| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said lightly [lightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.05 | |
| 85.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1406 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lazily" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "lightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 67.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1406 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "comforting" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "gleaming" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "silk" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 89.95% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1416 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.76% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1079 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.2 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Fae | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Empty | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.898 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 68.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "glow that seemed to come from the air itself" | | 1 | "something between fear and reverence, and melte" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1416 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 32.93 | | std | 25.93 | | cv | 0.787 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 91 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 49 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 66 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 112 | | 25 | 65 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 52 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 87 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 70 | | 37 | 56 | | 38 | 37 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 59 | | 42 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.068 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood on a hillside under a sky the colour of held flame — no sun, no clouds, just a warm, endless glow that seemed to come from the air itself." | | 1 | "Below her, the land rolled out in impossible abundance: vineyards climbing terraces carved into black stone, orchards heavy with fruit in colours that had no names, and rivers — actual rivers — running dark red and gold down into a valley where smoke rose from a hundred chimneys." | | 2 | "Aurora began to hear the city before she saw it properly — a rising weave of sound: laughter, clattering pans, a string quartet sawing away somewhere, the rhythmic chop of knives on boards, all of it braided into a hum that vibrated in her teeth." | | 3 | "Streets spiralled around a vast central plaza where long tables ran in concentric rings, hundreds of metres of linen and silver and steaming dishes, and around them moved crowds of figures — some human-shaped, some very much not." | | 4 | "A child — or a thing wearing a child's shape — sat on a doorstep eating a pastry, and where its teeth broke the crust, the pastry bled bright jam the colour of the sky." | | 5 | "A stall keeper reached out as Isolde passed — then snatched his hand back, cradling it against his chest as though stung." | | 6 | "The noise of them rolled over her — the clink, the chatter, the wet, busy sounds of eating." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1075 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.02883720930232558 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005581395348837209 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 13.75 | | std | 10.33 | | cv | 0.751 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 43 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 45 |
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| 66.99% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4368932038834951 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 45.66% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the road curved, and" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her palm over" | | 1 | "Her silver hair lifted in" | | 2 | "It swallowed her without a" | | 3 | "She stepped through." | | 4 | "She stood on a hillside" | | 5 | "Her stomach clenched so hard" | | 6 | "They had come through soundlessly," | | 7 | "She kept her hands to" | | 8 | "They moved on." | | 9 | "It still pulsed, warm and" | | 10 | "They entered the city's edge," | | 11 | "He stared at the seer" | | 12 | "They came to the plaza's" | | 13 | "She hadn't seen him approach." | | 14 | "He was tall, hollow-cheeked, dressed" | | 15 | "Her own wrist ached in" | | 16 | "His voice was gentle, practised," | | 17 | "They lowered their voice until" |
| | ratio | 0.247 | |
| 1.10% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The tear in the Veil" | | 1 | "The Heartstone flared hot against" | | 2 | "She pressed her palm over" | | 3 | "The warmth seeped between her" | | 4 | "Nyx stood at the edge" | | 5 | "Isolde stepped past them both," | | 6 | "Her silver hair lifted in" | | 7 | "The seer only smiled and" | | 8 | "It swallowed her without a" | | 9 | "Aurora looked at Nyx." | | 10 | "Nyx's violet eyes brightened, the" | | 11 | "Aurora drew the Fae blade" | | 12 | "The moonsilver felt cold even" | | 13 | "She stepped through." | | 14 | "The world tore, then stitched" | | 15 | "She stood on a hillside" | | 16 | "The light touched her skin" | | 17 | "The smell hit her next." | | 18 | "Her stomach clenched so hard" | | 19 | "Nyx murmured beside her" |
| | ratio | 0.918 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone flared hot against her sternum, pulsing in time with her heartbeat, its crimson glow bleeding through the fabric of her shirt." | | 1 | "Aurora began to hear the city before she saw it properly — a rising weave of sound: laughter, clattering pans, a string quartet sawing away somewhere, the rhyth…" | | 2 | "A stall keeper reached out as Isolde passed — then snatched his hand back, cradling it against his chest as though stung." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx stood, their silhouette bending the light around them" | | 1 | "Isolde said lightly, without looking back" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She pressed (press)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.175 | | leniency | 0.35 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |