Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD782XJW536S8T90QJHAJVD

Run Details

Duration:
12.6s
Cost:
$0.000390
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The path through Richmond Park had always been well-trodden during daylight hours, but now, beneath a sliver of moon that cast everything in shades of silver and shadow, Aurora questioned every choice that had led her here. The ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove stood like silent sentinels ahead, their gnarled trunks twisting upward into darkness. She had come seeking answers—or perhaps escape—but the moment she stepped through the first circle of stones, something shifted. The air grew thicker, warmer somehow, despite the chill that clung to the night. Wildflowers bloomed year-round in this pocket between worlds, their petals glowing faintly in hues that didn’t belong to any season. Aurora paused, her breath catching as she realized the silence wasn’t just absence of sound—it was too complete, as if the world itself were holding its breath. She glanced around, her bright blue eyes scanning the clearing. The Heartstone Pendant at her throat pulsed faintly, a deep crimson glow that matched the rhythm of her heartbeat. It had been given to her by someone who’d vanished without a trace, along with instructions that made no sense until now. *When the stones call, follow the light.* A twig snapped somewhere beyond the circle of flowers. Aurora froze. Not the dry crack of a branch underfoot—that was natural enough—but something wetter, more deliberate. Like a foot pressing through damp earth. She strained her ears, listening past the frantic drumming of her own pulse. Nothing. Just the whisper of wind through leaves that shouldn’t rustle in this stillness. She took another step forward, her sneakers crunching against the stone path. The pendant warmed against her skin, its glow intensifying slightly. That was wrong too—she’d read about Hel portals, about how artifacts reacted to them, but there shouldn’t be one here. Not unless she’d misjudged the distance, the time, the way the park twisted back on itself after dark. Another sound. Closer this time. A low murmur, almost like breathing, but not quite. It came from behind a cluster of standing stones, where the shadows pooled thickest. Aurora’s hand drifted to her wrist, feeling the familiar crescent scar that had been there since childhood—a small reminder of how easily things could go wrong. “Hello?” Her voice sounded too loud in the suffocating quiet. “Is someone there?” No answer. Only the faint rustle of petals and that unsettling warmth spreading through the pendant. She moved closer to the source of the sound, each step deliberate despite the urge to run. The flowers leaned toward her as she passed, their stems bending in ways that defied gravity. Then she saw it—a figure standing motionless between two oaks, its outline blurred as if seen through water. Aurora blinked hard, but when she opened her eyes, it was still there. Taller than a man, but hunched, its limbs too long for its body. The moonlight caught on something pale and smooth covering its face, making it impossible to tell if it was wearing a mask or if that was simply what remained beneath skin. “Who are you?” she whispered, her voice barely audible. The figure didn’t respond. Didn’t move. But the pendant burned now, searing hot against her chest, and Aurora could feel the pull—not physical, but deeper, like a thread tugging at her soul. She wanted to step closer, to reach out and touch whatever that thing was, even as every survival instinct screamed at her to flee. Something shifted in the air. The temperature dropped sharply, and the flowers began to wilt, their petals curling inward as if recoiling from something unseen. Aurora stumbled back, her heel catching on a root that hadn’t been there moments before—or had it always been part of the landscape, waiting for the right moment to reveal itself? The figure turned its head slowly, and Aurora caught a glimpse of something behind the mask-like covering: eyes that reflected light without source, depths that swallowed the moon whole. She backed away, her sneakers scraping against stone, and that’s when she heard it—the sound of footsteps circling her, coming from all directions at once. Not running, not walking, but something in between, a rhythm that didn’t match any natural gait. The pendant clattered against her sternum, and she pressed her hand over it, trying to dull the heat radiating through her ribs. “What do you want?” she called out, though she already knew the question was futile. A giggle, high and childlike, echoed from somewhere above. Aurora looked up to see movement in the branches of the ancient oaks, but when she focused, there was nothing—just leaves swaying in a breeze that carried the scent of decay and honeysuckle. The footsteps stopped. Silence returned, heavier than before, pressing in on her like a physical weight. Aurora’s legs trembled, and she fought the urge to look back, to bolt toward the standing stones and the familiar world beyond. But the pendant pulsed once, twice, and then went still. That was when she realized the thing behind her was no longer alone. She spun around, heart hammering, and saw them—dozens of figures emerging from the shadows between the trees. Some moved like dancers, others like puppets with