Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7NH74PX48Z1R190B67W62

Run Details

Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.023230
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets across Soho, turning the neon into smears of colour on black pavement. Detective Harlow Quinn ran with her shoulders hunched, one hand clamped over the radio at her shoulder, the other keeping her coat from tangling around her legs. Ahead of her, thirty metres and closing, the suspect wove through the late-night crowd outside the Raven's Nest, knocking a drinker's pint sideways without breaking stride. "Metropolitan Police! Stop!" He didn't stop. They never did. He was slight, dark-haired, fast in the way of people who'd spent their lives running from things. She'd clocked him twenty minutes ago outside a pawnshop on Brewer Street, passing a wrapped bundle to a man whose face she'd last seen in a case file stamped CLOSED — the same file that still sat in her desk drawer, three years old, DS Morris's handwriting on the evidence log. She'd moved in. The bundle man had vanished into the crowd. The courier had bolted. Her boots hammered the wet stone. "Unit two-seven, this is DI Quinn, foot pursuit, heading south through Soho, suspect male, twenties, grey hooded jacket—" Static. She glanced at the radio. The display had gone dark. She dropped it and ran faster. The suspect cut left into an alley, vaulting a spill of bin bags. Quinn took the corner wide, shoulder grazing brick, and nearly lost him when her heel skidded on something slick. She caught herself on a drainpipe and pushed off. The alley stank of grease and rainwater and something underneath it — copper, or close to copper. She knew that smell. She'd smelled it in the stairwell where they'd found Morris. "Give it up!" Her voice came out raw. "You're making it worse!" He looked back once. In the slice of light from a doorway, she saw his face — young, frightened, and strange. His eyes caught the light wrong. Too bright. Like a cat's. Then he was gone again, out the alley's far end, across a street empty of traffic, down a set of steps she didn't recognise. Quinn reached the top of the steps and stopped. They descended into the earth beneath Camden's edge — iron railings cold under her hand, tiles going from municipal white to something older, Victorian green, cracked and weeping moisture. A station. Abandoned, by the look of the boarded ticket window above, except the boards had been pried apart and warm light bled up from below. No train sounds. No announcements. Just a low murmur, like a crowd holding its breath. Her watch read 11:47. Her radio was dead weight at her shoulder. Her phone — she pulled it out — showed no signal at all, though she stood barely five metres underground. The suspect's footsteps echoed somewhere below, unhurried now. He knew he'd reached safety. That was what frightened her. Quinn had eighteen years on the force. She'd gone into flats where men waited with knives, into a burning squat off the Old Kent Road, into the dark after worse things than this boy. But she stood at the top of those steps with every instinct she owned pulling in two directions, because the last time she'd followed a suspect somewhere she didn't understand, Morris had gone in ahead of her, and Morris had not come out the same. Not alive. Not dead either, not in any way the coroner could write down. She looked at the green tiles. She thought of the evidence log. Morris's handwriting, looping and impatient: Item recovered. Origin unknown. "Bugger it," she said, and went down. The stairs opened onto a platform that shouldn't have existed — not like this. Stalls lined both walls where the tracks should have been, cobbled from scaffold poles and tarpaulin and what looked like salvaged church pews. Lanterns hung from hooks, burning with flames that leaned the wrong way, against the draught. The crowd was a hundred people deep, and none of them were quite right. A woman haggling over a tray of teeth had too many joints in her fingers. A man in a butcher's apron turned to watch Quinn pass, and his shadow stayed facing the other way. She kept her stride even, eyes forward, the way she'd walk a hostile estate. Don't stare. Don't flinch. Her hand rested inside her coat, on nothing — she'd never carried a firearm, and a baton felt like a joke down here — but the posture mattered. The suspect was ahead, moving through the crowd without hurry now, grey hood up. He glanced back, saw her on the platform, and his step faltered. Good, she thought. Be surprised. She followed. The market swallowed them. She passed a stall selling stoppered bottles that glowed faintly from inside, another hung with bones on wire — bird bones, she told herself, until she saw the skulls. A child, or something the size of a child, sat cross-legged on the ground selling maps drawn on skin. Quinn's stomach turned over once and settled. She noted faces, exits, the layout. Three tunnels off the platform, two lit, one dark. A staircase at the far end, chained. Professional habit took the notes even while the rest of her mind screamed. The suspect ducked into the left-hand tunnel. She pushed after him, shouldering past a man who smelled of wet soil, and found herself in a narrower passage lit by candles in alcoves. Fewer people here. Her footsteps and his, out of rhythm. "Police!" she called, and the word fell flat, swallowed by the stone. Down here, it meant nothing. She felt it mean nothing. He stopped. Turned. Up close, in the candlelight, he was younger than she'd thought — maybe twenty, hollow-cheeked, and his eyes weren't strange at all now, just terrified. "You shouldn't have followed," he said. Not a threat. Worry. For her. "Hands where I can see them." "You don't get it." He pulled something from his jacket — small, white, carved. A token, bone by the look of it. "Nobody gets down here without one of these. Nobody. The Market lets you in, or it doesn't." His voice cracked. "It let you in. Do you understand what that means? It wanted you to come down." Quinn didn't lower her stance. Behind the boy, the tunnel stretched on, candle flames all bowing at once, as though something had exhaled further in the dark. Ahead of her: a suspect, an arrest, the first living thread in three years of dead ends. Behind her: stairs, rain, a radio that worked, a world with rules she understood. She thought of Morris, standing at another threshold, telling her to wait, just wait, he'd be two minutes. She stepped forward and took the boy's wrist — gentle, firm, the grip she'd used a hundred times — and turned him toward the light. "You're coming with me," she said. "And you're going to tell me everything."
