Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7CBT4WDW1YPBEAK522GKB

Run Details

Duration:
24.0s
Cost:
$0.000464
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The key turned in the lock with a click that echoed too loudly in the narrow hallway. Aurora Carter stood frozen in the doorway of her flat, one hand still clutching the delivery bag from the Golden Empress, the other gripping the doorframe like it might give her something to hold onto. The scent of jasmine incense and old books spilled out before she even opened the door fully, and her stomach clenched. She’d been expecting Silas to call about the late-night shift, not this. The door swung open another six inches, revealing a sliver of the cramped one-bedroom above the curry house on Brick Lane. Aurora stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, her heels clicking against the worn floorboards. The tabby cat perched on the windowsill arched his back and let out a low hiss, fur bristling. “Ptolemy, shh,” she murmured, but her voice caught in her throat when she saw who was sitting cross-legged on the threadbare sofa, thumbing through one of the many scrolls that covered every available surface. Lucien Moreau looked up slowly, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers—one amber, one black—as if measuring her reaction. The ivory handle of his cane caught the dim lamplight, glinting like a promise. He didn’t look surprised to see her, but there was something else in that gaze, something sharp and unreadable. “You’re late,” he said, his French accent curling around the words like smoke. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the delivery bag until the cardboard creaked. “I had deliveries.” “Mm. And yet here you are.” He set the scroll aside with deliberate care, watching her take in the room—the stacks of books, the scattered notes written in languages she couldn’t read, the way the shadows clung to his tailored charcoal suit even in the fading light. “You always were good at finding your way back to trouble.” She crossed her arms, feeling the familiar weight of her left wrist where the crescent-shaped scar from childhood pressed against her skin. “And you always were good at making an entrance.” “I didn’t knock.” “No,” she agreed. “You never do.” The silence stretched between them, thick with everything they’d left unsaid the last time they’d stood this close. Three months ago, she’d walked out of his flat on the other side of town with her pride in tatters and her heart in pieces, and he’d let her go without so much as raising his blade. “Sit,” he said, nodding toward the armchair across from the sofa. “Unless you’re here to arrest me.” “I’m not with the police.” “Not yet.” Aurora sank into the chair, her legs crossing at the knee, hands folded neatly in her lap. The delivery bag slipped from her shoulder and landed with a soft thud beside her foot. Ptolemy crept down from the windowsill and circled her ankles before settling at her feet, tail twitching. “You’ve been asking questions,” she said instead of answering the question she knew he was dying to ask. Lucien’s lips quirked in something that might have been a smile. “And you’ve been avoiding my calls.” “I’ve been busy.” “With deliveries.” “With life.” He leaned back, steepling his fingers. The cane rested against his thigh, the blade concealed but never far from reach. “You ran to London to escape one ghost, Rory. You didn’t think I’d follow?” “I didn’t think you cared enough to.” That stopped him. For a heartbeat, something raw flickered across his face—something she hadn’t seen since the night she’d left, since the argument that had ended with slammed doors and slammed phones and a silence that had lasted longer than either of them cared to admit. “Care?” His voice was quieter now, rougher. “You think I care about anything?” She studied him then, really studied him. The way his platinum blond hair fell across his forehead in careless waves despite his usual fastidiousness. The way his amber eye seemed to glow in the lamplight while the black one remained dark as obsidian. The way he held himself like a man who’d spent too long playing the part of someone untouchable. “You cared enough to find me,” she said. “I needed information.” “About me?” “About what you know.” Aurora’s jaw tightened. She could feel the pulse in her neck, steady and defiant. “What I know about you? Lucien, I know you’re a half-demon fixer who deals in secrets and lies. I know you sleep with a blade under your pillow and a loaded crossword puzzle on your coffee table. I know—” “You know nothing.” The words were sharp, but there was no real anger in them. Just exhaustion. The kind that came from carrying too much weight for too long. She leaned forward, resting her elbows on her knees. “Then tell me. Tell me why you really showed up here tonight.” He was quiet for a long moment, and when he spoke again, his voice had dropped to something barely above a whisper. “Because every time I close my eyes, I see you walking away from me. And I’m tired of seeing you leave.” The room seemed to shrink around them, the walls closing in on all the space they’d built up over the past three months. Aurora felt her breath catch in her chest, felt the familiar flutter of hope mixed with fear. “You said—” “I lied.” “About what?” “About not caring.” Ptolemy meowed softly from the floor, and Aurora glanced down to see him batting at something beneath the chair. When she looked back up, Lucien was watching her with an intensity that made her pulse race. “You came here uninvited,” she said. “I needed to see you.” “You needed information.” “I needed both.” She closed her eyes for a moment, feeling the weight of every unspoken word pressing down on her ribs. When she opened them again, she reached for her left wrist, tracing the scar with her fingertip. “Why now?” “Because I finally figured out how to say what I meant.” “And what did you mean?” He set his cane down carefully, then reached into the inner pocket of his jacket. Aurora’s hand moved to her own pocket instinctively, where she kept her delivery pen—a small comfort against the chaos of the city. Lucien pulled out a folded piece of paper, worn at the edges from being handled too many times. He held it out to her, and she took it with trembling fingers. It was a letter. Her name written in his careful script at the top, the ink slightly smudged as if he’d read it too many times himself. “I wrote this the night you left,” he said quietly. “I never sent it.” Aurora unfolded the letter slowly, reading the first line twice before looking up at him. “My dearest Rory,” she whispered, her voice barely audible. “If you’re reading this, then I’ve failed at being brave.” Tears pricked at the corners of her eyes, and she quickly looked away. Lucien was watching her with that same mixture of longing and regret that had haunted her dreams for months. “I should have told you,” he continued, his voice cracking slightly. “I should have told you that every time you smiled at me, I felt like I was drowning in the best possible way. That every time you touched my arm, I wanted to kiss you until you forgot your own name. That every time you walked away, I wanted to follow you into the dark just to make sure you came back.” Aurora’s throat worked soundlessly, and she clutched the letter tighter. “But I’m a coward,” he went on. “I’m a half-breed demon who doesn’t know how to love properly. So instead of telling you, I pushed you away. I made you angry. I made you leave.” She looked up at him then, really looked at him, and saw the truth in his words. Saw the man beneath the suits and the secrets and the carefully constructed walls. “Why didn’t you send it?” “Because I was afraid you’d throw it away.” Aurora stood so quickly that the chair scraped against the floor. Ptolemy yowled and darted behind the sofa. “Then send it now,” she said fiercely. “Send it every day until I believe it.” Lucien’s face softened, and for the first time since she’d walked through that door, he smiled—the real kind, the one that lit up his whole face and made her forget why she’d ever been afraid of him. “I will,” he said. And then she was in his arms, finally letting herself believe that maybe, just maybe, this time she wouldn’t have to let go.