tangled strings, but all of them turned their featureless faces toward her in perfect unison. The air filled with the sound of whispering, not words but emotions, raw and hungry and wrong. Aurora’s hand flew to her pocket, fingers closing around the small knife she kept for deliveries. It wouldn’t be enough. Nothing would be enough against something that moved like that, that existed in spaces that bent and twisted just beyond human comprehension. The closest figure raised an arm, and where its fingers brushed the air, the very fabric of reality seemed to ripple. The flowers screamed—or maybe that was just in her mind—and the standing stones began to hum with a frequency that made her teeth ache. She started running, but the path she’d walked moments ago was gone, replaced by a maze of twisted trees and impossible angles. Behind her, the whispering grew louder, becoming almost conversational, almost familiar. *Stay,* they seemed to say. *You belong here now.* The pendant flared to life, its crimson glow cutting through the darkness like a beacon. Aurora followed it blindly, stumbling forward, and for a moment she thought she saw a doorway opening in the space between two stones—a portal of pure light that promised escape. But as she reached for it, something cold wrapped around her ankle, yanking her back into the grove. The last thing she heard before everything went black was her own name, spoken in a voice that was almost—but not quite—Evan’s.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
82.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1131
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
2"slowly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1131
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count3
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"searing"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"depths"
count1
13
word"footsteps"
count2
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
16
word"trembled"
count1
17
word"perfect"
count1
18
word"beacon"
count1
19
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"chill"
2"silence"
3"scanning"
4"pulsed"
5"pulse"
6"whisper"
7"familiar"
8"reminder"
9"warmth"
10"searing"
11"could feel"
12"depths"
13"footsteps"
14"echoed"
15"weight"
16"trembled"
17"perfect"
18"beacon"
19"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
62.37% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords12
totalWords1113
ratio0.011
matches
0"When the stones call, follow the light."
1"Stay,"
2"You belong here now."
83.33% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"The path through Richmond Park had always been well-trodden during daylight hours, but now, beneath a sliver of moon tha…"
95.55% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1102
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora12
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
Evan1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Pendant"
2"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.956
windowScore1
22.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite"
1"as if recoiling from something unseen"
2"not quite Evan’s"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.594
wordCount1113
matches
0"not physical, but deeper, like a thread tugging at her soul"
1"Not running, not walking, but something in between, a rhythm"
2"not walking, but something in between, a rhythm"
3"not words but emotions, raw"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean39.75
std21.3
cv0.536
sampleLengths
081
161
258
39
451
560
654
713
849
975
109
1156
1256
1329
1463
1515
1642
1738
1810
1913
2057
2142
2245
2333
249
2545
2618
2722
95.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"been given"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs197
matches
0"were holding"
1"was wearing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences72
ratio0.194
matches
0"She had come seeking answers—or perhaps escape—but the moment she stepped through the first circle of stones, something shifted."
1"Aurora paused, her breath catching as she realized the silence wasn’t just absence of sound—it was too complete, as if the world itself were holding its breath."
2"Not the dry crack of a branch underfoot—that was natural enough—but something wetter, more deliberate."
3"That was wrong too—she’d read about Hel portals, about how artifacts reacted to them, but there shouldn’t be one here."
4"Aurora’s hand drifted to her wrist, feeling the familiar crescent scar that had been there since childhood—a small reminder of how easily things could go wrong."
5"Then she saw it—a figure standing motionless between two oaks, its outline blurred as if seen through water."
6"But the pendant burned now, searing hot against her chest, and Aurora could feel the pull—not physical, but deeper, like a thread tugging at her soul."
7"Aurora stumbled back, her heel catching on a root that hadn’t been there moments before—or had it always been part of the landscape, waiting for the right moment to reveal itself?"
8"She backed away, her sneakers scraping against stone, and that’s when she heard it—the sound of footsteps circling her, coming from all directions at once."
9"Aurora looked up to see movement in the branches of the ancient oaks, but when she focused, there was nothing—just leaves swaying in a breeze that carried the scent of decay and honeysuckle."
