Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7RXESDHMD73A5Y7VDMFKS

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above The Raven's Nest bled colour onto the wet pavement on Greek Street. Aurora pushed through the door and the bell over it jangled. Warm air struck her face, thick with old beer and lemon cleaner. The low light in the bar pooled around the tables. Old maps curled at the edges on the walls. Black-and-white photographs stared down with dust in their frames. Silas stood behind the bar. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the light. He wiped a pint glass with a white cloth. The silver signet ring on his right hand flashed. He shifted his weight off his left leg. "You look soaked through." Aurora tugged at the hem of her delivery jacket. Water dripped onto the floorboards from her straight shoulder-length black hair. "Last drop for Yu-Fei. Some tourist at the Dean Street hotel wanted extra chilli oil in the rain. My luck." Silas set the glass down. His hazel eyes flicked to the door as it opened again. A gust of cold street air cut through the warmth. He gave a small nod toward the entrance, the way he did when he wanted Aurora to look. Aurora turned. A woman stood in the doorway in a camel coat that cost more than three months of rent for the flat above the bar. Her blonde hair was cut sharp at the jaw. Her umbrella dripped onto the mat. She stared at Aurora and her mouth opened. Aurora felt the blood leave her face. "Rory?" The woman stepped forward. Her boots left clean prints on the damp floor. "Eva." Eva Davies laughed, or made a sound close to it. She let the umbrella fall against the bookshelf that hid the back room. She crossed the distance in four strides and grabbed Aurora's hands. Her grip was cold. "Christ. It is you. I thought Silas was taking the piss when he said someone from Cardiff worked the deliveries." Aurora pulled her left hand back without thought. The small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, white against her skin, caught the bar light. Eva's eyes caught it too. Silas leaned against the bar and folded the cloth. "You two need a drink. On the house." Eva shrugged off her coat. Underneath she wore a navy suit, pressed, precise. No loose threads. No charity shop patches on the elbows, no ink stains on the cuffs. The Eva who used to sit on the wall behind Cardiff University library with a busted speaker and cheap cider had vanished under the cut of that cloth. "I was in town for a mediation. Client dinner finished early. I told the cab to drop me anywhere in Soho. Anywhere. And this place." "You hated London." "I hated a lot of things at twenty." Silas placed two whiskies on the bar. He slid one toward Aurora. He kept his distance. That was his skill. Eva picked up the glass. She looked at Aurora's jacket, the faded Golden Empress logo on the back, the frayed cuffs of her jeans, the trainers held together with black tape. "You look the same. God. The exact same." "I cut my hair." "You know what I mean." Aurora wrapped both hands around her glass. The heat from it burned into her palms. "You look different." Eva gave a tight smile. She turned the glass in her hand. "Partners love a suit. Makes the other side think you won already. I made junior partner last year. Corporate litigation." Aurora remembered Eva in a law tutorial, twenty years old, arguing until her voice cracked because a case about factory workers in Merthyr mattered. Eva who said she would never work for the people who owned the factories. "You stayed with pre-law?" "I left Cardiff." "I heard." The bar filled with the low hum of other tables, a couple arguing over a bill, the clink of a glass. Aurora stared at the maps on the wall, at a faded line marking a border that no longer existed. "You never called me back." Eva set her glass down hard enough that whisky slopped over the rim. "I called you for three weeks. You vanished. You left your course, your flat, your phone. Your mum phoned me. She asked me where you were." "I told you where I was going." "You sent a text at two in the morning. 'London. Safe.' Safe. What was I supposed to do with that?" Aurora felt fifteen again, sat on the cold floor of Eva's kitchen while Evan shouted through the letterbox downstairs. She felt the weight of Eva's duvet around her shoulders the night she showed Eva the bruise on her ribs. "You had exams." "Don't." "I did not want you to throw your finals away for me." "So you decided for me." Silas moved to the far end of the bar. He lifted a crate. His left leg dragged for half a step. He did not look at them. Eva's face tightened. Her bright lipstick had bled a little at the corner of her mouth. That small flaw made her familiar again. "I went to your dad's office. Brendan told me you were in London with me. He said you asked me to take you in. That was a lie, Rory. I had no idea where you were." "I told my dad to tell you that so he would stop looking. I told him to tell everyone." "And you believed he would leave it at that? He rang me every day. Your mother cried on my phone. I sat my contract law exam with your mother's voice in my ear." Aurora drank. The whisky scraped down her throat. "I could not stay. Evan knew where you lived. He knew where I had my seminars. If you stayed close to me, he stayed close to you." "That was not your call." "It was my life." "It was our life. Since we were nine." Eva's hands shook. She pressed them flat against the bar to stop it. Aurora saw