Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD784KYNJS1Q333ZR81KET4

Run Details

Duration:
50.0s
Cost:
$0.022650
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone had been warm all evening. Aurora pressed two fingers against the pendant where it hung beneath her jacket and felt it pulse — slow, steady, like something sleeping. That was why she'd come. The stone only behaved like this near a Hel portal, and the only place in London where the world thinned enough for one was Isolde's grove. Richmond Park had closed hours ago. She'd climbed the fence near the Robin Hood Gate and walked forty minutes through dark grass, her phone torch switched off after the first five — the light made her feel watched, pinned in place. Now she stood at the line of ancient oak standing stones, and the cold between them had a texture, like breath held and held and never let out. She stepped through. The clearing looked the same as always. Wildflowers, impossibly in bloom, pale in the dark. Grass flattened in a circle at the centre. The air smelled of rain that hadn't fallen yet. What changed was the silence. The grove had always hummed — crickets, wind through the standing stones, the low undercurrent of something alive just past the edge of hearing. Tonight there was nothing. Her own footsteps arrived late, a half-beat behind each step, as though the clearing had to decide whether to let her exist in it. "Hello?" She hated herself for saying it. Nothing answered. That was the correct answer, and still her shoulders stayed up around her ears. She crossed to the centre of the clearing and crouched, pulling her coat tight. The pendant had gone from warm to hot. She lifted it over her head and laid it in the flattened grass, and the crimson stone threw a faint wash of red across the nearest blades. Somewhere beneath this clearing, a portal was waking up, or something was knocking on the other side of one. Then the crickets started. She froze. Not gradually — the sound simply arrived, all at once, loud and ordinary, as if someone had turned a dial. Except crickets didn't sing in December. And they didn't sing in perfect unison, every chirp landing on the same beat, a machine wearing the mask of a garden. "Who's there?" The chorus stopped. In the silence she heard her own pulse in her ears, and beneath it — beneath it, something breathing. Wet, patient, and close. She turned her head slowly. The standing stones ringed the clearing in black silhouettes, and between two of them, where she'd entered, there was a gap in the dark that hadn't been there before. Not a shape. A gap. An absence cut out of the night in the rough suggestion of something tall. Aurora didn't run. Running in the grove was how you lost three days and came back to find your flat let to someone else. She stood, slowly, eyes fixed on the gap, and reached for the pendant at her feet without looking down. Her fingers found grass. Then more grass. Then a warmth that wasn't the stone. She snatched her hand back. The pendant lay two feet to the left of where she'd placed it, glow dimmed to almost nothing. "Fine," she said, and her voice came out lower than she expected. "Fine. You want me to leave. I can leave." The breathing changed. It quickened — delighted, she thought, and then hated the word, because delight implied a mind, and she didn't want anything in this clearing to have a mind. She took one step backwards toward the stones, and every wildflower at the clearing's edge turned its face toward her. Not swaying. Turning. A hundred pale heads pivoting on thin stems, soundless, all at once. She stopped moving. The gap between the stones was closer now. It had crossed the clearing without crossing it — the same distance from her as before, but the clearing had rearranged itself around the two of them, and behind it, where the entrance had been, stood only more trees, denser than anything in Richmond, their branches knotted together like fingers. "Time moves differently here," she whispered. "That's all this is. That's all." She didn't believe it. The grove had quirks. This was not a quirk. This was attention. The crimson light of the pendant flared, sudden and bright, and in that flash she saw the clearing as it actually was — every flower turned to her, yes, and behind the flowers, at the edges, in the gaps between the stones, pale hands pressed flat against an invisible boundary, dozens of them, fingers spread, patiently waiting on the far side of the world's skin. The flash died. The hands went back to being darkness. But now she knew where they were. Aurora snatched up the pendant. The stone scorched her palm and she welcomed it — pain was real, pain was hers. She walked, not ran, toward the nearest pair of standing stones, the gap-in-the-dark be damned, keeping her eyes on the bark texture, the moss, anything real. The breathing matched her pace. Step. Breath. Step. Breath. It was learning her. At the boundary she stopped. Through the stones she could see the park — ordinary dead grass, the distant orange smudge of the city. One step away. Something exhaled against the back of her neck. It smelled of wildflowers and wet earth, and it was warm, and that was the worst of it — that it was warm, that it was alive, that it had stood behind her for who knew how long while she'd crouched in the grass offering her back to it like a gift. "You're not supposed to be here yet," she said, though she had no idea where the words came from. The breathing paused. Considering. Aurora stepped through the stones. The park crashed back around her — wind, distant traffic, the honest cold of December. She walked and kept walking, hand clamped around the burning pendant, and did not look back, because behind her, just on the other side of the boundary, something had begun to sing the cricket song again, one voice only, getting the rhythm slightly wrong, and practising.
