Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD85BGCMCN938TFH48RPEPS

Run Details

Duration:
11.0s
Cost:
$0.000258
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The amber glow of the green neon sign buzzed overhead, casting its sickly hue across the rain-slicked pavement outside. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air hung thick with the ghosts of a thousand conversations—whiskey fumes mingling with cigarette smoke and something older, something like regret. Aurora Carter pulled her coat tighter around her shoulders as she pushed through the door, the bell above giving its tired chime. She hadn't planned on finding anyone here. Not tonight. Just a quick drop-off at Golden Empress, a few hours of work, then home to a flat that felt too quiet even when she was alone. But the universe had other plans. The bar was nearly empty, save for an elderly man hunched over a whiskey at the far end, and another figure at the bar who made her pause mid-step. Silas Blackwood. Or what was left of him, anyway. His auburn hair was more grey than red now, his face deeply lined in ways that hadn't existed when she'd last seen him five years ago. The slight limp in his left leg was more pronounced, his movements deliberate, careful. He wore a dark jacket that looked expensive, and when he turned toward her, his hazel eyes held a depth she hadn't remembered. "Rory." She stopped halfway between the doorway and the bar, her delivery bag still clutched in her hand. "Silas." He pushed away from the bar stool with a creak, moving with the careful rhythm of someone who'd learned to live with pain. "You're early." "I dropped off a order at Golden Empress this afternoon. Thought I'd grab a drink before heading home." Her voice sounded different to her own ears, steadier than she'd expected. "This place hasn't changed a bit." "The maps," he said, nodding toward the walls lined with faded photographs and old charts. "Still collecting dust." She ran a finger along the spines of books that hid the passage to the secret room. "Still hiding things, I see." His smile was thinner than she remembered. "Some things are worth hiding." They stood in an awkward space between the bar and the door, the weight of years pressing down between them. Aurora had left this city running from something—or someone—she wasn't sure she could still name. The scar on her left wrist, barely visible beneath her sleeve, felt like a brand. "You look different," she said finally. "So do you." He moved to sit, his knee protesting as he lowered himself onto the stool. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light. "Older." "Wiser?" she offered, sliding onto the stool next to him. He laughed, but it didn't reach his eyes. "Depends who's asking." The elderly patron at the far end raised his glass in a toast she couldn't hear. "I came back because I needed to see someone who knew the real me," she said, then immediately winced. "Not the version with the aliases and the lies." Silas studied her face, really studied it, like he was trying to read a book he'd forgotten how to open. "Eva sent you a text. Six months ago. Said you were in town." "I'm not in town." She touched her wrist absently. "I'm just passing through. London's convenient for deliveries." Convenient. Such a small word for everything that had happened between them. For the way things had ended. For the silence that had stretched across an ocean of years. "You could stay," he said. "I should probably get back to work." She glanced at her phone, then at him. "Unless you want to talk like adults." Like adults who'd spent years pretending not to owe each other apologies. "I wanted to ask you about Prague," she said suddenly. "The operation you mentioned in your letter." His hand stilled mid-air, reaching for another drink that hadn't been there a moment before. "It went wrong." "It killed someone important to you." "People die," he said, but his voice cracked on the words. "In the job. You know that." "I know." Her voice was softer now, stripped of its former armor. "But it was Martinez. And you left him in the rubble because you were afraid." Afraid. The word hung between them like smoke. "I did what I had to do." "No," she said. "You did what you always do." The door chimed again, and a server boy hurried past, balancing a tray of pints. The moment stretched, fragile as old glass. "What changed?" she asked. "What changed?" He looked away, toward the bar's back room, toward whatever ghosts lived there now. "Everything changed, I suppose. The knee. The retirement. Learning that some bags can't be carried forever." "And you thought leaving was easier than staying." "I thought I was protecting you." "From what?" "From the truth that I failed." She turned to face him fully, seeing the lines around his eyes, the way his hair had silvered at the temples. "You never said that in your letter." "I didn't know how to say it." "Then say it now." "I failed you, Rory." His voice was raw. "I let you down, and instead of facing it, I ran. Started this place, kept busy with contacts and favors and whatever this is—" He gestured vaguely at the bar, at the maps, at the hidden room. "A memorial to everything I couldn't fix." "That's not true." "It is." He set his glass down with a sharp clink. "You were the only person who ever believed I could save everyone. The only one who made me think I wasn't just a killer in a cheap suit. And when Martinez died..." He shook his head. "I couldn't bear the thought of you thinking less of me. So I made you forget." "You made me leave." "Because you deserved better than a broken man." She laughed, but it turned to something bitter. "You never were broken, Silas. You just forgot how to be human." "I forgot how to be anything worth being." The rain had started again, tapping against the window like fingers. Aurora pulled her phone from her pocket, the screen dark. "Why now?" she asked. "After all these years." "Because I'm dying." The words landed so simply, so directly, that she found herself searching his face for signs of deception. "What?" "Heart condition. They said." He wouldn't meet her eyes. "Two years, maybe less. If I'm lucky." "Oh, Silas." She wanted to reach across the bar, to touch his hand, to make sense of this sudden collapse of everything she thought she knew about him. "Why didn't you tell me?" "Because I couldn't trust myself not to run." "You didn't have to trust me to tell me." "I didn't want you to see me like