| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1135 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 77.97% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1135 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1149 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.29% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She passed a stall selling stoppered bottles that glowed faintly from inside, another hung with bones on wire — bird bon…" |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1060 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.66 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Morris" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 7 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Brewer | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Morris | 6 | | Camden | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | Old | 1 | | Kent | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Item | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Nest" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Camden" | | 5 | "Item" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Brewer" | | 3 | "Street" | | 4 | "Old" | | 5 | "Kent" | | 6 | "Road" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 65.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like salvaged church pews" | | 1 | "felt like a joke down here — but the po" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 34.82 | | std | 29.17 | | cv | 0.838 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 83 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 72 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 70 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 93 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 100 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 94 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 58 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 13 |
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| 94.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "been pried" | | 2 | "been, cobbled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 186 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.106 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd clocked him twenty minutes ago outside a pawnshop on Brewer Street, passing a wrapped bundle to a man whose face she'd last seen in a case file stamped CLOSED — the same file that still sat in her desk drawer, three years old, DS Morris's handwriting on the evidence log." | | 1 | "The alley stank of grease and rainwater and something underneath it — copper, or close to copper." | | 2 | "In the slice of light from a doorway, she saw his face — young, frightened, and strange." | | 3 | "They descended into the earth beneath Camden's edge — iron railings cold under her hand, tiles going from municipal white to something older, Victorian green, cracked and weeping moisture." | | 4 | "Her phone — she pulled it out — showed no signal at all, though she stood barely five metres underground." | | 5 | "The stairs opened onto a platform that shouldn't have existed — not like this." | | 6 | "Her hand rested inside her coat, on nothing — she'd never carried a firearm, and a baton felt like a joke down here — but the posture mattered." | | 7 | "She passed a stall selling stoppered bottles that glowed faintly from inside, another hung with bones on wire — bird bones, she told herself, until she saw the skulls." | | 8 | "Up close, in the candlelight, he was younger than she'd thought — maybe twenty, hollow-cheeked, and his eyes weren't strange at all now, just terrified." | | 9 | "\"You don't get it.\" He pulled something from his jacket — small, white, carved." | | 10 | "She stepped forward and took the boy's wrist — gentle, firm, the grip she'd used a hundred times — and turned him toward the light." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1051 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.02759276879162702 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0028544243577545195 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 11.05 | | std | 9.36 | | cv | 0.847 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 45 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 64.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.4519230769230769 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 81.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he was gone again," | | 1 | "Just a low murmur, like" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 44.39% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn't stop." | | 1 | "They never did." | | 2 | "He was slight, dark-haired, fast" | | 3 | "She'd clocked him twenty minutes" | | 4 | "She'd moved in." | | 5 | "Her boots hammered the wet" | | 6 | "She glanced at the radio." | | 7 | "She dropped it and ran" | | 8 | "She caught herself on a" | | 9 | "She knew that smell." | | 10 | "She'd smelled it in the" | | 11 | "Her voice came out raw" | | 12 | "He looked back once." | | 13 | "His eyes caught the light" | | 14 | "They descended into the earth" | | 15 | "Her watch read 11:47." | | 16 | "Her radio was dead weight" | | 17 | "Her phone — she pulled" | | 18 | "He knew he'd reached safety." | | 19 | "She'd gone into flats where" |
| | ratio | 0.439 | |
| 75.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain came down in" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ran with" | | 2 | "He didn't stop." | | 3 | "They never did." | | 4 | "He was slight, dark-haired, fast" | | 5 | "She'd clocked him twenty minutes" | | 6 | "She'd moved in." | | 7 | "The bundle man had vanished" | | 8 | "The courier had bolted." | | 9 | "Her boots hammered the wet" | | 10 | "She glanced at the radio." | | 11 | "The display had gone dark." | | 12 | "She dropped it and ran" | | 13 | "The suspect cut left into" | | 14 | "Quinn took the corner wide," | | 15 | "She caught herself on a" | | 16 | "The alley stank of grease" | | 17 | "She knew that smell." | | 18 | "She'd smelled it in the" | | 19 | "Her voice came out raw" |
| | ratio | 0.768 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 67.67% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead of her, thirty metres and closing, the suspect wove through the late-night crowd outside the Raven's Nest, knocking a drinker's pint sideways without brea…" | | 1 | "He was slight, dark-haired, fast in the way of people who'd spent their lives running from things." | | 2 | "She pushed after him, shouldering past a man who smelled of wet soil, and found herself in a narrower passage lit by candles in alcoves." | | 3 | "Behind her: stairs, rain, a radio that worked, a world with rules she understood." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, and the word fell flat, swallowed by the stone" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |