Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7V17398GQ42DRADMDSD8F

Run Details

Duration:
9.8s
Cost:
$0.000362
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gravel crunched under Aurora’s boots with a sound too loud in the stillness. She paused at the tree line, flashlight beam cutting through the darkness, searching for the ancient oaks that marked the boundary. They should have been here. The map Eva had drawn—more of a sketch, really—showed two twisted oaks standing like sentinels at the grove's edge. But the trees around her were ordinary, their branches bare and scratchy against the star-flecked sky. She stepped forward, her breath forming small clouds in the cold air. The woods swallowed her light quickly, the beam barely reaching beyond the first few feet. Something rustled to her left. A fox, probably. Or a stray cat. She kept walking. The path was barely visible, just a depression in the earth flanked by brambles that caught at her jacket. She’d been walking for twenty minutes since leaving the main trail, following coordinates she’d punched into her phone before the battery died. The screen had gone black just as she reached the treeline, leaving her with nothing but instinct and the memory of Eva’s urgent voice on the phone. “You need to see this, Rory. It’s important. There’s something in the Grove, something that’s been waiting.” She’d laughed then, but now, standing alone in Richmond Park at midnight with only her delivery bag for company, the laugh felt foolish. A twig snapped behind her. She spun around, light sweeping across the darkness. Nothing moved. Just shadows between the trees, shifting and pooling like spilled ink. She walked faster, her boots striking stone. The ground sloped downward, and the air grew colder. Her breath came in visible puffs now, and she could hear it—her own heartbeat, steady and insistent in her ears. Then she heard it. Music. Faint, like someone playing a piano in a distant room. But there were no houses here, no buildings for miles. Just trees and darkness and the occasional flash of an owl’s wings. She stopped. The music faded, then returned, clearer this time. A child’s lullaby, something her mother used to sing. Her mother, who’d died five years ago. Who’d never sung to her at all. “Hello?” Her voice sounded small, swallowed by the trees. Silence. Then the music again, closer now, coming from all directions at once. She backed up, her heel catching on something low to the ground. She stumbled forward, arms windmilling, and landed hard on her hands. The impact sent a jolt up her arms, and she noticed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—the one from childhood, from falling off her bike in Cardiff—throbbing with sudden, sharp pain. The pendant beneath her shirt—given to her by that mysterious benefactor who’d slipped it into her delivery bag three days ago—burned hot against her skin. She pushed herself up, brushing dirt from her knees. The music had stopped. In the sudden quiet, she could hear other things: the rustle of leaves, the creak of branches, the distant hoot of an owl. Normal sounds. Nothing to worry about. But her skin crawled anyway. She pulled out her phone, pressed the power button. The screen flickered to life with a low battery warning—12% remaining. She opened the map app, but the GPS icon spun uselessly. No signal. “Of course,” she muttered, shoving it back into her pocket. The trees seemed to lean inward as she moved deeper into the woods. Her flashlight beam danced erratically, catching glimpses of movement in the periphery. She turned her head sharply each time, but there was never anything there. Just the play of light and shadow, the way darkness pooled in hollows and stretched across the forest floor. She’d been walking for what felt like hours, though it couldn’t have been more than thirty minutes. Time moved differently here, didn’t it? That was part of the lore, wasn’t it? The Fae-touched places where minutes could stretch into days. A shape materialized ahead, tall and humanoid, standing between two ancient oaks. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat. She raised her flashlight, but the beam flickered and died. Darkness rushed in. She fumbled for her phone, clicking it on. The screen cast a pale glow across her face, revealing the figure more clearly. Or rather, not clearly. It stood maybe twenty feet away, featureless except for the suggestion of height and posture. It didn’t move, but she felt its attention like a physical weight pressing against her chest. “Hello?” she whispered. The figure tilted its head, just slightly. A bird called somewhere overhead, and the sound echoed strangely, as if bouncing off invisible walls. Aurora took a step back. Her boots crunched on something hard beneath the leaf litter. Stone. Standing stones, maybe. The map had mentioned them—ancient oaks marking the boundary. But these weren’t oaks. They were slabs of black rock, arranged in a circle around her. She was inside the Grove. The figure began to move, gliding rather than walking, its form blurring at the edges like a reflection in disturbed water. Aurora backed away, her phone clutched tight, but her feet found nothing solid to push against. The ground sloped away, and she stumbled, falling hard onto her side. Pain exploded in her shoulder, and the pendant beneath her shirt flared with heat. She looked down at it through the fabric of her jacket, watching the deep crimson gemstone pulse with an inner light. The figure was closer now. Close enough that she could see it wasn’t human—not really. Its proportions were wrong, limbs too long, joints bending in directions that made her stomach clench. But it moved with a grace that was almost beautiful, like a dancer caught in moonlight. “You came,” it said. The voice was familiar, somehow. Like Eva’s, but not. Like her own voice, echoing back from a cave wall. “I—I didn’t know this was real,” Aurora whispered. “It’s always real for those who look.” The figure reached out, and Aurora flinched away, but her shoulder throbbed too fiercely to move. The pendant grew warmer, pressing against her skin like a brand. “What do you want from me?” “The same thing you want from yourself.” She stared at it, searching its faceless features for meaning. The trees behind her creaked, and she could swear she heard children laughing, distant and muffled as if underwater. “My friends,” she said. “Eva. She said—” “Eva is not your friend.” The words struck like a slap. Aurora’s vision blurred, and she blinked rapidly, trying to clear it. “She lied to me, didn’t she? About what’s really in the Grove.” The figure didn’t answer. Instead, it stepped closer, and Aurora felt the temperature drop by several degrees. Her breath misted in the air between them, and the pendant burned so hot she thought it might melt through her skin. “Why did you give it to me?” she whispered, touching the chain beneath her shirt. “Because you’re ready.” “Ready for what?” “To remember.” The laughter started then—not the children’s, but something else entirely. A sound like wind through broken glass, like nails scraping against bone. It echoed through the Grove, and the standing stones began to hum with a low, resonant frequency. Aurora pressed her hands to her ears, but the sound wasn’t external. It was inside her head, inside her bones, inside the marrow of her teeth. “Remember what?” she screamed over the noise. The figure’s hand was on her shoulder now, cold as winter stone. She looked up at it, really looked, and saw her own face staring back—pale, terrified, beautiful in a way that made her want to cry. “Remember that you were never human,” it said, and the world dissolved into crimson light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1287
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"really"
count4
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"quickly"
2"sharply"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1287
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"silence"
2"flickered"
3"weight"
4"echoed"
5"pulse"
6"stomach"
7"familiar"
8"echoing"
9"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences112
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1275
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1181
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora9
Eva3
Richmond1
Park1
Silence1
Cardiff1
Fae-touched1
Grove2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like hours, though it couldn’t hav"
1"as if bouncing off invisible walls"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.784
wordCount1275
matches
0"not the children’s, but something else entirely"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean24.52
std17.36
cv0.708
sampleLengths
035
140
242
368
417
523
626
736
837
933
109
1113
1256
1325
1442
155
1633
1710
1857
1940
2028
213
2257
233
2423
2544
265
2749
2835
2947
304
3119
328
337
3427
356
367
3729
387
395
4017
4112
4239
4315
443
453
462
4739
4826
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs207
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences122
ratio0.074
matches
0"The map Eva had drawn—more of a sketch, really—showed two twisted oaks standing like sentinels at the grove's edge."
1"Her breath came in visible puffs now, and she could hear it—her own heartbeat, steady and insistent in her ears."
2"The impact sent a jolt up her arms, and she noticed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—the one from childhood, from falling off her bike in Cardiff—throbbing with sudden, sharp pain."
3"The pendant beneath her shirt—given to her by that mysterious benefactor who’d slipped it into her delivery bag three days ago—burned hot against her skin."
4"The screen flickered to life with a low battery warning—12% remaining."
5"The map had mentioned them—ancient oaks marking the boundary."
6"Close enough that she could see it wasn’t human—not really."
7"The laughter started then—not the children’s, but something else entirely."
8"She looked up at it, really looked, and saw her own face staring back—pale, terrified, beautiful in a way that made her want to cry."
72.37% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1196
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"burned hot against her"
2"warmer, pressing against her"
adverbCount61
adverbRatio0.05100334448160535
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.01588628762541806
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean10.45
std6.4
cv0.612
sampleLengths
014
121
25
319
416
512
615
75
83
94
103
1119
1222
1327
1417
1523
165
178
182
1911
207
219
2220
234
241
2510
2610
2712
282
298
309
317
327
339
341
3512
3612
3711
3833
3925
409
414
4223
432
444
455
469
4711
4811
492
52.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3442622950819672
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences101
matches
0"Just shadows between the trees,"
1"Then she heard it."
2"Just trees and darkness and"
3"Then the music again, closer"
4"Just the play of light"
5"Instead, it stepped closer, and"
ratio0.059
73.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences101
matches
0"She paused at the tree"
1"They should have been here."
2"She stepped forward, her breath"
3"She kept walking."
4"She’d been walking for twenty"
5"She’d laughed then, but now,"
6"She spun around, light sweeping"
7"She walked faster, her boots"
8"Her breath came in visible"
9"Her mother, who’d died five"
10"Her voice sounded small, swallowed"
11"She backed up, her heel"
12"She stumbled forward, arms windmilling,"
13"She pushed herself up, brushing"
14"She pulled out her phone,"
15"She opened the map app,"
16"she muttered, shoving it back"
17"Her flashlight beam danced erratically,"
18"She turned her head sharply"
19"She’d been walking for what"
ratio0.366
59.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences101
matches
0"The gravel crunched under Aurora’s"
1"She paused at the tree"
2"They should have been here."
3"The map Eva had drawn—more"
4"She stepped forward, her breath"
5"The woods swallowed her light"
6"Something rustled to her left."
7"A fox, probably."
8"She kept walking."
9"The path was barely visible,"
10"She’d been walking for twenty"
11"The screen had gone black"
12"She’d laughed then, but now,"
13"A twig snapped behind her."
14"She spun around, light sweeping"
15"She walked faster, her boots"
16"The ground sloped downward, and"
17"Her breath came in visible"
18"The music faded, then returned,"
19"A child’s lullaby, something her"
ratio0.802
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She paused at the tree line, flashlight beam cutting through the darkness, searching for the ancient oaks that marked the boundary."
1"The pendant beneath her shirt—given to her by that mysterious benefactor who’d slipped it into her delivery bag three days ago—burned hot against her skin."
2"A bird called somewhere overhead, and the sound echoed strangely, as if bouncing off invisible walls."
3"The figure began to move, gliding rather than walking, its form blurring at the edges like a reflection in disturbed water."
4"Its proportions were wrong, limbs too long, joints bending in directions that made her stomach clench."
5"The trees behind her creaked, and she could swear she heard children laughing, distant and muffled as if underwater."
6"She looked up at it, really looked, and saw her own face staring back—pale, terrified, beautiful in a way that made her want to cry."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"it said, and the world dissolved into crimson light"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she screamed (scream)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.526
79.4886%