Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EKVXF7TEAH3KFSF2S9K8A7

Run Details

Duration:
1m 26s
Cost:
$0.009600
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest buzzed like a dying insect above the entrance, casting a sick emerald glow over the wet cobblestones of Soho. Detective Harlow Quinn stood beneath it, her salt-and-pepper hair slick against her skull, her worn leather watch glinting on her left wrist as she tracked the second hand with the same precision she applied to every case that mattered. She had lost DS Morris three years ago to something that did not fit within neat categories of police reports, something supernatural that left a silence where explanations should have lived. Now she suspected the clique, and she had spent months learning that their threads wove through every hidden doorway in London. The bookshelf door inside The Raven's Nest slid open, rusted hinges groaning. Tomás Herrera stepped out, his short curly dark brown hair plastered to his olive skin, his warm brown eyes catching the neon and holding it like a challenge. A scar ran along his left forearm from a knife attack, visible now as he pulled his sleeve up against the chill. Around his neck hung the Saint Christopher medallion, silver and cold against his chest. “Quinn.” She moved before he finished the word. Her jaw was sharp, her bearing locked in military precision, and she placed herself between him and the bar’s interior where old maps and black-and-white photographs watched from the walls like silent jurors. “Where is he?” Tomás smiled, a tight line that did not reach his eyes. “Which one?” “The one your clique protects with bone tokens and hidden rooms.” She tapped her watch strap. “You think I don’t know about the back room?” “I think you should leave this alone.” He dug his fingers into the pocket of his coat, and for a heartbeat she saw the outline of the token, pale and carved with symbols she did not recognize. “I don’t leave anything alone, Tomás.” She spoke his name like a verdict. He ran. The chase exploded into the downpour. Tomás exploded out from under the green neon, his feet finding the uneven stones with the instinct of a Seville-born man who had learned to move through crowds before he learned English. Harlow followed, her boots splashing through black pools, her breath sharp in her throat. Rain soaked through her collar, chilled the lines of her face, but she did not slow. The streets of Soho were a maze of wet brick and gutter water, and Tomás knew every shortcut. “You lost your license,” she shouted, her voice cutting through the thunder of rain on awnings. “I saved lives,” he called back, ducking beneath a bus shelter where water gushed from the roof in sheets. She kept her distance close enough to read the sweat on his brow, far enough to avoid the blade she knew he carried in his other pocket. The air smelled of wet asphalt and fried onions from a shuttered kitchen. They weaved between parked cars, past the glow of a pharmacy that kept a single bulb burning for no one. “You don’t understand,” Tomás yelled, turning onto a narrow alley that smelled of bleach and old garbage. “I understand you treat supernatural patients without authorization,” Harlow returned, her fingers brushing the radio at her hip before she decided against it. The clique had ears in every station, and Morris had taught her that noise was a liability. The alley spit them onto a broader street where traffic hissed past like wet beasts. Tomás slipped between a black taxi and a delivery van, his curly hair whipping in the wind. She mirrored him, her shoulder brushing cold metal, her eyes tracking the flash of his scarred arm as he used it to balance against a turn. “You think I’ll lose you?” she shouted over the downpour. “I think you’ll blink,” he shot back, heading north, away from the neon heart of Soho, toward Camden and the places that did not appear on any map the police kept. The streets narrowed. The rain turned sharper, stinging her skin like needles of glass. Tomás led her past derelict cinemas with boarded windows, past the skeletal frame of an old market that had surrendered to time. His pace