Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD78HVT7BDRM4PJNQ687RZG

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.029051
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oaks at the boundary had faces by night. Aurora had noticed that on her second visit, and by her fourth she had stopped looking at them directly, because the faces changed. She ducked beneath the last of the standing stones and the sounds of Richmond Park fell away behind her — the distant traffic, the late joggers, a dog barking somewhere near the gate. All of it gone, cut off like a door had swung shut. The Grove received her the way it always did: wildflowers glowing faintly under a moon that shouldn't have been visible, the air too warm for October, grass whispering against her delivery trainers. "Isolde?" Her voice came out smaller than she wanted. No answer. That was the reason she'd come — three days of silence, three days of the Heartstone pendant warming against her sternum at odd hours, and Yu-Fei had grabbed her wrist at the end of her shift and told her, in that flat voice of hers, that a favour unanswered was a debt that grew teeth. So here she was. Midnight. Alone. Trained. The pendant gave a slow throb against her collarbone. Warm. Almost companionable. Almost. She walked the familiar path toward the clearing's centre, past the foxgloves that had bloomed the same purple for months, and she counted her steps the way she always did because the Grove stretched and shrank according to rules nobody had written down. Forty-two steps to the stone table. She'd done it a dozen times. At sixty steps, she stopped. The table was still ahead of her, still the same distance away. The flowers around her feet looked the same as the flowers she'd passed ten steps back — not similar. The same. A crushed stem, bent at the same angle, lay beside her left shoe. She had crushed it herself. Minutes ago. Behind her. "Right," she breathed. "That's new." She turned around. The boundary stones stood maybe twenty paces off, impossibly close, as if the Grove had folded itself behind her while she walked. The oaks leaned. She was sure they leaned. The bark-faces had their mouths open tonight, and she could not remember their mouths being open before. The pendant pulsed again. Harder. A heartbeat that wasn't hers. Something moved at the edge of her sight — low, between the flowers, a pale unspooling motion like a hand turning over in soil. She snapped her head toward it. Nothing. Just foxglove, swaying. There was no wind. "Isolde, this isn't funny." She hated how it echoed. Sound didn't echo in the Grove. It never had. The place swallowed noise, always had — she'd remarked on it once, how her footsteps landed like secrets. Tonight her voice bounced back at her from the trees, thinned and wrong, a half-second late, like something in the dark was practising it. She started walking again. Faster. Forty-two steps, she told herself. The table. Isolde would be there, or a note, or some fae nonsense explanation, and then she would leave and never come back at night again and Yu-Fei could settle her own debts. The flowers changed underfoot. She noticed it by the smell first — the honey-sweetness going sour, turning to something like damp earth over old meat. The white blooms had closed. All of them. She'd never seen a single one closed, not once, not in any season, and now they shut in a slow wave ahead of her feet, one after another, as if she were an infection the Grove was sealing off. The pendant went hot. She gasped and clawed the chain away from her skin, and the crimson stone hung above her chest glowing — actually glowing, a dull coal-red light she'd only ever imagined she saw before. It pulsed in a rhythm. In-out. In-out. And beneath that rhythm, under her feet, she felt it answered. A throb in the ground. Deep. Patient. Something in this place was beating, and her pendant knew the tune. "You're a portal alarm," she whispered at it, the pieces clicking together in the cold part of her brain that never stopped working even when the rest of her wanted to scream. "You pulse near a portal. Which means—" She didn't finish. Because the singing started. It came from everywhere and nowhere, a single sustained note, almost a woman's voice, almost the wind, almost the creak of the leaning oaks. It held no melody. It held no words. But it had intention — she felt that in her teeth, in the crescent scar on her wrist that had begun, absurdly, to itch. The note was calling the pendant. The pendant was answering. And she was the meat in between, wearing it. She ran. The boundary stones — twenty paces, she'd seen them — stretched away from her like the whole nightmare cliché she refused to believe in, the gap widening with every stride, and the pale thing moved in her peripheral vision again, keeping pace, low and fluid and not hurrying at all. That was the worst of it. It wasn't hurrying. It flowed between the flowers on her left, a smear of grey-white, and when she risked a glance there was nothing there but stems bending in its wake, one after another, a visible path of absence travelling beside her. She stopped. Dead. Lungs burning. It stopped too. Three flowers to her left, the bending ceased. Aurora stood very still. Her reflection looked back at her from nothing — and then she realised it wasn't nothing. There was water. A pool, black and perfectly round, sat where the stone table should have been, and her face floated on it, blue eyes wide, black hair stuck to her cheek. Except her reflection's mouth was smiling, and her own mouth was not. "You're not me," she said. The reflection's smile widened, and the singing rose to meet her voice, delighted, and the pendant seared her skin like a brand. She didn't think. Thinking was for courtrooms and essay deadlines. She ripped the chain over her head — the clasp broke, links scattering into the grass like startled silver insects — and she held the Heartstone out over the black pool, arm trembling, the reflection below her mirroring the gesture with obscene enthusiasm. "You want it?" Her voice shook and she let it shake. Shaking was honest. "Come and take it, then. All of you. But I'm walking out of here, and if anything follows me through those stones, I swear on my mother's grave—" her mother was alive, teaching Year Six in Cardiff, but the lie felt strong in her mouth, old-fashioned, the kind of lie places like this respected — "I will come back with iron and salt and every ugly thing the human world has invented, and I will pave this grove into a car park." The singing faltered. Just for a moment. A held breath. Aurora dropped the pendant into the pool. It sank without a ripple. The red glow went down and down, a dying ember descending a well, and the note in the air slid after it, greedy, gathering, all the wrongness of the Grove pouring itself into that black circle of water. The pressure on her ears vanished. The flowers around her, every one, snapped open at once — white, innocent, blooming in the moonlight as if nothing had happened at all. She didn't wait to see what rose. She turned and she walked — walked, because running had been a mistake, running was prey — toward the standing stones, forty-two paces, and she counted every one aloud in a steady voice, and behind her the black pool made a soft sound like a stone table being set for dinner, and the pale thing did not follow her, but she felt it watch her go with an attention that had weight, that pressed between her shoulder blades like a fingertip. At the boundary she passed between the oaks and the night air of Richmond Park hit her — cold, filthy, beautiful, full of traffic and foxes and the smell of rain on tarmac. A dog barked near the gate. Her phone said 11:58. She'd been inside for over an hour. Two minutes had passed out here. She stood under a ordinary, hideous streetlight and looked at her left wrist, where the crescent scar had stopped itching, and at her bare collarbone, where a red welt in the shape of a chain was already fading. The favour was unanswered. The debt had teeth. And somewhere behind her, in a place that no longer held a stone that glowed, the singing started up again — slower now, and this time, she was almost certain, it was humming her name.
created_at"2026-07-25T18:05:39.585Z" 7/25/2026, 6:05:39 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.778
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1435
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1435
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"throb"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"grave"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"throb"
2"familiar"
3"pulsed"
4"echoed"
5"echo"
6"footsteps"
7"pulse"
8"grave"
9"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences118
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen82
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1454
ratio0
matches(empty)
93.75% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Forty-two steps, she told herself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1373
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Grove6
October1
Heartstone2
Yu-Fei2
Sound1
Shaking1
Year1
Six1
Cardiff1
Aurora3
persons
0"Grove"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Sound"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like damp earth over old meat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1454
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean37.28
std29.73
cv0.797
sampleLengths
032
177
29
364
412
51
655
75
855
95
1050
1110
1238
1360
1443
1572
1662
1712
1839
197
2075
212
2298
235
2411
2564
265
2722
2853
2996
303
317
327
3373
3488
3556
3638
378
3835
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"was unanswered"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs221
matches
0"was practising"
1"was sealing"
2"was beating"
3"was calling"
4"was answering"
5"wasn't hurrying"
6"was already fading"
7"was humming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences120
ratio0.125
matches
0"She ducked beneath the last of the standing stones and the sounds of Richmond Park fell away behind her — the distant traffic, the late joggers, a dog barking somewhere near the gate."
1"That was the reason she'd come — three days of silence, three days of the Heartstone pendant warming against her sternum at odd hours, and Yu-Fei had grabbed her wrist at the end of her shift and told her, in that flat voice of hers, that a favour unanswered was a debt that grew teeth."
2"The flowers around her feet looked the same as the flowers she'd passed ten steps back — not similar."
3"Something moved at the edge of her sight — low, between the flowers, a pale unspooling motion like a hand turning over in soil."
4"The place swallowed noise, always had — she'd remarked on it once, how her footsteps landed like secrets."
5"She noticed it by the smell first — the honey-sweetness going sour, turning to something like damp earth over old meat."
6"She gasped and clawed the chain away from her skin, and the crimson stone hung above her chest glowing — actually glowing, a dull coal-red light she'd only ever imagined she saw before."
