Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7Y21A7T7P27H12CPCW2TX

Run Details

Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.029462
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came again — three measured raps, unhurried, patient in a way that said the person on the other side knew exactly how long she'd been standing there deciding whether to answer. Rory looked through the peephole, and her stomach dropped straight through the floorboards of Eva's cramped hallway and into the curry house below. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor with his collar turned up against the October rain, platinum hair darkened at the tips, one gloved hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane. Even distorted through the fisheye lens, he was absurd. Impeccable. A charcoal suit on Brick Lane at midnight, like a rumor wearing a man. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, purring, traitorous. She opened the first deadbolt. Then the second. Her hand hesitated on the third, and she hated herself for the hesitation — for the way her pulse had already betrayed her, hammering at her throat like it had been waiting three months for this exact moment. The third lock turned. She opened the door. "Rory." His voice was lower than she remembered, or maybe she'd just forgotten on purpose. The amber eye caught the hallway light; the black one swallowed it. "You look well." "You look like you're about to tell me someone's dead." A flicker at the corner of his mouth. Not quite a smile. "May I come in?" Every sensible part of her — the part that had survived Evan, the part that had packed a bag and fled Cardiff with nothing but a crescent-shaped scar and her mother's old suitcase — said no. She stepped aside. He moved past her into the flat, and the whole cramped space rearranged itself around him. Books everywhere, scrolls weighed down with mugs, Eva's research notes pinned to the walls like the lair of a very academic conspiracy theorist, and in the middle of it Lucien Moreau, shaking rain from his shoulders like something out of a film she'd have mocked on principle. Ptolemy immediately abandoned her to investigate his shoes. "You've been avoiding me," he said. "I've been working." She shut the door. Did not lock it. Noticed herself not locking it. "Deliveries for Yu-Fei don't leave a lot of time for social calls." "Three months, Rory." "Is that how long it's been?" The look he gave her could have stripped paint. He set his cane against the arm of Eva's sagging sofa, unbuttoned his jacket, and sat — uninvited, unhurried, folding himself into the mess of the flat with the ease of a man who had never once doubted he'd be welcome anywhere. She stayed standing. Standing felt like the high ground, even though it wasn't. "Eva's at the library," she said. "She'll be back soon." "Eva is in Edinburgh until Sunday. She told me herself." He glanced up, and there it was — the thing she'd been dreading, the tiredness under the polish. "I asked." Of course he had. Lucien didn't show up anywhere unarmed with information. She crossed her arms and leaned back against the door, aware of the scar on her left wrist where her sleeve had ridden up, aware of him noticing it the way he noticed everything. "Then you know there's nothing to discuss." "Malphora," he said quietly. The name landed in the room like a stone in still water. She hadn't heard it in three months. Hadn't let herself think it. The name from that night — the night at the docks, the thing with too many teeth, Lucien's blade sliding from his cane like a whispered secret, and after, in the alley, his hands on her face and his mouth on hers and the world gone narrow and bright and terrifying. And then her, pulling away. Saying something stupid. Something about complications, about not being one of his transactions, and watching his face close like a door. "Don't call me that." "It's your name." "It's a name you gave me." "One you earned." He leaned forward, elbows on his knees, and for the first time the fixer mask slipped — just a fraction, just enough to show the man underneath, the one she'd spent ninety-one nights trying not to think about. "You stood in front of a creature from my father's realm and you didn't run. Do you know what most humans do, Rory? They run. The smart ones, anyway." "I did run. Afterwards. You noticed." Silence. Rain against the window. Somewhere below, the curry house's extractor fan hummed its eternal note. "Is that why you're here?" she asked. "To relitigate it? Because I've had a long shift and Eva's wine is terrible and I don't have the energy to lose an argument to you in four languages." His mouth twitched. "Three, currently. My Portuguese has gone rusty." "Tragic." "I'm here because I need your help." He said it plainly, no flourish, and that plainness scared her more than any of his elegant maneuvering ever had. Lucien Moreau did not ask for help. He traded, he brokered, he owed and was owed. "Something has come through from Avaros. It's looking for the woman who killed its sibling at the dockside in July. It's been asking questions in places where questions get answered." The room tilted slightly. She pressed her shoulders harder into the door. "It's looking for me." "It's looking for Malphora. Which means it does not yet know your face, your name, or that you live above a bar in Whitechapel and spend your Thursdays in a flat full of demonological texts over a curry house." He gestured at the walls, at Eva's obsessive, beautiful mess. "I intend to keep it that way. But I need you close until it's dealt with. And before you say it — yes, I know how that sounds. Yes, I know you don't trust my motives. Your caution is one of the few things about you that has never once been wrong." She stared at him. "That was almost a compliment." "I'm told I should practice them." "Lucien." His name came out quieter than she meant. She pushed off the door and crossed to the window, because looking at him had started to feel like standing too close to a fire. Rain made runnels of the glass; Brick Lane shone below in smears of neon and sodium. "That night. What I said. About being one of your transactions." "I remember." "I didn't mean—" She stopped. Started again, because she was Rory Carter and she did not flinch from things, not anymore. "I did mean it. Partly. I watched my ex turn affection into leverage for two years. I know what it looks like when someone collects people. And you—" She turned to face him. "You collect everyone." He was standing now, she'd register later that she hadn't heard him rise, the half-demon stillness of him. He stood close enough that she could see the rain still beaded on his shoulders, smell the cold air on his wool and something underneath it, cedar, smoke. "Everyone," he agreed. "Everyone but one." Her breath went somewhere and didn't come back. "I have spent three months telling myself you were right to run," he said. "That a woman with your future had no business tangled in mine. I very nearly believed it. And then tonight something with my father's accent started asking for you by name, and I understood—" a fracture in the polish, raw as wire, "—that I could live with you hating me. I could not live with the alternative." "Lucien." Barely a whisper. "Say the word and I'll leave. I'll handle it from a distance, I'll keep it off your scent, and you'll never see me on this doorstep again. I give you my word, which — whatever else you believe of me — you know I have never broken." And that was the hell of it. She did know. Under all the maneuvering, the cane blades and charcoal armor, Lucien Moreau kept his word like other men kept their lives. Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa between them, entirely unbothered, and began to wash his face. Rory looked at the man in the middle of her best friend's cluttered flat — rain-soaked, uninvited, offering her a door she both wanted and feared to close — and felt something in her chest that had been locked since July finally, treacherously, turn over. "Eva's wine really is terrible," she said. "But there's tea." The breath he let out was small and shattered and human, and the smile that followed was the first real one she'd ever seen on him. "Tea," he said, "would be perfect."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.383
leniency0.766
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.043
85.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1424
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1424
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"affection"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"stomach"
2"pulse"
3"flicker"
4"silence"
5"affection"
6"whisper"
7"shattered"
8"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
86.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1436
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount967
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Moreau4
October1
Brick2
Lane2
Evan1
Cardiff1
Lucien6
Did1
Silence1
Started1
Rory3
Carter1
Barely1
July1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Did"
5"Rory"
6"Carter"
7"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like the high ground, even though"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1436
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean28.72
std26.55
cv0.924
sampleLengths
033
123
256
37
446
58
630
710
816
939
1071
116
1228
133
146
1564
1610
1730
1846
197
204
21101
224
233
246
2570
266
2716
2836
2910
301
3173
3216
33101
349
356
3661
372
3857
3946
406
418
4271
434
4447
4531
4615
4745
4810
4932
96.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"was owed"
1"been locked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs173
matches
0"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences104
ratio0.106
matches
0"The knock came again — three measured raps, unhurried, patient in a way that said the person on the other side knew exactly how long she'd been standing there deciding whether to answer."
1"Her hand hesitated on the third, and she hated herself for the hesitation — for the way her pulse had already betrayed her, hammering at her throat like it had been waiting three months for this exact moment."
2"The amber eye caught the hallway light; the black one swallowed it."
3"Every sensible part of her — the part that had survived Evan, the part that had packed a bag and fled Cardiff with nothing but a crescent-shaped scar and her mother's old suitcase — said no."
4"He set his cane against the arm of Eva's sagging sofa, unbuttoned his jacket, and sat — uninvited, unhurried, folding himself into the mess of the flat with the ease of a man who had never once doubted he'd be welcome anywhere."
5"\"Eva is in Edinburgh until Sunday. She told me herself.\" He glanced up, and there it was — the thing she'd been dreading, the tiredness under the polish."
6"The name from that night — the night at the docks, the thing with too many teeth, Lucien's blade sliding from his cane like a whispered secret, and after, in the alley, his hands on her face and his mouth on hers and the world gone narrow and bright and terrifying."
7"\"One you earned.\" He leaned forward, elbows on his knees, and for the first time the fixer mask slipped — just a fraction, just enough to show the man underneath, the one she'd spent ninety-one nights trying not to think about."
8"Rain made runnels of the glass; Brick Lane shone below in smears of neon and sodium."
9"\"That a woman with your future had no business tangled in mine. I very nearly believed it. And then tonight something with my father's accent started asking for you by name, and I understood—\" a fracture in the polish, raw as wire, \"—that I could live with you hating me. I could not live with the alternative.\""
10"Rory looked at the man in the middle of her best friend's cluttered flat — rain-soaked, uninvited, offering her a door she both wanted and feared to close — and felt something in her chest that had been locked since July finally, treacherously, turn over."
95.54% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount887
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.04509582863585118
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006764374295377677
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean13.81
std13.95
cv1.01
sampleLengths
033
123
232
39
41
514
67
75
83
938
104
114
1215
1312
143
1510
168
174
184
1936
203
2116
2247
238
246
257
264
275
2812
293
306
319
3242
333
3410
356
364
3728
382
394
408
4134
427
434
4412
457
465
4751
485
493
67.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4423076923076923
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences66
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Of course he had."
2"Somewhere below, the curry house's"
3"Barely a whisper"
ratio0.061
56.36% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences66
matches
0"She opened the first deadbolt."
1"Her hand hesitated on the"
2"She opened the door."
3"His voice was lower than"
4"She stepped aside."
5"He moved past her into"
6"She shut the door"
7"He set his cane against"
8"She stayed standing."
9"He glanced up, and there"
10"She crossed her arms and"
11"he said quietly"
12"She hadn't heard it in"
13"He leaned forward, elbows on"
14"His mouth twitched."
15"He said it plainly, no"
16"He traded, he brokered, he"
17"She pressed her shoulders harder"
18"He gestured at the walls,"
19"She stared at him."
ratio0.409
88.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences66
matches
0"The knock came again —"
1"Rory looked through the peephole,"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"A charcoal suit on Brick"
4"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
5"She opened the first deadbolt."
6"Her hand hesitated on the"
7"The third lock turned."
8"She opened the door."
9"His voice was lower than"
10"The amber eye caught the"
11"A flicker at the corner"
12"Every sensible part of her"
13"She stepped aside."
14"He moved past her into"
15"Ptolemy immediately abandoned her to"
16"She shut the door"
17"The look he gave her"
18"He set his cane against"
19"She stayed standing."
ratio0.742
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Even distorted through the fisheye"
ratio0.015
28.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The knock came again — three measured raps, unhurried, patient in a way that said the person on the other side knew exactly how long she'd been standing there d…"
1"Every sensible part of her — the part that had survived Evan, the part that had packed a bag and fled Cardiff with nothing but a crescent-shaped scar and her mo…"
2"He set his cane against the arm of Eva's sagging sofa, unbuttoned his jacket, and sat — uninvited, unhurried, folding himself into the mess of the flat with the…"
3"Rory looked at the man in the middle of her best friend's cluttered flat — rain-soaked, uninvited, offering her a door she both wanted and feared to close — and…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.191
leniency0.383
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.043
88.1001%