created_at"2026-07-25T18:05:26.02Z" 7/25/2026, 6:05:26 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1010
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1010
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silence"
2"footsteps"
3"perfect"
4"warmth"
5"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1022
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount992
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Hel1
London1
Isolde1
Park1
Robin1
Hood1
Gate1
December2
Richmond2
Aurora4
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Isolde"
2"Robin"
3"Hood"
4"Gate"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Hel"
1"London"
2"Park"
3"December"
4"Richmond"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1022
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean30.97
std26.83
cv0.866
sampleLengths
07
154
269
33
489
57
616
768
84
950
102
113
1276
1343
1414
1523
1621
1751
1815
193
2058
2112
2216
2375
247
2560
2627
278
2852
2919
304
315
3261
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"been, stood"
80.24% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was waking"
1"was knocking"
2"was learning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences86
ratio0.14
matches
0"Aurora pressed two fingers against the pendant where it hung beneath her jacket and felt it pulse — slow, steady, like something sleeping."
1"She'd climbed the fence near the Robin Hood Gate and walked forty minutes through dark grass, her phone torch switched off after the first five — the light made her feel watched, pinned in place."
2"The grove had always hummed — crickets, wind through the standing stones, the low undercurrent of something alive just past the edge of hearing."
3"Not gradually — the sound simply arrived, all at once, loud and ordinary, as if someone had turned a dial."
4"In the silence she heard her own pulse in her ears, and beneath it — beneath it, something breathing."
5"It quickened — delighted, she thought, and then hated the word, because delight implied a mind, and she didn't want anything in this clearing to have a mind."
6"It had crossed the clearing without crossing it — the same distance from her as before, but the clearing had rearranged itself around the two of them, and behind it, where the entrance had been, stood only more trees, denser than anything in Richmond, their branches knotted together like fingers."
7"The crimson light of the pendant flared, sudden and bright, and in that flash she saw the clearing as it actually was — every flower turned to her, yes, and behind the flowers, at the edges, in the gaps between the stones, pale hands pressed flat against an invisible boundary, dozens of them, fingers spread, patiently waiting on the far side of the world's skin."
8"The stone scorched her palm and she welcomed it — pain was real, pain was hers."
9"Through the stones she could see the park — ordinary dead grass, the distant orange smudge of the city."
10"It smelled of wildflowers and wet earth, and it was warm, and that was the worst of it — that it was warm, that it was alive, that it had stood behind her for who knew how long while she'd crouched in the grass offering her back to it like a gift."
11"The park crashed back around her — wind, distant traffic, the honest cold of December."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount984
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.032520325203252036
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.012195121951219513
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean11.88
std12.48
cv1.05
sampleLengths
07
123
25
326
46
535
628
73
87
98
108
119
125
1324
144
1524
167
172
1814
1914
208
2127
2219
234
242
2520
266
2722
282
293
3019
314
325
3329
343
352
3614
373
3821
3919
404
413
427
435
4418
4512
469
473
4828
4920
67.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4418604651162791
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences72
matches
0"Somewhere beneath this clearing, a"
1"Then the crickets started."
2"Then more grass."
3"Then a warmth that wasn't"
ratio0.056
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences72
matches
0"She'd climbed the fence near"
1"She stepped through."
2"Her own footsteps arrived late,"
3"She hated herself for saying"
4"She crossed to the centre"
5"She lifted it over her"
6"She turned her head slowly."
7"She stood, slowly, eyes fixed"
8"Her fingers found grass."
9"She snatched her hand back."
10"she said, and her voice"
11"It quickened — delighted, she"
12"She took one step backwards"
13"She stopped moving."
14"It had crossed the clearing"
15"She didn't believe it."
16"She walked, not ran, toward"
17"It was learning her."
18"It smelled of wildflowers and"
19"she said, though she had"
ratio0.292
78.06% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences72
matches
0"The Heartstone had been warm"
1"Aurora pressed two fingers against"
2"That was why she'd come."
3"The stone only behaved like"
4"Richmond Park had closed hours"
5"She'd climbed the fence near"
6"She stepped through."
7"The clearing looked the same"
8"Wildflowers, impossibly in bloom, pale"
9"Grass flattened in a circle"
10"The air smelled of rain"
11"The grove had always hummed"
12"Tonight there was nothing."
13"Her own footsteps arrived late,"
14"She hated herself for saying"
15"That was the correct answer,"
16"She crossed to the centre"
17"The pendant had gone from"
18"She lifted it over her"
19"The chorus stopped."
ratio0.764
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Now she stood at the"
ratio0.014
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Her own footsteps arrived late, a half-beat behind each step, as though the clearing had to decide whether to let her exist in it."
1"Not gradually — the sound simply arrived, all at once, loud and ordinary, as if someone had turned a dial."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.286
88.0617%