7"But it had intention — she felt that in her teeth, in the crescent scar on her wrist that had begun, absurdly, to itch."
8"The boundary stones — twenty paces, she'd seen them — stretched away from her like the whole nightmare cliché she refused to believe in, the gap widening with every stride, and the pale thing moved in her peripheral vision again, keeping pace, low and fluid and not hurrying at all."
9"Her reflection looked back at her from nothing — and then she realised it wasn't nothing."
10"She ripped the chain over her head — the clasp broke, links scattering into the grass like startled silver insects — and she held the Heartstone out over the black pool, arm trembling, the reflection below her mirroring the gesture with obscene enthusiasm."
11"The flowers around her, every one, snapped open at once — white, innocent, blooming in the moonlight as if nothing had happened at all."
12"She turned and she walked — walked, because running had been a mistake, running was prey — toward the standing stones, forty-two paces, and she counted every one aloud in a steady voice, and behind her the black pool made a soft sound like a stone table being set for dinner, and the pale thing did not follow her, but she felt it watch her go with an attention that had weight, that pressed between her shoulder blades like a fingertip."
13"At the boundary she passed between the oaks and the night air of Richmond Park hit her — cold, filthy, beautiful, full of traffic and foxes and the smell of rain on tarmac."
14"And somewhere behind her, in a place that no longer held a stone that glowed, the singing started up again — slower now, and this time, she was almost certain, it was humming her name."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1368
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"dull coal-red light"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.03654970760233918
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005116959064327485
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean12.12
std15.25
cv1.259
sampleLengths
09
123
233
312
432
59
62
755
84
91
101
111
129
131
142
151
1643
176
186
195
2012
2119
222
2313
245
252
262
273
282
293
3022
313
325
3317
344
351
365
3724
386
391
403
414
429
436
443
4518
4624
474
481
495
48.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.36666666666666664
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners44
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"Just foxglove, swaying."
1"Just for a moment."
ratio0.021
75.32% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences94
matches
0"She ducked beneath the last"
1"Her voice came out smaller"
2"She walked the familiar path"
3"She'd done it a dozen"
4"She had crushed it herself."
5"She turned around."
6"She was sure they leaned."
7"She snapped her head toward"
8"She hated how it echoed"
9"It never had."
10"She started walking again."
11"She noticed it by the"
12"She'd never seen a single"
13"She gasped and clawed the"
14"It pulsed in a rhythm."
15"she whispered at it, the"
16"She didn't finish."
17"It came from everywhere and"
18"It held no melody."
19"It held no words."
ratio0.362
61.06% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences94
matches
0"The oaks at the boundary"
1"Aurora had noticed that on"
2"She ducked beneath the last"
3"The Grove received her the"
4"Her voice came out smaller"
5"That was the reason she'd"
6"The pendant gave a slow"
7"She walked the familiar path"
8"She'd done it a dozen"
9"The table was still ahead"
10"The flowers around her feet"
11"A crushed stem, bent at"
12"She had crushed it herself."
13"She turned around."
14"The boundary stones stood maybe"
15"The oaks leaned."
16"She was sure they leaned."
17"The bark-faces had their mouths"
18"The pendant pulsed again."
19"A heartbeat that wasn't hers."
ratio0.798
53.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Because the singing started."
ratio0.011
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The Grove received her the way it always did: wildflowers glowing faintly under a moon that shouldn't have been visible, the air too warm for October, grass whi…"
1"That was the reason she'd come — three days of silence, three days of the Heartstone pendant warming against her sternum at odd hours, and Yu-Fei had grabbed he…"
2"She walked the familiar path toward the clearing's centre, past the foxgloves that had bloomed the same purple for months, and she counted her steps the way she…"
3"She'd never seen a single one closed, not once, not in any season, and now they shut in a slow wave ahead of her feet, one after another, as if she were an infe…"
4"She gasped and clawed the chain away from her skin, and the crimson stone hung above her chest glowing — actually glowing, a dull coal-red light she'd only ever…"
5"But it had intention — she felt that in her teeth, in the crescent scar on her wrist that had begun, absurdly, to itch."
6"The flowers around her, every one, snapped open at once — white, innocent, blooming in the moonlight as if nothing had happened at all."
7"She turned and she walked — walked, because running had been a mistake, running was prey — toward the standing stones, forty-two paces, and she counted every on…"
8"And somewhere behind her, in a place that no longer held a stone that glowed, the singing started up again — slower now, and this time, she was almost certain, …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.444
78.2692%