| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.481 | | leniency | 0.963 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1309 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1309 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "predator" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "fluttered" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "desire" | | 7 | "structure" | | 8 | "pristine" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "beacon" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "long shadow" | | 13 | "carried the weight" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "pulse" | | 17 | "tinged" | | 18 | "flickered" | | 19 | "firmly" | | 20 | "maw" | | 21 | "yearning" | | 22 | "weight" | | 23 | "simmering" | | 24 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 1298 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "Dymasian runes." | | 1 | "Cut through wards. Kill what cannot be killed by mortal steel." | | 2 | "pull" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.56% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1152 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.39 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 16 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Nyx | 7 | | Fae | 3 | | Isolde | 9 | | Veil | 2 | | Amber | 1 | | Court | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Amber" | | 5 | "Court" | | 6 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.806 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.311 | | wordCount | 1298 | | matches | | 0 | "Not speaking, exactly, but the words arrived on the wind like smoke tendrils" | | 1 | "not a noise, but a *pull*, a yearning as ancient as need itself" | | 2 | "not their reflections but scenes of excess: feasts" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 40.56 | | std | 28.88 | | cv | 0.712 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 102 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 84 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 77 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 69 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 91 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 95 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 60 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 57 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 59 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 48 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 48 | | 31 | 1 |
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| 95.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "was built" | | 1 | "were lined" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "She was too busy crouching to examine the ground—a patch of iridescent moss clinging to a slab of stone carved with symbols that hurt to look at directly, as if the mind recoiled from their meaning." | | 1 | "Kill what cannot be killed by mortal steel.* A gift—or a burden." | | 2 | "The scent of fermenting fruit and something sweeter—blood, maybe, or desire—clung to the air." | | 3 | "Nyx drifted closer to her, their form solidifying into something approaching human—a tall figure wrapped in shadows that writhed like smoke." | | 4 | "Beyond, the ground gave way to a courtyard paved with the same amber stone, dotted with tables set for banquets—plates piled high with impossibly arranged foods, goblets of wine that glowed faintly red." | | 5 | "Cold seeped into her skin, and suddenly she saw it—the vision that had come unbidden to Isolde moments before, a memory not her own: a woman in a red dress, laughing as she plunged a dagger into her own chest, her blood feeding the spire’s light." | | 6 | "From within, a sound emerged—not a noise, but a *pull*, a yearning as ancient as need itself." | | 7 | "Before Aurora could respond, the mirrors shattered, one by one, and from the wreckage emerged figures—dozens of them, translucent and smiling, their bodies swollen with the promise of more." | | 8 | "Aurora understood then—it wasn’t about stopping the ritual, but ending the feast before it began." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1164 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03006872852233677 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011168384879725086 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 14.75 | | std | 9.01 | | cv | 0.611 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 64.77% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4090909090909091 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "She was too busy crouching" | | 1 | "Her fingers brushed the cold" | | 2 | "she said, more to herself" | | 3 | "It was always cold, even" | | 4 | "She’d received it from Isolde" | | 5 | "It was built from the" | | 6 | "They moved forward, the spire" | | 7 | "It stood ajar, though nothing" | | 8 | "She hadn’t eaten since dawn." | | 9 | "They reached the spire’s base," | | 10 | "She drew the Fae blade," | | 11 | "she said, her eyes reflecting" | | 12 | "They descended into the structure’s" | | 13 | "She plunged the blade into" |
| | ratio | 0.206 | |
| 62.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The air itself seemed to" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 2 | "Nyx stood just behind her," | | 3 | "Isolde moved last, her silver" | | 4 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a" | | 5 | "Aurora didn’t answer." | | 6 | "She was too busy crouching" | | 7 | "Her fingers brushed the cold" | | 8 | "*Dymasian runes.* The language of" | | 9 | "The pendant flared again, hotter" | | 10 | "she said, more to herself" | | 11 | "Nyx’s whisper fluttered through the" | | 12 | "Aurora’s hand moved instinctively to" | | 13 | "It was always cold, even" | | 14 | "She’d received it from Isolde" | | 15 | "The path, if it could" | | 16 | "The scent of fermenting fruit" | | 17 | "Isolde gasped, pointing upward" | | 18 | "A structure rose from the" | | 19 | "It was built from the" |
| | ratio | 0.794 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could ask more," | | 1 | "Before Aurora could respond, the" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx stood just behind her, their form a shifting silhouette that blurred at the edges like a heat mirage, violet eyes scanning the horizon with a predator’s sti…" | | 1 | "She was too busy crouching to examine the ground—a patch of iridescent moss clinging to a slab of stone carved with symbols that hurt to look at directly, as if…" | | 2 | "A structure rose from the center of the grove, impossibly tall, its spire twisting skyward on angles that defied geometry." | | 3 | "Beyond, the ground gave way to a courtyard paved with the same amber stone, dotted with tables set for banquets—plates piled high with impossibly arranged foods…" | | 4 | "Cold seeped into her skin, and suddenly she saw it—the vision that had come unbidden to Isolde moments before, a memory not her own: a woman in a red dress, lau…" | | 5 | "Nyx’s form flickered, their edges dissolving into smoke for a heartbeat before reforming." | | 6 | "Aurora’s knees nearly buckled, and she gripped her blade tighter, feeling the weight of all the things that hungered beyond the Veil." | | 7 | "They descended into the structure’s core, where the walls were lined with mirrors that showed not their reflections but scenes of excess: feasts where guests de…" |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a melody threaded with something ancient" | | 1 | "she said, more to herself than to the others" |
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| 1.85% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde gasped (gasp)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.296 | |