| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.025 | | leniency | 0.05 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1235 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1235 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throbbed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "navigate" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1231 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.34% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 65 | | wordCount | 948 | | uniqueNames | 23 | | maxNameDensity | 1.79 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 8 | | Rory | 17 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Seer | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Dymas | 2 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Earth | 2 | | Isolde | 10 | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Realms | 1 | | Wardens | 1 | | Barrier | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Prince" | | 4 | "Belphegor" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Wardens" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae-touched" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.603 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared suddenly, still as mirror, reflecting a sky that burned warm amber—the sky of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony, where Prince Belphegor ruled excess and master chefs contracted helbound souls for grand feasts" |
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| 37.53% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.625 | | wordCount | 1231 | | matches | | 0 | "not wood, but vine" | | 1 | "not finished but leading" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 65 | | mean | 18.94 | | std | 17.12 | | cv | 0.904 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 55 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 39 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade; moonsilver always bit cold against her palm, a frozen star shaped like a leaf, given by the Seer herself." | | 1 | "She pulled the Heartstone Pendant from her collar; the deep crimson gem, roughly the size of a thumbnail, pulsed with a faint inner glow, warmer than it should be, singing to the Fae-touched air." | | 2 | "A pool of silver water appeared suddenly, still as mirror, reflecting a sky that burned warm amber—the sky of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony, where Prince Belphegor ruled excess and master chefs contracted helbound souls for grand feasts." | | 3 | "The scent was not natural; it was the invitation of Dymas, the gluttony realm, sprawling vineyards and orchards that provided exotic ingredients for chefs who fed on earthbound souls." | | 4 | "A feast table appeared—not wood, but vine and root, laden with fruits glowing like embers, dark cherries bleeding gold, apples that hummed with heat." | | 5 | "A figure stepped from the orchard—helbound, contracted from Earth, eyes hollow, mouth open in eternal hunger." | | 6 | "The tree recognized her—blood, damage, the shape of her own wound." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 959 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "half-solid, half-mist," |
| | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.021897810218978103 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009384775808133473 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 12.31 | | std | 10.05 | | cv | 0.817 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 38 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 52.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.35 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 1 | "She spoke in riddles, never" | | 2 | "Their glowing violet eyes dilated," | | 3 | "She pulled the Heartstone Pendant" | | 4 | "Their voice came like a" | | 5 | "She moved past the table," | | 6 | "It reached with hands that" | | 7 | "It pulsed, deep crimson, warm" | | 8 | "She stepped into the distortion," |
| | ratio | 0.161 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones rose" | | 1 | "Rory crossed the boundary without" | | 2 | "Isolde stood already inside the" | | 3 | "The crescent scar from the" | | 4 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 5 | "Isolde tilted her head, her" | | 6 | "She spoke in riddles, never" | | 7 | "The air smelled of rain" | | 8 | "A chime struck from invisible" | | 9 | "Their glowing violet eyes dilated," | | 10 | "Rory crossed the stone." | | 11 | "The temperature plummeted and then" | | 12 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground where" | | 13 | "Isolde walked ahead, feet never" | | 14 | "Rory’s heart hammered." | | 15 | "She pulled the Heartstone Pendant" | | 16 | "Isolde turned, ethereal and ageless." | | 17 | "Nyx drifted closer, incorporeal edges" | | 18 | "Their voice came like a" | | 19 | "A pool of silver water" |
| | ratio | 0.946 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde stood already inside the boundary, silver hair floating as if underwater, pale lavender eyes fixed on Rory’s left wrist." | | 1 | "Their glowing violet eyes dilated, the faint glow brightening to a pulse that matched the heartbeat of the tree roots." | | 2 | "Nyx surged forward, shadow hardening into solid humanoid silhouette, six feet of living darkness that could shift back to mist in one breath." | | 3 | "The scent was not natural; it was the invitation of Dymas, the gluttony realm, sprawling vineyards and orchards that provided exotic ingredients for chefs who f…" | | 4 | "A feast table appeared—not wood, but vine and root, laden with fruits glowing like embers, dark cherries bleeding gold, apples that hummed with heat." | | 5 | "Rory touched her scar, cresting her wrist, feeling the burn of memory." | | 6 | "The grove reshaped itself behind them as they pressed deeper, trees growing denser, the path vanishing into a tunnel of wildflowers that bloomed in defiance of …" | | 7 | "Rory looked at Isolde, who moved ahead without footprints, her pale lavender eyes scanning the darkness between trunks." | | 8 | "Isolde stood at the tree’s base, her face serene, her silver hair catching light that existed only inside the pocket." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.025 | | leniency | 0.05 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |