Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7J8JM5NA7AH650KTRYCTY

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Duration:
24.0s
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$0.014771
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Meta

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oaks did not belong in Richmond Park. Rory knew the park. She knew the deer paths and the mud and the joggers with their dogs. These trees broke that knowledge. Their bark was black, fissured deep, and their roots rose from the earth like knuckles. No leaf grew on them. Lichen crusted their sides in sheets of pale bone-white. They formed a circle too perfect for nature. Isolde stopped at the threshold. No footprints marked the frost behind her. Her silver hair hung past her waist, untouched by wind. "We step past the teeth, and the teeth close." Nyx rippled beside Rory. Their form held together in the cold air, a tall silhouette cut from night, edges bleeding into the oak shadows. Violet light pulsed in the hollows where eyes should be. "This place remembers being forgotten." Rory's hand went to her chest. The Heartstone Pendant beat against her skin. It was small, no larger than her thumbnail, a deep crimson set in silver chain, and it gave off a dull inner glow that strengthened with each step. Heat seeped through her jumper. "It burns." Isolde glanced back. Lavender washed through her irises. "Does the ember burn, or does the door?" Rory grit her teeth and pushed past the first oak. The air changed. Sound dropped out. Traffic, distant planes, the hum of London — all cut off as if a hand clamped over her ears. Then sound rushed back, altered. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing beyond the stones, a riot of colour that had no right to exist in December. White starflowers and blue bells pushed through frost that never touched their petals. The scent hit Rory hard: honey and crushed green stems and damp earth after rain. Time snagged. Her watch ticked once, then stuck, then ticked again too fast. "An hour for a minute, a minute for an age." Isolde drifted forward, her feet inches above the bloom. "The Grove keeps its own ledger." Nyx followed. Where their shadow fell, flowers dimmed and then brightened again when they passed, as if uncertain whether to grow. In the centre of the clearing, the air tore. It was not a hole. It was a distortion, a shimmer like heat over summer tarmac, vertical and man-high. At its edges the world rippled. Rory saw both sides at once — the oaks behind it doubled — and her gut lurched. "The Veil." Nyx's voice came from everywhere and nowhere, wind through dead leaves. "Thin." Rory stared. In visible light it was nothing. With the pendant's heat flaring against her collarbone, she saw it plain — a faint lattice of light beneath the shimmer, hairline cracks spreading. "It gets weaker in winter." Isolde smiled. Her teeth were too even. "The long night invites guests." The Heartstone pulsed harder. Rory pulled it from under her jumper and the glow stained her palm red. Warmth turned to hot prickle. "That opens it?" "That knocks." Isolde drew a slender shape from her sleeve. Moonsilver caught no sun and threw it back anyway, luminous under the invisible moon. The Fae-Forged Blade, leaf-shaped, a dagger that looked grown rather than forged. Frost formed along its edge. She offered it hilt-first to Rory. "Cold iron lies. Moonsilver recalls." The metal hit Rory's hand like ice water. The crescent scar on her left wrist ached. She flinched, then tightened her grip. The blade's chill anchored her. "Cut." Isolde pointed at the shimmer. "One line. Straight. Mean it." Rory looked at Nyx. Nyx's head canted. Shadow pooled around their feet and did not match the light. "You feel it. That place on the other side. It hungers." Rory stepped up to the tear. The closer she got, the more she heard — not with her ears. A low murmur, a clatter of pans, a distant bell, laughter thick with wine. The smell of roasting meat and sugar and something sharp, like fermented fruit left too long. She raised the blade. The Veil resisted. Air turned viscous. Her arm shook. She thought of the flat above Silas' bar, the delivery bike, the rent. She thought of Evan's hands. She cut. Moonsilver sang. The distortion split with a sigh. Light poured out, warm amber, the colour of late afternoon in August. Heat rolled over Rory's face, real heat, and with it a wind that smelled of vineyards after harvest and bread from a wood oven and rot underneath sweetness. On the other side was not the Grove. It was an orchard that went on forever. Trees heavy with fruit that Rory had no names for — plum-black globes that pulsed, clusters of glass-like berries that chimed against each other. Vines as thick as her thigh coiled around trellises that reached higher than any structure should. In the distance, lights hung in the air without wire, and a table stretched longer than a street, laden with platters. Figures moved around it, some too tall, some bent double under the weight of their own bellies. Dymas. The name rose unbidden. Isolde inhaled. Her ethereal calm cracked for half a second, reverence breaking through. "Even exile does not forget the scent of excess." Nyx drifted to the edge of the opening. They did not cross. Their form thinned where amber light touched it, edges fraying into mist. "Prince Belphegor keeps a greedy table. He marks what passes through his kitchen." Rory's boot hovered over the threshold. The ground on the other side was not soil. It was packed earth dark as coffee grounds, scattered with pits and seeds that squirmed before going still. Unease tightened behind her ribs. Wonder pulled harder. She put her foot down. The world tilted and righted. The amber sky of Dymas pressed down, warm and low, with no sun, only light that came from everywhere. The air was thick, drinkable. Her lungs worked extra for each breath. The Heartstone went dark and hot and then cool again, its job done. Behind her, the tear looked different from this side — a ragged slit in a tapestry, showing a dark circle of oaks and snow. "What..." Rory's voice came out small. She cleared her throat. "That table — someone cooked that?" "Souls with contracts and knives." Isolde stepped through as if wading through water. Flowers from the Grove still clung to her ankles for a second and then withered to ash that smelled of cinnamon. "They contest with salt and fire." A sound echoed across the orchard. A gong, deep and resonant, followed by cheering. Far down the long table, something fell — a tower of meat and pastry — and the figures scrambled. Rory turned in a slow circle. The orchard was wrong. Some fruits had eyes. Some vines moved when she was not looking directly at them. Yet beauty layered it so thick she wanted to touch everything. Light filtered through leaves that were gold on both sides. A breeze carried pollen that glittered. She held out the blade. The light caught it and it lit from within, soft as moon on snow. "How long do we have before—" "Before the hour outside becomes days?" Isolde plucked a berry that chimed. It vibrated in her palm. "We have until the bell ceases hunger. Or until the Prince notes three mortals in his larder." Nyx finally crossed. They came through in a rush of cold that made the amber air steam. Their silhouette solidified, taller here, more human than shadow. Violet eyes burned stronger. "The Veil will not stay obedient." The tear behind them narrowed. The lattice of light knitted even as they watched, strands pulling together. Rory lunged back and jammed the pendant into the gap. The crimson flared. The tear shuddered and held, stretched around the silver chain like flesh around a hook. "Better?" "Borrowed time tastes sweetest." Isolde's laugh was clean and strange. She walked deeper between the rows, and for the first time she left prints in the dark earth, shallow silver impressions that filled with light and faded. Rory followed. Nyx fell into step beside her, their presence cooler now, a relief against the thick warmth. Rows of trees gave way to a raised bank. Beyond it lay a kitchen built into a hillside, open to the sky. Copper pots the size of bathtubs hung from hooks. Knives floated in mid-air, chopping with no hands. And at a chopping block stood a woman with her sleeves rolled up, sweat on her brow, cursing fluent and furious in a language Rory did not know, then in English with a London accent. The woman saw them and stopped chopping. The floating knives stopped too.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1427
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1427
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"lurched"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"structure"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"tapestry"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"pulsed"
2"lurched"
3"warmth"
4"chill"
5"structure"
6"weight"
7"tapestry"
8"echoed"
9"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences138
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1437
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1270
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory20
Heartstone3
Pendant1
London2
December1
Nyx8
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Veil1
Evan1
August1
Grove2
Dymas2
Flowers1
English1
Isolde10
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Nyx"
3"Veil"
4"Evan"
5"Dymas"
6"Flowers"
7"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"December"
4"August"
5"English"
globalScore0.713
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if wading through water"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1437
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences161
matches
0"broke that knowledge"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean20.53
std19.22
cv0.936
sampleLengths
08
160
222
39
434
55
646
72
88
98
1010
113
1274
1313
1425
1521
169
1742
1814
1932
205
217
225
2323
243
252
2645
275
2827
291
305
315
3218
3311
3449
3513
3620
372
3846
398
4086
411
424
4313
449
4524
4613
4733
488
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs216
matches
0"was not looking"
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences161
ratio0.043
matches
0"Traffic, distant planes, the hum of London — all cut off as if a hand clamped over her ears."
