Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD85VBSBEWXQATZ3JYVXGPH

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Duration:
25.5s
Cost:
$0.014006
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Meta

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck the way it always stuck, and Rory had to put her shoulder into it. Eva's flat smelled like old paper and cumin from the curry house below, a thick, warm blanket of a smell that had soaked into every book and scroll stacked on every surface. Ptolemy was loafed on top of the precarious tower of library books by the window, his tabby tail flicking against a half-unrolled ward diagram, watching her wrestle with the lock with flat judgment. "Yeah, I know," she muttered. "I told her to get it fixed." She got the deadbolt to throw with a metallic clack that vibrated up her arm, and pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway. For a half second her brain refused to parse it. He was supposed to be in Berlin. Or Prague. Anywhere but the dim, peeling landing above the curry house on Brick Lane, where the lightbuzzed and stuttered. He was too clean for it. Charcoal suit, tailored to a fault, white shirt, no tie. Platinum blond hair slicked back despite the damp that clung to everything in East London in November. One hand resting lightly on the ivory handle of his cane. That cane that wasn't a cane at all. His eyes found hers. One amber, one black, heterochromatic and impossible to read, and Rory's breath caught low and stupid in her throat. "Lucien." "Rory." His accent caught the R, softened it. French, Marseille underneath the polished English. "You are house-sitting." It wasn't a question. Of course it wasn't a question. Lucien always knew exactly where everyone was. That's what made him good at his job. She should have known better than to be surprised. Three weeks ago, on the fire escape above Silas' bar — her flat, not Eva's, the rain coming down in sheets, the two of them shouting in low, vicious whispers so Silas wouldn't hear — she'd told him not to contact her. And Lucien, being Lucien, had taken her at her exact word. He hadn't called. He hadn't shown up at the Golden Empress when she was running deliveries for Yu-Fei. He had simply vanished. Which had hurt more than she wanted to admit. Now he was here. "What are you doing here?" she asked, and she hated how her voice came out too tight, too small. He glanced past her, into Eva's chaos. "Eva called me." "Eva called you?" Rory repeated. "Eva is in Edinburgh for a symposium until Thursday." "She called me four days ago. Before she left." His gaze dropped, just for a second, to her left wrist where her sleeve had pushed up. To the small crescent-shaped scar there, pale against her skin. A childhood thing, the edge of her father's desk in Cardiff, but Lucien looked at it like he always did — like it was a piece of information. "She said you would need assistance. She left me a key. Though I see you are quite capable with the three deadbolts." "She left you a key to her flat." Rory stared. Ptolemy made a small, indignant mrrp from his book tower, as if seconding the absurdity. "She trusts me." "She shouldn't." That earned him a flicker of a smile. Quick, crooked. "This, we agree on." He didn't move. He was still out in the hall, not presuming, and that was worse somehow than if he'd barged in. Lucien Moreau never waited for permission for anything. The fact that he was waiting now said exactly how badly they'd ended things. Rory stepped back and yanked the door wider. "Come in before Mrs. Patel from downstairs thinks you're here to collect a debt." The flat was cramped at the best of times. With Lucien in it, it felt smaller. He had to angle his cane to avoid knocking over a stack of bound research notes — Eva's handwriting, frantic and looping, covering every margin. He moved carefully, always carefully, and the clean line of him against all the clutter made her chest ache. "You cut your hair," he said. She touched it without thinking. Straight, shoulder-length black, still damp from walking over in the rain. "No. It's the same." "It looks shorter." He set the cane against the tiny kitchen counter. Not leaning on it. He never actually needed it for walking. Rory had only ever seen him use it once, in the back room at the Crooked Crown, when the blade inside had come out in one smooth, silent motion and ended an argument before it could start. "It suits you." "Lucien." "Hmm?" "What did Eva call you about?" He sighed, and some of the impeccable fixer mask slipped. He looked tired. Thirty-two and he carried it differently than she did at twenty-five — not in slumped shoulders but in a thinning around the edges, like a suit that had been pressed too many times. "The thing that has been following you," he said. The air in the flat went cold. The curry smell suddenly seemed too thick. "I told you I handled it," she said, too quickly. "You told me you were fine." His amber eye was bright, catching the lamplight. The black one seemed to drink it. "Which is not the same thing. And you have not been fine. You have been working your shifts at the Empress and coming straight here and not sleeping. Ptolemy informed me you cried in the shower Tuesday." "I did not —" She looked at the cat. "You did not tell him that." Ptolemy blinked slowly, unrepentant. Lucien took a step closer. Not crowding. He was very good at not crowding, at letting her have exactly as much space as she demanded while making it clear he'd stand there all night if she wanted. "Why did you not call me?" he asked, and his voice was lower now, not the broker, not the half-demon from Avaros who knew four languages and could get anything for a price. Just Luc. "Because the last time I called you, you told me to be practical," she said. The words tore on the way out. She'd rehearsed them for weeks in the delivery van, while carrying cartons of dan dan noodles up four flights of stairs. "You told me that what I wanted wasn't practical. Remember?" "I remember every word you have ever said to me," he