| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "His thumb moved once [once]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.283 | | leniency | 0.565 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |
| 86.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1134 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 77.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1134 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "measured" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "enigmatic" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1146 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "you're making a mistake, chérie" | | 1 | "bleeding" | | 2 | "here" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 742 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.27 | | worstName | "Eight" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Eight" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Eight | 2 | | Canary | 1 | | Wharf | 1 | | Sunday | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Blood | 1 | | Commercial | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Rory | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | February | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Canary" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "Commercial" | | 3 | "Road" | | 4 | "Golden" | | 5 | "February" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 14.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a funeral" | | 1 | "as though testing whether he was allowed" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 23.88 | | std | 22.63 | | cv | 0.948 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 63 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 42 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 95 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 49 | | 43 | 48 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 63 | | 47 | 20 |
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| 98.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "was trusting" | | 1 | "was holding" | | 2 | "was already moving" | | 3 | "was sitting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.106 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half past midnight — three measured raps, spaced like punctuation." | | 1 | "Eight months since she'd walked out of his office in Canary Wharf with his card burning a hole in her pocket and his voice in her ears — *you're making a mistake, chérie* — and she'd told him the only mistake she'd made was trusting a fixer to feel anything at all." | | 2 | "Every rational instinct — the barrister's daughter instincts, the ones her father had drilled into her over Sunday roasts in Cardiff — screamed it." | | 3 | "He set the cane against the wall and turned to face her, and something shifted behind his face — a crack in the polish, brief as a blink." | | 4 | "\"Tonight I walked.\" He unbuttoned his jacket with slow fingers, and she saw it then — the dark bloom along his left side, blacker than the rain." | | 5 | "A gash ran along his ribs — clean, deliberate, the kind left by something with an edge." | | 6 | "She became aware of every point of contact — his palm, her knuckles, the warmth of him, the crescent scar on her wrist turning white where her own fingers curled." | | 7 | "\"I know.\" The black eye and the amber one both held her now, unguarded in a way she'd never once seen in him — no angle, no leverage, no next move." | | 8 | "Part of her was — the part that remembered staring at her phone in February, the part that had rehearsed a withering speech for exactly this moment." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 342 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 10 | | adverbRatio | 0.029239766081871343 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011695906432748537 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 13.48 | | std | 11.24 | | cv | 0.833 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 43 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 75.29% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.49411764705882355 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she slid the chain" | | 1 | "Somewhere below, the bar's pipes" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 42.22% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "She set the mug down," | | 1 | "Her stomach dropped through the" | | 2 | "She opened the door on" | | 3 | "She'd meant it at the" | | 4 | "She meant it now." | | 5 | "She should have shut the" | | 6 | "He filled her flat the" | | 7 | "His gaze travelled over the" | | 8 | "He set the cane against" | | 9 | "He unbuttoned his jacket with" | | 10 | "He lowered himself into her" | | 11 | "She was already moving, dragging" | | 12 | "She knelt beside the chair" | | 13 | "His mismatched eyes dropped to" | | 14 | "Her hand had stopped moving" | | 15 | "She became aware of every" | | 16 | "he said finally" | | 17 | "His thumb moved once across" | | 18 | "She should have been angry." | | 19 | "she said, and reached for" |
| | ratio | 0.444 | |
| 15.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half" | | 1 | "Rory froze over the sink," | | 2 | "Nobody knocked at her door" | | 3 | "Deliveries ended at eleven, and" | | 4 | "She set the mug down," | | 5 | "Platinum hair, slicked back." | | 6 | "A charcoal suit that cost" | | 7 | "Her stomach dropped through the" | | 8 | "She opened the door on" | | 9 | "Lucien Moreau leaned on his" | | 10 | "She'd meant it at the" | | 11 | "She meant it now." | | 12 | "The amber eye held hers." | | 13 | "The black one seemed to" | | 14 | "She should have shut the" | | 15 | "Every rational instinct — the" | | 16 | "He filled her flat the" | | 17 | "His gaze travelled over the" | | 18 | "He set the cane against" | | 19 | "He unbuttoned his jacket with" |
| | ratio | 0.889 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 20 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Eight months since she'd walked out of his office in Canary Wharf with his card burning a hole in her pocket and his voice in her ears — *you're making a mistak…" | | 1 | "Part of her was — the part that remembered staring at her phone in February, the part that had rehearsed a withering speech for exactly this moment." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.087 | | leniency | 0.174 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |