| 85.71% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The pendant flared so [so]" | | 1 | "she said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.371 | | leniency | 0.743 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.114 | |
| 75.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1418 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.48% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1418 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "sentinels" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "quickened" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 135 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1400 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Wrong direction, she told herself." |
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| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1151 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.91 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 22 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Eva | 1 | | Crunch | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Silence" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 0.544 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "oaks that seemed to lean inward, their gnarled branches clawing at the moonless sky" | | 1 | "whites that seemed to absorb the light rather than reflect it" | | 2 | "seemed closer or maybe the clearing had grown smaller" | | 3 | "trees that seemed to shift and rearrange themselves with every step" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.714 | | wordCount | 1400 | | matches | | 0 | "Not mimicking, but keeping time" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 22.95 | | std | 16.93 | | cv | 0.738 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 70 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 42 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 40 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 40 | | 48 | 42 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 99.05% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "been invited" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 218 | | matches | | 0 | "was screaming" | | 1 | "wasn't just pulsing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 135 | | ratio | 0.119 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd found the first clue tucked inside a takeout container from Golden Empress—a napkin with symbols scrawled in red ink, the same deep crimson as the gemstone in her pendant." | | 1 | "Not blood—copper, maybe, or fear." | | 2 | "She spun, hand instinctively going to her phone—useless, no signal—and caught only darkness." | | 3 | "The standing stones stood like sentinels, their surfaces etched with runes that hadn't been there before—or had she just never noticed?" | | 4 | "Not an animal—not the foxes or deer that usually haunted these woods." | | 5 | "She'd learned that lesson from her ex—don't react to threats until you know what you're dealing with." | | 6 | "Instead, she kept walking, slow and steady, pretending not to hear the rhythm of someone—or something—following her through the undergrowth." | | 7 | "The clearing opened ahead, moonlight spilling across a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shimmered like oil on water, whites that seemed to absorb the light rather than reflect it." | | 8 | "The woman's hair hung in loose waves down her back, but something was wrong with the way it moved—no breeze stirred the air, yet the strands flowed as if underwater." | | 9 | "The woman's features were beautiful in a way that hurt to look at—sharp cheekbones, full lips, eyes that reflected the moonlight like polished silver." | | 10 | "Isolde—if that was her name—laughed, and the sound made the wildflowers shiver." | | 11 | "When she blinked back, Isolde seemed closer—or maybe the clearing had grown smaller." | | 12 | "Portals weren't just doorways—they were invitations." | | 13 | "She remembered now—the fight the night before Eva disappeared." | | 14 | "It wasn't just pulsing anymore—it was screaming." | | 15 | "She tried to scream, but her throat filled with the taste of copper and the sound of laughter—Isolde's laughter, echoing from everywhere and nowhere at once." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 218 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.03211009174311927 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009174311926605505 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 135 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 135 | | mean | 10.37 | | std | 7.3 | | cv | 0.704 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 68.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.45185185185185184 | | totalSentences | 135 | | uniqueOpeners | 61 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she kept walking, slow" | | 1 | "Just a detour." | | 2 | "Then they continued on her" | | 3 | "Only the wildflowers remained, swaying" |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the tree" | | 1 | "She'd found the first clue" | | 2 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 3 | "She spun, hand instinctively going" | | 4 | "Her own voice sounded foreign," | | 5 | "She walked deeper, boots sinking" | | 6 | "They glowed faintly, a sickly" | | 7 | "She pulled her jacket tighter," | | 8 | "She'd learned that lesson from" | | 9 | "She veered left, toward a" | | 10 | "She quickened her pace, but" | | 11 | "It wrapped around her like" | | 12 | "She'd found references in old" | | 13 | "she said slowly" | | 14 | "She remembered now—the fight the" | | 15 | "It wasn't just pulsing anymore—it" | | 16 | "She turned sharply, but Isolde" | | 17 | "She fell hard, palms scraping" | | 18 | "She tried to scream, but" |
| | ratio | 0.188 | |
| 88.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The crunch of gravel under" | | 1 | "She paused at the tree" | | 2 | "The pendant beneath her shirt" | | 3 | "Richmond Park stretched before her," | | 4 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 5 | "Aurora had come here chasing" | | 6 | "She'd found the first clue" | | 7 | "Yu-Fei had mentioned the grove" | | 8 | "Aurora stepped forward." | | 9 | "The moment her foot crossed" | | 10 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 11 | "The pendant flared hot, then" | | 12 | "Something moved to her left." | | 13 | "She spun, hand instinctively going" | | 14 | "That's all it was." | | 15 | "The branches hung motionless above" | | 16 | "Her own voice sounded foreign," | | 17 | "Silence answered back, thick and" | | 18 | "She walked deeper, boots sinking" | | 19 | "The standing stones stood like" |
| | ratio | 0.743 | |
| 49.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the threshold," |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones marked the boundary of the Fae Grove, ancient oaks that seemed to lean inward, their gnarled branches clawing at the moonless sky." | | 1 | "Aurora had come here chasing whispers, following a trail of half-remembered dreams and the cryptic words of a woman who'd vanished three nights ago." | | 2 | "She walked deeper, boots sinking into earth that felt too soft, too yielding." | | 3 | "The clearing opened ahead, moonlight spilling across a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible colors—violets that shimmered like oil on water, whites …" | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant burned against her chest now, radiating heat that made her skin prickle." | | 5 | "Tall, wrapped in robes that shifted between grey and black depending on how Aurora tilted her head." | | 6 | "The woman's hair hung in loose waves down her back, but something was wrong with the way it moved—no breeze stirred the air, yet the strands flowed as if underw…" | | 7 | "The woman's features were beautiful in a way that hurt to look at—sharp cheekbones, full lips, eyes that reflected the moonlight like polished silver." | | 8 | "But there was something off about her proportions, the way her neck stretched just a little too long, the way her smile revealed teeth that were slightly too wh…" | | 9 | "And then the dream, recurring and vivid, of a clearing filled with flowers that bloomed backwards into the earth." |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde took, and the air thickened with the scent of night-blooming flowers and decay" | | 1 | "Isolde's form began, edges blurring like heat distortion" |
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| 35.71% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Yu-Fei had (have)" | | 1 | "Aurora called out (call out)" | | 2 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "the voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 0.8 | | effectiveRatio | 0.229 | |