Run: 2026-09-01-01M1EM83344ERJWT67XFYCBP4H

Run Details

Duration:
3m 49s
Cost:
$0.052630
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain turned Soho's streets into a slick of reflected neon and taxi lights. The Raven's Nest sat tucked between a shuttered bookshop and a late-night noodle stall, its green sign buzzing against the wet brick. Inside, the air held the slow burn of pipe tobacco from years past and the sharper bite of gin. Maps of vanished empires and forgotten borders covered the walls, their paper yellowed, corners lifting. Black-and-white photographs filled the gaps: men in overcoats on foggy quays, women with cigarette holders, groups posed before buildings that no longer stood. Aurora Carter sat at the far end of the bar, one boot hooked on the stool's rung. Her black hair hung straight to her shoulders, a few strands stuck to her cheek from the walk over. She turned her glass in slow circles, the crescent scar on her left wrist catching the lamplight each time her hand passed. Bright blue eyes tracked the photographs without really seeing them. Silas Blackwood worked the length of the counter. Grey streaked his auburn hair and the neat beard that followed the line of his jaw. Hazel eyes moved from customer to bottle to the door and back. The silver signet ring on his right hand flashed when he reached for the optic. He shifted his weight and the old limp showed, a hitch in the left leg that never quite left him. The door opened on a gust that carried rain and the smell of wet pavement. A woman stepped through, shaking out an umbrella that had already given up. She paused just inside, letting her eyes adjust. Then they found Aurora. The woman who had once been Eva from the shared house in Cathays now stood there in a wool coat too fine for this street, hair cut in a sharp bob that did not match the girl who used to steal chips from the packet on the night bus. Lines had settled at the corners of her mouth. Her shoulders sat higher, as if she had learned to carry something heavy and forgotten how to set it down. "Rory." Aurora's hand stilled on the glass. She looked up. "Eva." They held the look across six feet of scuffed floorboards. Eva crossed it. She stopped an arm's length away. "I didn't know you were still in London." Aurora nodded at the empty stool. Eva sat. Silas was already there with a gin, no ice, slice of lemon, the way Eva used to drink it in second-year when the exams were close and the money was closer. He set it down and moved off, the limp taking him toward the other end. "Seven years," Eva said. "Nearly eight." "Since I got on the train with one bag." Eva wrapped both hands around the glass. "I rang your mum. Jennifer said you'd gone. She asked if I knew where. I said I didn't. That was true, by then." Aurora's thumb found the scar and followed its curve. "Evan. You remember the last time you saw him." "I remember telling you to get on that train. I was already here. Internship at the chambers in Lincoln's Inn. I said come. You came. Then the messages stopped." "I changed numbers. Then I changed everything else." A couple in the corner laughed at something on a phone. The maps watched. Silas drew a pint for a man in a soaked jacket and did not look over. Eva studied Aurora's face as if checking it against an old photograph. "You look... the same. And not. The hair's longer. You used to keep it shorter." "Yours is different. You used to let it go wild." "The firm likes tidy. I'm at Harrington and Cole now. Corporate. Mergers that take eighteen months and three hundred pages. I have a flat in a glass box that looks at other glass boxes." Aurora drank. "I take orders from Yu-Fei at the Golden Empress. Noodles, dumplings, the odd banquet if someone's getting married in Chinatown. The rest of the time I'm here. Flat's upstairs. Silas lets me have it for looking after the place when he's out." Eva's gaze flicked to the ceiling, then to Silas's back. "This is home." "This is what I have." They sat with that. Eva turned the glass. Condensation ran onto the wood. "I thought you'd go back," Eva said. "Finish the degree. Your dad's chambers. Brendan Carter, barrister, the whole bloody dynasty. You were the clever one. Out-of-the-box, they used to say in tutorials." "I was the one who didn't want the box. You knew that. We used to sit on the steps of the Students' Union and swear we wouldn't end up like them." "I ended up exactly like them. Nice salary. Nice coat. Nice emptiness at six o'clock when the emails stop." Aurora watched the photographs. One showed a group of men on a dock, collars turned up, faces half in shadow. "You look tired, Eva." "I am tired. I look in the mirror some days and the woman looking back has my name and none of my old jokes. I used to laugh at everything. Now I calculate whether the laugh is professional." Silas passed behind them, collecting empties. The ring caught the light. He did not speak. The limp took him into the small kitchen and back. "I should have kept ringing," Eva said. "After the first year. I told myself you were fine. You always landed on your feet. Cool head. You'd sort it." "I sorted it. Different sorting than the one we talked about." Eva's mouth tightened. "I stayed because it was easier. The path was already there. You stepped off it. I used to think that made you the brave one. Now I think it just made you the one who got away." Aurora turned her wrist so the scar faced the lamp. "Some things you don't get away from. They come with you. The scar's from when I was nine, falling off the wall behind the school. Evan's from later. Both still there." "I never liked him. The way he waited outside lectures. The way he spoke about you when you weren't in the room." "You said. That night in the kitchen, the one with the cheap wine. You said leave. I left. Then I didn't know how to come back to the conversation." Eva drank. The gin was almost gone. "I got the job. I got the flat. I got the version of life we used to mock. And you got... this. Maps on the walls and a man who doesn't ask questions." "Silas asks the ones that matter. The rest he lets sit." They both looked toward the bar. Silas was lining up bottles, back to them, the hitch in his step the only giveaway that Prague had ever happened. "Do you ever go home?" Eva asked. "Cardiff. The Taff. That bench by the castle where we used to eat chips and plan the takeover of the world." "The world didn't want taking over. It wanted delivering in paper bags before they went cold." A short laugh left Eva, then died. "I walk past the old places when I'm down for Christmas. Everything's smaller. The union bar we thought was so grand. The lecture theatre where you fell asleep in jurisprudence and I kicked you." "You still kick?" "Only in meetings now. Under the table. Less satisfying." Aurora signalled. Silas brought two more without being asked, gin for Eva, the same ale for Aurora. He set them down and his hazel eyes met Aurora's for a second. Then he was gone again, ring flashing, limp carrying him away. "I thought of you when I signed the lease on the glass box," Eva said. "I thought, Rory would hate this. Too many windows, not enough corners to hide in. Then I signed anyway." "I thought of you when I took the first delivery shift. I thought, Eva would have a spreadsheet for the tips. Then I just rode the bike." The rain thickened against the glass. The neon outside turned the puddles green. Inside, the photographs kept their old secrets and the maps kept their old borders. Eva's voice dropped. "I used to think time would make it clearer. Who we were supposed to be. It just made the gap wider. You're here, in this place that smells of old paper and secrets. I'm in a building that smells of toner and ambition that's already gone sour. We were going to be the ones who didn't settle." "We settled. Different chairs." Eva stared at her drink. "I don't know the woman I became. I know the girl who used to steal your notes and laugh until she couldn't breathe. I don't know how to get her back in the room." Aurora's finger followed the scar again, a habit older than London. "She's still in there. She's just wearing a better coat and sitting in a worse silence." They sat. The bar's low talk filled the spaces they left empty. Silas moved through it like a man who had learned long ago that some conversations needed the room to breathe. Eva turned the glass, watching the lemon sink. "I came in because the rain started and the sign was green and I needed somewhere that wasn't another glass box. I didn't expect you on the stool." "I didn't expect you in the doorway." "The years sit between us like another person. I can see her. I just don't know her name." Aurora looked at the photographs, the maps, the man with the limp and the ring who pretended not to listen. "Her name's time. She's a terrible conversationalist. She just takes and never buys a round." Eva almost smiled. It didn't last. "I should have come sooner. Or written. Or something other than walking in out of the rain after eight years and finding you already here, already someone else." "We're both someone else. That's the only thing that stayed the same." Silas collected the empty glasses. His hand, the one with the ring, rested on the bar a moment longer than it needed to. Then he took them away. The limp carried him into the shadows at the far end, where the maps were oldest and the photographs stared hardest. Eva watched him go. "He knows, doesn't he? About you. About before." "He knows enough. The rest he lets me keep." They sat with the new drinks. The rain did not ease. The neon kept its green watch on the street. The two women who had once shared chips and plans and a leaking house in Cathays now did not look at each other for a long while. When they did, the years were still there, sitting on the stool between them, waiting to be named.
created_at"2026-09-01T13:58:55.857Z" 9/1/2026, 1:58:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.096
leniency0.192
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1801
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1801
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"calculate"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flicked"
2"calculate"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1801
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount895
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.46
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Aurora14
Eva22
Cathays2
Silas9
Prague1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Aurora"
5"Eva"
6"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cathays"
2"Prague"
3"London"
globalScore0.271
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if checking it against an old photograph"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1801
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean28.14
std19.43
cv0.69
sampleLengths
093
168
271
340
478
51
69
71
819
98
1054
116
129
1330
1418
1529
168
1730
1827
1910
2034
2144
2213
235
2413
2532
2631
2719
2824
2938
3025
3128
3211
3340
3441
3522
3629
3740
3811
3927
4028
4116
4241
433
449
4541
4634
4727
4827
4960
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"being asked"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was lining"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences133
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount899
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03225806451612903
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002224694104560623
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean13.54
std10.53
cv0.777
sampleLengths
014
122
219
315
423
517
619
722
810
98
1016
1112
1215
1320
1415
1513
168
174
1849
199
2020
211
226
233
241
2510
263
276
288
296
302
3131
3215
334
342
359
367
3723
389
399
4029
418
4211
433
4416
4512
4615
4710
4834
492
41.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences76
matches
0"Bright blue eyes tracked the"
1"Then they found Aurora."
2"Then he was gone again,"
3"Then he took them away."
ratio0.053
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences76
matches
0"Her black hair hung straight"
1"She turned her glass in"
2"He shifted his weight and"
3"She paused just inside, letting"
4"Her shoulders sat higher, as"
5"She looked up."
6"They held the look across"
7"She stopped an arm's length"
8"He set it down and"
9"They sat with that."
10"He did not speak."
11"They both looked toward the"
12"He set them down and"
13"It didn't last."
14"His hand, the one with"
15"They sat with the new"
ratio0.211
25.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences76
matches
0"The rain turned Soho's streets"
1"The Raven's Nest sat tucked"
2"Maps of vanished empires and"
3"Aurora Carter sat at the"
4"Her black hair hung straight"
5"She turned her glass in"
6"Silas Blackwood worked the length"
7"Hazel eyes moved from customer"
8"The silver signet ring on"
9"He shifted his weight and"
10"The door opened on a"
11"A woman stepped through, shaking"
12"She paused just inside, letting"
13"The woman who had once"
14"Lines had settled at the"
15"Her shoulders sat higher, as"
16"Aurora's hand stilled on the"
17"She looked up."
18"They held the look across"
19"Eva crossed it."
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Grey streaked his auburn hair and the neat beard that followed the line of his jaw."
1"Her shoulders sat higher, as if she had learned to carry something heavy and forgotten how to set it down."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.096
leniency0.192
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.3580%