said. "Don't do that." "Do what?" "That thing where you—" She gestured sharply, her hand passing through a shaft of light. "Where you say something devastating in that perfect suit and I'm supposed to melt." "Is it working?" "No." "Liar." And there it was, that old snap between them, bright and dangerous as a live wire. Rory had met him when she was still flinching at loud noises, fresh up from Cardiff after Evan, after her mother Jennifer had cried on the phone and her father Brendan had used his barrister voice and tried to logic her back into Pre-Law. Eva had dragged her to a back table at Silas' and there had been Lucien, all platinum and charcoal and heterochromatic stare, offering to make a problem disappear for a price she couldn't pay. She'd told him to piss off. He'd smiled like he'd been waiting for someone to. Attraction had been immediate and inconvenient and entirely mutual. Hurt had come later. He reached out, slowly enough that she could stop him, and tucked a strand of damp black hair behind her ear. His fingers were cold. "Rory," he said. "The thing that is following you is not a small thing. It is not something Eva's wards will hold if it decides it wants inside. It is a hound from the lower markets. Someone has paid for it." Her cool head, the one she relied on for quick thinking when a delivery went sideways or when Yu-Fei sent her to a block that didn't like strangers — it short-circuited. "Who?" "That is what I intend to find out. But first—" His hand dropped, but not far. It hovered near her wrist, near that little crescent scar, asking. "I cannot do this alone if you will not let me near you." She should say no. She should be practical. She was good at being practical. Practical paid the rent on the flat above Silas'. Practical got her through her shift. But she was so tired of being cold. Rory closed the last inch between them. She didn't kiss him. Not yet. She put her forehead against his chest, against the fine wool of his suit that smelled like rain and something smoky and foreign that had to be Avaros, and she let her eyes close. Her shoulders, which had been up around her ears since the fire escape, dropped. For a second he went completely still, as if he didn't know what to do with the sudden weight of her. Then his hand came up — the one not holding the ghost of her wrist — and settled, warm and solid, on the back of her neck, his thumb stroking once, just once, along the line of her spine. "I'm still angry at you," she whispered into his shirt. "I know," he murmured against her hair. "And you still have to earn that key back." "From Eva? Never. She likes me." Rory huffed a laugh that was half wet. "God, you're insufferable." "Yes," he agreed. "But I am here." Above them, the old building creaked. Downstairs, someone shouted for extra poppadoms. Ptolemy jumped down from his books with a thump and wound himself around both of their legs, purring loud enough to rattle the scrolls. Rory finally looked up at him, her bright blue eyes a little red, a little fierce. "You staying?" Lucien's mismatched gaze dropped to her mouth, then back up, and the restraint there — the careful, deliberate restraint — made her stomach flip the way it had the very first night. "If you will have me," he said, in French first, then English. And this time, she was the one who reached up and pulled him down.
created_at"2026-07-25T18:21:39.584Z" 7/25/2026, 6:21:39 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His gaze dropped just [just]"
1"She gestured sharply [sharply]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.074
67.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1671
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count2
5
adverb"very"
count2
6
adverb"sharply"
count1
7
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"carefully"
2"suddenly"
3"quickly"
4"slowly"
5"very"
6"sharply"
7"completely"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1671
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"flicker"
2"perfect"
3"weight"
4"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences114
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1681
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1264
uniqueNames28
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Moreau2
Berlin1
Prague1
Brick1
Lane1
East1
London1
November1
French2
Marseille1
English2
Lucien9
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei2
Eva4
Cardiff2
Ptolemy4
Crooked1
Crown1
Avaros2
Luc1
Evan1
Jennifer1
Brendan1
Pre-Law1
Practical2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Eva"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Luc"
7"Evan"
8"Jennifer"
9"Brendan"
10"Practical"
places
0"Berlin"
1"Prague"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"East"
5"London"
6"November"
7"French"
8"Marseille"
9"Golden"
10"Cardiff"
11"Crooked"
12"Avaros"
globalScore1
windowScore1
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like old paper and cumin from the"
1"as if seconding the absurdity"
2"smelled like rain and something smoky and"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.595
wordCount1681
matches
0"not in slumped shoulders but in a thinning around the edges, like a suit"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences147
matches
0"enough that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean24.36
std24.04
cv0.987
sampleLengths
018
165
212
320
46
581
68
723
81
917
1025
1184
129
134
1419
1510
1614
1786
1825
193
202
2114
2244
2322
2460
256
2620
2763
281
291
306
3146
329
3314
3410
3558
3615
374
3837
3935
4053
4112
423
432
4429
453
461
471
48109
4913
92.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences114
matches
0"was loafed"
1"was supposed"
2"was cramped"
3"been pressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs213
matches
0"was running"
1"was waiting"
2"was still flinching"
26.24% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences147
ratio0.041
matches
0"A childhood thing, the edge of her father's desk in Cardiff, but Lucien looked at it like he always did — like it was a piece of information."
