Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7AAE55X1P53X2EXZAFWJP

Run Details

Duration:
11.8s
Cost:
$0.000307
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Aurora could finish unlatching the second deadbolt. Lucien stood in the hallway, one hand pressed against the frame where she’d shoved it wide enough to slip through. His charcoal suit was rumpled, the platinum streak in his hair disheveled, and there was a fresh scratch across his left cheekbone that hadn’t been there yesterday when he’d left her with promises of a proper dinner in London. The ivory handle of his cane peeked from beneath his coat, and when he stepped into the room, she caught the faint scent of bergamot and something darker—like smoke from a distant fire. “Rory.” She should have pulled the door shut. Should have said *not now*. But her fingers were already tracing the scar on her wrist, a nervous habit when her pulse spiked, and her bright blue eyes were fixed on his heterochromatic ones—the amber one burning with something desperate, the black one unreadable as ever. “You said two weeks.” “I needed to see you before I left the city.” His voice carried that French lilt she used to pretend not to notice. “And I needed to see you before I could leave.” The flat smelled like old paper and cardamom tea. Books sprawled across every surface, scrolls tucked into crevices, Eva’s handwriting bleeding into margins. Ptolemy the tabby had vanished somewhere behind the couch, leaving only a tuft of fur and the ghost of his presence. Three deadbolts. Always three. She’d never been this careless. “I wasn’t expecting a guest.” “You never do.” He stepped further inside, cane tapping once against the floorboard. A sound like a metronome counting down. “I’m sorry about that. I should have called.” “You wouldn’t have.” “No.” He let out a breath she realized she’d been holding. “I wouldn’t have.” The air between them thickened. She crossed to the window, fingers splayed against the glass, watching the rain streak down the bricks of the curry house below. Her delivery uniform still hung crumpled in the hallway basket—Yu-Fei would have it back tomorrow. Instead, she was here, in Eva’s flat, with a man who’d once saved her life in a back alley behind Leicester Square and left with a kiss that tasted like danger. “What changed?” she asked. His knee bent, just slightly, as if bracing against something. When he spoke, it was softer now. “The same thing that made you run from Evan.” She turned then, and the scar on her wrist caught the lamplight. “Don’t.” “Don’t what? Tell me I’m not the only one who’s been thinking about you?” The words hit like a whip crack. She should have seen this coming. Should have known that when Lucien Moreau—the Frenchman with the cane and the secrets and the way he looked at her like she was the only honest thing in his crooked world—walked away, it would leave a hollow space shaped exactly like his absence. But she hadn’t. And now here he was, standing in her flat, breathing the same air she had for the past three months. “You left,” she said. “I had to.” He removed his coat, revealing the faint bruising along his ribs. “There are things happening, Rory. Things that need—” “I know what you do.” She crossed the room anyway, stopping a foot away. Close enough to see the pulse in his throat, the way his amber eye dilated when he looked at her. “Information broker. Fixer. Mercenary with a heart of—” “Gold,” he finished. She laughed, bitter and sharp. “You always did romanticize the job.” “You always did listen to me.” The space between them crackled. She wanted to believe it was just the storm outside, the way the power had flickered twice already, the way the building settled with little groans and sighs. But no. It was them. The way her breath caught when he smiled, how his hand twitched toward his cane like it was a reflex she’d never quite understood. “So what do you want?” she asked. “To talk.” “About what?” “About us.” She stepped back, her heel catching the edge of Eva’s Persian rug. “You don’t get to say that word.” “I didn’t say anything.” “Yes, you did.” She wiped her palms on her jeans, hard enough to leave marks. “You said *us*. Like we’re something you can just—” “I can help you.” The admission came out low, almost reverent. “You can’t help me, Lucien. I’m not—” “I know.” He was closer now, close enough that she could smell the bergamot again, mixed with something metallic. “I know you’re not the type. But I need you to understand—this isn’t about me.” “Then whose side are you on?” The question hung in the air, heavy with everything they’d never spoken about. The way she’d woken up to his silhouette against the bedroom curtains, the way he’d pressed his lips to her temple before vanishing into the London fog. The way she’d told herself it was just a mistake, just a moment of weakness during a time when she needed strength more than she needed him. But now, standing in this cramped flat with rain drumming against the windows and the cat watching from behind the couch, she wondered if it had been a mistake at all. “What’s really going on?” she asked. His fingers found his cane, and she saw the way his jaw tightened when he didn’t pull it free. “My father,” he said. “The realm of Avaros is collapsing. Demons are breaking through, and if I don’t—” “I don’t care about your family drama.” “You always did.” She turned away, gripping the windowsill until her knuckles went white. “Why now? Why not before?” “Because you’re the only one who can help me get to the Veil Gate.” He turned fully then, studying her face with an intensity that made her knees weak. “Because if I go in without you, I won’t come back out.” The admission shocked her. Not the part about the gate, or the demons, or whatever else was tearing through his world. But the part about her. About how she mattered to him. About how she’d mattered to him when she’d been willing to walk away. “You said we were done.” “I was wrong.” “About what?” “Everything.” The honesty stripped something open in her chest. She wanted to argue. Wanted to say she didn’t trust him, didn’t trust the way his eyes went soft when he looked at her, didn’t trust that this was another one of his elaborate schemes. But when had she ever been the type to run from a truth? “What do I have to do?” she asked. His hand found hers before she could pull away, and she felt the heat of it even through the space between them. “Trust me.” And maybe, just maybe, that was the hardest thing of all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He stepped further [further]"