1"Rory saw both sides at once — the oaks behind it doubled — and her gut lurched."
2"With the pendant's heat flaring against her collarbone, she saw it plain — a faint lattice of light beneath the shimmer, hairline cracks spreading."
3"The closer she got, the more she heard — not with her ears."
4"Trees heavy with fruit that Rory had no names for — plum-black globes that pulsed, clusters of glass-like berries that chimed against each other."
5"Behind her, the tear looked different from this side — a ragged slit in a tapestry, showing a dark circle of oaks and snow."
6"Far down the long table, something fell — a tower of meat and pastry — and the figures scrambled."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount652
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03834355828220859
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean8.93
std6.28
cv0.704
sampleLengths
08
14
214
35
415
55
69
78
85
97
1010
119
124
1320
1410
155
166
177
1828
195
202
213
225
238
2410
253
263
2719
285
2919
3013
3115
322
3311
3419
356
362
3719
389
395
4014
416
4217
4313
441
452
466
4724
485
492
60.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.4161490683229814
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners67
25.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"Then sound rushed back, altered."
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences129
matches
0"She knew the deer paths"
1"Their bark was black, fissured"
2"They formed a circle too"
3"Her silver hair hung past"
4"Their form held together in"
5"It was small, no larger"
6"Her watch ticked once, then"
7"It was not a hole."
8"It was a distortion, a"
9"Her teeth were too even."
10"She offered it hilt-first to"
11"She flinched, then tightened her"
12"She raised the blade."
13"Her arm shook."
14"She thought of the flat"
15"She thought of Evan's hands."
16"It was an orchard that"
17"Her ethereal calm cracked for"
18"They did not cross."
19"Their form thinned where amber"
ratio0.225
25.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount112
totalSentences129
matches
0"The oaks did not belong"
1"Rory knew the park."
2"She knew the deer paths"
3"These trees broke that knowledge."
4"Their bark was black, fissured"
5"Lichen crusted their sides in"
6"They formed a circle too"
7"Isolde stopped at the threshold."
8"Her silver hair hung past"
9"Nyx rippled beside Rory."
10"Their form held together in"
11"Violet light pulsed in the"
12"Rory's hand went to her"
13"The Heartstone Pendant beat against"
14"It was small, no larger"
15"Heat seeped through her jumper."
16"Isolde glanced back."
17"Lavender washed through her irises."
18"Rory grit her teeth and"
19"The air changed."
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
ratio0
42.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"It was small, no larger than her thumbnail, a deep crimson set in silver chain, and it gave off a dull inner glow that strengthened with each step."
1"With the pendant's heat flaring against her collarbone, she saw it plain — a faint lattice of light beneath the shimmer, hairline cracks spreading."
2"The Fae-Forged Blade, leaf-shaped, a dagger that looked grown rather than forged."
3"Heat rolled over Rory's face, real heat, and with it a wind that smelled of vineyards after harvest and bread from a wood oven and rot underneath sweetness."
4"Trees heavy with fruit that Rory had no names for — plum-black globes that pulsed, clusters of glass-like berries that chimed against each other."
5"Vines as thick as her thigh coiled around trellises that reached higher than any structure should."
6"She walked deeper between the rows, and for the first time she left prints in the dark earth, shallow silver impressions that filled with light and faded."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Isolde drifted, her feet inches above the bloom"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.6667%