was relentless, a former paramedic’s endurance turned predator. Harlow kept up, her military bearing holding her spine straight, her watch ticking a silent accusation against her left wrist. “You have a choice,” she called, her voice strained by the effort of running. “Stop running?” “Come back to the station. Give me the clique.” “I gave you everything I have.” He turned into a service lane near Camden Lock, where the canal water lay black and still as oil. At the end of the lane, a rusted iron gate sagged open, revealing a stairwell that descended into black earth. Harlow caught up at the top of the steps, her hand on the cold rail, her breath ragged but controlled. The air down there smelled of copper and something older, something that smelled like the dark between stars. Tomás paused, turning back to her. The green neon of The Raven’s Nest was a memory now, hidden behind miles of wet stone. The old maps inside the bar had marked not just geography but thresholds, and she knew she was standing at one. “Come down, Quinn,” Tomás said. His warm brown eyes held nothing but the truth of a man who had already crossed lines he could never uncross. His scarred arm trembled. The Saint Christopher medallion glinted cold against his chest. She looked at her watch. The leather strap was soaked through, the leather worn by eighteen years of service and three years of unanswered questions about DS Morris. She thought of the hidden back room, of black-and-white photographs that seemed to move when she was not looking, of the clique that moved through London’s bones like a second circulatory system. “I don’t take orders from paramedics with dead partners,” she said. Tomás smiled, gentle this time, his voice low. “You should have stayed upstairs, detective.” She stepped onto the stairs. The descent was long and wet. Water dripped from walls that arched like the inside of a skull, pooling at her feet, carrying a scent of burnt herbs and old magic. Tomás walked ahead, his shoes silent on the stone, his short curly hair plastered to his olive skin. He moved with the confidence of a man returning to a church he had built. Harlow kept her eyes open, her fingers close to her coat, her mind tracking every shift in shadow. The stairs ended not in a station platform but in a cavernous space where the ceiling arched overhead and the walls were lined with stalls that glowed with sick, internal light. This was The Veil Market, the hidden supernatural black market beneath Camden, where bone tokens were the price of admission and where enchanted goods and banned alchemical substances changed hands under rules written in older languages. Tomás turned at a stall that sold nothing visible but emitted a hum that made her teeth ache. “You need a token.” “I don’t need anything from you.” “You need access.” He pulled a small object from his pocket—a bone token, pale and worn, carved with symbols she felt in her teeth rather than read. He dropped it into a crevice in the wall. The air shifted. The stalls flickered. A voice like grinding stone spoke from above, asking for payment in things she did not have, and Tomás walked through the doorway that the token opened. Behind him, the underground world breathed. Harlow stood at the threshold. The rain upstairs was a distant memory. The green neon of The Raven’s Nest was a star she would never see again from this depth. Her partner’s silence was a weight in her chest, urging her not to vanish into this, urging her to stay where police meant something. She looked at Tomás, standing inside, the Saint Christopher medallion glinting, his scarred arm held out not in invitation but in recognition of her choice. He had been born in Seville, had moved to London to work for the NHS, had lost his license after treating patients the city refused to acknowledge. Now he offered her the only bridge between the world of badges and the world of bones. She made the decision. Her boots touched the wet stone of the market floor. The doors sealed behind her, and The Veil Market breathed, and Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory with her eyes wide open, her jaw set, and her watch still ticking.