created_at"2026-07-25T18:12:44.906Z" 7/25/2026, 6:12:44 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"footsteps"
2"echoed"
3"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1149
ratio0
matches(empty)
89.29% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"She passed a stall selling stoppered bottles that glowed faintly from inside, another hung with bones on wire — bird bon…"
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1060
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Morris"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn7
Raven1
Nest1
Brewer1
Street1
Morris6
Camden1
Victorian1
Old1
Kent1
Road1
Item1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Nest"
3"Morris"
4"Camden"
5"Item"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Brewer"
3"Street"
4"Old"
5"Kent"
6"Road"
globalScore1
windowScore1
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like salvaged church pews"
1"felt like a joke down here — but the po"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1149
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"knew that smell"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean34.82
std29.17
cv0.838
sampleLengths
071
13
26
383
424
511
66
772
812
932
1024
119
1270
1332
1418
1593
1621
177
18100
1946
2031
212
2294
2342
2422
2528
2612
276
2858
2958
3018
3125
3213
94.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences98
matches
0"was gone"
1"been pried"
2"been, cobbled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs186
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences104
ratio0.106
matches
0"She'd clocked him twenty minutes ago outside a pawnshop on Brewer Street, passing a wrapped bundle to a man whose face she'd last seen in a case file stamped CLOSED — the same file that still sat in her desk drawer, three years old, DS Morris's handwriting on the evidence log."
1"The alley stank of grease and rainwater and something underneath it — copper, or close to copper."
2"In the slice of light from a doorway, she saw his face — young, frightened, and strange."
3"They descended into the earth beneath Camden's edge — iron railings cold under her hand, tiles going from municipal white to something older, Victorian green, cracked and weeping moisture."
4"Her phone — she pulled it out — showed no signal at all, though she stood barely five metres underground."
5"The stairs opened onto a platform that shouldn't have existed — not like this."
6"Her hand rested inside her coat, on nothing — she'd never carried a firearm, and a baton felt like a joke down here — but the posture mattered."
7"She passed a stall selling stoppered bottles that glowed faintly from inside, another hung with bones on wire — bird bones, she told herself, until she saw the skulls."
8"Up close, in the candlelight, he was younger than she'd thought — maybe twenty, hollow-cheeked, and his eyes weren't strange at all now, just terrified."
9"\"You don't get it.\" He pulled something from his jacket — small, white, carved."
10"She stepped forward and took the boy's wrist — gentle, firm, the grip she'd used a hundred times — and turned him toward the light."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1051
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02759276879162702
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0028544243577545195
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean11.05
std9.36
cv0.847
sampleLengths
018
127
226
33
43
53
617
751
83
98
104
116
1218
131
145
155
166
1713
1819
199
2017
214
2210
238
244
254
2617
276
282
293
3024
319
3229
332
3424
353
362
3710
384
398
4020
418
425
435
447
4527
4645
472
4812
496
64.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4519230769230769
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners47
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Then he was gone again,"
1"Just a low murmur, like"
ratio0.024
44.39% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences82
matches
0"He didn't stop."
1"They never did."
2"He was slight, dark-haired, fast"
3"She'd clocked him twenty minutes"
4"She'd moved in."
5"Her boots hammered the wet"
6"She glanced at the radio."
7"She dropped it and ran"
8"She caught herself on a"
9"She knew that smell."
10"She'd smelled it in the"
11"Her voice came out raw"
12"He looked back once."
13"His eyes caught the light"
14"They descended into the earth"
15"Her watch read 11:47."
16"Her radio was dead weight"
17"Her phone — she pulled"
18"He knew he'd reached safety."
19"She'd gone into flats where"
ratio0.439
75.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences82
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ran with"
2"He didn't stop."
3"They never did."
4"He was slight, dark-haired, fast"
5"She'd clocked him twenty minutes"
6"She'd moved in."
7"The bundle man had vanished"
8"The courier had bolted."
9"Her boots hammered the wet"
10"She glanced at the radio."
11"The display had gone dark."
12"She dropped it and ran"
13"The suspect cut left into"
14"Quinn took the corner wide,"
15"She caught herself on a"
16"The alley stank of grease"
17"She knew that smell."
18"She'd smelled it in the"
19"Her voice came out raw"
ratio0.768
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Ahead of her, thirty metres and closing, the suspect wove through the late-night crowd outside the Raven's Nest, knocking a drinker's pint sideways without brea…"
1"He was slight, dark-haired, fast in the way of people who'd spent their lives running from things."
2"She pushed after him, shouldering past a man who smelled of wet soil, and found herself in a narrower passage lit by candles in alcoves."
3"Behind her: stairs, rain, a radio that worked, a world with rules she understood."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she called, and the word fell flat, swallowed by the stone"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.8188%