into every available space, the lingering scent of jasmine incense clinging to the air. “You’ve been busy.” Aurora’s jaw tightened. “So have you.” She stepped back, gesturing for him to move further into the flat. “Come on. You’re tracking water everywhere.” He followed her past the makeshift kitchen table, where half-empty teacups sat beside yellowed parchment, and settled against the arm of her couch with the casual ease of someone who’d spent too many nights in this very spot. “You never answered my question.” “And I’m not about to start now.” She leaned against the opposite wall, arms still crossed. “What do you want, Luc?” For a moment, he was quiet. The kind of quiet that pressed against her ribs like a hand around a balloon. When he spoke again, his voice was lower, rougher. “I need your help.” That stopped her. “With what?” “The kind of job that usually ends with someone dead or missing.” He reached into his coat pocket and pulled out a folded piece of paper. “But I figured since you owe me, we could call it even.” Aurora crossed her arms tighter. “I don’t owe you anything.” “Don’t you?” His eyes flicked up to meet hers. “Remember the night you walked away? You took something from me.” Her breath caught. Not because of the accusation—she’d replayed that night a thousand times, wondered if she’d done the right thing—but because of the way his voice carried beneath the words. Like he wasn’t just talking about debt. “I left because you lied to me,” she said quietly. “Did I?” He unfolded the paper and tossed it onto the coffee table. It landed near her feet. “Or did you leave because you were scared?” She didn’t pick it up. “Of you? Maybe.” “Of yourself.” He stood slowly, closing the distance between them until his knees brushed hers. “You spent months running from everything—your family, your past, me. But you can’t run forever, Rory.” “No,” she whispered. “You can’t.” His hand found hers then, gentle at first, tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. She flinched, but didn’t pull away. “I never meant to hurt you.” “You didn’t.” Her voice cracked slightly. “But you did anyway.” “And you never told me why you really left.” He looked up at her, really looked at her. “Was it me? Or was it what I am?” Aurora’s fingers curled into his shirt. “You think I care about that? About demons and blood and all that nonsense?” She laughed bitterly. “Lucien, I loved you. That’s not nothing.” “Then why did you go?” She shook her head, tears blurring her vision. “Because every time I looked at you, I felt like I was losing myself. And I was tired of disappearing.” His thumb brushed against her knuckles. “You don’t have to disappear here.” “But I do.” She pulled her hand free. “Every time I let someone in, they leave. Or worse—they stay and I watch them break.” He stepped closer, close enough that she could smell the sandalwood and rain on his skin. “I’m not like the others.” “No,” she agreed softly. “You’re worse.” He cupped her face in his hands, thumbs sweeping along her cheekbones. “Maybe.” His lips hovered an inch from hers. “But I’m yours, if you’ll have me.” Aurora closed her eyes as his mouth finally claimed hers, slow and searching, tasting of mint and longing. She melted into his touch, into the familiar warmth of his embrace, even as her heart hammered against her ribs. This was dangerous—this was exactly what she’d been trying to avoid—but god, it felt right. When they pulled back, his forehead rested against hers. “Tell me you want this,” he murmured. “Tell me you want me.” “I do,” she breathed. “God, I do.” “Then stop running.” She opened her eyes, really looked at him—the way the lamplight caught the gold in his hair, the soft scar above his brow, the way his pupils dilated when he looked at her like she was the only person in the world. “What if I’m not ready to stop running?” “Then run to me instead of away from me.” Aurora reached up, tracing the line of his jaw with her fingertips. “You always knew how to say the right thing.” “Only for you.” She smiled then, small and tentative, and stepped fully into his arms. Outside, the rain continued to fall, washing the streets of London clean, but inside, surrounded by books and memories and the ghost of everything they’d lost, something new began to bloom.
created_at"2026-07-25T18:04:06.088Z" 7/25/2026, 6:04:06 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
2"He stood slowly [slowly]"
3"Her voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
4"She laughed bitterly [bitterly]"
5"she agreed softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.377
leniency0.755
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.226
62.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount938
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count3
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"really"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount938
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"intensity"
2"pulse"
3"flicked"
4"tracing"
5"familiar"
6"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords928
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount604
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora7
Lucien2
Moreau1
Silas1
Water1
London1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Silas"
4"Water"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.921
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount928
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"replayed that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean23.79
std15.27
cv0.642
sampleLengths
056
128
256
311
436
524
643
721
834
95
1038
1110
1220
1338
1410
1526
168
1731
185
1928
2010
2127
2230
235
2428
2512
2624
2721
286
2927
3053
3121
327
333
3450
359
3621
373
3843
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs113
matches
0"wasn’t just talking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences84
ratio0.06
matches
0"His coat was dark with moisture, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with that same unreadable intensity she hadn’t seen in nearly two years."
1"“Still asking questions you don’t want answers to?” His gaze swept the room—books stacked to the ceiling, scrolls tucked into every available space, the lingering scent of jasmine incense clinging to the air."
2"Not because of the accusation—she’d replayed that night a thousand times, wondered if she’d done the right thing—but because of the way his voice carried beneath the words."
3"This was dangerous—this was exactly what she’d been trying to avoid—but god, it felt right."
4"She opened her eyes, really looked at him—the way the lamplight caught the gold in his hair, the soft scar above his brow, the way his pupils dilated when he looked at her like she was the only person in the world."
87.81% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount616
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.04707792207792208
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01948051948051948
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean11.05
std8.65
cv0.783
sampleLengths
029
127
228
316
419
512
69
74
87
933
103
113
1215
136
1438
155
1616
175
186
1915
209
214
223
232
2426
2512
265
275
289
2911
303
3128
327
3310
3413
355
368
375
383
3915
4016
413
422
4316
446
456
466
474
4818
499
74.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.47619047619047616
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences47
matches
0"His coat was dark with"
1"He stepped inside without waiting"
2"His gaze swept the room—books"
3"She stepped back, gesturing for"
4"He followed her past the"
5"She leaned against the opposite"
6"He reached into his coat"
7"His eyes flicked up to"
8"Her breath caught."
9"she said quietly"
10"He unfolded the paper and"
11"It landed near her feet."
12"She didn’t pick it up."
13"He stood slowly, closing the"
14"His hand found hers then,"
15"She flinched, but didn’t pull"
16"Her voice cracked slightly"
17"He looked up at her,"
18"She laughed bitterly"
19"She shook her head, tears"
ratio0.617
23.83% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences47
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"His coat was dark with"
2"Aurora said, arms crossed, voice"
3"Lucien’s lips quirked, that half-smile"
4"He stepped inside without waiting"
5"Water dripped from his hair,"
6"His gaze swept the room—books"
7"Aurora’s jaw tightened."
8"She stepped back, gesturing for"
9"He followed her past the"
10"She leaned against the opposite"
11"The kind of quiet that"
12"That stopped her."
13"He reached into his coat"
14"Aurora crossed her arms tighter."
15"His eyes flicked up to"
16"Her breath caught."
17"she said quietly"
18"He unfolded the paper and"
19"It landed near her feet."
ratio0.872
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lucien’s lips quirked, that half-smile that had undone her more times than she cared to admit."
1"He followed her past the makeshift kitchen table, where half-empty teacups sat beside yellowed parchment, and settled against the arm of her couch with the casu…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He stepped, and the door clicked shut behind him"
55.66% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"She laughed bitterly (laugh)"
2"she agreed softly (agree)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.151
leniency0.302
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.189
73.7606%