Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EKYATZTH7SAMZ478G5M2TW

Run Details

Duration:
20.6s
Cost:
$0.003248
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The tiles groaned under Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots as she descended the Camden stairwell, past the triple-locked gate, into the air that had no right to feel so warm. Salt-and-pepper hair caught the dying bulb-light; her sharp jaw tightened. She wore her worn leather watch on the left wrist, the strap cracked like old leather, and she moved with that military precision that made every step sound like a sentence passed down. Eva Kowalski stood at the bottom, curly red hair plastered to her neck, round glasses sliding down her freckled nose. She tucked her hair behind her left ear, twice, then clutched her worn leather satchel against her ribs. “You’re late,” Eva said. “The tunnel locks,” Quinn answered. “Which means someone opened it.” Quinn stepped past her, into the abandoned Tube station that now served as the Veil Market’s current nest beneath Camden. The walls breathed with damp and rust. Old posters curled like dead skin. The air smelled of ozone and something older. A body lay slumped beside the third pillar, wearing a coat that had no pockets and shoes that never touched the ground. No blood on the platform. Only a rust stain shaped like a star. Eva pulled her glasses up her nose. “Ritual,” Eva said. “The clique left a message for the Shade artisan. The body was delivered through a rift.” Quinn crouched. Her fingers hovered over the collarbone. No bruising. No defensive wounds. The skin had the waxy sheen of someone who had died elsewhere. “You see magic,” Quinn said. “I see logistics.” Eva’s eyes widened behind the round lenses. “The blood spatter contradicts—” “The spatter is staged,” Quinn said. She drew a small flashlight, but did not switch it on. She used the ambient glow instead. “The victim was killed upstairs. Dragged through the tunnel. The marks on the back of the coat match the stairwell of the adjacent station, not this floor. You missed the drag marks because you looked for curses instead of physics.” Eva tucked her hair behind her ear again, and her fingers trembled against the satchel strap. “The Veil Compass is missing from the body’s hand,” Eva said. “The needle pointed north when I found it, but now it’s gone.” Quinn turned. The Veil Compass lay cracked three feet away, brass casing dulled by a patina of verdigris, the face etched with protective sigils that had been scraped away by a blade. The needle was bent, but the compass still pointed upward, trembling toward a rift hidden in the tunnel roof. “It points to the portal,” Eva said. “It points to the mistake,” Quinn said. She stood. “The victim held this. The needle was active. The sigils protected the bearer from the Market’s entry requirements, but the damage tells me someone stripped them before the body arrived. The clique didn’t kill him here, Eva. They used this station as a billboard.” Quinn circled the body. She noticed the shoes: polished leather, no mud. The victim had never walked down these stairs alive. “You think it was an execution,” Eva said. “I think it was accounting,” Quinn said. She pointed to the wall. A fresh gouge in the tile, deep enough to expose brick, shaped like a compass rose. “The killer needed to mark that a debt was paid. The body is collateral. The real crime scene is the tunnel above, where the rift breathes.” Eva stared at the gouge. Her breath came in short bursts. “You don’t believe in the Market’s rules.” “I believe in evidence,” Quinn said. She knelt, picked up the broken compass, and turned the casing over in her palm. The verdigris flaked under her thumb. “Your interpretation looks for the supernatural because you live inside the archives. I look at the missing weapon. No blade in the body. No entrance wound. The heart was removed after death, cleanly, with a tool that left no trace because it was enchanted. That is not ritual, Eva. That is erasure. The clique wants the Market to think this was a witch’s debt, but they killed him to silence him before he reached the restricted archives. The bone token required for entry was found in his pocket, cut open. Someone wanted to make sure he never came back.” Eva’s mouth opened, but no sound came out. She adjusted her glasses with trembling fingers. “The blood spatter is dry,” Quinn continued. She stood, brushed her coat, and glanced at her watch. The leather strap had caught a fleck of rust. “The drag marks are fresh. The attack happened thirty minutes before I arrived. The colleague you brought to interpret this scene missed the timeline because she wanted a ghost. I want a suspect. And I have one.” Quinn walked to the tunnel mouth, her eyes tracking the ceiling. The rift shimmered there, a tear