Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EKYAN8R6G36SH7G5BRK4NX

Run Details

Duration:
3m 42s
Cost:
$0.008171
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the Raven’s Nest buzzed like a dying wasp, painting the narrow Soho street in a sickly emerald glow that made the rain look black instead of gray. Detective Harlow Quinn stood across the wet cobblestones, her brown eyes narrowed against the downpour, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her scalp, her sharp jaw set with the kind of military precision that had carried her through eighteen years of decorated service. She was forty-one, five feet nine, and she was tired of being told to wait. She had tracked Tomás Herrera here. The former paramedic worked off-the-books for the clique, administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients in the hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf inside the dimly lit bar. The Raven’s Nest smelled of stale beer and older secrets, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to watch the room like silent jurors. Harlow had slipped past the front counter, pushed through the mahogany bookshelf—its spines a thin fiction, a secret door—and found Tomás at a low table with a kit she recognized: needles, vials, bandages, a set of tools that had no place in a public bar and every place in a clandestine clinic. Tomás was on his feet before she could draw her badge. He was taller than her by an inch, five-foot-ten, with warm brown eyes and short curly dark brown hair that clung to his olive skin in damp rings. A scar ran along his left forearm, a pale ridge of knotted tissue from a knife attack that had nearly killed him and had not, apparently, taught him caution. At his throat, a Saint Christopher medallion hung on a worn chain, glinting in the dim light as he reached for it. He did not reach for a weapon. He reached for truth. “You’re the one who lost Morris,” Tomás said. His voice was low, accented with the residue of Seville, where he had been born before moving to London to work for the NHS. She had read his file: he had lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients, and now he served the clique from this hidden room. “You come in here asking about dead partners and supernatural origins, Detective Quinn. You don’t know what you don’t know.” “I know the clique is moving product through this bar,” Harlow said, stepping closer. Her left wrist felt heavy with the worn leather watch, the strap softened by years of rain and sweat, and she realized with a shock that she had not checked the time since DS Morris had vanished three years ago under unexplained circumstances that carried supernatural origins she still barely understood. “I know you’re the bridge between this room and whatever is breathing underground.” He smiled, but it was a thin thing that did not reach his eyes. “Born in Seville. Trained in London. Lost everything for people like you—people who call us monsters after they make us do their dirty work.” Then he moved. Tomás turned, his left arm folding across his body to protect the scar, and he bolted through the bookshelf, knocking a stack of leather-bound volumes loose, back into the main room. He did not stop for the green neon sign or the old maps or the black-and-white photographs that seemed to leer at Harlow with judgmental eyes. He ran for the door. She caught him in the rain. Soho at night was a bruise of neon and wet asphalt, a maze of narrow alleys where the streetlights bled amber into black puddles. Tomás sprinted north, past shuttered markets and steaming doorways, his short curly hair whipping in the wind, the Saint Christopher medallion swinging at his throat like a pendulum. She pursued with relentless precision, her boots crushing water that splashed in silver arcs. Rain soaked her collar, ran down her sharp jaw, filled the sleeves of her coat until she felt she was wearing the storm itself. She called his name once, twice, but the thunder of traffic and the wet bounce of her own heartbeat swallowed it. Tomás turned east toward Camden. She kept pace, her brown eyes tracking the flicker of olive skin between umbrellas and garbage cans, her military bearing translating into pure, efficient pursuit. He was faster than he looked, a former paramedic with the endurance of a man who had held life together in chaos, and he used that endurance to vanish around a corner, then reappear half a block ahead, always just out of reach. At a narrow alley that smelled of grease, rotting flowers, and old rain, he pulled something from his pocket—small, bone-colored, something that glinted in the dark. A token. The rain turned to a sheet of steel when they reached the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. The entrance was a black mouth in the earth, hidden behind rusted fencing and a collapsed stairway that exhaled the smell of wet iron and neglect. Steam rose from the dark like breath from something that had been buried alive. Harlow slowed, her lungs burning, her worn leather watch scraping against her left wrist as she pumped her arms to close the gap. Tomás stood at the threshold, backlit by a faint, pulsing glow from below, and for the first time in the chase he did not run. He stood still, rain streaming down his face, and she