Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7AQSSK5QZY74EXFS5BBJJ

Run Details

Duration:
56.9s
Cost:
$0.023356
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past midnight — three measured raps, spaced like punctuation. Rory froze over the sink, a chipped mug still dripping in her hand. Nobody knocked at her door at this hour. Deliveries ended at eleven, and Silas' bar below had gone quiet an hour ago. She set the mug down, wiped her hands on her jeans, and crossed the flat in four strides, pressing one eye to the peephole. Platinum hair, slicked back. A charcoal suit that cost more than six months of her rent. One amber eye and one black, both angled directly at the lens as though he knew exactly where she stood. Her stomach dropped through the floorboards. She opened the door on the chain. "You've got to be joking." "Aurora." Lucien Moreau leaned on his ivory-handled cane, rain jewelling his shoulders, and gave her the ghost of a bow. "You look well." "You look like a man about to be told to piss off." "And yet here we both are." Eight months. Eight months since she'd walked out of his office in Canary Wharf with his card burning a hole in her pocket and his voice in her ears — *you're making a mistake, chérie* — and she'd told him the only mistake she'd made was trusting a fixer to feel anything at all. She'd meant it at the time. She meant it now. Probably. "What do you want, Lucien?" "May I come in? It's rather theatrical, conducting one's business through a crack in a door." "We don't have any business." The amber eye held hers. The black one seemed to look somewhere behind it. "Then indulge an old acquaintance sheltering from the rain." She should have shut the door. Every rational instinct — the barrister's daughter instincts, the ones her father had drilled into her over Sunday roasts in Cardiff — screamed it. Instead she slid the chain off and stepped back, and hated herself a little for how carefully she didn't let their hands touch as he passed. He filled her flat the way he filled every room: completely, and without apology. His gaze travelled over the single bed, the stack of delivery bags by the door, the kettle still steaming, the law textbooks she'd never sold because selling them felt like a funeral. "Cozy," he said. "Don't." "I meant it kindly." "You never mean anything kindly. You mean things strategically." He set the cane against the wall and turned to face her, and something shifted behind his face — a crack in the polish, brief as a blink. "Fair. I deserved that." "You're soaked through. Why didn't you take a car?" "I walked." "You don't walk anywhere." "Tonight I walked." He unbuttoned his jacket with slow fingers, and she saw it then — the dark bloom along his left side, blacker than the rain. Blood. "Because the men following my cars tonight work for people I'd rather not lead to your door." The mug she was holding hit the counter harder than intended. "You're hurt. You're *bleeding*, and you came *here*?" "You're hurt, you're bleeding — I had considered several destinations. This was the only one where the occupant wouldn't sell my location before the kettle boiled." He lowered himself into her one chair with a care that betrayed how much it cost him. "Also, I may have wanted to see you. The two facts coexisted." "Get the jacket off. All the way off." She was already moving, dragging the first aid kit from under the sink, the one she'd stocked after a scooter crash on Commercial Road. "Don't sit there bleeding on my chair being enigmatic." "I wouldn't dream of it." "You dream of nothing else." The jacket came off, then the shirt, peeled from the wound with a hiss he tried to disguise as a breath. A gash ran along his ribs — clean, deliberate, the kind left by something with an edge. She knelt beside the chair and pressed gauze against it, and his hand came up to cover hers, steadying it or himself, she couldn't tell. "Who did this?" "A disagreement over merchandise." "Lucien." "Aurora." His mismatched eyes dropped to hers, close now, close enough that she could see the rain still caught in his lashes. "I will tell you everything. But first I need you to know I didn't come here for the wound." Her hand had stopped moving under his. She became aware of every point of contact — his palm, her knuckles, the warmth of him, the crescent scar on her wrist turning white where her own fingers curled. "Then why did you come?" Silence stretched. The rain ticked against the window. "The night you left my office," he said finally, "you told me I was incapable of feeling anything. I have spent eight months composing rebuttals. Four languages. Some of them were quite good." "I bet they were." "None of them survived the sight of your door." His thumb moved once across the back of her hand, a single stroke, as though testing whether he was allowed. "The truth is less elegant. You were right. I had spent so long being useful to everyone that I had become useful to no one, least of all myself. And you—" He exhaled. "You were the only person in London who never asked me for anything. Do you understand what that did to me? I kept waiting for the invoice. It never came. It terrified me." Rory sat back on her heels, the gauze red between them. "So you disappeared." "I retreated. It is a distinction." "It felt the same from my side." "I know." The black eye and the amber one both held her now, unguarded in a way she'd never once seen in him — no angle, no leverage, no next move. "That is the other thing I came to say. I know. I am sorry, Rory. Not strategically. Kindly." The kettle clicked off behind them, forgotten. Rain softened against the glass. Somewhere below, the bar's pipes groaned, and she thought of eight months of telling Eva she was over it, eight months of checking the street outside the Golden Empress for a charcoal suit that never appeared. "You walked across London bleeding," she said, "to apologise." "And to see if you'd open the door." A faint smile. "The evidence was inconclusive until very recently." She should have been angry. Part of her was — the part that remembered staring at her phone in February, the part that had rehearsed a withering speech for exactly this moment. But his hand was still around hers, warm and unsteady, and the man who never showed anyone anything was sitting half-naked in her secondhand chair with his heart in his face. "You're going to get blood on my chair," she said, and reached for the fresh gauze, and didn't move away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"His thumb moved once [once]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.283
