Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7VEC4NHE17X4J0R7PSJZX

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Duration:
25.3s
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$0.015425
Provider:
Meta

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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above The Raven's Nest bled colour onto the wet Soho pavement. Rain had come and gone and left the street with a shine. Inside, the air held the smell of old wood and lemon cleaner. The walls wore their collection of maps, the edges curled and brown, and photographs in black and white where men in hats stared from a London that no longer existed. Aurora wiped down the far end of the bar. Her shift at Golden Empress had ended two hours earlier and Silas had let her keep the keys when she needed to count the till. Her shoulder-length black hair stuck to her neck from the damp. The bright blue of her eyes caught the low light. On her left wrist the small crescent scar showed pale when she turned her hand. The door opened and brought a gust of night air with it. Silas looked up from the bookshelf that was not a bookshelf. He had his right hand on it, the silver signet ring catching light. His left leg took a half-beat to follow. "You plan to mop or you plan to christen the floor with that rag?" Rory flicked water at him. Her mouth twitched. "Customer service. You try it." Silas eased himself onto a stool behind the bar. His beard, grey-streaked auburn like his hair, hid most of his expression. He reached for a glass. The door opened again. This time the bell above it rang longer. A woman stepped in and shook rain from a camel coat that cost more than Rory's rent. Her hair was blonde and cut sharp at the jaw. Her bag was leather and structured and sat upright on her shoulder without slouch. Rory did not recognise her at first. Then the woman pushed the hair behind her ear and Rory saw the chipped front tooth, a tiny imperfection in an otherwise polished face. "Eva?" The woman froze. Her hand dropped. "Rory." The name came out as a breath, then a laugh that did not know what to do with itself. Silas watched them. He gave Rory a look and lifted himself with the slight limp and moved to the back. The bookshelf clicked behind him. For a second neither of them moved. The bar was empty except for the low hum of the cooler and a jazz record that crackled at its edge. "You live here now? In London, I mean. I knew you left Cardiff but —" "I live upstairs. Flat above this place." Eva took a step closer. She smelled like santal and something clean. Rory smelled like fried rice and bar soap. "You look -" "Different?" Rory put the rag down. She leaned on the bar. "Last time I saw you, you had pink hair and a pierced eyebrow and you told Mrs. Davies to shove her A-levels." Eva laughed and the sound cracked. "Last time I saw you, you had a backpack with all our notes for the Law exam and you said you would never leave Wales." The words landed on the bar between them. Rory reached for two glasses. Her hands knew the work. "Drink? On the house. Silas owes me." "White wine. If you have it." "We have it. We also have red. And whisky. And that green stuff no one drinks." "Wine is fine." Rory poured. She slid the glass across. Eva's fingers closed around it. Her nails were manicured, short, nude. Eva used to bite hers to the quick and paint skulls on them with biro. Eva took a sip and looked around. "This place is -" "Old. Full of secrets. Like its owner." "God. Rory." "What?" Eva set the glass down hard enough that wine jumped. "You vanished. You texted me from Paddington saying you were here and needed a sofa for a night and then you vanished. Three years. I called your mum. She said you told her not to -" "I told her not to give you my number. Yeah." Silence pulled at the room. Rory kept her eyes on the glass she polished. "You could have told me why." "I did tell you. Evan." "Evan was a prick in sixth form. He was still a prick when you were nineteen. That was not new information." Rory's jaw tightened. The rag twisted in her hand. "He hit me. After you left that night. After you told me to leave him and I didn't. He put his hand through the wall and then he put his hand -" She stopped. She turned her wrist over and the crescent scar showed white. "Oh." Eva's voice was small. "Yeah. Oh." Eva reached out across the bar. Rory did not move at first, then she let her friend take her hand. Eva's palm was warm and soft now, no callus from the guitar she used to play until her fingers bled. "You work in the City?" "Consulting. Finance compliance. I wear a blazer and talk about risk all day. I have a flat in Canary Wharf with a balcony no one sits on." "Sounds shit." "It is. It pays." Eva laughed again and this time it reached her eyes. "You? Law? Did you finish?" "No. I do deliveries for Golden Empress. Part-time. And this. Silas lets me work when he needs cover." "You wanted to be a barrister. Like your dad." "My dad wanted me to be a barrister. My dad still wants it. I wanted out." Eva drank. "Your dad still at the courts in Cardiff?" "Retired. He and Mum moved to Penarth. She gardens. He writes letters to the paper." "You talk to them?" "Once a week. On Sundays. For five minutes." Rory lined up the clean glasses. The row of them caught the light. "You cut your hair." "I did." "You liked it long. You said it made you feel like a witch." "I liked a lot of things." Eva looked down at her own coat. She picked at a loose thread. "I got married." The words fell flat. "You what?" "Last summer. To Daniel. He works in my firm. He is nice. He is - he is very - he is good with numbers." "You didn't invite me." "I didn't invite anyone from back then. It was small. Registry office. Ten people. His parents cried." "Right." Rory poured herself a whisky she did not charge for. "I thought about you. At the wedding. I kept looking at the door." "You used to say you would never marry. You said marriage was a tax scheme for straight people." "I know what I said." Eva's voice lifted and broke. "People change, Rory. You think I want to be the girl who carries a briefcase and argues about derivatives? I thought I would be on stage. I thought we would open that shop, remember? Records and books. You said you would handle the law bit and I would handle the music and we would live above it and have a cat with one ear." "We were fifteen." "So? Fifteen counts." Rory looked at her then, for real. The expensive coat and the sharp haircut could not hide the girl who used to sleep on Rory's floor when her stepdad drank too much, who taught Rory how to smoke without coughing, who had held Rory's head over the toilet after Evan's birthday party. "You could have called." "So could you." The jazz record ended and left a hiss. From the back room came the soft sound of Silas moving boxes, his limp making one foot drag. Eva pushed her wine away. Half still left. "I saw your Instagram. No posts for two years. I thought - I thought something bad happened." "Something bad happened. Then something else happened and it wasn't bad. Silas gave me a key. Yu-Fei gives me free noodles. I have a ceiling that leaks but it is mine." "Is that enough?" Rory considered the question. Her hand went to her wrist, thumb over the scar. "For now. It is mine. That counts for more than enough did before." Eva nodded. Her eyes were wet. She did not wipe them. "Daniel wants kids." "Do you want kids?" "I don't know. I know I want something that does not feel like a contract I signed with my eyes closed." Rory reached over and topped up Eva's glass though Eva had not asked. "Stay for one more. Then you can go back to Canary Wharf and tell Daniel you saw a ghost." Eva lifted the glass. "To ghosts." Rory lifted hers and they clinked.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1426
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1426
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"eyebrow"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1429
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount753
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
London1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas5
Rory21
Evan1
Eva18
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Empress"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Golden"
globalScore0.106
windowScore0
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like santal and something clean"
1"smelled like fried rice and bar soap"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1429
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs107
mean13.36
std13.23
cv0.991
sampleLengths
026
142
270
312
432
514
68
75
826
94
1049
1131
121
136
141
1519
1625
1728
1815
197
2020
213
221
2310
2422
256
2625
278
2810
297
306
3116
323
3333
347
354
367
372
381
3910
4036
4110
4214
436
445
4521
469
4732
4813
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"were manicured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs137
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences147
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount870
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02528735632183908
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean9.72
std8.94
cv0.92
sampleLengths
014
112
212
330
49
525
611
710
815
912
1011
1113
128
1314
145
153
165
179
1812
195
204
218
2217
2310
2414
257
2624
271
283
293
301
3119
323
3317
345
357
3621
3715
387
395
407
418
423
431
445
455
4622
476
4825
498
55.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3469387755102041
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners51
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then the woman pushed the"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences78
matches
0"Her shift at Golden Empress"
1"Her shoulder-length black hair stuck"
2"He had his right hand"
3"His left leg took a"
4"Her mouth twitched."
5"His beard, grey-streaked auburn like"
6"He reached for a glass."
7"Her hair was blonde and"
8"Her bag was leather and"
9"Her hand dropped."
10"He gave Rory a look"
11"She smelled like santal and"
12"She leaned on the bar."
13"Her hands knew the work."
14"She slid the glass across."
15"Her nails were manicured, short,"
16"She turned her wrist over"
17"She picked at a loose"
18"Her hand went to her"
19"Her eyes were wet."
ratio0.269
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences78
matches
0"The green neon above The"
1"Rain had come and gone"
2"The walls wore their collection"
3"Aurora wiped down the far"
4"Her shift at Golden Empress"
5"Her shoulder-length black hair stuck"
6"The bright blue of her"
7"The door opened and brought"
8"Silas looked up from the"
9"He had his right hand"
10"His left leg took a"
11"Rory flicked water at him."
12"Her mouth twitched."
13"Silas eased himself onto a"
14"His beard, grey-streaked auburn like"
15"He reached for a glass."
16"The door opened again."
17"This time the bell above"
18"A woman stepped in and"
19"Her hair was blonde and"
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The expensive coat and the sharp haircut could not hide the girl who used to sleep on Rory's floor when her stepdad drank too much, who taught Rory how to smoke…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.5886%