created_at"2026-09-01T13:52:16.878Z" 9/1/2026, 1:52:16 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.565
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"glinting"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"chilled"
count1
4
word"predator"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"silence"
2"chill"
3"chilled"
4"predator"
5"trembled"
6"flickered"
7"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
35.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1435
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.85% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1317
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Raven4
Nest4
Soho3
Harlow8
Quinn2
Morris3
London3
Herrera1
Saint3
Christopher3
Seville-born1
English1
Tomás14
Camden3
Lock1
Veil2
Market2
Seville2
Detective2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Morris"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Tomás"
9"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Seville-born"
3"Camden"
4"Seville"
globalScore0.968
windowScore1
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like the dark between stars"
1"photographs that seemed to move when she was not looking, of the clique that moved through London’s bones like a second circulatory system"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.091
wordCount1435
matches
0"not just geography but thresholds"
1"not in a station platform but in a cavernous space"
2"not in invitation but in recognition of her choice"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"learning that their"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean33.37
std27.54
cv0.825
sampleLengths
0118
176
21
340
43
513
625
737
813
92
1086
1116
1219
1360
1417
1540
1658
1710
1831
1966
2014
212
229
236
2439
2544
2638
2739
2860
2911
3014
315
3264
3385
3422
356
3636
3733
386
3954
4069
414
4244
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs217
matches
0"was standing"
1"was not looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences90
ratio0.011
matches
0"“You need access.” He pulled a small object from his pocket—a bone token, pale and worn, carved with symbols she felt in her teeth rather than read."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1325
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.013584905660377358
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0037735849056603774
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean15.94
std9.64
cv0.604
sampleLengths
027
139
231
321
412
528
622
714
81
97
1033
113
1211
132
1416
159
1637
1713
182
196
2032
2114
2216
2318
2416
2519
2627
2713
2820
2917
3023
3117
3215
3317
3426
3510
3631
373
3811
3922
4010
4120
4214
432
449
456
4619
4720
4820
4918
42.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.26666666666666666
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences77
matches
0"She had lost DS Morris"
1"She moved before he finished"
2"Her jaw was sharp, her"
3"She tapped her watch strap"
4"He dug his fingers into"
5"She spoke his name like"
6"she shouted, her voice cutting"
7"he called back, ducking beneath"
8"She kept her distance close"
9"They weaved between parked cars,"
10"She mirrored him, her shoulder"
11"she shouted over the downpour"
12"he shot back, heading north,"
13"His pace was relentless, a"
14"she called, her voice strained"
15"He turned into a service"
16"His warm brown eyes held"
17"His scarred arm trembled."
18"She looked at her watch."
19"She thought of the hidden"
ratio0.377
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences77
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood beneath"
2"She had lost DS Morris"
3"The bookshelf door inside The"
4"Tomás Herrera stepped out, his"
5"A scar ran along his"
6"She moved before he finished"
7"Her jaw was sharp, her"
8"Tomás smiled, a tight line"
9"She tapped her watch strap"
10"He dug his fingers into"
11"She spoke his name like"
12"The chase exploded into the"
13"Tomás exploded out from under"
14"Harlow followed, her boots splashing"
15"The streets of Soho were"
16"she shouted, her voice cutting"
17"he called back, ducking beneath"
18"She kept her distance close"
19"The air smelled of wet"
ratio0.922
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Now she suspected the clique,"
1"Now he offered her the"
ratio0.026
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stood beneath it, her salt-and-pepper hair slick against her skull, her worn leather watch glinting on her left wrist as she tracked the …"
1"She had lost DS Morris three years ago to something that did not fit within neat categories of police reports, something supernatural that left a silence where …"
2"Tomás exploded out from under the green neon, his feet finding the uneven stones with the instinct of a Seville-born man who had learned to move through crowds …"
3"She mirrored him, her shoulder brushing cold metal, her eyes tracking the flash of his scarred arm as he used it to balance against a turn."
4"Tomás led her past derelict cinemas with boarded windows, past the skeletal frame of an old market that had surrendered to time."
5"Harlow kept up, her military bearing holding her spine straight, her watch ticking a silent accusation against her left wrist."
6"At the end of the lane, a rusted iron gate sagged open, revealing a stairwell that descended into black earth."
7"She thought of the hidden back room, of black-and-white photographs that seemed to move when she was not looking, of the clique that moved through London’s bone…"
8"Water dripped from walls that arched like the inside of a skull, pooling at her feet, carrying a scent of burnt herbs and old magic."
9"The stairs ended not in a station platform but in a cavernous space where the ceiling arched overhead and the walls were lined with stalls that glowed with sick…"
10"Her partner’s silence was a weight in her chest, urging her not to vanish into this, urging her to stay where police meant something."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she shouted, her voice cutting through the thunder of rain on awnings"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"She spoke (speak)"
1"she shouted (shout)"
2"he called back (call back)"
3"Tomás yelled (yell)"
4"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.348
leniency0.696
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.435
75.7076%