in the air the shape of a coin. “Go home,” Quinn said. She did not turn around. “Pack your books. The clique is reaching into the archives, and they are using this station to hide their tracks. I will close the rift. You will write the truth, not the myth.” Eva’s fingers curled around the satchel strap. “You’re not going alone.” Quinn turned. Her sharp jaw was set. “I don’t need company. I need a witness who can tell the difference between a curse and a cover-up.” Eva tucked her hair behind her ear, and this time she did not look away. “Then I stay.” Quinn released a breath. She held out the broken Veil Compass. The needle still pointed upward, fragile, dangerous. “Keep it,” Quinn said. “It points to the lie.” Eva reached, her green eyes fixed on Quinn’s brown ones, and the two women stood in the abandoned station, surrounded by lies that smelled of copper, while the market moved its location, unheard, beneath the full moon.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount974
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount974
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"etched"
2"silence"
3"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen99
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords974
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount561
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity3.21
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn18
Camden2
Kowalski1
Tube1
Veil3
Market1
Eva14
Compass2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Market"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount974
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean32.47
std25.54
cv0.787
sampleLengths
072
138
24
310
441
535
626
725
88
911
1063
1139
1251
137
1453
1521
168
1754
1818
19126
2015
2163
2225
2342
2411
2526
2618
2718
289
2937
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"been scraped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs100
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences80
ratio0.013
matches
0"Salt-and-pepper hair caught the dying bulb-light; her sharp jaw tightened."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount565
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.03893805309734513
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0035398230088495575
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean12.18
std13.75
cv1.129
sampleLengths
029
110
233
320
418
54
65
75
820
97
106
118
1222
135
148
157
163
1716
182
196
202
213
2212
235
243
257
264
276
2811
296
3040
3116
3211
3312
342
3530
3619
377
387
392
4044
414
428
439
448
457
465
4716
4826
495
41.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.25
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners20
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"Only a rust stain shaped"
ratio0.022
95.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences45
matches
0"She wore her worn leather"
1"She tucked her hair behind"
2"Her fingers hovered over the"
3"She drew a small flashlight,"
4"She used the ambient glow"
5"She noticed the shoes: polished"
6"She pointed to the wall."
7"Her breath came in short"
8"She knelt, picked up the"
9"She adjusted her glasses with"
10"She stood, brushed her coat,"
11"She did not turn around."
12"Her sharp jaw was set."
13"She held out the broken"
ratio0.311
4.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences45
matches
0"The tiles groaned under Detective"
1"Salt-and-pepper hair caught the dying"
2"She wore her worn leather"
3"Eva Kowalski stood at the"
4"She tucked her hair behind"
5"Quinn stepped past her, into"
6"The walls breathed with damp"
7"The air smelled of ozone"
8"A body lay slumped beside"
9"Eva pulled her glasses up"
10"Her fingers hovered over the"
11"The skin had the waxy"
12"Eva’s eyes widened behind the"
13"She drew a small flashlight,"
14"She used the ambient glow"
15"Eva tucked her hair behind"
16"The Veil Compass lay cracked"
17"The needle was bent, but"
18"Quinn circled the body."
19"She noticed the shoes: polished"
ratio0.911
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The tiles groaned under Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots as she descended the Camden stairwell, past the triple-locked gate, into the air that had no right to fee…"
1"She wore her worn leather watch on the left wrist, the strap cracked like old leather, and she moved with that military precision that made every step sound lik…"
2"The Veil Compass lay cracked three feet away, brass casing dulled by a patina of verdigris, the face etched with protective sigils that had been scraped away by…"
3"Eva reached, her green eyes fixed on Quinn’s brown ones, and the two women stood in the abandoned station, surrounded by lies that smelled of copper, while the …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.067
83.0928%