leniency0.565
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.087
86.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1134
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"completely"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1134
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"enigmatic"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"stomach"
2"enigmatic"
3"warmth"
4"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords7
totalWords1146
ratio0.006
matches
0"you're making a mistake, chérie"
1"bleeding"
2"here"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount742
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.27
worstName"Eight"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eight"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eight2
Canary1
Wharf1
Sunday1
Cardiff1
Blood1
Commercial1
Road1
Rory2
Eva1
Golden1
Empress1
February1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
places
0"Canary"
1"Cardiff"
2"Commercial"
3"Road"
4"Golden"
5"February"
globalScore1
windowScore1
14.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a funeral"
1"as though testing whether he was allowed"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1146
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean23.88
std22.63
cv0.948
sampleLengths
014
159
236
36
412
523
612
76
865
95
1016
115
1223
1356
1446
153
161
174
189
1932
209
212
224
2345
2419
2555
2641
275
285
2963
303
314
321
3341
3442
358
3633
374
3895
3914
406
417
4249
4348
449
4518
4663
4720
98.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"was allowed"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs115
matches
0"was trusting"
1"was holding"
2"was already moving"
3"was sitting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences85
ratio0.106
matches
0"The knock came at half past midnight — three measured raps, spaced like punctuation."
1"Eight months since she'd walked out of his office in Canary Wharf with his card burning a hole in her pocket and his voice in her ears — *you're making a mistake, chérie* — and she'd told him the only mistake she'd made was trusting a fixer to feel anything at all."
2"Every rational instinct — the barrister's daughter instincts, the ones her father had drilled into her over Sunday roasts in Cardiff — screamed it."
3"He set the cane against the wall and turned to face her, and something shifted behind his face — a crack in the polish, brief as a blink."
4"\"Tonight I walked.\" He unbuttoned his jacket with slow fingers, and she saw it then — the dark bloom along his left side, blacker than the rain."
5"A gash ran along his ribs — clean, deliberate, the kind left by something with an edge."
6"She became aware of every point of contact — his palm, her knuckles, the warmth of him, the crescent scar on her wrist turning white where her own fingers curled."
7"\"I know.\" The black eye and the amber one both held her now, unguarded in a way she'd never once seen in him — no angle, no leverage, no next move."
8"Part of her was — the part that remembered staring at her phone in February, the part that had rehearsed a withering speech for exactly this moment."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount342
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.029239766081871343
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.011695906432748537
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean13.48
std11.24
cv0.833
sampleLengths
014
113
28
314
424
54
612
720
86
97
105
1120
123
1312
146
152
1652
176
184
191
205
2116
225
235
249
259
266
2724
2826
2914
3032
313
321
334
349
3528
364
379
382
394
4027
411
4217
4311
448
4543
4612
4732
489
495
75.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.49411764705882355
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences45
matches
0"Instead she slid the chain"
1"Somewhere below, the bar's pipes"
ratio0.044
42.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences45
matches
0"She set the mug down,"
1"Her stomach dropped through the"
2"She opened the door on"
3"She'd meant it at the"
4"She meant it now."
5"She should have shut the"
6"He filled her flat the"
7"His gaze travelled over the"
8"He set the cane against"
9"He unbuttoned his jacket with"
10"He lowered himself into her"
11"She was already moving, dragging"
12"She knelt beside the chair"
13"His mismatched eyes dropped to"
14"Her hand had stopped moving"
15"She became aware of every"
16"he said finally"
17"His thumb moved once across"
18"She should have been angry."
19"she said, and reached for"
ratio0.444
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences45
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory froze over the sink,"
2"Nobody knocked at her door"
3"Deliveries ended at eleven, and"
4"She set the mug down,"
5"Platinum hair, slicked back."
6"A charcoal suit that cost"
7"Her stomach dropped through the"
8"She opened the door on"
9"Lucien Moreau leaned on his"
10"She'd meant it at the"
11"She meant it now."
12"The amber eye held hers."
13"The black one seemed to"
14"She should have shut the"
15"Every rational instinct — the"
16"He filled her flat the"
17"His gaze travelled over the"
18"He set the cane against"
19"He unbuttoned his jacket with"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Eight months since she'd walked out of his office in Canary Wharf with his card burning a hole in her pocket and his voice in her ears — *you're making a mistak…"
1"Part of her was — the part that remembered staring at her phone in February, the part that had rehearsed a withering speech for exactly this moment."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.087
leniency0.174
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.0173%