1"He turned fully [fully]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.612
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.082
91.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1145
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1145
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"lilt"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"pulse"
2"unreadable"
3"lilt"
4"flickered"
5"intensity"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"knuckles went white"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords3
totalWords1139
ratio0.003
matches
0"not now"
1"us"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount878
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.34
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
London2
French1
Eva3
Yu1
Fei1
Leicester1
Square1
Lucien2
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Close1
Persian1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Fei"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
places
0"London"
1"Leicester"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like old paper and cardamom tea"
1"tasted like danger"
2"as if bracing against something"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1139
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"carried that French"
1"trust that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean21.9
std23.07
cv1.053
sampleLengths
012
192
21
353
44
533
653
75
828
93
1014
1173
124
1326
1413
1514
1680
174
1822
1942
203
2111
226
2362
247
252
262
272
2819
294
3024
314
3214
3334
346
3567
3631
376
3837
397
403
4116
4241
4345
445
453
462
471
4856
498
94.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"was rumpled"
1"were fixed"
66.67% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs150
matches
0"were already tracing"
1"was, standing"
2"was tearing"
29.70% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences101
ratio0.04
matches
0"The ivory handle of his cane peeked from beneath his coat, and when he stepped into the room, she caught the faint scent of bergamot and something darker—like smoke from a distant fire."
1"But her fingers were already tracing the scar on her wrist, a nervous habit when her pulse spiked, and her bright blue eyes were fixed on his heterochromatic ones—the amber one burning with something desperate, the black one unreadable as ever."
2"Her delivery uniform still hung crumpled in the hallway basket—Yu-Fei would have it back tomorrow."
3"Should have known that when Lucien Moreau—the Frenchman with the cane and the secrets and the way he looked at her like she was the only honest thing in his crooked world—walked away, it would leave a hollow space shaped exactly like his absence."
92.39% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount883
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.04869762174405436
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0056625141562853904
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean11.28
std9.55
cv0.847
sampleLengths
012
120
239
333
41
57
65
741
84
923
1010
119
1214
1321
142
152
165
175
1813
197
208
213
2211
233
245
2522
2615
2731
284
2910
307
319
3212
331
3414
357
366
3744
383
3920
404
4114
428
4314
4420
458
463
475
486
496
54.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.37623762376237624
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners38
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Instead, she was here, in"
ratio0.018
51.58% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences57
matches
0"His charcoal suit was rumpled,"
1"She should have pulled the"
2"His voice carried that French"
3"She’d never been this careless."
4"He stepped further inside, cane"
5"He let out a breath"
6"She crossed to the window,"
7"Her delivery uniform still hung"
8"His knee bent, just slightly,"
9"She turned then, and the"
10"She should have seen this"
11"He removed his coat, revealing"
12"She crossed the room anyway,"
13"She laughed, bitter and sharp."
14"She wanted to believe it"
15"It was them."
16"She stepped back, her heel"
17"She wiped her palms on"
18"He was closer now, close"
19"His fingers found his cane,"
ratio0.421
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences57
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Lucien stood in the hallway,"
2"His charcoal suit was rumpled,"
3"The ivory handle of his"
4"She should have pulled the"
5"His voice carried that French"
6"The flat smelled like old"
7"Books sprawled across every surface,"
8"Ptolemy the tabby had vanished"
9"She’d never been this careless."
10"He stepped further inside, cane"
11"A sound like a metronome"
12"He let out a breath"
13"The air between them thickened."
14"She crossed to the window,"
15"Her delivery uniform still hung"
16"His knee bent, just slightly,"
17"She turned then, and the"
18"The words hit like a"
19"She should have seen this"
ratio0.719
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His charcoal suit was rumpled, the platinum streak in his hair disheveled, and there was a fresh scratch across his left cheekbone that hadn’t been there yester…"
1"His knee bent, just slightly, as if bracing against something."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He stepped further, cane tapping once against the floorboard"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.122
leniency0.245
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.9776%