saw the fear—not of her, but of what lay beneath. “You don’t have a token, Detective Quinn,” Tomás said. His voice was hoarse now, almost gentle. “The Veil Market moves every full moon, but the gate opens for bone, not badges. It’s an underground market. Enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, information you’re not meant to have. You want answers about Morris? You want to know what the clique is? You go down there, you become part of it.” Harlow’s heart hammered against her ribs. She stood at the edge of the dark, a detective with a dead partner and a sealed file, a woman who had spent three years chasing shadows that refused to stay dead. The Veil Market was a hidden supernatural black market, and it moved, always shifting like a fever dream. If she turned back, Tomás disappeared into the dark, and her partner’s death remained a closed file, a ghost, a rumor whispered by bureaucrats who did not want the truth. If she followed, she entered a place where police badges meant nothing and the air itself might carry enchantments that could unravel the last thread of her sanity. Tomás looked down, then at her, and for a moment he hesitated. The scar on his left forearm glowed pale in the dark, a reminder of how little mercy the world offered to people like him, people who tried to heal the unhealable. Then he stepped through the black mouth, the Saint Christopher medallion hidden against his chest, his short curly hair vanishing into the gloom. He was gone. She stood alone in the rain, her sharp jaw trembling not with cold but with the weight of decision. The Veil Market waited below, an abandoned station beneath Camden where the rules of the surface dissolved like sugar in acid. She had lost DS Morris to supernatural origins she did not yet understand, and she had built her life around the belief that she could outlast the mystery, that she could solve it with enough discipline and enough pain. But discipline could not buy her access to this door, and pain had already taken everything it was going to take. Harlow Quinn reached into her coat. She had nothing bone. She had no token, no sanctioned entry, no promise that she would emerge with her life or her mind intact. But she had her watch, her memory of a partner who had died because someone had refused to look down into the dark, and the military precision that did not know how to retreat from a finish line. She stepped into the black. The rain followed her down, cold water dripping from her hair as she descended the rusted stairs, and behind her, the gate of the Veil Market sealed with a sound like a tooth falling into a grave. She did not look back. She knew, with the terrible certainty of a woman who had already lost everything and still refused to be buried, that this was where the truth was hidden, and she was done waiting above ground.
created_at"2026-09-01T13:53:35.92Z" 9/1/2026, 1:53:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1415
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1415
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"clandestine"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"efficient"
count1
4
word"streaming"
count1
5
word"unravel"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"grave"
count1
highlights
0"clandestine"
1"glinting"
2"flicker"
3"efficient"
4"streaming"
5"unravel"
6"reminder"
7"gloom"
8"weight"
9"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1410
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1278
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho2
Harlow7
Quinn2
Tomás11
Herrera1
Saint3
Christopher3
Seville1
London1
Morris2
Camden3
Tube1
Veil3
Market3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Tomás"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Morris"
9"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"Seville"
2"London"
3"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"photographs that seemed to watch the room like silent jurors"
1"m and had not, apparently, taught him caution"
2"photographs that seemed to leer at Harlow with judgmental eyes"
58.16% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.418
wordCount1410
matches
0"not of her, but of what lay beneath"
1"not with cold but with the weight of decision"
67.16% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"used that endurance"
1"buried, that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean58.75
std35.98
cv0.612
sampleLengths
091
1114
211
390
479
578
638
73
862
96
10111
1173
1228
1317
1488
1520
1668
17114
1869
1919
2081
2168
225
2377
82.99% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences63
matches
0"being told"
1"been buried"
2"was gone"
3"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs205
matches
0"was wearing"
14.93% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences67
ratio0.045
matches
0"Harlow had slipped past the front counter, pushed through the mahogany bookshelf—its spines a thin fiction, a secret door—and found Tomás at a low table with a kit she recognized: needles, vials, bandages, a set of tools that had no place in a public bar and every place in a clandestine clinic."
1"At a narrow alley that smelled of grease, rotting flowers, and old rain, he pulled something from his pocket—small, bone-colored, something that glinted in the dark."
