| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1427 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1427 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfect" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "lurched" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "structure" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "tapestry" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 161 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1437 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1270 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.57 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 20 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 2 | | December | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | August | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Dymas | 2 | | Flowers | 1 | | English | 1 | | Isolde | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Veil" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Dymas" | | 6 | "Flowers" | | 7 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "December" | | 4 | "August" | | 5 | "English" |
| | globalScore | 0.713 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if wading through water" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1437 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 70 | | mean | 20.53 | | std | 19.22 | | cv | 0.936 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 74 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 46 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 86 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 33 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | | |
| 18.63% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 161 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "Traffic, distant planes, the hum of London — all cut off as if a hand clamped over her ears." | | 1 | "Rory saw both sides at once — the oaks behind it doubled — and her gut lurched." | | 2 | "With the pendant's heat flaring against her collarbone, she saw it plain — a faint lattice of light beneath the shimmer, hairline cracks spreading." | | 3 | "The closer she got, the more she heard — not with her ears." | | 4 | "Trees heavy with fruit that Rory had no names for — plum-black globes that pulsed, clusters of glass-like berries that chimed against each other." | | 5 | "Behind her, the tear looked different from this side — a ragged slit in a tapestry, showing a dark circle of oaks and snow." | | 6 | "Far down the long table, something fell — a tower of meat and pastry — and the figures scrambled." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 652 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.03834355828220859 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 161 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 161 | | mean | 8.93 | | std | 6.28 | | cv | 0.704 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 60.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.4161490683229814 | | totalSentences | 161 | | uniqueOpeners | 67 | |
| 25.84% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Then sound rushed back, altered." |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew the deer paths" | | 1 | "Their bark was black, fissured" | | 2 | "They formed a circle too" | | 3 | "Her silver hair hung past" | | 4 | "Their form held together in" | | 5 | "It was small, no larger" | | 6 | "Her watch ticked once, then" | | 7 | "It was not a hole." | | 8 | "It was a distortion, a" | | 9 | "Her teeth were too even." | | 10 | "She offered it hilt-first to" | | 11 | "She flinched, then tightened her" | | 12 | "She raised the blade." | | 13 | "Her arm shook." | | 14 | "She thought of the flat" | | 15 | "She thought of Evan's hands." | | 16 | "It was an orchard that" | | 17 | "Her ethereal calm cracked for" | | 18 | "They did not cross." | | 19 | "Their form thinned where amber" |
| | ratio | 0.225 | |
| 25.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 112 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks did not belong" | | 1 | "Rory knew the park." | | 2 | "She knew the deer paths" | | 3 | "These trees broke that knowledge." | | 4 | "Their bark was black, fissured" | | 5 | "Lichen crusted their sides in" | | 6 | "They formed a circle too" | | 7 | "Isolde stopped at the threshold." | | 8 | "Her silver hair hung past" | | 9 | "Nyx rippled beside Rory." | | 10 | "Their form held together in" | | 11 | "Violet light pulsed in the" | | 12 | "Rory's hand went to her" | | 13 | "The Heartstone Pendant beat against" | | 14 | "It was small, no larger" | | 15 | "Heat seeped through her jumper." | | 16 | "Isolde glanced back." | | 17 | "Lavender washed through her irises." | | 18 | "Rory grit her teeth and" | | 19 | "The air changed." |
| | ratio | 0.868 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 42.86% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "It was small, no larger than her thumbnail, a deep crimson set in silver chain, and it gave off a dull inner glow that strengthened with each step." | | 1 | "With the pendant's heat flaring against her collarbone, she saw it plain — a faint lattice of light beneath the shimmer, hairline cracks spreading." | | 2 | "The Fae-Forged Blade, leaf-shaped, a dagger that looked grown rather than forged." | | 3 | "Heat rolled over Rory's face, real heat, and with it a wind that smelled of vineyards after harvest and bread from a wood oven and rot underneath sweetness." | | 4 | "Trees heavy with fruit that Rory had no names for — plum-black globes that pulsed, clusters of glass-like berries that chimed against each other." | | 5 | "Vines as thick as her thigh coiled around trellises that reached higher than any structure should." | | 6 | "She walked deeper between the rows, and for the first time she left prints in the dark earth, shallow silver impressions that filled with light and faded." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde drifted, her feet inches above the bloom" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |