| 98.73% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she says finally [finally]" | | 1 | "Malphora agrees quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "she says quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "Rory asks finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 79 | | tagDensity | 0.165 | | leniency | 0.329 | | rawRatio | 0.308 | | effectiveRatio | 0.101 | |
| 72.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1252 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 68.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1252 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "flicker" | | 2 | "unreadable" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "eyebrow" | | 5 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "managed to" | | 1 | "begins to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1250 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 25 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 762 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 3.28 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 25 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Malphora | 16 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Malphora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1250 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 87 | | mean | 14.37 | | std | 13.97 | | cv | 0.972 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 62 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 45 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 99.51% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 125 | | matches | | |
| 97.86% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 127 | | ratio | 0.016 | | matches | | 0 | "Three months of silence, of pretending she didn't care, of building walls so high even she couldn't climb them—and here was Malphora, offering her a way back down." | | 1 | "\"Good.\" Malphora's expression doesn't soften, but there's something in her voice—something almost tender." |
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| 84.74% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 766 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.057441253263707574 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015665796344647518 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 127 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 127 | | mean | 9.84 | | std | 8.72 | | cv | 0.885 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 32 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 58.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.36220472440944884 | | totalSentences | 127 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she finds herself standing" | | 1 | "Then Malphora exhales, slow and" | | 2 | "Slowly, carefully, Malphora crosses the" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "She doesn't flinch, but Rory" | | 1 | "She'd come here looking for" | | 2 | "She's holding a container of" | | 3 | "She thinks about the way" | | 4 | "she says finally" | | 5 | "They stand there, separated by" | | 6 | "She nods, just once, and" | | 7 | "She stops an arm's length" | | 8 | "she says quietly" | | 9 | "They're both quiet for a" | | 10 | "They settle into the worn" |
| | ratio | 0.186 | |
| 2.37% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swings open before" | | 1 | "The name slips out like" | | 2 | "She doesn't flinch, but Rory" | | 3 | "Rory steps back, but there's" | | 4 | "The smell of jasmine and" | | 5 | "Rory's jaw tightens." | | 6 | "She'd come here looking for" | | 7 | "Malphora nods toward the stairwell" | | 8 | "Rory's chest burns." | | 9 | "Malphora's voice doesn't rise, but" | | 10 | "The paper bag crinkles in" | | 11 | "She's holding a container of" | | 12 | "The words land like a" | | 13 | "Rory's breath catches." | | 14 | "Rory feels the blood drain" | | 15 | "The silence stretches, filled only" | | 16 | "Rory can hear Ptolemy meowing" | | 17 | "Malphora steps closer, just enough" | | 18 | "Rory opens her mouth, closes" | | 19 | "The truth sits heavy between" |
| | ratio | 0.915 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swings open before she can second-guess herself, and Rory freezes in the narrow hallway, one hand still gripping the door frame, the other clutching a …" | | 1 | "The smell of jasmine and sandalwood clings to her, same as it did three months ago when she walked out of his flat with her suitcase and a silence that stretche…" | | 2 | "Instead she finds herself standing in someone else's hallway, watching the ghost of a person she used to know stare back at her through tired eyes." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the Golden Empress something Yu-Fei insisted (insist)" | | 1 | "Malphora agrees quietly (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 79 | | tagDensity | 0.076 | | leniency | 0.152 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |