| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 82.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1131 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1131 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "reminder" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "searing" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "footsteps" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "trembled" | | 17 | "perfect" | | 18 | "beacon" | | 19 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.37% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 1113 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "When the stones call, follow the light." | | 1 | "Stay," | | 2 | "You belong here now." |
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| 83.33% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The path through Richmond Park had always been well-trodden during daylight hours, but now, beneath a sliver of moon tha…" |
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| 95.55% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1102 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 12 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.956 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 22.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite" | | 1 | "as if recoiling from something unseen" | | 2 | "not quite Evan’s" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.594 | | wordCount | 1113 | | matches | | 0 | "not physical, but deeper, like a thread tugging at her soul" | | 1 | "Not running, not walking, but something in between, a rhythm" | | 2 | "not walking, but something in between, a rhythm" | | 3 | "not words but emotions, raw" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 39.75 | | std | 21.3 | | cv | 0.536 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 75 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 22 |
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| 95.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | | 0 | "were holding" | | 1 | "was wearing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.194 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come seeking answers—or perhaps escape—but the moment she stepped through the first circle of stones, something shifted." | | 1 | "Aurora paused, her breath catching as she realized the silence wasn’t just absence of sound—it was too complete, as if the world itself were holding its breath." | | 2 | "Not the dry crack of a branch underfoot—that was natural enough—but something wetter, more deliberate." | | 3 | "That was wrong too—she’d read about Hel portals, about how artifacts reacted to them, but there shouldn’t be one here." | | 4 | "Aurora’s hand drifted to her wrist, feeling the familiar crescent scar that had been there since childhood—a small reminder of how easily things could go wrong." | | 5 | "Then she saw it—a figure standing motionless between two oaks, its outline blurred as if seen through water." | | 6 | "But the pendant burned now, searing hot against her chest, and Aurora could feel the pull—not physical, but deeper, like a thread tugging at her soul." | | 7 | "Aurora stumbled back, her heel catching on a root that hadn’t been there moments before—or had it always been part of the landscape, waiting for the right moment to reveal itself?" | | 8 | "She backed away, her sneakers scraping against stone, and that’s when she heard it—the sound of footsteps circling her, coming from all directions at once." | | 9 | "Aurora looked up to see movement in the branches of the ancient oaks, but when she focused, there was nothing—just leaves swaying in a breeze that carried the scent of decay and honeysuckle." | | 10 | "She spun around, heart hammering, and saw them—dozens of figures emerging from the shadows between the trees." | | 11 | "The flowers screamed—or maybe that was just in her mind—and the standing stones began to hum with a frequency that made her teeth ache." | | 12 | "Aurora followed it blindly, stumbling forward, and for a moment she thought she saw a doorway opening in the space between two stones—a portal of pure light that promised escape." | | 13 | "The last thing she heard before everything went black was her own name, spoken in a voice that was almost—but not quite—Evan’s." |
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| 91.33% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1122 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 56 | | adverbRatio | 0.049910873440285206 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008912655971479501 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 15.46 | | std | 8.59 | | cv | 0.555 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 66.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4166666666666667 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the whisper of wind" | | 1 | "Only the faint rustle of" | | 2 | "Then she saw it—a figure" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come seeking answers—or" | | 1 | "She glanced around, her bright" | | 2 | "It had been given to" | | 3 | "She strained her ears, listening" | | 4 | "She took another step forward," | | 5 | "It came from behind a" | | 6 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 7 | "She moved closer to the" | | 8 | "she whispered, her voice barely" | | 9 | "She wanted to step closer," | | 10 | "She backed away, her sneakers" | | 11 | "she called out, though she" | | 12 | "She spun around, heart hammering," | | 13 | "It wouldn’t be enough." | | 14 | "She started running, but the" | | 15 | "*You belong here now.*" |
| | ratio | 0.242 | |
| 73.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The path through Richmond Park" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "She had come seeking answers—or" | | 3 | "The air grew thicker, warmer" | | 4 | "Wildflowers bloomed year-round in this" | | 5 | "Aurora paused, her breath catching" | | 6 | "She glanced around, her bright" | | 7 | "The Heartstone Pendant at her" | | 8 | "It had been given to" | | 9 | "A twig snapped somewhere beyond" | | 10 | "She strained her ears, listening" | | 11 | "She took another step forward," | | 12 | "The pendant warmed against her" | | 13 | "That was wrong too—she’d read" | | 14 | "A low murmur, almost like" | | 15 | "It came from behind a" | | 16 | "Aurora’s hand drifted to her" | | 17 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 18 | "She moved closer to the" | | 19 | "The flowers leaned toward her" |
| | ratio | 0.773 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 16 | | matches | | 0 | "The path through Richmond Park had always been well-trodden during daylight hours, but now, beneath a sliver of moon that cast everything in shades of silver an…" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove stood like silent sentinels ahead, their gnarled trunks twisting upward into darkness." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed year-round in this pocket between worlds, their petals glowing faintly in hues that didn’t belong to any season." | | 3 | "Aurora paused, her breath catching as she realized the silence wasn’t just absence of sound—it was too complete, as if the world itself were holding its breath." | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant at her throat pulsed faintly, a deep crimson glow that matched the rhythm of her heartbeat." | | 5 | "Not the dry crack of a branch underfoot—that was natural enough—but something wetter, more deliberate." | | 6 | "Aurora’s hand drifted to her wrist, feeling the familiar crescent scar that had been there since childhood—a small reminder of how easily things could go wrong." | | 7 | "The flowers leaned toward her as she passed, their stems bending in ways that defied gravity." | | 8 | "The moonlight caught on something pale and smooth covering its face, making it impossible to tell if it was wearing a mask or if that was simply what remained b…" | | 9 | "The temperature dropped sharply, and the flowers began to wilt, their petals curling inward as if recoiling from something unseen." | | 10 | "Aurora stumbled back, her heel catching on a root that hadn’t been there moments before—or had it always been part of the landscape, waiting for the right momen…" | | 11 | "The figure turned its head slowly, and Aurora caught a glimpse of something behind the mask-like covering: eyes that reflected light without source, depths that…" | | 12 | "She backed away, her sneakers scraping against stone, and that’s when she heard it—the sound of footsteps circling her, coming from all directions at once." | | 13 | "Not running, not walking, but something in between, a rhythm that didn’t match any natural gait." | | 14 | "Nothing would be enough against something that moved like that, that existed in spaces that bent and twisted just beyond human comprehension." | | 15 | "The last thing she heard before everything went black was her own name, spoken in a voice that was almost—but not quite—Evan’s." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice barely audible" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |