Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7M7CYEJ1JA58AT895MJY0

Run Details

Duration:
53.9s
Cost:
$0.021641
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The path through Richmond Park had closed hours ago, but Aurora had climbed the fence near the gate with the ease of long practice, delivery bag slung across her back and torch between her teeth. Yu-Fei's note had been specific. *The grove. Midnight. Come alone.* She'd stopped asking why Yu-Fei's suppliers kept strange hours months ago. The pay was too good, and the questions only ever earned her that flat, unreadable stare from behind the restaurant counter. She found the standing stones the way she always did, by the oaks that leaned towards each other like conspirators. The pendant beneath her shirt gave a faint pulse of warmth as she ducked between them. It always did that here. She'd stopped finding it strange, which perhaps should have worried her more than it did. The clearing opened ahead, wildflowers silvered under the moon. No Yu-Fei. No anyone. "Hello?" Her voice died against the dark. She checked her phone. 11:58. Two minutes early, then. She lowered the bag and settled onto the flat stone at the clearing's centre, the one warm even in winter, and waited. The warmth of the stone bled up through her jeans. Too warm. She shifted, and that was when she noticed the silence. Richmond Park never went fully silent. Even at this hour there should have been something — a fox, an owl, the distant hum of the road beyond the trees. Instead the quiet sat against her eardrums with actual pressure, the way silence did in a soundproofed room. Her phone read 11:58 still. She watched it. Counted her own heartbeats, sixty of them, then a hundred. The digits didn't move. She pressed the side button, let the screen go dark, woke it again. 11:58. "Very funny," she muttered, though nobody had played a joke on her, and the words fell flat as dropped coins. A sound came from the treeline then. Not footsteps. Something slower. A long, patient scrape, like a branch drawn along bark, except it stopped whenever she turned towards it and resumed only in the corner of her hearing. She swept the torch across the oaks. Light slid over trunks, over the black gaps between them. Nothing. She held the beam steady and forced herself to keep breathing evenly, the way she used to in Evan's flat, counting tiles on the kitchen wall until the shouting stopped. The scrape came again. Closer. From the left this time, though nothing in the treeline had moved. She stood. The delivery bag felt suddenly absurd, so she left it on the stone and walked towards the standing stones with the torch raised, telling herself she'd simply wait at the boundary, that Yu-Fei could find her there, that this was all some atmospheric nonsense the grove did at night and she'd laugh about it tomorrow over dumplings. At the boundary she stopped. Between the two nearest stones, something hung in the air. She saw it only because the moonlight bent around it, a vertical seam of wrongness, like heat shimmer in a windless cold. The pendant against her sternum pulsed hard enough that she felt it through her shirt, once, twice, in a rhythm that wasn't hers. "That's new," she said, and her voice came out steadier than her hands. She knew what it was. Yu-Fei had used the word once, half-drunk on plum wine, then refused to repeat it. A Hel portal. A door to somewhere that wasn't anywhere good. Aurora took one step back, then another, eyes fixed on the seam. The shimmer widened by the width of a finger. Cold bled out of it, cold that smelled of wet earth and something underneath, something sweet and spoiled, like flowers rotting in stagnant water. Behind her, in the clearing, something exhaled. She did not turn. Every instinct she owned said turn, run, scream, but the cold at her back was worse than the cold in front, and some old animal part of her brain understood that the seam between the stones had stopped widening. It was waiting. The thing in the clearing was not. "Aurora." Her name, spoken in her mother's voice. Jennifer Carter's soft Welsh lilt, precise and warm, exactly as it had sounded calling her in from the garden when she was nine. Her mother was alive and well in Cardiff and would never, ever be standing in a Fae-touched grove at midnight. "Aurora, cariad, come here a moment." She stared at the seam and didn't turn. Her hands had gone numb around the torch. The voice came again, closer now, patient, coaxing, and beneath the lilt there was something wrong in the acoustics of it, an echo arriving a half-beat late, as if the words were being spoken twice by two mouths standing at different distances. "You're not her." "I could be." Her mother's voice, thoughtful now, the echo sharpening into something with edges. "I could be anyone. Turn around and see." The pendant flared hot against her skin, hot enough to sting, and the seam between the stones shuddered and pulled itself shut like a wound closing. The cold vanished. In its absence the night rushed back — wind, a distant owl, the road-hum — as if someone had lifted a bell jar off the world. Behind her, nothing breathed. She turned. The clearing stood empty. Moonlight lay across the wildflowers in ordinary silver. Her delivery bag sat untouched on the flat stone. The torch beam trembled across grass and found no footprints but her own, no mark, no sign that anything had stood there at all. Her phone buzzed. 12:47. A message from Yu-Fei: *Change of plan. Tomorrow. Do not go tonight.* Aurora looked at the timestamp, then at the standing stones, then down at her wrist, where the small crescent scar had gone white against flushed skin. She picked up the bag. She walked to the fence without running, because running felt like an invitation, and she did not look back until the gate was locked behind her and the orange glow of the streetlamps stood between her and the trees. When she finally looked, the park was only a park. Dark, ordinary, patient. She walked home the long way, under every light she could find, and she did not once stop shaking.
created_at"2026-07-25T18:12:02.085Z" 7/25/2026, 6:12:02 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1042
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1042
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"lilt"
count2
7
word"echo"
count2
8
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"footsteps"
5"pulsed"
6"lilt"
7"echo"
8"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords13
totalWords1045
ratio0.012
matches
0"The grove. Midnight. Come alone."
1"Change of plan. Tomorrow. Do not go tonight."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1019
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Yu-Fei"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Yu-Fei"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Aurora3
Yu-Fei6
Evan1
Hel1
Carter1
Welsh1
Cardiff1
Fae-touched1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Evan"
3"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
3"Fae-touched"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like an invitation, and she did no"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.957
wordCount1045
matches
0"no footprints but"
94.98% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"did that here"
1"understood that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean34.83
std26.61
cv0.764
sampleLengths
077
156
213
31
437
569
65
731
820
986
1017
1159
125
1355
1413
1576
167
1753
181
1950
206
2158
223
2323
2455
254
2647
2716
2870
2932
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"being spoken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was waiting"
81.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences93
ratio0.022
matches
0"Even at this hour there should have been something — a fox, an owl, the distant hum of the road beyond the trees."
1"In its absence the night rushed back — wind, a distant owl, the road-hum — as if someone had lifted a bell jar off the world."
94.92% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1026
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.04580896686159844
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010721247563352826
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean11.24
std10.83
cv0.964
sampleLengths
035
15
22
31
413
521
620
716
85
915
109
112
122
131
146
154
161
174
1822
1910
202
2110
226
2323
2418
255
263
2710
284
2913
301
3120
327
332
342
3527
367
3710
381
3930
404
411
4212
432
4457
455
4610
4722
4823
4913
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.43333333333333335
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners39
91.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"Instead the quiet sat against"
1"Dark, ordinary, patient."
ratio0.027
66.58% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences73
matches
0"She found the standing stones"
1"It always did that here."
2"She'd stopped finding it strange,"
3"Her voice died against the"
4"She checked her phone."
5"She lowered the bag and"
6"She shifted, and that was"
7"Her phone read 11:58 still."
8"She watched it."
9"She pressed the side button,"
10"she muttered, though nobody had"
11"She swept the torch across"
12"She held the beam steady"
13"She saw it only because"
14"she said, and her voice"
15"She knew what it was."
16"She did not turn."
17"It was waiting."
18"Her name, spoken in her"
19"Her mother was alive and"
ratio0.384
62.74% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences73
matches
0"The path through Richmond Park"
1"Yu-Fei's note had been specific."
2"The pay was too good,"
3"She found the standing stones"
4"The pendant beneath her shirt"
5"It always did that here."
6"She'd stopped finding it strange,"
7"The clearing opened ahead, wildflowers"
8"Her voice died against the"
9"She checked her phone."
10"She lowered the bag and"
11"The warmth of the stone"
12"She shifted, and that was"
13"Richmond Park never went fully"
14"Her phone read 11:58 still."
15"She watched it."
16"The digits didn't move."
17"She pressed the side button,"
18"she muttered, though nobody had"
19"A sound came from the"
ratio0.795
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Even at this hour there"
ratio0.014
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The pendant against her sternum pulsed hard enough that she felt it through her shirt, once, twice, in a rhythm that wasn't hers."
1"The voice came again, closer now, patient, coaxing, and beneath the lilt there was something wrong in the acoustics of it, an echo arriving a half-beat late, as…"
2"In its absence the night rushed back — wind, a distant owl, the road-hum — as if someone had lifted a bell jar off the world."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.25
88.7256%