Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD82MPNYV9WYW1ZVAGVQDCY

Run Details

Duration:
51.4s
Cost:
$0.020801
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose out of the dark like teeth. Rory killed the bike's headlamp at the edge of Richmond Park and walked the last stretch on foot, the Golden Empress insulated bag still slung over her shoulder out of habit more than sense. Nobody had ordered food out here. Nobody lived out here. But the pendant beneath her shirt had been warm all evening — warm enough to feel through cotton — and the warmth had tugged her across half of London like a fish on a line, growing stronger with every mile west. She ducked between two ancient oaks and stepped into the Grove. The cold of the October night fell away. Wildflowers brushed her shins, pale and open, glowing faintly under no moon she could find. The clearing lay quiet. Too quiet. She'd grown up near countryside; she knew what night sounded like. Insects. Something rustling. The small, constant machinery of the dark. Here there was nothing. Her own footsteps came back muffled, as though the grass swallowed them. "Hello?" The word died at her lips. Not echoed. Died. She pulled the pendant out from under her collar. The crimson stone throbbed against her palm, warm as a held hand, and its faint inner glow lit the crescent scar on her wrist. Near a Hel portal, Eva had told her once, half-laughing. Whatever that meant. Rory only knew the thing had never lied to her before, and right now it pulled toward the far side of the clearing, where the standing stones leaned together in a broken ring. She crossed toward them. The grass whispered under her trainers. Behind her, something whispered back. She stopped. The whispering stopped. She turned her head slowly, the way you do when you don't want to admit you're afraid, and the clearing lay empty — flowers, stones, the black line of oaks beyond. Nothing. "Wind," she told herself, and her voice came out thin. She took three more steps. The grass at her back whispered again — longer this time, deliberate, a drag of sound that had no wind in it. She spun. Nothing moved. The flowers stood still as painted things. Then she noticed the flowers had turned. All of them. Their pale faces angled toward her, and she could not remember them facing that way when she'd crossed. Rory's mouth went dry. She walked faster, trainers swishing, and reached the ring of stones. The pendant burned now, almost painfully, and the glow spilling between her fingers had gone from ember-red to something brighter, pulsing in a rhythm that matched nothing in her body. The stones themselves were wrong up close. The carvings on them — she'd taken them for weathering, for the soft erosion of centuries — were letters. Or had been letters. They shifted when she looked straight at them, settling into new arrangements at the edge of her vision. She read none of them. She didn't want to. Between the two tallest stones, the darkness looked thicker. Not shadow. Thickness. The air there had a grain to it, like old film, and staring at it made her eyes water. The pendant pulled toward that gap so hard the chain went taut against the back of her neck. "Absolutely not," she breathed, and stepped back. Something stepped back with her. Behind the stone to her left — a sound of weight shifting, of grass pressed under a foot that wasn't hers. Rory froze. Every childhood instinct screamed at her to run and every adult one told her running meant falling, meant not knowing where it was. She turned her head by degrees. A figure stood at the far edge of the clearing, just inside the oak line. Tall. Still. She could not have said how she knew it faced her — it had no face she could find, only a paleness where a face should be, like the flowers. Like the flowers, it had turned toward her. "Eva?" She knew it wasn't Eva. The name came out anyway, a child's word in the dark. The figure tilted its head. The gesture was wrong — too far, too slow, an owl's curiosity rendered in human shape. Rory backed away, one hand clamped over the pendant to smother its light, and the figure took a step into the clearing. Then another. It moved the way reflections move, smooth and weightless, and the grass did not whisper beneath it. The grass leaned away. She counted her own breaths. She made herself think. The stones at her back, the thing in front, the pocket of night pressing in — and time, Eva's voice in memory, time moves differently in there, an hour can be minutes or days. How long had she been inside? How long had the figure been standing at the tree line before she'd seen it? Had it been there when she arrived, watching her cross? The pulsing of the pendant changed. Faster. Urgent. The warmth spiked hot enough to sting, and the thick darkness between the standing stones shivered like water disturbed. The figure stopped. Its head snapped toward the gap between the stones — snapped, no smoothness now — and for the first time Rory heard it make a sound: a low, drawn exhalation, almost a sigh, almost a word. It was afraid of the gap. Or it was waiting for it. The darkness between the stones bulged. Not opened. Bulged, like something pressing against a sheet from the other side, and Rory watched the fabric of the night stretch around a shape she could not parse — too many angles, or too few — while the pendant seared her palm and the pale-faced thing at the tree line sank slowly, reverently, to its knees. Rory ran. She didn't decide to. Her body decided, and she was sprinting across the clearing, flowers breaking under her feet, their pale heads turning to follow her, all of them, hundreds of small faces swivelling as she passed. She didn't look back at the stones. She looked at the gap between the oaks where she'd come in and she aimed herself at it like an arrow, and all around her the clearing began, very softly, to sing.
created_at"2026-07-25T18:19:54.463Z" 7/25/2026, 6:19:54 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1021
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1021
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"absolutely"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"footsteps"
2"echoed"
3"throbbed"
4"absolutely"
5"weight"
6"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences95
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1035
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1030
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Grove1
October1
Hel1
Eva3
Rory8
persons
0"Empress"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Grove"
4"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1035
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"facing that way"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean34.5
std27.51
cv0.797
sampleLengths
010
185
211
366
41
59
679
710
85
937
1010
1138
1228
1393
149
1549
167
1726
1831
1955
2017
2121
2245
2374
2427
2551
266
2757
282
2976
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was waiting"
1"was sprinting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences96
ratio0.115
matches
0"But the pendant beneath her shirt had been warm all evening — warm enough to feel through cotton — and the warmth had tugged her across half of London like a fish on a line, growing stronger with every mile west."
1"She'd grown up near countryside; she knew what night sounded like."
2"She turned her head slowly, the way you do when you don't want to admit you're afraid, and the clearing lay empty — flowers, stones, the black line of oaks beyond."
3"The grass at her back whispered again — longer this time, deliberate, a drag of sound that had no wind in it."
4"The carvings on them — she'd taken them for weathering, for the soft erosion of centuries — were letters."
5"Behind the stone to her left — a sound of weight shifting, of grass pressed under a foot that wasn't hers."
6"She could not have said how she knew it faced her — it had no face she could find, only a paleness where a face should be, like the flowers."
7"The gesture was wrong — too far, too slow, an owl's curiosity rendered in human shape."
8"The stones at her back, the thing in front, the pocket of night pressing in — and time, Eva's voice in memory, time moves differently in there, an hour can be minutes or days."
9"Its head snapped toward the gap between the stones — snapped, no smoothness now — and for the first time Rory heard it make a sound: a low, drawn exhalation, almost a sigh, almost a word."
10"Bulged, like something pressing against a sheet from the other side, and Rory watched the fabric of the night stretch around a shape she could not parse — too many angles, or too few — while the pendant seared her palm and the pale-faced thing at the tree line sank slowly, reverently, to its knees."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1019
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03532875368007851
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008832188420019628
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean10.78
std10.84
cv1.005
sampleLengths
010
134
26
34
441
511
68
715
84
92
1011
111
122
137
144
1512
161
176
182
191
209
2124
2210
233
2433
254
266
275
282
293
3031
311
3210
335
3422
352
362
377
387
393
4018
414
4211
4330
447
4519
464
4718
485
494
57.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners40
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Then she noticed the flowers"
ratio0.013
83.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences76
matches
0"She ducked between two ancient"
1"She'd grown up near countryside;"
2"Her own footsteps came back"
3"She pulled the pendant out"
4"She crossed toward them."
5"She turned her head slowly,"
6"she told herself, and her"
7"She took three more steps."
8"Their pale faces angled toward"
9"She walked faster, trainers swishing,"
10"They shifted when she looked"
11"She read none of them."
12"She didn't want to."
13"she breathed, and stepped back"
14"She turned her head by"
15"She could not have said"
16"She knew it wasn't Eva"
17"It moved the way reflections"
18"She counted her own breaths."
19"She made herself think."
ratio0.342
52.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences76
matches
0"The standing stones rose out"
1"Rory killed the bike's headlamp"
2"Nobody had ordered food out"
3"Nobody lived out here."
4"She ducked between two ancient"
5"The cold of the October"
6"Wildflowers brushed her shins, pale"
7"The clearing lay quiet."
8"She'd grown up near countryside;"
9"The small, constant machinery of"
10"Here there was nothing."
11"Her own footsteps came back"
12"The word died at her"
13"She pulled the pendant out"
14"The crimson stone throbbed against"
15"Whatever that meant."
16"Rory only knew the thing"
17"She crossed toward them."
18"The grass whispered under her"
19"The whispering stopped."
ratio0.816
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The pendant burned now, almost painfully, and the glow spilling between her fingers had gone from ember-red to something brighter, pulsing in a rhythm that matc…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
82.6114%