2"He stood still, rain streaming down his face, and she saw the fear—not of her, but of what lay beneath."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1295
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.021621621621621623
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.0069498069498069494
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean21.04
std12.6
cv0.599
sampleLengths
032
144
215
36
428
528
652
711
828
929
1022
117
124
138
1424
1527
1620
1714
1851
1913
2014
2124
223
2331
2426
255
266
2724
2828
2914
3024
3121
325
3325
3443
3526
362
3717
3826
3914
4023
4125
4220
439
447
4552
466
4732
4818
4930
38.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2835820895522388
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners19
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"Then he moved."
1"Then he stepped through the"
ratio0.033
40.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences60
matches
0"She was forty-one, five feet"
1"She had tracked Tomás Herrera"
2"He was taller than her"
3"He did not reach for"
4"He reached for truth."
5"His voice was low, accented"
6"She had read his file:"
7"Her left wrist felt heavy"
8"He smiled, but it was"
9"He did not stop for"
10"He ran for the door."
11"She caught him in the"
12"She pursued with relentless precision,"
13"She called his name once,"
14"She kept pace, her brown"
15"He was faster than he"
16"He stood still, rain streaming"
17"His voice was hoarse now,"
18"She stood at the edge"
19"He was gone."
ratio0.45
35.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences60
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood across"
2"She was forty-one, five feet"
3"She had tracked Tomás Herrera"
4"The former paramedic worked off-the-books"
5"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
6"Harlow had slipped past the"
7"Tomás was on his feet"
8"He was taller than her"
9"A scar ran along his"
10"He did not reach for"
11"He reached for truth."
12"His voice was low, accented"
13"She had read his file:"
14"Harlow said, stepping closer"
15"Her left wrist felt heavy"
16"He smiled, but it was"
17"Tomás turned, his left arm"
18"He did not stop for"
19"He ran for the door."
ratio0.85
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"If she turned back, Tomás"
1"If she followed, she entered"
ratio0.033
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount16
matches
0"The green neon sign above the Raven’s Nest buzzed like a dying wasp, painting the narrow Soho street in a sickly emerald glow that made the rain look black inst…"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood across the wet cobblestones, her brown eyes narrowed against the downpour, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered to he…"
2"The Raven’s Nest smelled of stale beer and older secrets, its walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to watch the room like sil…"
3"Harlow had slipped past the front counter, pushed through the mahogany bookshelf—its spines a thin fiction, a secret door—and found Tomás at a low table with a …"
4"He was taller than her by an inch, five-foot-ten, with warm brown eyes and short curly dark brown hair that clung to his olive skin in damp rings."
5"Her left wrist felt heavy with the worn leather watch, the strap softened by years of rain and sweat, and she realized with a shock that she had not checked the…"
6"He did not stop for the green neon sign or the old maps or the black-and-white photographs that seemed to leer at Harlow with judgmental eyes."
7"She pursued with relentless precision, her boots crushing water that splashed in silver arcs."
8"She kept pace, her brown eyes tracking the flicker of olive skin between umbrellas and garbage cans, her military bearing translating into pure, efficient pursu…"
9"He was faster than he looked, a former paramedic with the endurance of a man who had held life together in chaos, and he used that endurance to vanish around a …"
10"At a narrow alley that smelled of grease, rotting flowers, and old rain, he pulled something from his pocket—small, bone-colored, something that glinted in the …"
11"The entrance was a black mouth in the earth, hidden behind rusted fencing and a collapsed stairway that exhaled the smell of wet iron and neglect."
12"Harlow slowed, her lungs burning, her worn leather watch scraping against her left wrist as she pumped her arms to close the gap."
13"She stood at the edge of the dark, a detective with a dead partner and a sealed file, a woman who had spent three years chasing shadows that refused to stay dea…"
14"If she turned back, Tomás disappeared into the dark, and her partner’s death remained a closed file, a ghost, a rumor whispered by bureaucrats who did not want …"
15"She knew, with the terrible certainty of a woman who had already lost everything and still refused to be buried, that this was where the truth was hidden, and s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.7965%