this." Like a man already half-gone. "You're here." "I am." He held up his hand, the signet ring glinting in the green light. "Still here." She stood, her chair scraping against the worn floorboards. "We should go." "Where?" "Anywhere. Out of here." But he didn't move, and when she looked back, he was staring at his own hand, as if trying to remember something else. "I'm sorry," he said, and somehow that made it worse. "For what?" "For making you believe I was someone I wasn't. For not being the friend you needed me to be. For—" He stopped, swallowed hard. "For making you carry the weight of my failures." "You never asked me to carry anything," she said. "You just asked me to leave." "That was the failure." She turned fully now, facing him in a way she hadn't since they were young, since before the world had cracked them both in different directions. "I should have asked you to stay. I should have asked you to help me figure out how to live with it." The bar seemed to grow smaller around them, the maps on the walls pressing in, the photographs watching. The server boy had disappeared, the elderly patron long gone. "What if I had stayed?" she asked. "What if you'd told me to run?" "I wouldn't have." "I know." He reached across the bar, his hand finding hers. His skin was colder than she remembered. "But I needed you to know I understood." Under the green neon, in the silence between raindrops, they finally said the words they'd been avoiding for years.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
80.95% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"she said suddenly [suddenly]"
2"He looked away [away]"
3"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
4"She turned fully [fully]"
dialogueSentences84
tagDensity0.321
leniency0.643
rawRatio0.185
effectiveRatio0.119
92.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1390
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"suddenly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Martinez"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1390
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"sense of"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"sense of"
3"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1387
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount861
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.35
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Silas2
Convenient1
Like2
Afraid1
Aurora3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Blackwood"
2"Silas"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Raven"
1"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
16.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like regret"
1"felt like a brand"
2"as if trying to remember something else"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1387
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean17.78
std15.27
cv0.859
sampleLengths
067
141
229
32
47
563
61
718
825
936
1018
1122
1212
1350
146
1529
1610
1711
1816
1928
2033
2117
2229
235
2422
2512
2617
2718
286
2917
3027
318
327
339
3422
354
3632
378
386
392
406
4128
427
434
4452
453
4663
474
488
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs150
matches
0"was trying"
1"was staring"
98.90% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences130
ratio0.015
matches
0"Inside The Raven's Nest, the air hung thick with the ghosts of a thousand conversations—whiskey fumes mingling with cigarette smoke and something older, something like regret."
1"Aurora had left this city running from something—or someone—she wasn't sure she could still name."
99.41% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount869
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.0379746835443038
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.020713463751438434
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean10.67
std7.8
cv0.731
sampleLengths
019
126
222
37
42
526
66
729
82
97
1026
1114
1223
131
1417
151
1623
172
1830
196
2015
213
2217
235
247
255
2620
2715
2815
296
3017
3111
321
3310
348
353
3616
3719
389
3920
4013
419
428
431
4411
456
4611
475
4815
497
54.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"Just a quick drop-off at"
1"Such a small word for"
ratio0.031
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences65
matches
0"She hadn't planned on finding"
1"His auburn hair was more"
2"He wore a dark jacket"
3"She stopped halfway between the"
4"He pushed away from the"
5"Her voice sounded different to"
6"he said, nodding toward the"
7"She ran a finger along"
8"His smile was thinner than"
9"They stood in an awkward"
10"she said finally"
11"He moved to sit, his"
12"she offered, sliding onto the"
13"He laughed, but it didn't"
14"she said, then immediately winced"
15"She touched her wrist absently"
16"She glanced at her phone,"
17"she said suddenly"
18"His hand stilled mid-air, reaching"
19"he said, but his voice"
ratio0.569
44.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences65
matches
0"The amber glow of the"
1"Aurora Carter pulled her coat"
2"She hadn't planned on finding"
3"The bar was nearly empty,"
4"His auburn hair was more"
5"The slight limp in his"
6"He wore a dark jacket"
7"She stopped halfway between the"
8"He pushed away from the"
9"Her voice sounded different to"
10"he said, nodding toward the"
11"She ran a finger along"
12"His smile was thinner than"
13"They stood in an awkward"
14"Aurora had left this city"
15"The scar on her left"
16"she said finally"
17"He moved to sit, his"
18"The silver signet ring on"
19"she offered, sliding onto the"
ratio0.831
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Just a quick drop-off at Golden Empress, a few hours of work, then home to a flat that felt too quiet even when she was alone."
1"The bar was nearly empty, save for an elderly man hunched over a whiskey at the far end, and another figure at the bar who made her pause mid-step."
2"He wore a dark jacket that looked expensive, and when he turned toward her, his hazel eyes held a depth she hadn't remembered."
3"But he didn't move, and when she looked back, he was staring at his own hand, as if trying to remember something else."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He moved, his knee protesting as he lowered himself onto the stool"
1"he said, but his voice cracked on the words"
2"He held up, the signet ring glinting in the green light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences84
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.0778%