Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD85TBNC49536NCWBYVP4MT

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26.1s
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon bled across Frith Street in the rain. It buzzed. Rory stood under it and let the water run off the Golden Empress delivery bag. The zip had stuck again. Rice crusted the seam. Her shift ended twenty minutes ago, but Yu-Fei counted the boxes twice and shorted her last drop by three quid and she did not argue. She pushed through the door of The Raven's Nest. Heat hit her face, and low lamplight, and the smell of old wood soaked in lemon polish and beer. Maps papered the walls, their sea monsters faded at the edges. Black and white photographs of men in coats who all thought they belonged to something. Silas built a fire in late November even when the radiators worked. He stood behind the bar now, his grey-streaked auburn hair combed back, his right hand catching light off the silver signet ring as he lifted a glass to the light. He saw her and tipped his chin. His left leg held stiff from the old knee. Rory shook out her hair. Straight, black, shoulder-length, plastered to her neck. She slid onto the last stool. A woman two seats down turned. Rory knew the turn before she saw the face. A pause. A recognition that started in the shoulders. Eva. Eva Thomas in The Raven's Nest in London on a wet Tuesday looked like a card trick gone wrong. The Eva who left Cardiff at eighteen wore charity shop jumpers with holes at the cuffs and cut her own fringe with kitchen scissors. This Eva wore a wool coat that cost more than Rory's rent and held a glass of something clear with a deliberate hand. Her hair was blonde now, cut sharp at the jaw. A thin gold chain at her throat. No - Rory stood up without meaning to. "You." Eva stared. Then the laugh broke out of her. Too loud for the room. "Oh my god. Rory?" She stood. The barstool scraped. She crossed the gap and pulled Rory into a hug that smelled like expensive rain and perfume. Rory's hands hovered over that good coat. Her left wrist showed, the small crescent scar white against damp skin. Eva let go first and held Rory at arm's length. Her eyes went all over. The delivery uniform. The soaked trainers. "You live here? You live above here? I thought Yu-Fei said - Silas told me - God, look at you. Your eyes. Still. Still that blue." "You dyed your hair." "I did. Two years ago. Do you hate it?" "No. It suits you." Eva laughed again but the sound thinned. She glanced at Silas. Silas placed a whisky in front of Rory without asking and moved down the bar. He knew when to make himself scarce. The bookshelf at the back stayed shut. No meetings tonight. Eva slid back onto her stool and patted the one beside it. Rory took it. Her knees almost touched Eva's. "What are you doing here? In London. In this bar. Of all bars." "I had a meeting. Round the corner. Client dinner that finished early. I googled you. Well. I googled Silas' place. I told myself I'd come next time I was in town. I've been in town six times." "You were here? You were in London and you didn't -" "I know." A silence settled that had weight. The fire cracked. Someone dropped a coin into the old jukebox that never worked. Eva drank. "I thought you'd still be in Cardiff. Law. I thought you'd be - You were so set. Pre-Law. You argued with Mr Davies about sentencing guidelines and he nearly cried." "Pre-Law was my dad's idea." "Brendan with the big voice. Your mum? Jen?" "Still teaching." "And Evan?" Rory's fingers curled around the glass. The scar pulled. "We broke up. You know we broke up." "Yeah. I know. Because you called me at two a.m. and I bought you a train ticket." Eva said it flat. No accusation, which made it worse. Rory looked at the maps on the wall, the coasts of countries that no longer existed under those names. "You never came to visit. After." "I did. Once. Last January. The flat above. Silas said you were out on deliveries. You worked New Year's Eve. Who works New Year's Eve?" "I did. I do. Yu-Fei pays double." "I left a note." "What note?" "Under the till. At the Golden Empress place. I asked the woman with the - Yu-Fei. She said she'd give it to you." Rory pictured Yu-Fei at the pass, sweat on her upper lip, tickets stuck to the metal with grease. The stack of unopened envelopes by the register she used for change. "I never got it." Eva nodded. She pressed her lips together. She swirled the ice in her glass. Her nails matched her coat. Clean and short and done. "You look good, Ev." "You look tired." "Thanks." "No. I mean - you look like you. Just tired. Are you tired?" Rory laughed. It came out short. "I deliver noodles twelve hours a day and live above a bar that plays the same Leonard Cohen song every night. I'm great. What about you? Last I heard you were in Bristol doing that art thing." "Foundation. Then I quit. Got into property marketing. Boring as sin but it pays. I have a flat in Clerkenwell. I have a - I have a wife, Rory." The word landed between them. Eva watched Rory's face for the flinch. Rory felt her bright blue eyes go wide before she could stop them. She covered by drinking. "What's her name?" "Samira. Sam. She's a solicitor. Housing law." "A solicitor. Jesus. You married a version of me that actually made it." "No." Eva's hand reached out and stopped just short of Rory's forearm. The scar was there. Both of them saw it. "Don't do that." "Do what?" "Make it smaller. Like you always. Like Cardiff was nothing and you were nothing and we were -" She cut herself off. The bar was small. Silas polished a glass at the far end with his back to them. Tactful. The man knew secrets as inventory. Rory set her glass down with care. "I called you. Three times. After I moved. You picked up once and said you were busy." "I was. I had exams. I had -" "You had new friends." "I was nineteen and you showed up on my doorstep with a suitcase and that bruise on your cheek and I didn't know what to do! I bought you the ticket because I panicked. You think I wanted you gone?" The words came out ragged. Eva's face cracked. The expensive composure slipped and for a second she was the girl with the kitchen-scissor fringe who ate dry cereal out of a mug because all the bowls were dirty. "You think I wanted you to stay in London and end up doing deliveries? You were supposed to go back. After Evan. You were supposed to go home and do the degree and be brilliant." "I couldn't go back." "Because of him? He left town, Rory. He went to Swansea. Your dad told my mum." Rory stared at the green light reflected in the window. The rain wrote lines down it. The street outside moved without them. "I couldn't go back to who I was when I was with him. I liked Cardiff but Cardiff didn't like me back after. Not the way I needed." Eva's hand did land now. On Rory's wrist. Thumb over that small crescent moon. "I missed you." "I know." "I didn't know how to miss you and be angry at the same time." "Me too." Somewhere in the back, the bookshelf door eased open a fraction and closed again. Silas checking inventory that did not exist. Eva pulled her coat tighter. Her glass left a ring on the wood that she wiped with her sleeve, a small, automatic gesture that belonged to the old Eva. "You have anyone? Now?" "No." "You still -" "Don't." "Okay." Rory turned her stool to face Eva fully. The knees touched again and stayed. "Tell me about Samira." Eva's mouth twitched. A new softness entered her face, something Rory had not seen before and recognised anyway. "She hates olives. Like irrational hate. She double-checks the door three times. She reads case files in the bath. She thinks London is too noisy." "And she lets you keep the expensive coat?" "She bought it." Eva laughed. This time it sounded right. Rory found herself smiling, a real one that hurt at the edges. "Stay. I have crisps upstairs. Probably stale. Silas has better whisky if you ask." "I have to - Sam's waiting. We have a train at ten. But -" Eva dug in her bag and pulled out a card. Heavy stock. Property company logo embossed. "My actual number. Not the old one. Text me. Or don't. Just - if you get it this time." Rory took it. Slotted it into the pocket of her delivery bag where the zip stuck. "I will." Eva stood. Rory stood. They hugged again. Less performance this time. Eva's coat was dry on the outside and warm from her body. Rory smelled the perfume and underneath it the same cheap strawberry shampoo Eva used at sixteen. "I like the blonde." "I knew you would." Eva pulled back and pushed a strand of Rory's wet black hair behind her ear. "Get some sleep, Carter." "You too, Thomas." Eva walked to the door. The green neon caught her blonde cut and made it look white for a second. She hesitated with her hand on the handle and looked back. Rory lifted the card from her pocket and showed it. "I got it." The door opened and closed and the rain came in with a gust that moved the maps on the walls.
created_at"2026-07-25T18:21:38.558Z" 7/25/2026, 6:21:38 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1641
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1641
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences118
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences185
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1650
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions75
wordCount972
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Frith1
Street1
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei2
Raven2
Nest2
November1
Thomas1
London1
Tuesday1
Eva27
Cardiff1
Rory28
Silas5
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Raven"
2"Thomas"
3"Tuesday"
4"Eva"
5"Rory"
6"Silas"
places
0"Frith"
1"Street"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.06
windowScore0
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a card trick gone wrong"
1"smelled like expensive rain and perfume"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1650
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences185
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs108
mean15.28
std16.25
cv1.064
sampleLengths
010
151
29
3103
418
56
618
71
885
96
101
1114
124
1341
1421
1526
164
179
184
1943
2020
2113
2237
2311
242
2520
262
2730
285
298
302
312
329
338
3417
3529
366
3725
387
394
402
4123
4230
434
4424
454
463
471
4813
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs169
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences185
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount916
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"white against damp skin."
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03056768558951965
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0032751091703056767
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences185
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences185
mean8.92
std8.01
cv0.898
sampleLengths
010
12
215
35
44
525
69
719
811
915
1012
1130
127
139
145
157
166
176
189
192
207
211
2219
2324
2423
2510
267
272
286
291
302
317
325
334
342
353
3617
377
3812
3910
405
413
423
4326
444
459
464
477
484
4915
42.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2972972972972973
totalSentences185
uniqueOpeners55
96.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"Then the laugh broke out"
1"Too loud for the room."
2"Somewhere in the back, the"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences104
matches
0"Her shift ended twenty minutes"
1"She pushed through the door"
2"He stood behind the bar"
3"He saw her and tipped"
4"His left leg held stiff"
5"She slid onto the last"
6"Her hair was blonde now,"
7"She crossed the gap and"
8"Her left wrist showed, the"
9"Her eyes went all over."
10"She glanced at Silas."
11"He knew when to make"
12"Her knees almost touched Eva's."
13"She pressed her lips together."
14"She swirled the ice in"
15"Her nails matched her coat."
16"It came out short."
17"She covered by drinking."
18"She cut herself off."
19"Her glass left a ring"
ratio0.212
8.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences104
matches
0"The green neon bled across"
1"Rory stood under it and"
2"The zip had stuck again."
3"Rice crusted the seam."
4"Her shift ended twenty minutes"
5"She pushed through the door"
6"Heat hit her face, and"
7"Maps papered the walls, their"
8"Silas built a fire in"
9"He stood behind the bar"
10"He saw her and tipped"
11"His left leg held stiff"
12"Rory shook out her hair."
13"She slid onto the last"
14"A woman two seats down"
15"Rory knew the turn before"
16"A recognition that started in"
17"Eva Thomas in The Raven's"
18"The Eva who left Cardiff"
19"This Eva wore a wool"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The Eva who left Cardiff at eighteen wore charity shop jumpers with holes at the cuffs and cut her own fringe with kitchen scissors."
1"This Eva wore a wool coat that cost more than Rory's rent and held a glass of something clear with a deliberate hand."
2"Her glass left a ring on the wood that she wiped with her sleeve, a small, automatic gesture that belonged to the old Eva."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.5952%