| 97.44% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "The figure stepped fully [fully]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.103 | |
| 91.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "effortless" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "depths" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "silk" | | 14 | "chill" | | 15 | "down her spine" | | 16 | "unreadable" | | 17 | "silence" | | 18 | "measured" | | 19 | "tension" | | 20 | "echoed" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "sent a chill down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.24% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1157 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.08% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 887 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.58 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 14 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Veil | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Belphegor | 3 | | Dymas | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Isolde | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Belphegor" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.711 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "earth that seemed to drink sound whole" | | 1 | "something like static electricity, making th" | | 2 | "as if stating the obvious" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.864 | | wordCount | 1157 | | matches | | 0 | "not with heat but with something like static electricity, making the hairs on" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 34.03 | | std | 17.69 | | cv | 0.52 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 72 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 67 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.42% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t looking" | | 1 | "was calling" | | 2 | "was like breaking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.138 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of copper and something else—something that made the back of Aurora’s throat tighten." | | 1 | "Their violet eyes—faintly glowing even in the dim light—scanned the space ahead with a patience that had outlasted centuries." | | 2 | "The trees weren’t just trees—they were something older, their bark etched with symbols that shifted when she wasn’t looking directly at them." | | 3 | "Flowers bloomed in impossible colors—petals that shimmered like liquid starlight, their fragrance sweet and intoxicating." | | 4 | "But then she caught it—a sound like distant music, played on instruments she couldn’t name, coming from somewhere deep within the grove." | | 5 | "A flash of movement caught Aurora’s attention—a figure darting between the trees, tall and impossibly thin, with skin like polished obsidian and eyes that burned with inner fire." | | 6 | "The figure paused at the edge of their vision, and for a moment, Aurora thought she could make out the features of a face—beautiful and cruel, with sharp cheekbones and lips curved in something that might have been a smile." | | 7 | "Nyx’s form flickered again, and Aurora caught a glimpse of something beneath the surface—pain, maybe, or anger." | | 8 | "He was exactly as she had imagined him—tall and regal, with skin like midnight and hair that moved like liquid mercury." | | 9 | "The metal was cold against her palm, but it felt right—like coming home after a long journey." | | 10 | "She could hear Nyx’s heartbeat—or what passed for one—in the silence around them, and Isolde’s breathing, slow and measured despite the tension that crackled in the air." |
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| 99.15% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 903 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.04097452934662237 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016611295681063124 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 14.46 | | std | 6.78 | | cv | 0.469 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 40 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 87.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5375 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the threshold," | | 1 | "Their violet eyes—faintly glowing even" | | 2 | "She moved with the effortless" | | 3 | "Their form flickered, becoming momentarily" | | 4 | "They stepped forward together, their" | | 5 | "It was beautiful and wrong" | | 6 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 7 | "She raised the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 8 | "they said, their voice carrying" | | 9 | "He was exactly as she" | | 10 | "His eyes were pools of" | | 11 | "he continued, his gaze sweeping" | | 12 | "His attention settled on Aurora," | | 13 | "His smile was sharp enough" | | 14 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 15 | "She could hear Nyx’s heartbeat—or" | | 16 | "she said, more to herself" |
| | ratio | 0.283 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of copper" | | 1 | "She paused at the threshold," | | 2 | "The chain pulsed faintly against" | | 3 | "Their violet eyes—faintly glowing even" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her silver hair" | | 5 | "She moved with the effortless" | | 6 | "Aurora nodded, though she wasn’t" | | 7 | "The grove was alive in" | | 8 | "The trees weren’t just trees—they" | | 9 | "The standing stones that marked" | | 10 | "Isolde murmured, her pale lavender" | | 11 | "Nyx let out a sound" | | 12 | "Their form flickered, becoming momentarily" | | 13 | "Aurora swallowed hard." | | 14 | "The pendant grew warmer." | | 15 | "They stepped forward together, their" | | 16 | "The grove opened up around" | | 17 | "Flowers bloomed in impossible colors—petals" | | 18 | "The air itself shimmered, not" | | 19 | "Isolde said, as if stating" |
| | ratio | 0.95 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The chain pulsed faintly against her skin, a quiet heartbeat that matched the rhythm of her own." | | 1 | "Their violet eyes—faintly glowing even in the dim light—scanned the space ahead with a patience that had outlasted centuries." | | 2 | "She moved with the effortless grace of someone who had never needed to walk on solid ground, leaving no footprints in the dew-kissed grass." | | 3 | "The standing stones that marked the boundary hummed with a low, resonant frequency that made her teeth ache." | | 4 | "They stepped forward together, their footsteps muffled by the spongy earth that seemed to drink sound whole." | | 5 | "Flowers bloomed in impossible colors—petals that shimmered like liquid starlight, their fragrance sweet and intoxicating." | | 6 | "The Heartstone had been pulling her here for weeks, its warmth guiding her steps like a compass." | | 7 | "It was beautiful and wrong all at once, like listening to a memory of happiness that had never actually belonged to her." | | 8 | "They moved deeper into the grove, following a path that hadn’t been there a moment ago but now stretched out before them like a ribbon of moonlight." | | 9 | "The figure paused at the edge of their vision, and for a moment, Aurora thought she could make out the features of a face—beautiful and cruel, with sharp cheekb…" | | 10 | "She could hear Nyx’s heartbeat—or what passed for one—in the silence around them, and Isolde’s breathing, slow and measured despite the tension that crackled in…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, as if stating the obvious" | | 1 | "Isolde continued, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "he continued, his gaze sweeping over the three of them" | | 3 | "she said, her voice steadier than she felt" | | 4 | "she said, more to herself than to anyone else" |
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| 47.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde continued (continue)" | | 2 | "The figure laughed (laugh)" | | 3 | "he continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.205 | |