the old Eva then, the one who used to steal chips from her plate and shout at boys who pulled Aurora's hair in primary school. The suit could not hide it. "I got you a room. I had money from my mum. I had it. You left before I could give you the key." Aurora closed her eyes. For a second she was back in that hallway, suitcase in hand, Eva's door closed because Eva was at the library. The note she left on the kitchen table said thanks and sorry and nothing else. She had stood there for a full minute listening to the fridge hum, too much a coward to wait. "I know." "You know. You know. You work over a bar and ride a bike in the rain for a Chinese restaurant. You live over a bar. You could have come home. Cardiff would have taken you back." "I did not want Cardiff." "You did not want me." The words landed between them. Aurora's bright blue eyes filled. She blinked and looked away at the green wash of the neon through the window, at the black-and-white faces of strangers on the wall. "I was ashamed." Eva let out a breath. All the sharp lines in her shoulders dropped. "Of him? Or of me seeing it?" "Both." Silas placed a clean ash tray between them though neither smoked. An old habit, a reason to step close and then step back. His signet ring caught the light again. Eva reached out. Her fingers stopped just short of Aurora's wrist, short of that small crescent scar. "You still have it." "I keep it as a souvenir." "From when you fell off my dad's shed trying to steal apples. You were eight." "I bled all over your mum's patio." Eva laughed. This time the sound cracked open and real and ugly. Tears cut through her make-up. "I missed you every day. Do you get that? I sat in that house and you were gone." Aurora reached across the bar and took Eva's cold hand in both of hers. Her grip was firm. "I missed you too. I thought if I stayed away long enough you would turn into someone who did not miss me back. Then it would not hurt so much." Eva stared at their joined hands. "Look at us. You deliver noodles and I sue people over noodles. What happened?" "We grew up." "We were supposed to grow up together." Outside, a bus roared past and sprayed water against the window. The bell over the door jangled as two more customers came in, shaking off rain.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flicked"
2"warmth"
3"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1438
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount902
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.44
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Greek1
Street1
Aurora21
Davies1
Eva22
Cardiff1
University1
Golden1
Empress1
Merthyr1
Evan1
Silas6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Davies"
4"Eva"
5"Evan"
6"Silas"
places
0"Greek"
1"Street"
2"Cardiff"
3"University"
globalScore0.28
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1438
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs84
mean17.12
std14.29
cv0.835
sampleLengths
016
151
238
34
420
520
644
72
847
97
101
1113
121
1338
1420
1528
169
178
1857
1925
203
218
2220
2331
248
254
265
2715
283
2912
3020
3138
324
333
342
3540
365
3713
3826
397
4020
4139
423
431
4412
455
4627
4723
4836
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences139
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount910
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02197802197802198
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001098901098901099
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean10.35
std7.75
cv0.749
sampleLengths
016
111
212
310
49
59
65
77
89
99
108
114
129
1311
1420
155
1611
1710
1818
192
2024
219
226
238
247
251
264
279
281
2910
3013
3111
324
3320
348
3515
365
379
388
395
408
413
4213
4328
4425
453
468
477
485
494
42.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.26618705035971224
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences87
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
1"He wiped a pint glass"
2"He shifted his weight off"
3"His hazel eyes flicked to"
4"He gave a small nod"
5"Her blonde hair was cut"
6"Her umbrella dripped onto the"
7"She stared at Aurora and"
8"Her boots left clean prints"
9"She let the umbrella fall"
10"She crossed the distance in"
11"Her grip was cold."
12"He slid one toward Aurora."
13"He kept his distance."
14"She looked at Aurora's jacket,"
15"She turned the glass in"
16"She felt the weight of"
17"He lifted a crate."
18"His left leg dragged for"
19"He did not look at"
ratio0.31
11.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences87
matches
0"The green neon above The"
1"Aurora pushed through the door"
2"The low light in the"
3"Silas stood behind the bar."
4"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
5"He wiped a pint glass"
6"The silver signet ring on"
7"He shifted his weight off"
8"Aurora tugged at the hem"
9"Water dripped onto the floorboards"
10"Silas set the glass down."
11"His hazel eyes flicked to"
12"A gust of cold street"
13"He gave a small nod"
14"A woman stood in the"
15"Her blonde hair was cut"
16"Her umbrella dripped onto the"
17"She stared at Aurora and"
18"Aurora felt the blood leave"
19"The woman stepped forward."
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She let the umbrella fall against the bookshelf that hid the back room."
1"The Eva who used to sit on the wall behind Cardiff University library with a busted speaker and cheap cider had vanished under the cut of that cloth."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.7891%