Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7JCPG5CK7SFZ4Z19QKB3M

Run Details

Duration:
8.5s
Cost:
$0.000200
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the rickety metal stairs and into the abandoned Tube station, her boots clacking against the damp concrete. The air hung thick with the smell of wet earth and something else—something sweet and cloying that made her stomach tighten. She pulled her coat tighter, scanning the platform with practiced efficiency. " Quinn?" She turned to see Eva Kowalski emerging from between two pillars, clutching a satchel that practically burst with books. The woman's green eyes looked pale in the flickering fluorescent light. "Eva. What the hell is this place doing open?" "Mr. Polarity's been found dead." Harlow's hand instinctively moved to the worn leather watch on her wrist. "Where?" "In the old token booth. Third booth on the left." They approached the dimly lit area, where emergency lighting cast long shadows across cracked tiles. The token booth sat empty except for a figure slumped against the glass partition. Harlow's partner's badge caught her peripheral vision—a Metropolitan Police DS, his face obscured by darkness. She knelt beside him, noting the position of his body. Too relaxed. If this had been a robbery gone wrong, he would have been defending himself, or at least positioned himself between whatever attacker and the exit. Instead, he lay on his side, arms crossed over his chest like he'd been trying to sleep. "Cause of death?" Eva asked, her voice uncharacteristically quiet. Harlow checked the pulse at his neck. "Still warm. Someone killed him within the last hour." She stood and began circling the booth. The lock was intact, the window unbroken. No signs of forced entry. She noticed something else—a small brass compass sat on the floor near the victim's feet, its needle spinning erratically. "That's not standard issue." Eva crouched beside it. "That's a Veil Compass. Crafted by Shade artisans. They're... expensive." "Expensive enough to be worth killing over, apparently." Harlow picked up the compass, noting the patina on its surface. "Did you bring your notes on these things?" Eva nodded, pulling a worn notebook from her satchel. "I've been tracking the market movements. The Compass points toward supernatural rifts. But why would a cop need one?" "To find trouble, probably." Harlow stood and looked around the station. "Wait." She walked back to the entrance, to the stairs where she'd arrived. "Did you notice anything odd about the way this place looked?" "What do you mean?" "Nothing. Just... check the walls." Eva examined the brickwork more carefully. Her breath caught. "Harlow, these bricks are newer than the station. See the mortar? It's been laid in sections, like someone built over an existing structure." Harlow's blood ran cold. "How recent?" "Recent enough that there are handprints in the mortar. Someone's been repairing this place regularly." She looked back at the body. "And that DS Polarity—he wasn't supposed to be here. This station only opens during full moons." "The market moves locations every full moon?" "Yes, but that's not what's important right now." Eva pulled out her phone and started typing. "Look at this compass reading. It's fluctuating wildly, but it's trying to point toward something specific." "Where?" "Down there." She nodded toward the tunnel that led away from the platform. "But it's not a natural rift. It's been constructed." Harlow followed her gaze. The tunnel stretched into darkness, but at the far end, she could make out faint traces of light bouncing off what appeared to be metal fixtures. Something hummed softly, a sound that made her teeth ache. "Someone's been using this as a back entrance to the market." "Or someone's been using it to smuggle people out." Eva's voice dropped to a whisper. "The handprints on the wall—they're not just recent. Some of them are decades old. This station has been a gateway for eighty years." Harlow felt the weight of that realization settle in her chest. "Eighty years. That's longer than the Veil Market's supposed schedule." "Maybe it doesn't always follow the moon." Eva stood and began walking toward the tunnel. "We should go. Before whoever did this realizes we're here." But Harlow stayed rooted to the spot, staring at the compass in her hand. The needle had steadied, pointing directly at the tunnel. She remembered something her partner had mentioned in passing during their last briefing—a case file marked confidential, about disappearances near abandoned infrastructure. "Wait." She turned to face Eva. "What if Polarity wasn't the intended victim?" Eva frowned. "What do you mean?" "I think he was trying to close the rift. And someone killed him to keep it open." Harlow held up the compass. "This isn't just a tool to navigate the market. It's a key." She heard footsteps echoing from the tunnel. Both of them turned as a figure emerged from the darkness—tall, wearing a long coat that seemed too formal for the setting. The person's face remained shadowed, but the bearing was unmistakable. "Detective Quinn," the figure called out. "I need you to step away from that compass." Harlow's grip tightened on her service weapon. "Who are you, and what do you want with the Market?" The figure's shoulders relaxed slightly. "Someone who's been watching you, Detective. Someone who knows you don't understand what you're dealing with." They paused, glancing toward the body. "DS Polarity knew. That's why they killed him." Eva took a step forward. "Who are you?" "Someone who's been protecting this city from things like you've never imagined." The figure's hand moved to their side, where something glinted beneath their coat. "Put the compass down, and I'll explain everything." Harlow's eyes narrowed. "And if I don't?" "Then you'll never understand why your partner died, Detective. You'll keep walking into traps set by people who've been here longer than the Market itself." They took another step closer. "But maybe that's exactly what they want." The compass in Harlow's hand began to spin again, its needle jerking wildly between directions. She could feel something watching them from the shadows, something that had been there all along.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.612
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.041
85.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1000
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1000
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"standard"
count1
4
word"structure"
count1
5
word"constructed"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"navigate"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"scanning"
2"pulse"
3"standard"
4"structure"
5"constructed"
6"whisper"
7"weight"
8"navigate"
9"footsteps"
10"echoing"
11"could feel"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"the weight of that realization"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
38.96% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences55
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords994
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
26.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount566
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.47
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Harlow14
Quinn1
Tube1
Eva11
Kowalski1
Metropolitan1
Police1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0.263
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount994
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean22.59
std14.92
cv0.66
sampleLengths
054
12
230
39
45
513
610
744
854
99
1016
1138
124
1314
1427
1528
1635
174
185
1932
206
2137
227
2332
241
2522
2640
2711
2838
2921
3025
3145
3213
336
3434
3539
3615
3718
3835
398
4033
417
4237
4331
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs113
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences89
ratio0.056
matches
0"The air hung thick with the smell of wet earth and something else—something sweet and cloying that made her stomach tighten."
1"Harlow's partner's badge caught her peripheral vision—a Metropolitan Police DS, his face obscured by darkness."
2"She noticed something else—a small brass compass sat on the floor near the victim's feet, its needle spinning erratically."
3"She remembered something her partner had mentioned in passing during their last briefing—a case file marked confidential, about disappearances near abandoned infrastructure."
4"Both of them turned as a figure emerged from the darkness—tall, wearing a long coat that seemed too formal for the setting."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount571
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.03677758318739054
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.017513134851138354
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean11.17
std6.76
cv0.606
sampleLengths
022
121
211
32
419
511
69
75
812
91
1010
1115
1214
1315
1410
152
1625
1717
189
197
209
217
227
235
2419
254
264
2710
2819
298
309
3119
3211
3313
3411
354
365
376
383
3923
404
412
4221
4316
447
4516
4616
471
4813
499
81.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4943820224719101
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners44
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Instead, he lay on his"
ratio0.019
99.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences53
matches
0"She pulled her coat tighter,"
1"She turned to see Eva"
2"They approached the dimly lit"
3"She knelt beside him, noting"
4"She stood and began circling"
5"She noticed something else—a small"
6"She walked back to the"
7"Her breath caught."
8"She looked back at the"
9"She nodded toward the tunnel"
10"She remembered something her partner"
11"She turned to face Eva"
12"She heard footsteps echoing from"
13"They paused, glancing toward the"
14"They took another step closer"
15"She could feel something watching"
ratio0.302
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences53
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
1"The air hung thick with"
2"She pulled her coat tighter,"
3"She turned to see Eva"
4"The woman's green eyes looked"
5"Harlow's hand instinctively moved to"
6"They approached the dimly lit"
7"The token booth sat empty"
8"Harlow's partner's badge caught her"
9"She knelt beside him, noting"
10"Eva asked, her voice uncharacteristically"
11"Harlow checked the pulse at"
12"She stood and began circling"
13"The lock was intact, the"
14"She noticed something else—a small"
15"Eva crouched beside it."
16"Harlow picked up the compass,"
17"Eva nodded, pulling a worn"
18"Harlow stood and looked around"
19"She walked back to the"
ratio0.925
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"If this had been a"
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She could feel something watching them from the shadows, something that had been there all along."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva asked, her voice uncharacteristically quiet"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.02
leniency0.041
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.7679%