Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD78SWWQ1NM2SMZZ499PSRV

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.026119
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The body lay face-down between two stalls, arms flung wide as though reaching for the warped tiles of the old platform. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the cordon tape and straightened into the stale air of the abandoned station, her boots cracking on decades of grime. Camden Road, sealed since the sixties. The Met's records called it a disused service tunnel. The stalls said otherwise. "Quinn." DC Pettigrew peeled away from a knot of uniformed officers, notebook already open. He was young, eager, damp at the collar despite the cold. "You're going to love this one. No CCTV, no witnesses, and the station shouldn't exist." "It exists." She crouched beside the body. Male, mid-thirties, expensive coat ruined by the filth beneath him. No visible wounds. No blood. "Who found him?" "Rats, probably. A trespasser called it in at six this morning — anonymous, burner phone, gone before patrol arrived." Pettigrew flipped a page. "Pathologist's preliminary: cardiac arrest. Natural causes, most likely. Fella wanders in, ticker gives out, done." "Natural causes." Quinn lifted the dead man's left hand with a gloved finger. The fingernails were packed with verdigris, green as old pennies. "In a station locked behind three sealed maintenance doors. Which he opened how?" "Urban explorers find ways in. You know what they're like." She didn't answer. She was looking at the stalls. There were eleven of them, arranged in a horseshoe around the platform's old ticket line. Not the work of squatters — squatters didn't build counters from black lacquered wood or hang their wares on silver hooks. Quinn walked the arc slowly, catalogue running in her head. Jars of what looked like dried insects, labelled in a script she didn't recognise. Bundles of bone carved into tokens. A scale of brass, impossibly fine, its pans dusted with grey powder. "A market," Pettigrew said at her shoulder. "Drugs, I'd stake my warrant on it. Some new designer thing. These people set up, our man samples the merchandise, drops dead, they scatter." "Scatter." Quinn turned in place. "Look at the floor, Pettigrew." He looked. "Dirt. Rat droppings. The usual." "Eleven stalls. Full stock — nobody packed anything. No drag marks, no crates, no wheel tracks. If a dozen dealers cleared out of here in a panic, where are their footprints?" She pointed. The grime on the platform lay in one unbroken skin, disturbed only by the police cordon path, the anonymous caller's scuffed trainers by the stairwell, and a single set of prints belonging to the victim — arriving. Never leaving. Pettigrew's mouth opened, then shut. "And there's this." Quinn crossed to the body again and knelt. Near the dead man's outstretched right hand, something had burned a ring into the tile — a perfect circle, black-edged, no wider than a dinner plate. She'd assumed it was old damage from the walkway. Up close, the soot was fresh. It came off on her glove like yesterday's ash. "Bag this. Full spectrum." "It's a scorch mark, guv. Kids with lighters." "In a circle. Geometrically perfect." She held his gaze until he reached for an evidence bag. She moved along the horseshoe, slower now. At the third stall her eye caught on the brass scale. The grey dust in its left pan formed a tiny heap, undisturbed — but the right pan held an indentation, a shallow bowl pressed into nothing, as though weight had sat there recently and been lifted away. She photographed it from three angles. At the seventh stall, a mirror in a lead frame showed her the platform behind her. She almost walked past. Then she stopped, because the reflection showed twelve stalls. She turned. Eleven. Looked again at the mirror. Twelve — the twelfth dark, shuttered, positioned exactly where the dead man had fallen. Quinn's hand went still on the mirror's frame. She'd seen a staged scene before, three years ago, a corridor where the angles hadn't worked and Morris had joked about ghosts right up until the stairwell gave way under him. The official report had called it structural failure. She'd never found a contractor's name in the file. "Guv?" Pettigrew had wandered to the far end. "Found something. Cash box under this counter. Full. If they ran, why leave the money?" "Because they didn't run." Quinn joined him, crouched, and studied the box without touching it. Notes in rubber-banded stacks, more money than a Camden dealer saw in a month. Beside it, a single bone token, thumb-sized, carved with a spiral. "They didn't take their stock, their cash, or their scales. They took nothing, Pettigrew. Which means they weren't fleeing us." "Then what — " "They were gone before he died." She stood, working it through. "The market closed first. Look at the dust on the jars — settled, a day old at least, but the counters are wiped clean. Deliberate. Orderly. Then our victim arrives, alone, after they've gone. His prints come down the stairs and stop at the circle." She pointed with her pen. "He wasn't running from anything either. His stride's even. He walked to that spot and stood there." "And had a heart attack. On a scorch mark." "And clawed something with his fingernails hard enough to pack them with copper patina." Quinn held up the photograph of his hand on her phone screen. "There's nothing copper within reach of that body. I've checked. But there's this." She led him back to the first stall, to a dish of small brass objects — compasses, a dozen of them, faces etched with dense spiralling marks. She lifted one with her pen. Verdigris bloomed across its casing, green on green. "Same corrosion. He handled one of these. Recently. But there's no compass on the body, none in his pockets — I watched them turn the coat." Pettigrew stared at the dish. "So someone took it off him. After he died. Without leaving footprints." "Without leaving footprints," Quinn agreed, and set the compass back with the others. One of them, she noticed, had a needle that didn't point north. It pointed, trembling, at the scorched circle on the tiles. She looked at it for a long moment. Then she photographed it, logged it, and slipped it into an evidence bag herself rather than trusting it to Pettigrew's fumbling hands. "Write it up as suspicious death," she said. "Not natural causes. Full forensic sweep of the whole platform, every stall, every jar. I want the anonymous caller found. And Pettigrew — " "Guv?" "The scorch mark, the missing twelfth stall in the mirror, the compass. None of that goes in the report until I say so." He frowned. "That's evidence." "That's a career-ending report, is what that is, until we can explain it." Quinn looked back at the horseshoe of stalls, at the market that had closed itself up and vanished a full day before a dead man came looking for it. Something had been sold here. Something had gone wrong with the sale. And the buyer had come back to an empty room and died at the exact spot where the door used to be. She clicked her torch on against the tunnel dark and started toward the stairwell, the bagged compass heavy in her pocket, its needle still pulling toward the circle like a dog on a lead.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"DC Pettigrew peeled away [away]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.436
leniency0.872
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.051
95.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1201
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1201
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"perfect"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"weight"
2"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1215
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.63% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount789
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn10
Road1
Met1
Pettigrew7
Male1
Morris1
Notes1
Camden2
One1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Met"
3"Pettigrew"
4"Morris"
places
0"Road"
1"Camden"
2"One"
globalScore0.866
windowScore1
51.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though reaching for the warped tiles of the old platform"
1"looked like dried insects, labelled in a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1215
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean34.71
std24.4
cv0.703
sampleLengths
065
140
225
338
436
510
69
778
831
910
107
1172
125
1365
148
1516
1661
1751
1856
1923
2060
214
2278
239
2439
2567
2617
2735
2830
2932
301
3123
324
3376
3434
90.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences73
matches
0"were packed"
1"been lifted"
2"been sold"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences95
ratio0.063
matches
0"Not the work of squatters — squatters didn't build counters from black lacquered wood or hang their wares on silver hooks."
1"The grime on the platform lay in one unbroken skin, disturbed only by the police cordon path, the anonymous caller's scuffed trainers by the stairwell, and a single set of prints belonging to the victim — arriving."
2"Near the dead man's outstretched right hand, something had burned a ring into the tile — a perfect circle, black-edged, no wider than a dinner plate."
3"The grey dust in its left pan formed a tiny heap, undisturbed — but the right pan held an indentation, a shallow bowl pressed into nothing, as though weight had sat there recently and been lifted away."
4"Twelve — the twelfth dark, shuttered, positioned exactly where the dead man had fallen."
5"She led him back to the first stall, to a dish of small brass objects — compasses, a dozen of them, faces etched with dense spiralling marks."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount788
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.025380710659898477
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006345177664974619
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean12.79
std9.77
cv0.764
sampleLengths
021
125
26
39
44
514
611
715
87
910
103
112
123
1323
1415
1513
1610
1713
1810
193
206
2115
2221
2310
2414
256
2612
277
2824
295
305
312
325
3333
3437
352
365
3711
3826
399
406
419
424
438
4416
457
4611
4737
486
4916
79.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.5263157894736842
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"Then she stopped, because the"
1"Then she photographed it, logged"
ratio0.031
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences65
matches
0"He was young, eager, damp"
1"She crouched beside the body"
2"She didn't answer."
3"She was looking at the"
4"She'd assumed it was old"
5"It came off on her"
6"She held his gaze until"
7"She moved along the horseshoe,"
8"She photographed it from three"
9"She almost walked past."
10"She'd seen a staged scene"
11"She'd never found a contractor's"
12"She stood, working it through"
13"She pointed with her pen"
14"She led him back to"
15"She lifted one with her"
16"It pointed, trembling, at the"
17"She looked at it for"
18"She clicked her torch on"
ratio0.292
83.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences65
matches
0"The body lay face-down between"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"Camden Road, sealed since the"
3"The Met's records called it"
4"The stalls said otherwise."
5"DC Pettigrew peeled away from"
6"He was young, eager, damp"
7"She crouched beside the body"
8"Pettigrew flipped a page"
9"Quinn lifted the dead man's"
10"The fingernails were packed with"
11"She didn't answer."
12"She was looking at the"
13"Quinn walked the arc slowly,"
14"Jars of what looked like"
15"A scale of brass, impossibly"
16"Pettigrew said at her shoulder"
17"Quinn turned in place"
18"The grime on the platform"
19"Pettigrew's mouth opened, then shut."
ratio0.754
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The body lay face-down between two stalls, arms flung wide as though reaching for the warped tiles of the old platform."
1"The grey dust in its left pan formed a tiny heap, undisturbed — but the right pan held an indentation, a shallow bowl pressed into nothing, as though weight had…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.051
88.5569%