10"She spun around, heart hammering, and saw them—dozens of figures emerging from the shadows between the trees."
11"The flowers screamed—or maybe that was just in her mind—and the standing stones began to hum with a frequency that made her teeth ache."
12"Aurora followed it blindly, stumbling forward, and for a moment she thought she saw a doorway opening in the space between two stones—a portal of pure light that promised escape."
13"The last thing she heard before everything went black was her own name, spoken in a voice that was almost—but not quite—Evan’s."
91.33% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1122
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.049910873440285206
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008912655971479501
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean15.46
std8.59
cv0.555
sampleLengths
037
125
219
314
420
527
610
719
822
97
109
112
1215
137
1413
151
1613
1712
1810
1920
2018
212
223
239
2414
2526
2610
273
282
2914
3017
3116
3218
3313
3413
3531
369
374
382
3926
4024
415
4220
4331
4429
4525
4616
4722
4815
499
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences66
matches
0"Just the whisper of wind"
1"Only the faint rustle of"
2"Then she saw it—a figure"
ratio0.045
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences66
matches
0"She had come seeking answers—or"
1"She glanced around, her bright"
2"It had been given to"
3"She strained her ears, listening"
4"She took another step forward,"
5"It came from behind a"
6"Her voice sounded too loud"
7"She moved closer to the"
8"she whispered, her voice barely"
9"She wanted to step closer,"
10"She backed away, her sneakers"
11"she called out, though she"
12"She spun around, heart hammering,"
13"It wouldn’t be enough."
14"She started running, but the"
15"*You belong here now.*"
ratio0.242
73.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences66
matches
0"The path through Richmond Park"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She had come seeking answers—or"
3"The air grew thicker, warmer"
4"Wildflowers bloomed year-round in this"
5"Aurora paused, her breath catching"
6"She glanced around, her bright"
7"The Heartstone Pendant at her"
8"It had been given to"
9"A twig snapped somewhere beyond"
10"She strained her ears, listening"
11"She took another step forward,"
12"The pendant warmed against her"
13"That was wrong too—she’d read"
14"A low murmur, almost like"
15"It came from behind a"
16"Aurora’s hand drifted to her"
17"Her voice sounded too loud"
18"She moved closer to the"
19"The flowers leaned toward her"
ratio0.773
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount16
matches
0"The path through Richmond Park had always been well-trodden during daylight hours, but now, beneath a sliver of moon that cast everything in shades of silver an…"
1"The ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove stood like silent sentinels ahead, their gnarled trunks twisting upward into darkness."
2"Wildflowers bloomed year-round in this pocket between worlds, their petals glowing faintly in hues that didn’t belong to any season."
3"Aurora paused, her breath catching as she realized the silence wasn’t just absence of sound—it was too complete, as if the world itself were holding its breath."
4"The Heartstone Pendant at her throat pulsed faintly, a deep crimson glow that matched the rhythm of her heartbeat."
5"Not the dry crack of a branch underfoot—that was natural enough—but something wetter, more deliberate."
6"Aurora’s hand drifted to her wrist, feeling the familiar crescent scar that had been there since childhood—a small reminder of how easily things could go wrong."
7"The flowers leaned toward her as she passed, their stems bending in ways that defied gravity."
8"The moonlight caught on something pale and smooth covering its face, making it impossible to tell if it was wearing a mask or if that was simply what remained b…"
9"The temperature dropped sharply, and the flowers began to wilt, their petals curling inward as if recoiling from something unseen."
10"Aurora stumbled back, her heel catching on a root that hadn’t been there moments before—or had it always been part of the landscape, waiting for the right momen…"
11"The figure turned its head slowly, and Aurora caught a glimpse of something behind the mask-like covering: eyes that reflected light without source, depths that…"
12"She backed away, her sneakers scraping against stone, and that’s when she heard it—the sound of footsteps circling her, coming from all directions at once."
13"Not running, not walking, but something in between, a rhythm that didn’t match any natural gait."
14"Nothing would be enough against something that moved like that, that existed in spaces that bent and twisted just beyond human comprehension."
15"The last thing she heard before everything went black was her own name, spoken in a voice that was almost—but not quite—Evan’s."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
65.7823%