1"He had to angle his cane to avoid knocking over a stack of bound research notes — Eva's handwriting, frantic and looping, covering every margin."
2"Thirty-two and he carried it differently than she did at twenty-five — not in slumped shoulders but in a thinning around the edges, like a suit that had been pressed too many times."
3"Her cool head, the one she relied on for quick thinking when a delivery went sideways or when Yu-Fei sent her to a block that didn't like strangers — it short-circuited."
4"Then his hand came up — the one not holding the ghost of her wrist — and settled, warm and solid, on the back of her neck, his thumb stroking once, just once, along the line of her spine."
5"Lucien's mismatched gaze dropped to her mouth, then back up, and the restraint there — the careful, deliberate restraint — made her stomach flip the way it had the very first night."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount664
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.030120481927710843
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007530120481927711
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean11.44
std9.93
cv0.868
sampleLengths
018
132
233
35
47
520
66
710
87
92
1018
116
1210
1317
1411
158
164
1719
181
198
206
213
224
236
247
258
269
2742
2811
293
3015
314
329
334
3419
357
363
375
389
3926
4010
4128
4222
4310
4415
453
462
478
482
494
55.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3945578231292517
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners58
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"Anywhere but the dim, peeling"
1"Of course it wasn't a"
2"Then his hand came up"
ratio0.03
44.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences100
matches
0"She got the deadbolt to"
1"He was supposed to be"
2"He was too clean for"
3"His eyes found hers."
4"His accent caught the R,"
5"It wasn't a question."
6"She should have known better"
7"He hadn't called."
8"He hadn't shown up at"
9"He had simply vanished."
10"she asked, and she hated"
11"He glanced past her, into"
12"His gaze dropped, just for"
13"He didn't move."
14"He was still out in"
15"He had to angle his"
16"He moved carefully, always carefully,"
17"She touched it without thinking."
18"He set the cane against"
19"He never actually needed it"
ratio0.44
75.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences100
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck the"
1"Eva's flat smelled like old"
2"Ptolemy was loafed on top"
3"She got the deadbolt to"
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"He was supposed to be"
6"He was too clean for"
7"Charcoal suit, tailored to a"
8"Platinum blond hair slicked back"
9"That cane that wasn't a"
10"His eyes found hers."
11"His accent caught the R,"
12"French, Marseille underneath the polished"
13"It wasn't a question."
14"Lucien always knew exactly where"
15"That's what made him good"
16"She should have known better"
17"He hadn't called."
18"He hadn't shown up at"
19"He had simply vanished."
ratio0.77
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"Now he was here."
1"To the small crescent-shaped scar"
ratio0.02
11.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Eva's flat smelled like old paper and cumin from the curry house below, a thick, warm blanket of a smell that had soaked into every book and scroll stacked on e…"
1"Ptolemy made a small, indignant mrrp from his book tower, as if seconding the absurdity."
2"Thirty-two and he carried it differently than she did at twenty-five — not in slumped shoulders but in a thinning around the edges, like a suit that had been pr…"
3"Her cool head, the one she relied on for quick thinking when a delivery went sideways or when Yu-Fei sent her to a block that didn't like strangers — it short-c…"
4"She put her forehead against his chest, against the fine wool of his suit that smelled like rain and something smoky and foreign that had to be Avaros, and she …"
5"Her shoulders, which had been up around her ears since the fire escape, dropped."
6"Then his hand came up — the one not holding the ghost of her wrist — and settled, warm and solid, on the back of her neck, his thumb stroking once, just once, a…"
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he asked, and his voice was lower now, not the broker, not the half-demon from Avaros who knew four languages and could get anything for a price"
1"She gestured sharply, her hand passing through a shaft of light"
57.41% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory repeated (repeat)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.259
leniency0.519
rawRatio0.357
effectiveRatio0.185
84.3115%