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said instead [instead]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"she said fiercely [fiercely]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.259
leniency0.519
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.111
54.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsmAdverbs13
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count3
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count2
5
adverb"slightly"
count2
6
adverb"quickly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"softly"
4"carefully"
5"slightly"
6"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count2
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"race"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
15
word"constructed"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"stomach"
2"glinting"
3"unreadable"
4"familiar"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"flickered"
8"could feel"
9"pulse"
10"whisper"
11"intensity"
12"race"
13"unspoken"
14"tracing"
15"constructed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences70
matches
0"d with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1434
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1053
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien6
Moreau1
French1
Aurora11
Tears1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Silas"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Aurora"
5"Tears"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Golden"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.978
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if measuring her reaction"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1434
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean21.4
std19.4
cv0.907
sampleLengths
073
112
254
334
451
513
614
758
831
93
106
1155
1217
135
142
1550
1618
1717
183
192
202
2134
227
2346
2413
2561
268
273
282
294
3053
313
3226
3321
3443
3540
362
372
382
393
4036
416
425
433
443
4536
462
4711
485
4937
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"being handled"
52.67% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs181
matches
0"was sitting"
1"was dying"
2"was watching"
3"was watching"
11.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences109
ratio0.046
matches
0"Lucien Moreau looked up slowly, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers—one amber, one black—as if measuring her reaction."
1"“Mm. And yet here you are.” He set the scroll aside with deliberate care, watching her take in the room—the stacks of books, the scattered notes written in languages she couldn’t read, the way the shadows clung to his tailored charcoal suit even in the fading light."
2"For a heartbeat, something raw flickered across his face—something she hadn’t seen since the night she’d left, since the argument that had ended with slammed doors and slammed phones and a silence that had lasted longer than either of them cared to admit."
3"Aurora’s hand moved to her own pocket instinctively, where she kept her delivery pen—a small comfort against the chaos of the city."
4"Lucien’s face softened, and for the first time since she’d walked through that door, he smiled—the real kind, the one that lit up his whole face and made her forget why she’d ever been afraid of him."
93.84% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1063
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.047036688617121354
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.01975540921919097
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean13.16
std10.56
cv0.803
sampleLengths
017
135
221
312
421
515
618
734
818
914
1019
1113
1211
133
1447
1511
1622
179
183
193
203
2118
2237
2311
246
255
262
2717
2816
2917
3018
3111
326
333
342
352
366
3714
3814
397
403
4143
427
436
447
4517
4619
4718
488
493
45.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3119266055045872
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences65
matches
0"She’d been expecting Silas to"
1"she murmured, but her voice"
2"He didn’t look surprised to"
3"he said, his French accent"
4"He set the scroll aside"
5"She crossed her arms, feeling"
6"he said, nodding toward the"
7"she said instead of answering"
8"He leaned back, steepling his"
9"His voice was quieter now,"
10"She studied him then, really"
11"She could feel the pulse"
12"She leaned forward, resting her"
13"He was quiet for a"
14"She closed her eyes for"
15"He set his cane down"
16"He held it out to"
17"It was a letter."
18"Her name written in his"
19"he said quietly"
ratio0.385
6.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences65
matches
0"The key turned in the"
1"Aurora Carter stood frozen in"
2"The scent of jasmine incense"
3"She’d been expecting Silas to"
4"The door swung open another"
5"Aurora stepped inside without waiting"
6"The tabby cat perched on"
7"she murmured, but her voice"
8"Lucien Moreau looked up slowly,"
9"The ivory handle of his"
10"He didn’t look surprised to"
11"he said, his French accent"
12"Aurora’s fingers tightened around the"
13"He set the scroll aside"
14"She crossed her arms, feeling"
15"The silence stretched between them,"
16"he said, nodding toward the"
17"Aurora sank into the chair,"
18"The delivery bag slipped from"
19"Ptolemy crept down from the"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Aurora stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, her heels clicking against the worn floorboards."
1"Lucien Moreau looked up slowly, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers—one amber, one black—as if measuring her reaction."
2"For a heartbeat, something raw flickered across his face—something she hadn’t seen since the night she’d left, since the argument that had ended with slammed do…"
3"Her name written in his careful script at the top, the ink slightly smudged as if he’d read it too many times himself."
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she murmured, but her voice caught in her throat when she saw who was sitting cross-legged on the threadbare sofa, thumbing through one of the many scrolls that covered every available surface"
1"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
2"he continued, his voice cracking slightly"
75.93% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she agreed (agree)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.148
74.0211%