Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7QYWD9258PGFZ4EXHPKNC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.026431
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven, three measured taps that had no business sounding polite at this hour. Rory set down the delivery receipts she'd been tallying and crossed the flat in her socks, the floorboards of the old building creaking their familiar complaint beneath her. Through the peephole: platinum hair, charcoal wool, an ivory cane handle catching the hallway light. Her stomach dropped somewhere past the stairwell. She opened the door on the chain. "You have a remarkable talent for showing up where you're not wanted." Lucien Moreau stood in her corridor like he'd been poured there, one amber eye and one black eye finding her through the gap. Rain jewelled his shoulders. He hadn't brought an umbrella, which meant he'd come in a hurry, which meant something was wrong — or he wanted her to think so. "Rory." Just her name. He'd always done that, stripped her down to one syllable like it cost him nothing. "May I come in?" "No." "I have a cut on my side that needs attending, and the man who gave it to me is still looking for where I live." He held up his left hand. Blood slicked his palm, dark in the yellow light. "I am asking." She looked at the blood. She looked at his face, which gave away nothing it didn't choose to, except that tonight he'd chosen to let her see the tightness around his mouth. Pain, or theatre. With Lucien the two were often indistinguishable. "You have people," she said. "You have a whole rotten network of people." "I have people I pay. I came to someone I—" He stopped. Recalibrated. She watched him do it, the small machinery of his composure. "I came here." Eight months. Eight months since she'd told him she couldn't be another transaction in his ledger, and he'd let her walk out of that restaurant in Mayfair without chasing her, which had somehow been worse than any argument. And now he stood bleeding in her hallway because some part of him — the demon part, the Marseille part, whatever part she'd never managed to map — had decided her door was the one to knock on. She shut the door, slid the chain off, and opened it again. "If you drip on my rug, I'm billing you." He stepped past her and the flat shrank around him, the way it always had. He took in the room in one sweep — the stack of Golden Empress menus by the door, her delivery jacket on its hook, the single lamp and the unmade sofa bed — and she hated that he could read her whole life in a glance and she still couldn't read his. "Sit down. Take your jacket off." "A woman after my own—" "Finish that sentence and you can bleed in the street." He sat. The cane went across his knees, and his fingers stayed wrapped around the ivory handle a moment longer than necessary before he let go. Rory fetched the first aid kit from under the sink, the good one she'd bought after a delivery run gone wrong in Whitechapel, and by the time she turned back he'd shrugged out of the jacket and unbuttoned his shirt. The cut ran along his ribs, shallow but long, the kind of wound meant to send a message rather than end one. "Who sent the message?" She knelt beside him, pressed gauze against his side. He didn't flinch. He used to flinch, back when he trusted her hands. "Someone who believes I sold information I did not sell." "Did you?" "Rory." A breath that might have been a laugh. "I sell everything. That is the tragedy of my reputation — when I finally keep a secret, no one believes me." She cleaned the wound in silence. He watched her work. She could feel his eyes on the top of her head, on her hands, on the crescent scar at her wrist when her sleeve rode up, and she concentrated on the antiseptic like it required her whole soul. "Whose secret?" she asked. "You don't want to know." "I want to know why you're on my sofa and not dead in a canal. Start there." His hand came up and closed gently around her wrist, stilling her. His palm was warm. Half-demon blood ran hotter than human; she'd forgotten that, or her body hadn't. "It was yours," he said. "Your name. Where you live. What you do, who you see. Someone offered a considerable sum for a dossier on Aurora Carter, and I declined to build it." The black eye and the amber one held her steady. "The gentleman took offence. Hence." He gestured at his ribs. The gauze went cold in her hand. "Someone's buying information about me." "Someone with money and patience. I have been refusing them for six weeks." A pause. "I should have told you sooner. I told myself you were safer not knowing I was involved at all." "That's not your decision to make." "No," he said. "It isn't. I have become very good at deciding things for people. It is the whole of my profession and the ruin of everything else I touch." She should have pulled her wrist free. She didn't. Below them, Silas' bar hummed through the floorboards, last orders, chairs scraping, a woman's laughter rising and dissolving. Ordinary London carrying on while the underworld bled on her furniture. "Eight months," Rory said. "You let me think you didn't care enough to chase me." "I cared enough not to." His thumb moved once against her pulse point, found it racing, and she saw him register it with the faintest softening at the corner of his mouth. "You said you wanted a life that wasn't priced and weighed. I could not give you that, so I gave you absence. It was the most expensive thing I ever sold myself." "You're impossible." "Frequently." "You bleed on my rug, you insult my intelligence, and then you say things like that." She pulled her hand free at last, reached for the bandage roll, and pressed it against his side harder than the wound required. He hissed. Good. "Hold that." He held it. She wound the bandage around his ribs, once, twice, her arms bracketing him, close enough to smell rain and copper and the bergamot he'd worn the first night they'd met. His breath moved against her hair. "Whoever buys the dossier from someone else," she said into his collarbone, "they'll find me anyway. You know that." "Then stay close to me until I learn who wants you." "That sounds suspiciously like a business arrangement." "Everything I offer sounds like that. It is the only language I was taught." His hand found hers again, slower this time, giving her every chance to leave. "I am trying to learn another." Rory looked at him — the ruin of his composure, the bandage, the rain still drying in his hair, thirty-two years of Marseille and Avaros and London sitting in her cramped flat like a confession. She thought of Evan, of fists through doors, of fleeing Cardiff in the night. She thought of how Lucien had never once raised his voice to her, how he'd weaponised everything except her. "One night," she said. "You stay tonight because you're injured. Tomorrow we talk about the dossier. And Lucien—" "Yes." "Don't you dare make me regret opening the door." He turned her hand over and pressed his mouth to the crescent scar on her wrist, unhurried, like a signature at the bottom of a contract he intended, for once, to honour.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His thumb moved once [once]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.292
leniency0.583
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.042
92.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1263
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1263
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"remarkable"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"familiar"
2"stomach"
3"remarkable"
4"silence"
5"could feel"
6"pulse"
7"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1270
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount836
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Blood1
Lucien3
Recalibrated1
Mayfair1
Marseille2
Golden1
Empress1
Whitechapel1
Ordinary1
London2
Rory4
Avaros1
Evan1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Blood"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places
0"Mayfair"
1"Marseille"
2"Whitechapel"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1270
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean27.02
std22.34
cv0.827
sampleLengths
062
17
219
352
423
51
643
742
813
927
1076
1121
1267
136
145
1510
1688
1726
1810
192
2030
2148
224
235
2417
2529
2653
2712
2834
296
3030
3138
3215
3364
342
351
3644
3739
3819
3911
407
4134
4268
4318
441
459
4632
99.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"been poured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences96
ratio0.052
matches
0"He hadn't brought an umbrella, which meant he'd come in a hurry, which meant something was wrong — or he wanted her to think so."
1"And now he stood bleeding in her hallway because some part of him — the demon part, the Marseille part, whatever part she'd never managed to map — had decided her door was the one to knock on."
2"He took in the room in one sweep — the stack of Golden Empress menus by the door, her delivery jacket on its hook, the single lamp and the unmade sofa bed — and she hated that he could read her whole life in a glance and she still couldn't read his."
3"Half-demon blood ran hotter than human; she'd forgotten that, or her body hadn't."
4"Rory looked at him — the ruin of his composure, the bandage, the rain still drying in his hair, thirty-two years of Marseille and Avaros and London sitting in her cramped flat like a confession."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount721
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02912621359223301
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004160887656033287
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean13.23
std11.58
cv0.875
sampleLengths
019
128
215
37
47
512
623
74
825
94
1015
114
121
1331
149
153
165
1727
183
197
205
218
2212
231
2411
253
262
2736
2838
2912
309
3115
3252
336
345
3510
362
3724
3840
3922
4013
413
4210
4310
442
459
4621
476
484
4938
61.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4375
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners42
65.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"Just her name"
ratio0.02
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences51
matches
0"Her stomach dropped somewhere past"
1"She opened the door on"
2"He hadn't brought an umbrella,"
3"He'd always done that, stripped"
4"He held up his left"
5"She looked at the blood."
6"She looked at his face,"
7"She watched him do it,"
8"She shut the door, slid"
9"He stepped past her and"
10"He took in the room"
11"She knelt beside him, pressed"
12"He didn't flinch."
13"He used to flinch, back"
14"She cleaned the wound in"
15"He watched her work."
16"She could feel his eyes"
17"His hand came up and"
18"His palm was warm."
19"He gestured at his ribs"
ratio0.608
28.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences51
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory set down the delivery"
2"Her stomach dropped somewhere past"
3"She opened the door on"
4"Lucien Moreau stood in her"
5"Rain jewelled his shoulders."
6"He hadn't brought an umbrella,"
7"He'd always done that, stripped"
8"He held up his left"
9"Blood slicked his palm, dark"
10"She looked at the blood."
11"She looked at his face,"
12"Pain, or theatre."
13"She watched him do it,"
14"She shut the door, slid"
15"He stepped past her and"
16"He took in the room"
17"The cane went across his"
18"Rory fetched the first aid"
19"The cut ran along his"
ratio0.863
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The knock came at half past eleven, three measured taps that had no business sounding polite at this hour."
1"Eight months since she'd told him she couldn't be another transaction in his ledger, and he'd let her walk out of that restaurant in Mayfair without chasing her…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.146
leniency0.292
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.4428%